Originally posted by: Perfangel5655
oh I love it...and cant wait for the next part. I was thinking of writing a simlar story except mine is like dhadkan!
That would be really interesting! you should write one like that soon😊
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Originally posted by: Perfangel5655
oh I love it...and cant wait for the next part. I was thinking of writing a simlar story except mine is like dhadkan!
That would be really interesting! you should write one like that soon😊
Thanks so much for the comments guys. I hope you guys like the next update
Part 1:
Recap: Kanya hears her husband and she yells Ayan and runs out to see him
K: Ayan! Your home
They hadn't talked properly forever but today was there One year anniversary. Kanya decided to forget everything today and just celebrate with her husband and try and fix their breaking marriage
She ran out of the room and saw him standing at the door. He had his usual briefcase and suitcase that he took on business trips. She felt so weird seeing him after so long. It was like she hadn't seen him in years but had only been a week
She ran towards him ready to hug him. She got closer and closer. When she got infront of him she was glowing with happiness.
K: Hi Ayan
A: Hey
She lifted her arms to put around him BUT he just walked past her
This hurt her but then she thought: Oh we haven't touched or properly talked in so long so it may take time
K: so how was the flight? (she was trying to make some conversation with him so she could eventually bring up the fact that it was there anniversary)
A: your talking to me? Oh yeah it was fine
K: come on Ayan don't be like that today
A: okay fine. I'm sorry
Kanya smiled. Ayan looked so cute and happy after so many days
K: You go freshen up and ill make you something to eat
A: okay fine. Thanks jaan.
Kanya was so happy that he called her that. She wanted to just hug him so bad but she still thought it was to early.
A: Make a lot. Im really hungry and umm…yeah just make sure theres a lot
K: okay no problem
Kanya got busy cooking and made Ayans favourite food. She made pizza, pasta, and garlic bread since Italian was his favourite.
K: hmm but Ayan seemed really hungry. He might want a variety.
So she decided to make chicken wings as well. Since it was there first anniversary she had baked a cake and was decorating it when the bell rang
K: who could that be?
Kanya was surprised that someone came because lately she had no one visit her
She opened the door and was shocked to see the people there
It was no one other than Ayan's friends. There was 5 guys and 2 girls. Kanya really hated them and felt like killing them when they came over to her place
K thinking: tonight was suppose to be mine and Ayan's night! These people are going to ruin it and he'll be really mad too
Friends: hey kanya! Move out of the way man. Let us in!
K didn't move: oh umm what are you guys doing here?
Friends: O shit Ayan's not back yet?
K: no he is. Just taking a shower
Friends: that's fine. We'll get settled in then
K: wait but what are you guys doing here?
Ayan: Hey why are you guys still outside?
Friends: your MISSUS isn't moving out of our way!
They all start laughing and jumping around like animals
A: kanya move! Come in guys. I was waiting for you
Everyone goes into the main sitting room and Ayan goes towards Kanya
A: what the hell is your problem. Why were you standing there
K had tears in her eyes: Ayan I thought tonight was mine and your night
A: your such an idiot. Me and you? Anyways bring the food I told you to make out
K: what ? oh that's why you wanted me to make so much food. I am an idiot for falling for your stupidness. She imitates him, "kanya make lots of food. Im soo hungry!" Your hungry my foot! Serve your stupid friends yourself!
With that she tried to walk away but he grabbed her
A: don't you ever talk to me in that tone again
K: Let go your hurting me
He pushed her away hard so she went banging into the wall
Kanya ran to the bathroom and cried for a bit. After a while she washed her face and came out to give the food to his friends.
When she got to the kitchen all the food was gone already. The only thing left was her cake. All the Cake said on it was "Happy.." because she didn't get a chance to finish decorating it
K: I have to erase that Happy before anyone sees it
She quickly took a knife and wiped the icing off. She did it just in time because one of the girls came and just grabbed the cake and took it in. They shut the door so kanya couldn't hear or see what was going on. They were all just laughing really loud and drinking
Kanya just ran upstairs to her room. She looked in the mirror and saw the marks on her arm that she just got right now from Ayan grabbing her. She touched it and it still hurt.
She just cried and cried, until she felt very suffocated in the room and went out to the balcony.
It was a full moon tonight. She remembered her mom always saying that if you wish on a full moon, your wish will always be fulfilled.
K closed her eyes and wiped her tears. She stood strong and breathed the fresh air in deeply. Then she looked up at the moon: I know I've made many stupid mistakes and I've hurt many people in the process. But I've realized my mistake now and I need someone to fix my life. I'm lonely and have no one. Please God, send someone for me to love
She closed her eyes and wished again and again for love.
The next minute her cell phone rang and she went inside to pick it up
K: hello?
Secretary(Shanaya): Hi Kanya its Shanaya. pack your bags hun! We got the deal and we're leaving tomorrow
K: which deal?
S: the one with the Nandas
After she got off the phone she decided that she has to fix her life herself and she will go as a new person on this trip. With a new attitude. And totally forget her past
Next part: Kanya meets Ranbir!
I know this part was kind of boring but it needed to happen. Please comment and let me know if you like it so far. The more comments i get, the more likely i will update it tonight 😊
Originally posted by: punjabi.princes
Thanks for the comments everyone. I'll be updating tonight forsure 😊
Thanks for the comments everyone😊
Part 2:
Recap: Kanya is fed up of her life with Ayan and wishes for someone else to come into her life
That night Kanya gets out her suitcase and starts to pack her clothes. In between tears she mutters to herself
K: I'm never gonna come back to Ayan. I hate him so much. I cant believe I was so dumb to have left my family for him. But if I leave him now its going to hurt my family so much. I know it will eventually get to them. Maybe I can just come back and fix things with Ayan. Maybe when I return we can go for couple counselling or a second honeymoon!
Kanya knows that Ayan is stubborn but she tries to think positively. However, she still cries herself to sleep. Like she does every night.
She can still hear the music and laughter coming from the main room there in. She ignores it her best and tries to sleep
K: if I really want to fix my life I have to do it myself. I have to become the old kanya again. The one that was always smiling and making others smile. The one who was always laughing and talking. I can't believe how much I have changed in one year. But for some reason I feel like this trip will change everything. I have no idea why I feel like this.
With this she falls asleep.
The next morning she gets up and doesn't see Ayan in the room. She is actually use to it because he stopped sleeping in the same room with her months ago.
Kanya goes and finds him sleeping on the couch in the main room. The room is a mess with dishes everywhere, beer bottles, and a bunch of random things. She takes a blanket and goes to cover Ayan
He wakes up and looks at her. She just smiles and continues to cover him.
A: uh just leave me alone. And I mean alone!
He walks away but she can hear him muttering: she was the biggest mistake ever. Stupid kanya!
Kanya just runs to her room and shuts the door. She decides that shes going to be strong and not cry.
After taking a shower, she gets ready and takes her suitcase and leaves a note for Ayan.
Dear Ayan, I am going away for business. I'll call you when I get there and call me if you need anything or if your going away. Kanya
She leaves feeling satisfied and looking forward to her trip
Her phone rings as soon as she gets in a taxi
K: Hello
Shanaya: hey kanya. Did you leave yet?
K: I just got in my taxi
S: okay hurry up and get to the airport. Mr. Nanda is already there. Your flight is with him in an hour and the rest of the staff including me is coming in the evening
K: what? Me alone with a random man
S: kanya he's not a random man. He's our soon to be business partner. Plus its not like your going to be alone with him. There's like 100 other people on the plane (she starts to laugh)
K smiles: okay shut up now and get back to your work. Ill see you in the evening
Kanya looks at herself in the rearview mirror of the taxi. She still has her mangulsutra on
K thinking: if im starting my life on a new positive note, this needs to come off.
And with that she takes it off and puts it in her purse. She feels a lot better and feels like shes finally got some freedom
They arrive at the airport soon. The taxi driver gets out and takes her suitcase out of the trunk.
Driver: sorry mam I cant stand here for long and can't get you a cart for this. The carts are over there.
K: okay thanks
She pays him and drags her suitcase to the carts. She looks over and sees that there are no carts left there
K: oh Shit! How am I going to drag this through the airport, plus hold my purse and tickets and stuff. Ufff why's life soo complicated?
She looks over again towards the carts and sees that someone has just put one there. She runs as fast as she could with the suitcase and grabs on to the cart and turns her face around so she can take it out of the cart area.
She tries to move the cart but its not moving. She tugs at it harder but its stuck. She turns her face around and notices that theres another hand on the cart.
K: Excuse me, please move your hand
She looks up and sees the most sexiest eyes ever. There so deep and sensual that she forgot everything around her
The guy snaps his fingers infront of her face: hey miss I had this cart first. Go find another one
Kanya snaps out of his beautiful eyes: oh umm no its mine
Guy: no its mine…actually just take it. I don't talk to girls like you
He looks her up and down and makes a face like he's disgusted and walks away
K realizes what he just said and starts yelling: hey how dare you say that! You idiot! Dog! Pig! Errr I hate you!
She then puts her suitcase on the cart and angrily walks into the airport
K: uff I hope I never see that idiot again!
She checked in at the main desk and soon boarded the plane and was looking for her seat
K: umm A5..where is it? Oh shit theres someone in my seat
There was someone sitting there with a news paper that covered his face
K: umm excuse me I think your in my seat
The guy lowered the newspaper and what kanya saw made her heart do a flip flop. It were those eyes again. So striking and gorgeous that she just melted into them again
The guy snapped his fingers again to get her attention
Guy: umm hello miss? Where do you always get lost
K: oh umm. Your in my seat
G: nope this is my seat
K: no its mine
G: whats wrong with you? Always fighting for everything. It was my decency to let you have the cart but not my seat
K: Listen you don't know who I am. You better get out of my seat or else…
G: or else what?
K: ahhh I hate you
The guy imitates her: "ahh I hate you"
K: your soo annoying!
He starts to laugh
She holds onto her head to control herself from yelling
Then in a low voice she whispers: please can I jus have my seat
G: whats your seat number?
K: A5
G: yeah so sit down in your seat
K: I can't
G: yes you can. Just sit right down. Make yourself comfortable
K: you stupid flirt! I'm not sitting in your lap
The guy starts laughing: hey miss I don't want you in my lap. And by the way the seat I am in is B5, yours is the window seat next to me
She pushes past him and sits down right next to him
G: now this is going to be a fun flight
She rolls her eyes at him and just puts on her head phones
Please comment so I can update soon 😊