FF- Kuch to Hua Hai- *p.39*update 30/05

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

Thanks for the comments everyone 😊

I'll try and make the next one longer and post it tonight. Be sure to read it!

Edited by punjabi.princes - 17 years ago

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-SalShah4eva-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Hey why did u stopped yaar ..this story going very good i can't wait anymore plz plz update very soon . I just cant wait.You are too good please do it as possible as soon.

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jennie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

the 3 parts were gr8
plz continue soon

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Thanks for the comments everyone 😊

I have a long update ready and will be posting it shortly

I want lots of comments before i post the part after
😃

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

Here's the next part. It seemed a lot longer in Word lol but I have part 5 ready too so i will post part 5. But i need lots of comments. 😃

Part 4:

She slowly opened one eye and was shocked to see what she saw

He was so close to her and looking straight into her eyes. His chocolaty brown eyes were so deep that she could just drown in them. The way he was staring at her so intensely and close made kanya flutter her eyes like a butterfly. (lol)

Then she realized what she was doing and quickly just shut her eyes.

K (thinking): Oh please God, let that have just been a dream. I feel like such an idiot. I cant believe I fluttered my eyes like that. But damn he's so charming I cant help myself.

She kept her eyes closed for another ten minutes and pretended to be asleep

Airhostess: Excuse me Mam, would you like something to drink

R: I think shes asleep. Let me check

He took his big hand and put it on top of hers and kind of just shook it.

Kanya felt an electric bolt just go through her and her eyes shot open

R: yeah shes awake alright (he laughed) so what do you want to drink

K: umm Ice Tea would be fine

After they got there drinks, Kanya sat there stiffly and very uncomfortable. Had he seen her? Even if he did, why does she care?

Her thoughts were broken by his deep voice

R: so Miss Kanya, tell me about yourself

K: what

R: I said tell me a little bit about yourself

K: like what? I don't share personal information with strangers

R: oh really

K: yes really

R: then why do you secretly stare at strangers?

Kanya felt her face turn beet red and she looked at him
He looked at her and fluttered his eyes like she did before and he burst out laughing

Kanya could feel her face getting hotter and hotter until she couldn't take it anymore and just turned to stare out the window

R: so much attitude

Kanya turned around to say something but couldn't because an older women was standing there.

W: Excuse me beta, can I sit in your seat? My husband is sitting in the seat right next to you on the other side of the aisle

Ranbir glanced over at Kanya and then looked back

R: yeah sure Aunty

He got his briefcase and just wandered off behind the curtains to his new seat

K: phew he's gone. Now I have to get back into business mode. Why the hell was I acting like a teenager and going crazy over a guy. Anyways I need to concentrate on this deal with the Nanda's and prepare for the conference

Airplane Captain: Fasten your seatbelts passengers. We will be landing in Delhi shortly. The weather is great outside. About 30 degrees Celsius with sunshine and no clouds.

K: wow a perfect start to my new life. Beautiful weather is really what I needed (she smiles)
There was a bit of turbulence that shook the plane

K: uff I hate that turbulence! Ruins the whole plane ride and that stupid guy who said I had attitude. I hope I never see him again!

Please comment and I will make another update tonight!! 😊
~Punjabi.Princess

Edited by punjabi.princes - 17 years ago

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Zaara

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

omg im first im never first 😆 gr8 job update soon!

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Tanya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

small very small (maybe.... i just cant get enuf!!)
part 5 part 5!!
CMON PPL!
PART 5!

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Amrita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

i agree wit tanyadas_leo...plezzzzzzzzz update soon!! an make it longer plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!

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Kiran

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

That was awesome
I agree with tanyadas_leo the update was short
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

#50

Thanks for the comments everyone!

My parents are actually going to England today so I have to go to the airport, so i will put up the next part before i leave (hopefully if i have it done by then 😆 )