Beete Lamhe(AK):I'M BACK!! NOTE:Page 154(21/09)!! - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
fab part
poor kripa everyone calling her aunty
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Posted: 17 years ago
OO! that was the sweetest ever:|
lol <3 really cute:)
please contue soon:D


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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update 👏 👏 kripa aunti ji 😆 i fink shes a spoil brat 😕 datz y she was annoying by those comments 😆 lolz
lv da flash back 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it fascianting part a bit tenesed at first but the flashback was really exciting do con soon cant wait magnificent
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it yaar.
plz cont soon
waiting................
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Posted: 17 years ago
very cute part!!
angad and kripa alone in the car for six hours
wow thas long!!
and angad only looks at her when she falls asleep how sweet
but he better be careful driving...don't want any accidents

and aww poor kripa getting teased and being called an aunty ji! sooo mean of the kids

and coool ranbir and kanya are in this fan fic...very nice!!! and they are dating! coool!!!

angad played a mean prank on kripa...but it was funny!!
i hope she gets him back!!
great part!!
lovved it!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: prabhi

GREAT PART!! awesome. did kripa always wear suits? cuz ranbir was like..what happened to you? like he saw her like that for the first time! anywayz loved the part plz continue soonn..

Thanks! You will find out everything in the upcoming parts…

Originally posted by: chillingal16

ohh interesting part...am glad that nothing serious happned with the phone...have a feeling that this trip is going to open up alot of emotions...hmm..she seems to have a nice relationship with Ranbir..is he going to make an entry soon???...a six hour drive with Angad..will they talk out their feelings or just keep them bottled up and bring an explosive scene soon..lolz am jokin..cant wait for the next part... what did Ranbir mean by what happened to Kripa..you're looking like a aunty...i am guessing that she is modern but just dressed like that...wonder what will angad do next and how their relationship progresses from here...

Thanks! Yea…she just became serious because she figured she was traveling with Angad…lol….this trip will open up a few things but lets see what happens.. lol….an explosive scene….i like that…lol……..all your questions will be answered in the next few parts…..hopefully…lol….

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

hahah!! he aunty ji in all part was hillarious..wowo kripsee and ranbir cuzins....dosent go well...lol....neways!! loved the oat..was awesome!!

Thanks!! I couldn't find any other people whom I can make cousins…I might change the guy who plays Ranbir tho..lol…..

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

ooh. nice part. cant wait 2 read more.

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part..continue soon

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: freaky_angel

wow hilarious part but i feel sorry for krips man! once gain u made my day!

Thanks!! Im glad I could make your day…

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

fab part
Angad surely knows how 2 get on some1's nerves... gr8
the part where Ranbir & KRipa meet was gr8...
angad surely played a nice prank on KRipa
continue soon

Thanks!! Yep…he totally knows how to get on someone's nerves…nice prank?? I thought it was fairly mean one…….lol……

Originally posted by: Love''sAngel

fab part
just loved it...
i wish it was me walking into the boys hostel instead to Kripa to see a shirtless Angad...
wonder what's AK's past
continue soon

Thanks!!! Omg..we think alike..lol….i wish I was in her place…I wudnt have ran like she did..i wud have hugged him back…LOL…….ak's past will slowly open up..most of this ff takes place in the past….

Originally posted by: rima791

wow ekta wonderful part loved it
plz continue soon

edit -->> after school promise

yay! i am back form school and no hw

love the part

thanks for showing flashback nice to know that their real story is coming out

totally expect AK meeting like that not in bad way just a shocked

lucky krips i mean she went into boys hostel and saw shirtless angad

plz cont soon

Thanks!!! Yup…real story will come out in flashbacks even though you will see bits and pieces of present here and there..lol….its easy to imagine Angad and Kripa meet like that isn't it? I know…and stupid buddhu ran away from there…lol…I wud stay back..just to watch Angad…lol….

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great Part
Please continue soon.

thanks!!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

for the first time i enjoyed reading a flashback it was amazing. but wht's wid everyone calling kripa auntyji. even her cousin ranbir. and how do kanya and kripa know each other? gr8 part.
~Sana~

Thanks!! Im glad you like the flashback….you will see what the real thing behind that is..and they call her aunty-ji because she is dressed like one..i just showed Kripa and Kanya friends before school started….kripa mentions that she moved into the city three months ago….and school just started…so consider Kripa and Kanya friends for 2 months..lol..

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part. Loved the flashback.

thanks!!

Originally posted by: deeya123

fab part
poor kripa everyone calling her aunty

Thanks!!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: goldi2

OO! that was the sweetest ever:|
lol <3 really cute:)
please contue soon:D
Hina

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: *princess*15

awesome update kripa aunti ji i fink shes a spoil brat datz y she was annoying by those comments lolz
lv da flash back

thanks! Like your prediction…lets see how true it is…lol..

Originally posted by: armaghan0

loved it fascianting part a bit tenesed at first but the flashback was really exciting do con soon cant wait magnificent

Thanks!! The flashbacks should give you a break from the intense and tensed present..lol….

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: amritafan

loved it yaar.
plz cont soon
waiting................

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

very cute part!!
angad and kripa alone in the car for six hours
wow thas long!!
and angad only looks at her when she falls asleep how sweet
but he better be careful driving...don't want any accidents

and aww poor kripa getting teased and being called an aunty ji! sooo mean of the kids

and coool ranbir and kanya are in this fan fic...very nice!!! and they are dating! coool!!!

angad played a mean prank on kripa...but it was funny!!
i hope she gets him back!!
great part!!
lovved it!

Thanks!! Yup…six hours…..of course he would look at her when she is asleep….he woudnt have enough courage to look at her while she was awake after he left her on their wedding day. It was a mean prank alright…but see..if I were in her place…I wud love to see a Shirtless Angad…..:$:$:$

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks a Ton : desiqt8806, *princess*15, rima791, monikaseth, iamsmart, smaeira-90, jdsean, iqbals4ever, chillingal16, angullgrl91, arohaangel, freaky_angel, deeya123, sujalangadrock, goldi2, armaghan0, *angel94*, prabhi, love"sAngel, amritafan, and my silent readers!


Part 5:

It had been a week since Kripa had come to school and there wasn't a single day when Kripa was spared by Angad and his friends. She was the victim of their daily pranks. She had learned to move on and ignore them. She was happy that she had one more day left. She had made exactly two friends in that one week, Kanya and Bani. Well Kanya didn't really count since Kripa knew her from before but she was her friend. Kripa was extremely happy because, hopefully, one more person would get added to her friends list today. Mr. Walters, the chemistry professor, was assigning each student a lab partner. The pair would do all experiments and projects together, for the entire school year.

She sat quietly while Angad's troop's blabbering continued as usual. The class was into pin-drop silence once the teacher walked in. He took out the paper with the names of the pairs and started announcing the pairs. Bani and Kanya squealed when they were paired together. Kripa was getting nervous as the names of the people were being called out. So far, the people who were paired were the people she hoped to be partners with. She let out a loud groan when she was announced partners with, none other than, Angad. Angad: the last person on earth she would want to be partners with.

Mr. Walters: Alright…our first experiment will be today itself.

The class was too busy talking in their own private groups. Now the teacher was really annoyed.

Mr. Walters: THAT'S IT! BE QUIET!!!!!!!! I made a mistake by letting you sit where you wanted…not anymore…everyone…sit with your lab partner from now on. Who doesn't want to can serve me their lunch hour and three hours after school for detention.

Everyone got around and sat with their partner mumbling and cursing the teacher. Kripa stiffened and got herself ready for another hour of torture. To her luck and surprise, he didn't say a word to her. Once the teacher explained what to do for the experiment, all students dispersed to their respective lab stations.

Kripa mumbled in anger as she wiped another beaker and put it away. She had just put that one away when Angad handed her another one.

Angad: get used to it aunty ji! You are my lab partner…and this stuff will happen pretty often….

Kripa: well it better not! I don't want to spend two hours of my day here with you because of your stupidity.

Yes, stupidity. During the experiment, they were heating a beaker on a hot plate. Angad had picked up the hot beaker without any safety equipment. It was so hot that it slipped out of his hand, spilling some of the acid on his hand. And because of the stupid act by the pair, they were given a two hour detention which they would be spending washing laboratory equipment.

Angad: It's not my fault…you never told me it was hot.

Kripa: who the heck doesn't know that a beaker on a hot plate, a hot plate that is ON, ISN'T GOING TO BE HOT???

Angad: I didn't know it was on…

Kripa: you are the one who turned it on…seriously!! What on earth is wrong with you?

Angad: something is wrong with you!!! You didn't need to tell Walters that I burnt myself!

Kripa: well Mr. Know-it-all…you had burned yourself with acid as well…you should be thanking me for telling the teacher.

Angad: listen Ms.Chipkali..

Kripa: Don't call me that!

Angad: and what if I do?

Kripa: I'll……I'll……ARGH! I don't know!! God…I hate you….you are the most annoying creature I have ever come across

Angad(yelling while Kripa walked away): and you are the most chipkali-ish girl I've ever seen!

Kripa walked into her dorm, also shared by Bani and Kanya, and screamed.

Kripa: AHHHH!!! It's done!! Its over!!

Kanya: not so fast…there are still 6 more hours left!

Kripa: oh come on!!

Bani: what's going on guys?

Kanya told her everything making Bani laugh until her stomach hurt.

Kripa: you know Bani…you're not helping!

Bani: I know but…it just so funny….

Kripa(sarcastically): yea…it's so funny that I'm dying of laughter!

Bani: you're dying?? Should I call an ambulance??

Kripa(hitting bani with a pillow): shut up!

Bani took the pillow and threw it back at Kripa. Kripa bent down which caused Kanya to be the victim of the pillow. In no time, the girls had engaged themselves into a pillow fight.

Next Morning:

Angad stood leaning against his locker, messing around with his iPod. He was early that morning since he needed Kripa's help with the lab report. He was about to look up and leave when he noticed a beautiful pair of legs accompanied by cute looking feet in strapped heels. His eyes slowly averted up scanning the pink miniskirt followed by a white tank top. The next thing he noticed was a set of kissable lips, a thin-long-perfectly-shaped nose, beautiful and expressive hazel eyes. He had never seen her before, man was she beautiful. She raised her eyebrow at him and signaled him to move out of her way. He was so busy staring at her, he didt notice that she was going to Kripa's locker. She exchanged her books, closed the locker, and turned around to leave when Angad extended his hand.

Angad: Hi! Angad Khanna!

She simply rolled her eyes and walked away. Angad got the shock of his life when someone called out "Kripa" from behind and she turned around to respond.

Angad(thinking to himself): no way!!!!!!!!

She gasped and ran past Angad, jumping onto a guy. The guy embraced her and twirled her around. "Who the heck is that?", Angad thought.

Kripa: Oh My God Krish!! Finally you're here!!

Angad(thinking to himself): Krish…hmm..seems like her boyfriend…but even then….no way this is Kripa…kahan Kripa the chipkali aur kahan yeh…..damn she is so hot!

She left while talking to krish, arm-in-arm. Angad smiled to himself and walked after them. He caught up to Kripa near the cafeteria.

Angad: um…Kripa??

Kripa(turned around): yea?

Angad: are you busy?? I sort of needed help with the lab

Kripa: um..sure…um..krish…is it okay if I catch you later?

Krish: perfectly fine with me…just think over what I said(winked)

Kripa: don't worry…I will (hugged him) I'll catch you later

Krish(kissed her cheek): alright…take care..

Krish turned around and disappeared into the cafeteria while Kripa turned around to a not-very-happy-looking Angad.

Kripa: um…shall we??

Angad(cleared his throat): sure..

Angad and Kripa walked towards the library silently until Angad opened his mouth.

Angad: so? Boyfriend?

Kripa(confused):what?

Angad: Krish….your boyfriend??

Kripa: Its not necessary that a girl and a boy always have the girlfriend-boyfriend relationship…

Angad: I know…just being curious…

Kripa: no..we're just really good friends…

Angad didn't know why but he felt happy. The fact that she wasn't krish's girlfriend made him happy.

Angad: okay…if not krish's girlfriend…than someone else's?

Kripa: wow…what's the matter…how come your behaviour is so different today?

Angad: even you have changed quite much.

Kripa: Who said?? I was always like this…and why should I change for other people?? Just so people like you talk to me?

Angad: what do you mean?

Kripa: oh come on…don't pretend! The only reason why you'Re talking to me so nicely is because im not dressed like a behen-ji….sorry…what was it? Oh yea….Aunty Ji! Until I was an "aunty-ji" you didn't spare me one day without making me fun of me or pranking me…and today…you yourself have come to talk to me…I mean..if I chose my friends by looking at the way they dress, I would be friends with 1 out of a 1000 people….you know…I ever understand why people always look at the outside of a person….isnt it the inside that matters?? And I know you came forward to talk to me because im dressed in modern clothes, the way you like girls to dress…am I right?

Angad: you know what? I don't know why…but I'll tell you the truth…you are absolutely correct.

Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
AHH!!! lol ahahaha thats soo cute lol i kinda guessed this was gonna happen!! i just checked like 5 minutes ago if u had posted but u ahdnt:( and htne i checked again im like maybe she posted now:S lol aahhaha:P i wasss despratly wanting to read this! as well as ur orhter story:) but im soo glad i got the chance to right now! i really thought u would conitnue last weekend again but u didnt:( but im glad u did now.. do u know when u'll be updating anyof ur stories again??



Hina

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