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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowowow tht was cool part

thanks to u dear ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: srojaleen

hey...vertika...lagta hai tu is fic ko jaldi hi happy ending karne k mood me hai...!!! ๐Ÿ˜›

Yes yaar vaise bhi it has completed one year.๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
by d way..ud baht baht baht hi achha tha...!!!๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
thanks to u.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
vaise sarthak ka kuch nahin ho sakta. beach se to aise aaye the... dono...jaise pakde gaye to kya halat hogi...lekin aate hi...๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Fir se lag gaye na ek hi kaam me,๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ kya kare ye dono bhi control nahi hota na un se.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
vaise yeh tune bilkul sahi likha hai...k agar koi kisi se kuch chup kar karna chahta hai...to kar nahin pata...koi na koi atchan aa hi jati hai...!!! ab dekh na...sarthak aur mushkan piche se chup kar ja rahe the k mushkan k pairon me kanta laga...aur vo chillai...!!! pakde jate dono agar sarthak ne use utha kar nahin le gaya hota to...!!!๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Sach me acchi watt lagti dono ki.๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
vaise is situation par mujhe ek song yaad aa raha hai......
"kanta laga...... hai laga....aaja...raja...bangle k piche...teri berry k niche...arre piya....๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
thanks yaar, mujhe yaad hota to add jaroor karti.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
vaise kanta nikal ne ka kya mindblowing tarika hai sarthak k paas. veedo aur sahil k daar se wapas aaye hai...lekin...is tym par pata nahin...kya kya kar rahe hain...!!! mujhe to sharam aane lagi hai yaar.
Oh ho Priya jee agar itna sharmaayengi to kaise kaam chalega bhai?๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
sahi waqt par kaanton ki entry...matlab... ghar me vaise hi do kante baithe hue hai...veedo aur shahil...!!! bahar mushkan k pairon me bhi ghusa ek namurad kanta...!!! vaise is kanten ka ilaz to sarthak kar hi raha hai...!!!๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† aur ander baithe veedo aur sahil naam k kanton ko nikki aur sakshi handle kar rahe hain...!!!๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank god handel kar rahe hain , varna ab tak scene dekhne vaala hota.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
achha hua ki sahil ne confess kar hi diya...!!! lage hathon us k bhi hath pile ho jayenge...!!!๐Ÿ˜›
Sab nipat jaaye to sab ki ek saath shaadi kara di jaaye kyoun?๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
do ud fast.๐Ÿ˜Š

Kar doongi dear.๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

HIIIIIII VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE...........
THE UD WAS.......
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME..............
SUPERB............
GR8...............
JUST TOO GOOD..............
DO CONT.SOON........

thanks a lot.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Cooool...Fantastic update !!!!!

thanks a lot.๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
dis part was awesome............

just loved sarthak n muskaan here....dat part was beautiful....

sahil n sakshi part was too good......finally he confessed......

waitin for next updt
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey aaj kal madam aap ka mood mujhe lagta hai kuch jyada hi romantic ho raha hai jo aap aise ud's de rahi hain na.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Kabhi kabhi hota hai tab mai aise ud's likh deti hoon.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Anyways this was truley awesome ud yaar.๐Ÿ‘
mujhe pata tha ki aap logon ko pasand aayega.๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
Sarthak jab tak le kar aaya Muski ko dono bhai us k aa chuke the to bechare ko peeche se jaana pada par phir bhi kaante k bahane romance chaloo.๐Ÿ˜‰
Accha hai na jahan mauka mile vahin kar lo romance kabhi bhi mauka nahi chodna chahiye.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Kahin theek se nahi reh sakte na ye dono,๐Ÿ˜› har jagah chaloo rehte hain.๐Ÿ˜Š Yahan Vedoo aur Sahil lagta hai pakde hue the ki koi hai vahan.๐Ÿ˜† Sahil ne is baar himmat kar k apne dil ki baat keh hi di aakhir.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Are yaar bacche romance hi to kar rahe hain na karne do na.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Sahil aur Vedoo ka to kaam hi hai kabab me haddi banna ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก par humara Sarthak bhi kam thode na hai.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
ab dekhna ye hai ki Sakshi ka jawaab kya hota hai?๐Ÿ˜•
continue soon.

jaldi hi karoongi yaar.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

dis part was awesome............

thanks yaar ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

just loved sarthak n muskaan here....dat part was beautiful....
vo dono hain hi mast na.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

sahil n sakshi part was too good......finally he confessed......
ab nahi to kab karti na.๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

waitin for next updt

u will get it soon.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 50

Sarthak was still kissing her like mad, he has lost all his control over him n all he wanted to just love her like that n to make her his completely. She was dying because of passion with each passing minute.

"Pls. Sarthak no." she said softly but she really doesn't want this to end.

"Don't stop me, ab mujhe excite karne ka khamiyaza to tum ko jhelna padega." He said looking at her face. "Aur vaise bhi rukna to shayad tum bhi nahi chahti ho na."

She moaned when he kissed her tummy now he proceeded towards her face n turned her, he opened the zip of her kurta n started kissing her bare back , her passion has now turned to ecstasy n joy. Her breath was becoming heavier by each passing second and she was enjoying it the most. He was just making her feel as if she is in heaven when they heard a scream.

"Oh shit, mai to bhool gayi ki mere bhai hain yahan."and she tried to stop Sarthak.

"No way ab koi bhi aa jaaye mai to nahi rukne vaala." Sarthak said trying to tease her more.

"No Sarthak pls ab tum jaao agar bhaiya aa gaye to bahut gadbad ho jaayegi u know." She tried to straighten her dress n got up.

Now he pushed her back on bed n leaned on top of her started kissing her neckline. She was again loosing her control but she knew it may be dangerous for both so she again pushed him back n said, "Nahi hato maine kaha na."

"Maine bhi to nahi kaha, samajhti nahi ho tum bhi." He teased her.

"Pls, ab chod do na I promise next time mai mana nahi karoongi." She pleaded.

"Next time mai tum ko mana karne k liye time doonga tab na, well ek baat samajh lo next time kahin tumhara ye promise tum ko bhari na pad jaaye." He said confidently.

"Let's see." She said playfully.

"To theek hai," and he started wearing his shirt when he thought again the same thing, "Ab ye buttons bund kaun karega?" he asked in teasing way.

She moved closer n started buttoning his shirt while Sarthak was gazing at her lovingly. He removed her hair strand from her face behind her ear.

"I love u." he said softly.

She looked at him n smiled, "I love u too."

"To kal kahan mil rahein hain?" he asked her.

"Kahin nahi, kyounki kal mujhe tumhare ghar aana hai na." she recalled him.

"Oh haan mai to bhool hi gaya tha to theek hai kab aaogi vahan." He asked impatiently.

"Kyoun? Thoda intezaar nahi kar sakte." She teased him.

"Kya karein pehle itna intezaar kiya hai ki ab bardaasht nahi hota hai." He winked her to which she blushed.

Sakshi n Sahil:-

"Pls kuch to bolo Sakshi." He panicked because Sakshi was silent.

"Pata nahi mujhe pyaar me kya hota hai aur kaise hota hai. Par mai yahi jaanti hoon ki shayad meri zindagi me jo bhi hua hai aaj tak us k baad mere liye mushkil hai kaafi had tak kisi se apne aap ko jod paana." She replied which made Sahil's eyes teary.

Next day morning:-

Sab jaldi jaldi ready ho rahe the aur yahan Sahil udaas baitha tha. Muskaan Sahil ko hi dhoondh rahi thi Vedoo se milne k baad.

"Are bhaiya aap yahan baithe hue hain mai aap ko kab se dhoondh rahi hoon." She asked Sahil when she found him in garden sitting on chair.

Sahil wiped his tears n tried to sound usual. "Hey Muski kaise hai tu?" n he hugged her.

"Theek hoon bhai par aap ye batao aap mere se milne kyoun nahi aaye." She complanied like a child.

"Nahi kuch nahi bus vo mood disturb tha." He tried to make an excuse.

"Bhai mere or dekhiye, aap kuch chupa rahe hain baat kya hai aakhir?" she asked. Little did she know that something is wrong and Sahil is making a story to her.

"Kuch nahi baccha." He tried to change the topic but he already knew that she is so stubborn.

"Bhaiya aap bataoge ya nahi mujhe." She demanded.

Later in evening:-

All were ready for the party n Sarthak has told them that two cars would be available for them. First Sakshi, Sahil ,Poorvi went in a car than Nikki, Shikhar n Vedant in another car. Purposely the driver brought Muskaan at last because Sarthak has told him to do so. Shikhar was trying his best to be close with Nikki because when he saw her fully dressed in Indian outfit he was out of his sense n he wanted to be close to her as much as possible but it was making Nikki quite uncomfortable because Vedant was also there.

As Sahil planned with Muski he was avoiding Sakshi since morning but when he saw her coming downstairs few minutes ago, he nearly fall when Vedoo hold him n laughed at him.

"Samhal k abhi itne me hi ye haal hai aage na jaane kya kya karega tu."

Poorvi was not happy that Vedant wasn't with her but she was smiling thinking all the beautiful memories when Vedant proposed her n she said yes to him.

Flashback:-

"Ye sab kis k liye?" Poorvi asked looking a bouquet of red roses in Vedant's hands.

"Hai ek khaas insaan jis k liye mai aaj ye sab kar raha hoon."

"Kaun hai vo?"

"U know I love her so much aur ab mujhe lagta hai ki mai us k bagair ek pal bhi nahi jee sakta hoon." He told.

"Par us ka koi naam to hoga na, pata nahi mai ye baat kab se sun rahi hoon." She said finally irritated.

"Bata doon." He asked.

"Haan."

"Par ye soch lo ki jab tum ko pata chalega ki vo kaun hai tab tum jal jaaogi kyounki vo bahut khoobsurat hai aur

Tujhe aapne paas paake saare gum bhul jata hun main,
teri bahon me aake ek alag duniya me kho jata hun main....
tumhe khud me sama k har gum bhul jana chata hun main,
teri aankhon ko aaena samjh har pal khudko dekhna chata hun main......

Zindagi k dard se kahi tut sa gaya hun main,
auron ko khud ki duniya samjhate thak gaya hun main,
ab in sab se door tujhme rehna chahta hun main,
saare gum ko bhula, sirf tujhme kho jana chataa hun main.....


Jab bhi kisi rah pe chalta hun, ab akela na mehsus karta hun main,
jab tak saath ho meri, tab tak saasein samjhta hun main,
waqt k saath na badlogi, ek ehsas liye chalta hun main,
ab to bas teri haathon me hi aakhri saans lena chata hun main.........

"Oh mujhe nahi pata tha us ne tum ko shayar bhi bana diya hai." Her tone was scarstic.

"Kya yaar itne acchi shayari tum ko acchi nahi lagi kya?" he teased her.

"Mai chalti hoon jab vo haan keh de tab mujhe bata dena." Her voice became heavy n her eyes moistened.

She was about to exit when Vedant caught her hand n said, "To haan kaho na."

She looked him in surprised.

"Aise kyoun dekh rahi ho, kaho na haan." He again said the same.

She was still shocked.

Now Vedant bent on his knees n taking the bouquet in his hands he said, "I love u Poorvi."

She was unable to reply still.

"Kya hua? Ladka pasand nahi hai kya? Koi baat nahi mai Madhvi k saath try karta hoon." He said to tease her n his intuition was right she replied instantly.

Har jagah mein...Tu samaya hai...
Har disha mein...Tu nama ya hai...
Meri subho mein meri shamo mein...Tera zikr hai tera saaya hai..

Mera hat joh tu tamle...Phir jahan ka karna kya?
TU hi TU har jagah...TU hi TU jeene ki wajah...
TU roshni, Tuhi chandni, Tuhi perh hai, Tuhi chaao hai...
TU hi aas ta TU hi hai safar, jaha pohchena hai woh gao bhi...
Mera hath joh TU tamle phir jahan ka karna hai kya?
TU hi TU har jagah...TU hi TU jeene ki wajah...
Yaare tera saath jis pal paliya jisne,
Usko to phooloki tarah rahon ke khare mile...
Meri subho mein meri shamo mein...Tera zikr hai tera saaya hai..
Mera hat joh tu tamle...Phir jahan ka karna kya?
Har jagah mein...Tu samaya hai...
Har disha mein...Tu nama ya hai...
Me tere nashe mein ho chure si, teri justuju mein hai zindagi...
Mera hath joh TU tamle...Phir jahan ka karna hai kya?
TU hi TU har jagah...TU hi TU jeene ki wajah...

Itna accha jawaab sun kar kaise nahi smile karta Vedant.

"Accha ab ye isharon ki bhasa chod kar seedhe i love u kaho na." He requested Poorvi.

"Nahi jaise tum ne mujhe tadpaya hai na ab vaise hi mai bhi tum ko tadpaaongi." She said smiling.

"Yaar this is not fair pls na." he complained.

"Accha hai sab theek nahi, vaise bhi tum mujhe pareshaan kar rahe the itna to ab khud jhelo kuch." She teased him back n was about to leave the room when Vedoo closed the door running n stood their crossing his hands on his chest, "Accha to tum aise nahi maanogi."

"Vedant hato yahan se mujhe jaane do." She tried to move him but he had another plans, he moved close to her n she moved back until she was trapped b/w him n the wall.

"Aise to nahi jaana hai. Kam se kam ek baar to kehna hoga meri aankhon me dekh kar ki u love me." He teased her to which she blushed hard.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

kar bhi do na uddddddddddd

kar diya darling ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sweet part. Sarthak is too naughty. Luved Sarthak-Muskaan scene. Feeling bad 4 Sahil but I'm sure everything will turn into his favour soon. And yes, Vedants proposing to Poorvi was very beautiful. The lines wer wonderful.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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