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Sammy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#191

he dear sorry for late reply busy thi
i guess MayUr ki entry karado
and don't think of shutting it down

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Isha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#192

cont plzz! no shutting down!

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Kshma Kheskani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#193

DONT EVEN THINK 2 SHUT IT................BACCHOON KA DIL TODEGI KYA😡

AND I WANT MAYUR AND ABHI-NIKKI

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: cutie_yachu
hey sweety welcm yaar whre hv u gone missd u nd ur updates plz cont sooooooooon
luv yachna

oh thanks yachna....updating very soon !😳

Originally posted by: Sambhenwal
he dear sorry for late reply busy thi
i guess MayUr ki entry karado
and don't think of shutting it down

hey no probs gr8 thanks😳 ...ya wont shut !😆

Originally posted by: twinkle94
cont plzz! no shutting down!

hey twinkle thankswont swhut contng ...updating relli very soon !😉

Originally posted by: AR-lover
DONT EVEN THINK 2 SHUT IT................BACCHOON KA DIL TODEGI KYA😡

AND I WANT MAYUR AND ABHI-NIKKI

COOL

haww kshma bachaaa... i wont shut jus a lil confused i was.....well updating reeli soon😉

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#195

Updating coming in a while ! yippieee

Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#196

Heya guys...here we wid the 12th part after loooooong time....sorry 😊
well we wud be introducing Mayank-Nupur n Abhi-Sam !....no abhi-nikki sorry (cant intro 3 couples)😃

And btw we r gonna change our FF title....the probable titles suggested by nidha di n me n rema r

Pyaar ke liye
Tere Naina
Kuch Iss Tarha
Ankhon hi Aankhon mein
Kuch Khaas...Kuch paas....

my fav is Kuch Iss tarha n remz is saaying Pyaar ke liye ....guys plzz help us n tell a gud name....u can suggest us too😳

okay sorry for the bak bak but plzz dont ignore the note lol

PART - XII😊

In the morning
A ray of sunshine falls on her beautiful face. Ridzy wakes up.
Ridz remembers all that she deciced yesterday. " aaj sab kuch teek hojayega."
And she goes hugs anjie n
R : goooooooood morning diiiiiiiii
A : Riiddddddzzzz plzz mujhe sone dena''.5min plzz
R : (in naani'z tone) Anjalii'.betaa'.uthoo

Anjie shocked hearing naaniz voice'..
A (still sleeping) : Naaaannnnniiiiii
R : Arey beta utho tho sahi
While R is mimickring her nani''' Nani comes from behind n hit Ridz's head'..
R : oops'..sorry (in whispering voice)
N ' arey '.shhhhh ab ruk
And naani wakes up anjie''..
N ' Anjali'utho beta bahut late hogayi ho
A : ( in loud voice) Ridzi mujhe pata hai ke yeh tum ho'plzz''..warna
R : Nahi dii'..diii
A : chup ridz mujhe pata hai yeh tum hi ho
R : Nahi di
A : haan ridz

Naani (giggling) Chuuuupppp bas karo ''.tum dono kitni bak bak karti ho subah subah

Anjie wakes up in shock'' : ohhh naaniiiii aap kab aayin ?
Shanky : Jab tum log kal so rahe the'.

R : Papaaaa''.and she hugs him'..I missed u papa'naani
A : Ridzi plzz ab mujhe bhi hug karma hai''
Shanky Ridz n Naani giggle at this''.
R : dii ap late uthin so aapki late baari ayegi
A : nai''
R : ( she sees the time ) Oh no'8 bajgaye''diiii 9 baje ki duty
Anjie suddenly realizes n runs towards her cupboards n takes her dress n runs toward bathroom'''..meanwhile ridz had already taken out her clothes n this time she reaches first ''..
A : RIDZiiiiiii'''''.thats nt fair
R : aisa kuch nahi hai di''''aap hamesha pehle jaati hain 'toh isbaar meri baari

After that they both get ready n have their breakfast n leave for d hospital

At Sanjeevani

Armaan, Atul n Rahul had already reached
Rahul had worn his labcoat and he was to leave'when mukaan arrived''wearing a cute salwaar'.n her hair left open'..
R was open mouthed at this''.
Armaan whistles at this''''.and rahul gets hold of armaan
Ra : Oye tu bhool gaya kya''yeh meri wali hai
A : haan to xchange karle (for fun)
Ra : oye''chal hat
At this Ridhima arrives wearing this

Armaan is left with open mouth''
Ra : ( for fun) armaan tera xchange offer abhi bhi chalu hai kya ?
A : huh ( he is still khoya hua in her)'''.huh??
Abye oye''(coming to senses)
Ra : that's not fair
Ri : Hey guys'''hi muskaan'.hi atul'hi rahul..
Ra : Hi Riddddhima
A : hi basket
R : hi'
Muski comes n hugs her
R : wow''salwaar huh? kuch special hai kya''
M : nahi toh'.bas ynhi''bas actually [in her ears'.jeans dhule nahi the]
R : oohhh''.Waise Rahul whats not fair
Ra : woo Riddhiiima'armaan actually xchange offer
A : aaaaaahmmmmmm wow o''uska watch karab hogaya isliye who apni bike xchange karra hai
Rahul, Muski, Atul n Ridz together : Huh ? wat?
A : aahmmmm wooh matlab bike xchange karne pe watch free hai''
An : Hey guys'''.kya chal raha hai?
At : kuch nahi anjali'..tumhare bina kaise kuch chal sakta hai
All : awwwww
An : shutup Atul

Announcememnt - All intern report at the nurse staion

Every hurries up !

Dr Keerti : Aaj aaplog keliye bahut complicated cases hain''Isliye Dr. Riddhima ke badla aaj main aaplogon ko duties doongi

All : yes maam
GS : Dr Muskaan Dr Rahul OPD n General ward'
Muski n Ra : Maam 2 ward?
GS : Any problem doctors ?
Muski n Ra : no noo mam
Every1 else start khusur phusring
GS : Internz''yeh ek hospital hai'..aur yahan aapko duties di jaarahi hain
All : sorry mam
GS : Dr Armaan Dr Riddhima ICU mein 2 naye cases ayein hain''critical hai'
and uske baad aap donon ko cancer ward mein duties karni hogi
AR : yes maam
GS : Dr Atul Dr Anjali Chldrens ward mein 4 naye bache admit hue hain
aur uske baad aap Dr Atul Dr shubhankar ko ek surgery mein assit kareinge'and Dr Anjali aap mujhe assit kareingi
Alright, Get to work !!
All the best every1'aaj Sanjeevani mein bahut critical cases hain !

All : thank u maam

At : Arey guyzzz yeh Gabbar singh ko kya hogaya
Ri : arey Atul lagta hai aaj sach mein bahut mushkil cases honge''''... All the best guys''''..
Armaan chale.
Ar : huh? haaan

They walk towards the ICU''.

A : waise basket tumne case files padliye''. mujhe bahul critical lagraha hai'..bachna mushkil hai'''..80% burns hai tumhe kya lagta hai basket'''tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi'''

He then turns back & sees her praying'..

R : bhagwaan ji ajj bahut mushkil case hain'''''. please us bache ko bacha lena aur hum dono ko himmat dena''''''pls bhagwanji
A adores her & comes near her & softly
A : bhagwan tumhari prarthna zaroor sunenge. ( in a very soft voice)
R : I hope armman ( worriedly )
A keeps hands on her shoulders to comfort her
R : Hmm chalein''
A : aah haan

R : waise tum kya keh rahe the
A : haan who yahi ki patient bahut critical hai''80% burns hai'so hamein dhyaan se handle karma hoga
R : hmmm

They reach the ward n see al their patients ( am not describing abt otherz coz its ridzi's view of flashback)

A : Ridhima tum path lab jaa rahi ho na? plz yeh medicines le aao n plzz iss blood group ke 2 bottle blood bhi le aana
R : hmm ok

they both finish off their duties in ICU n its lunch time'..

All the interns are at the cafeteria as ususal...

At : arey guys aaj kuch zyada hi kaam hogaya....ekho meri anjali kaise murjhaagayi
Ra : kya gayi??
Muski : abey oh khote murjhagayi......
Anjie : just shutup atul...stop this ...
At : anjali main to...
Ri : hi guys....aaj kitna tiring tha na??...
At : arey abhi to sirf lunch hua hai...pata nahi raat tak humara kya hoga re kalia...
Ar : arey champ yaar...apni toh vaat lag gayi hai !!

Just then a nurse arrives with a folder n
N : Dr. Armaan yeh Dr. Keerti ne aapko yeh file dene ko kaha tha....unhone yeh bhi kaha tha ki...yeh bahut mp hain....aur ise aap aur Dr. Riddhima jaldi padke unhen report karein...
Ar n Ri : huh.....ahm ohkay !..thanks sister
Ar : abey yaar...khaana toh khane deti...
Ri : Armaan kuch imp hoga...
And they both start reading the file...while
At : zindagi ne zindagi bhar kaam diyee...
Muski : jitne bhi kaam hame diye...woh humne kiyeeeee.....
AR : just shutup guys....yeh case...its relli imp...
Anjie : i dont know...tum log yeh sab kahan se uthake laathi ho...
At : arey...anjali
Anjie : stop it there n then plzz
Ra : Muskaan...tune...uss pateint ki dawai ke liye bol diya tha na nurse se??
Muski : oh ...haan...ahm nahi...konsi pateint....acha haan...bol diya tha
Ra : tu kabhi nahi sudheregi....ab.
Dr. Armaan Dr. Riddhima...Dr Keerti ko 5 min mein report karein !!
Ar : oh man...
Ri : chalo armaan....

While on the way they both move reading the file.....and they share a cute close moment...wehn suddenly...
Ri : ahh...armaan...tumhe yeh case samaj mein aya poori tarha?
Ar : huh....haan...nahi..woh kuch confusions hai....acha btw...main ek patient ko dawai dekar aata hoon...tum plzz ,meri yeh files...rakhdena ...(and he moves...)
Ri : lekin....locker...
Ar : (jaate jaate) locker khula hain
Ri : ohkay !

And she goes inside the locker room...and keep her files first in her locker...n then goes to his locker....(well till then shez almost forgotten abt yesterdays plans and all....)....
she just open his locker...and loadz of papaer come rushing out of his locker....
Ri : ahh...yeh armaan bh na....kabhi teekh se nahi rakhta....uff
And just adjusts a bit and keeps the files......just then she notices the kangan ...armaan gave to her....she is just lost in her memories...lost into their wolrd....remembering the golden olden days of her life !!....
Dr. Riddhima Dr. Armaan , Dr. Keerti ko report karein !
She comes to senses...keeps the kangan in locker n rushes ....
Both armaan and riddhima come rushing towards Dr. Keerti ....and they clash....(ishq leta tune bgm)
Ar : am ..sorry
Ri : ahm sorry..its okay!

so guys...this was part 12 !!
i knw it was short but plzzzz plzzz plzzzzzz manage wid it for now....
we wrote some 30 pages😃 but forgot to save so cud recover onklly some part
but dont worry we'll rite n update very soon !
thanks for all d support again
its sooo nice to see all of u there for us !! thanks😳
and btw we wud be revealing the entries withing 2-3 parts !😛

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vaishu n rema😳

Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago