Fan-fic:A-J’s safar(part 10 updated) - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
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continue...how long are you going to make us wait???
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: JK_5

How abt Neha Shastri runs away with Pervertlal😛



😆 very nice idea JK
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Its really nice dear
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 7:

The next day, Jassi wakes up, as her normal routine and goes to the hospital. But her mind isn't set for the hospital. She keeps daydreaming 😳. On the other side, Armaan is getting restless without seeing her. He can't stand this distance so he decides to bang his head towards to wall till it bleeds.(ppoor armaan).

Armaan goes towards his car, then he crashes towards a tree near the hosptial and walks drunkly to the hospital. As he walks in, he looks drunk and dizzy. Suddenly Jassi pops up and see's Armaan in disaster! She runs quickly towards him, while Armaan faints. Jassi drags(well not drag 😉 but tries to pull him toward a room).

She lays him down on the empty bed. She immediately goes runs for injections, first aid stuff and e.t.c. Armaan stays unconscience. Where Jassi treats him.Bebe, Billu, and Amrit had given her all that she needed and while Jassi insists on taking care of him. Her hospital shift was done, she decides to take him to her house. As Jassi gets tired keeping a steady view on him, she falls asleep right on the corner of her bed, while sitting on her carpet.

Armaan gains conscienceness and looks at the innocent Jassi next to him, while Jassi slowly opens her eyes. And they both stare at each other for some time.
Jassi tells him all that happened soon and Armaan feel guilty on keeping her in so much trouble.

Armaan:Jassi, tum mujhko kabhi chodke nahin jaogi na?

Jassi: kyun? Main tumhari lagthi kya hu?

Armaan: Jassi, tum mere liye sab kuch ho! Meri zindagi ho tum. Main tumse bohat pyar karthi hu!!

Jassi's heart beat faster and faster, although she gets an awkward feeling, she decides to not to remain in any relationship as all she has seen is failure and gets up and decides to leave whil Armaan grabs her hands.

Armaan: Jassi, tum ko sunna ho ga, main tumhare bina ek paal bhi door nahin reh saktha! Jab tum paas nahin ho, to mein pagal ho jaata hu. Jassi main tumse bohat pyar kartha hu. Agar tum nahin karthi, thats okay, main tumhe pyar karne pe majboor ho jaogi.

Jassi: mera haath chodo. maine tumhare jaan isile bachai kyun ke mujhe insaniyat ke naathe laga ke ye punya maine kiya, ke ye mera farz hai. ab tum kuch aur mat kehna.

Armaan: magar Jassi...

Jassi leaves the room and goes down towards her couch and tries to go to sleep. Although she kept thinking about what just happened. She starts to think if she has done right. By the next morning, in her room, Armaan is gone.

Jassi gets worried and starts to lookout for him. Jassi even tried calling his home but they say armaan hasnt reached home. Jassi passes by some hotels and asks, but no success. As she approaches Gulmohar, Armaan sits in a corner, sleeping with dry tears on his face.

As Jassi runs to him, she slows down thinking:"Why am I restless in meeting him?"

She then awakes Armaan while Armaan says,"Jassi, mujhe maaf kardo. Maine shayad kuch zyada hi kehdiya. Jassi, main hamari dosti nahin kohna chahta!

Jassi says,"Chup! Ab chalo, ghar chalo!"

Armaan is wordless as he reaches his home and kind of scared of Jassi now as she has broken his heart. Jassi rings the bell to his house and Ila opens the door.

Ila: are beta! Armaan mila kya.
As armaan comes out of Jassi's back and Ila gets very happy. Armaan is looking down on the floor like as if he's going to get punished and finally says,"Sorry mom!"

Ila says,"Beta, Armaan kaha mila?"

I'll post the next part soon! sorry!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mika! that was awesome! very very cute!! 😳 Cont soon! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww mika tht part was so sweet! plz continue soon!

Hera
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks mika waiting for your next part

bye,

Anjana
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hai mere ladoo...that's right! I called you ladoo! I like that name much better than sugar plum 'cuz ladoos are just like you....Sweet!!! 😃😉 This part was just superb Mika!!! I loved it...I'm just sad that you didn't continue!!!...so plz do so whenever you can 😉!!! I love you ladoo!!!

lots of love and hugs,

Didi 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: jassi4armaan

Mika! that was awesome! very very cute!! 😳 Cont soon! 👏

Yeah I agree with Molly Thanx so much for such a sweet part but Mallika puttar ji when r u thinking of doing UR fanfic😡

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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good
Plzz continue soon

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