Beete Lamhe(AK):I'M BACK!! NOTE:Page 154(21/09)!! - Page 7

cont soon plz! i want to read the next part 👏

Originally posted by: freaky_angel

lovely concept! again out of the ordinary like ur other ff! and thnk god is in english i did have difficulty wid da other one but it was still interesting so i read it! and omg ive already got tears in my eyes and that in the first part! u r a good writer well keep up da gd work and hopefully continue fast! lolz

Thanks! Yes….i know a lot of readers had difficulties with the hindi in KAS so decided to write in english this time…..makes it easier for me as well…lol. Im sorry my first part made you cry hun….hopefully the upcoming parts will make you laugh…will try to cont this weekend.

Originally posted by: Smileyface

loveddddddddd itttttttttttttt!!!!!....lol im sure u must have figured that out..cause i already told u that...it was very good...i really want to kno wat happened between them two and y he let her....omgggggg im sooo hapipiee prithvi is her brother...yayyy..lol..nd i hope simone is good tooo....loved itttttttttt!!!

Thanks hershy! Yes you already told me that…you will know what happened between them after a few parts….the cat isn't going to be out of the bag that soon…LOL….i believe a lot of people are going to be happy that he is her brother..lol……simone is good right now but in the future….i don't know……lol…

Originally posted by: *princess*15

nyc concept ekta u describe emotions so welll i enjoyed every bit of it i hate naina i really wanna noe wat happened between both of em 2 years ago

Thanks! Hating Naina already? Hehe….you will know what happened between them in general in the next part but the details wont come until later….

Originally posted by: deeya123

great start
he left her on the day of their marriage...dats very bad
dnt like naina at all.

Thanks!

Yep…he left her on their wedding days

Seems like everyone hates naina already…

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great FF.
What he left her on their marriage day!!!!!
Please update soon.

Anjali

Thanks!

Yep he left her on their marriage day!.

Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

That was great
i wonder what happened between Angad & Kripa.
Can't wait to read the enxt part

Thanks!

You will find out what happened in general in the next part! Details will follow in the later parts…

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt part

Thanks!

Originally posted by: pia.

hey nice FF it's very intresting continue soon

love swapna aka pia

Thanks!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

liked the way u described kripa's feelings..very touchy. so kanan is sick or may be she's in coma?. and kripa is taking care of palak. i wonder wht's the reason behind angad getting engaged to simone? wonderful part.
~Sana~

Thanks! Kanan is in coma...You will get all your questions answered soon…

Originally posted by: ms_gujju_92

HEyyyyy gr8 job!!!

PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS make Angad innocent!!!!! HE's just TOOOOO cute.....and besides, everyone's always portraying him like an "evil lover" lol j/k

but still make it suspense...but make him have A majboori or something...lol

hehe.....btw thanks for translating the Hindi....me and my poor Gujrati self has to struggle forever....lol

thanks! Lol….you will see what happened between the two in the upcoming parts…lol….yes I figured a lot of people had reading Koi Aap Sa…so I decided to write this in the universal language….lol…

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

excellent start!! very different from the first one!!
so angad is getting engaged to simone huh?
didn't anyone in kripa's family know about her and angad?
thas strange...she didn't tell anyone...weren't they together for a while??
and they were on the verge of getting married too...weird
but it was sad to see kripa sad tooo
aand angad was sad too
i am guessing the main problem was naina khanna...she is evil in this i see
and angad didn't show up for the marriage??? what the heck...ok so it was because of his mom
that he didn't show up...but didn't he have some sense to tell kripa why he didn't come?
that idiot!!!!!
i loved the shocking expression on angad
first he though kripa was married...then with a kid...lol!!
loved the glares she gave at him tooo!!
and also prithvi is the brother...i love it when prithvi plays the role of kripa's brother
thas how it should have been in the kyph too lol!!
great first part!! loooved it!!!!!

Thanks! Angad isn't getting engaged to simone, HE ALREADY DID get engaged to her in the first part…lol….hehehehe I know all the readers are probably wondering why no one there knows that Kripa and Angad were getting married…you will get answers to your questions…everyone must be thinking that but there was a small detail in the first part that most readers must have neglected. It said "Kripa met simone after years of family brawling"…more will be added to the details... once again….you will see in the upcoming parts why Angad never showed up to his own marriage…yea…he thought she was married…lol…Kripa will give him tons of glare in this ff..lol……yea…I kinda figured that ppl prefer Prithvi as her bro..LOL……..and I didn't want to make him a vamp after making him a psycho in KAS…LOL….

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

what an amazing part... i almost cried cont soon plz!!!!!!!

Thanks! Sorry that my first part made you cry…hopefully the upcoming ones wont…

Originally posted by: sexy_eyes

Oh my god. Love this new story hun. So Angad left her on their wedding day? OUCH that's gotta hurt. I dont blame being Kripa for being angry...i mean come on...the man didnt even tell her why he left her!! it is ridiculous...i really get the feeling that naina has something to do with it...i think thats why riddhima wasnt present at Angad-Simone's engagement...hmm.....im just wondering how prithvi, simone, Nishant, and them dont know that angad and Kripa were supposed to get married.... ...they werent there or something? and how are you going to tell us what happened in the past? is a character going to say it or is it going to be a flashback?? i have so many questions on my mind right now. lol.

i really liked the terrace scene and the scene where kripa asked him for the ring. it was so touching the way he was wearing their engagement ring for two years even if they had separated. it must have hurt kripa to see him getting engaged to her sister. what exactly is wrong with naina? god...what a mother...

Even i love the fact that prithvi is Kripa's cousin!...lmao..can't have the love triangle here....welll we do..but the AKP triangles are the sad ones because prithvi can be such a vamp..lol.

continue soon hun.
awesome job with this part!

Thanks! Yup Angad left her on their wedding day…and he didn't tell her why…I like your prediction and whoa gurl u are full of questions…lol…upcoming parts should answer all your questions…naina is blinded by the money and the "high-society" she is in…she doesn't acknowledge her children right now…and riddhima wasn't at the engagement for a reason….you will see why in the upcoming parts…she wont come until 4-5 more parts….you're right….prithvi can be an insane vamp…lol….but since he was so horrendous in KAS…I made him nice in this one…lol…..

Originally posted by: nimrah

Oooh..first part and i'm already loving it! Awesome start Ekta!! U're fantastic!
Cant wait for the next part! Btw thanks for the note in the FF or I wud have missed out on this wonderful FF! Continue soon!

Thanks!!! Im glad I put the note in KAS too..lol..seems like most of my readers found out about BL from there…

Originally posted by: ice _girl

want 2 know wat happened b/w dem n hope dey get 2gether soon

Thanks! Will try to cont this weekend….you will find out what happens between them…

Originally posted by: desert_rose

Hey!
how r u?...long time.. i know...srry i dindnt comment on koi aap sa for ages...buh i read like all the parts till date...but was too lazy to comment...lol...actually blame my pc...it has become damn slow and takes 4ever to load..newayz You started a new ff....cool...awesome intro...loved the first part and the title...beete lamhein,,it reminds me of tht song beete lamhein...love tht song....anywayz cont soon ....u have my favourite couples...armaan riddhima and obviously AK...k ...tc..luv ya!

Hey! Yup…been a long while!..Its alright..i understand completely…lol…..yea...even my internet has become really slow…yep..love that song…lol…I figured that AK and AR the most hot and happening couples these days….so yea…lol…Thanks for the comment hun!

Originally posted by: totally_desi

Congrats on the new fan-fiction Ekta The first part was great. I like your concept...it's very different.

Hm I wonder why Angad left Kripa right before getting married. I have a feeling that it was becasue of his mother, or maybe some other reason. I hope he tells her why and gets rid of the misunderstandings. But I understand how Kipa must've felt.

I really hope that Angad doesn't get married to Simone.

It was really cute how he still had on her ring, it's a sign that he still loves her.

Well write soon, I can't wait to read more of this fan-fic.

Thanks Anjali! You will see why he left her…don't worry….just a lil patience..lol…nice prediction…lets hope they get rid of the misunderstanding before its too late…yep..they both love each other even today but Angad has put her through so much that her heart wont let her forgive him.

Originally posted by: sun_423

too good...awesome..wonderful...i loved the first part..it was just too amazing..very damn well-written..keepp the good work going.. please do continue soon..me waiting for the next part very eagerly...

Thanks!

I will try to keep writing at the same level if not better.

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

cont soon plz! i want to read the next part

Will try to cont tomorrow!

nice part
hope to find out what happened that day soon...
conitnue soon

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

nice part
hope to find out what happened that day soon...
conitnue soon

Thanks!
you will find out what happened that day very soon....
Updating in a few mins...

omg sorry for commenting late but i cant believe angad left her at wedding and the line "Kripa met simone after years of family brawling" makes me feel as if someone close to simone like her brother mom or da had worked wit naina khanna(yes i hate her already)to split ak and it had something to do wit ridz and armaan hmmm.........cant wait for the new part but good job i like it. 😃
Love Ya Lots
Rhea 😛

Originally posted by: superstar15

omg sorry for commenting late but i cant believe angad left her at wedding and the line "Kripa met simone after years of family brawling" makes me feel as if someone close to simone like her brother mom or da had worked wit naina khanna(yes i hate her already)to split ak and it had something to do wit ridz and armaan hmmm.........cant wait for the new part but good job i like it. 😃
Love Ya Lots
Rhea 😛

I like the way you're thinking....its very diff from the other reader's predictions........lol.......i will let you guys know what happened with AK slowly....wont let the cat out of the bsg just yet...lol....and everyone hates naina already....hehe..
Thanks!

Thanks a ton: desiqt8806, love"sAngel, *princess*15, superstar 15, rima 791, monikaseth, iamsmart, sameira-90, guy_cool, jdsean, smileyface, iqbals4ever, BABY-GIRL7, dolphin25, chilingal16, angullgrl91, armaghan0, madz786, arohaangel, freaky_angel, deeya123, *angel94*, laksh_ktfan, pia., me_gujju_92, sexy_eyes, nimrah, ice_girl, desert_rose, totally_desi, sun423, sujalangag_rock, and my silent readers.

Part 2:

Kripa woke up the next morning, more like got out of bed. Of course she had spent a sleepless night. How could she possibly think about sleeping, let alone sleeping peacefully, when her one and only love was about to become someone else's. "Correction", she told herself "he IS someone else's now…my sister's out of all people. She diverted her mind before her eyes flooded again.

She walked into the dining room for breakfast and stopped for two seconds upon seeing Angad seated there. "Great", she thought, "as if knowing that he is my sister's soon to be husband wasn't bad enough, I have to see him everyday. How did I forget that Sim told me her fiance lives with them"? She quietly sat down and greeted Prithvi and Simone a "good morning" with a brief smile and without a smile to Angad.

Angad knew very well that he would have to deal with her anger and her hatred. It was only natural for her to act that way. Any woman would behave like that if the man she loved left her a few hours before they were about to get married and then got engaged with her sister!

Prithvi: Earth to Kripa! Earth to Kripa!

Kripa (snapping out of her thoughts): huh?!?! Sorry…I didn't hear you…

Prithvi: no kidding! Kahan khoyi hui ho?? (where are you?)

Kripa: nothing…just trying to plan my day…I don't have anything to do…I guess I will just unpack!

Simone: I'm so sorry sweetie! I tried to take a leave but my boss wont let me…he is such a jerk!

Prithvi: and I am on a new project…I can't even ask for a leave…my boss is a ***** and she will fire me if I ask for one…

Kripa: hey guys…it's really okay…I'm used to being alone…all by myself.

Angad, at once, looked at Kripa when he heard her say that. She really hadn't moved on. She was indeed standing just where he had left her, exactly like she said.

Prithvi: HEY!! I don't want sad talk okay? You promised me that you will move on…leave him behind Kripa! Why are you holding on to the past?

Kripa: I can't help it!

Angad: um…who are we talking about?

"wow he is an amazing actor…and a beautiful liar", Kripa thought as she shot him an angry look.

Kripa (pushing away her plate, and pounding her hand on the table): ITS NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!!

She stomped away while Prithvi called after her and simone shook her head.

Simone (sighed): bhai…you know she still hasn't forgotten anything, then why do you keep reminding her??

Prithvi (Shook his head): I know sim but I can't help it…I hate seeing her that way…I want my old Kripa back…I want her to step out of her melancholy. (depression)

Simone: she won't! She had two years to forget him but she didn't! She won't admit it but its still hurting her!

Prithvi: I will kill him if I find him sim…he has snatched everything away from Kripa! Everything!

Angad: um…is this a relationship problem?...I understand if you don't want to tell me…I'm just being curious.

Prithvi: of course not Angad! You are a part of our family now…you have a right to know…you're right…it's a relationship problem…its been two years…Kripa was getting married to her long time boyfriend but he never showed up. Instead, he sent her a letter through a friend that he didn't want to marry her. He never told her why. She wanted answers to the questions that came up in her heart so she tried contacting him many ways…but nothing worked. Kripa's dad couldn't tolerate all this and drowned in stress, he got a heart attack. He had already had two heart attacks before…and the third one took his life away. Kripa was shattered when he passed away, and after a few minutes, they discovered that Kripa's mom committed suicide. Look at the irony…the day that was supposed to be the happiest day of Kripa's life turned out to be the most hideous day of her life.

Simone: Okay stop Prithvi…lets not go back there, we won't get anything except tears.

Angad was shattered, broken, stunned, and shocked. He was having a hard time controlling his tears and his anger. He sat still, waiting for Prithvi and simone to leave. His wish came true sooner than he thought it would. Simone gave Angad a hug and pecked his cheek before she left. When he was assured that they had left, he rushed, practically sprinted, to Kripa's room. He didn't want to believe that his mother, by emotions, wasn't living among them anymore. He had always received a mother's love and affection from Gayatri. Naina never had time for him. Gayatri had given him more hugs than the number of times Naina had looked at him. When he entered the room, he saw Kripa standing in front of her parents' picture with a garland around it. He took limping steps of shock towards it. Feeling his presence, Kripa turned around to look at him and that's when she revealed that she was crying. She noticed his eyes were moist, threatening to overflow any second now. She stepped away, moving out of his way to the image. He walked up to the frame, with blurry vision caused by building tears. He broke into tears as he caressed the image with trembling fingers.

Their backs were facing each other but both knew very well that the other was crying. She turned and took a step towards him placing her shaking hand on his shoulder. He turned around, fell on his knees, hugged her waist as he hid his face in her stomach, and cried. He cried like a baby that cries upon losing his toys.

He broke down like never before. She stood there with her hands on his shoulders, squeezing lightly, patting, caressing as consoling him. She understood his pain better than he did. She had only lost her parents but he had lost his family. He considered Gayatri and Suryaban his mother-father. Kripa was his love. He had loved all three of them more than his very own life. He had lost all three of them, all at once. How could he explain himself now? He wanted to tell her why he did what he did. Knowing her, he knew she would forgive him once she heard his side of the story, as well as the answers to the questions in her eyes. That was before. It would have worked that way only if he was responsible for only her but what now? Now she will never forgive him. Why should she?

He was guilty. Guilty for two whole murders and one half murder. Kripa was breathing, walking, talking, eating, living but he knew he had killed the soul within her two years ago. After letting him empty his heavy heart, she pulled her hands back from his shoulders. His grip tightened around her waist when he felt her trying to move away from him.

Kripa (trying to pull away): Angad…you broke me completely two years ago…you are breaking what's left of me right now…

That did the trick. The pain in her voice forced him to let go of her. She couldn't stop the urge and caressed his tear-soaked cheek as giving him the last consolation. The last consolation for probably a long time from today.

--::--::--::--

Kripa rushed to the door when the person outside started pounding on it. She thought it must be simone or Prithvi as it was time for them to come home. She opened the door ready to kill the person who seemed determined to break the door into two.

Kripa (after opening the door): who are you?? Is this a way to knock? Are you knocking or showing off your karate moves? Where are your manners? Do you know how fast I ran to get the door?! What is wrong with you?

Person : Why did you stop?? Keep scolding me….its been days since a beautiful woman has scolded me like that.

reserved

yay u continued i liked the part hmmm angad loved the sharma family that was very sad but i think the person at the door was armaan, i hope now we find out y angad left kripa for sure soon, it was really emotional u no ur ffs make me cry sometimes i am a very emotional person i liked ur update cont soon.

Love Ya Lots

Rhea😛

Wow!! That was a totally amazing part. When Angad found out that Gayatri died and went to hug Kripa was so heartbreaking. I feel bad for both Kripa and Angad they're hurting so much. I wonder who the person is at the door, hopefully someone to make Angad jealous. Can't wait for more. continue soon 👏 😊

yess i read that simone and kripa met up after years of brawling
but i overlooked that....now that u mentioned again maybe that has something to do with angad and kripa's separation?
and yess i know angad and simone are already engaged...i juss didn't want to be reminded lol! its toooo painful...hehe me being dramatic right now lol!!
awww i am feeling bad for angad right now!! so saddy sadd!
and kripa tooo
she lost soo much that time...her whole family!!
all cuz of the evil naina! i hate her!!
angad broke down...sniff sniff...and he hugged kripa...soo sweet and kripa consoled him too...awww
they still care for each other i can see that but it will take time for things to get better between them

and hmmm who could be at the door...lol another guy?? cute guy??? cute and handsome guy lol!!

neways great part!! loooved itt! very emotionaly and touching!!