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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oooh Sunita Di! (Can I call u that?) Love ur new fan-fic..I adore RM pair..and I'm glad sumone started a fan-fic on them.. I dnt have much skills in writing but I enjoy reading other people work. 😆 So far, the story is going quite interesting! Sunaina and Ajay..oooh! Loving it! Good job! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sunita di ur inbox is full first check it pls and di plsssssssss continue ur ff soon
Posted: 17 years ago
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sunita di!!!!! i just reread the 1st prt and i rilli want 2 knw wat muskaan is gonna do plz plz updt soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Muskaan requests Ajay to drop her home today as she was intending to attend a party organized by one of her family friends. She then murmurs something and walks off angrily thinking about Rahul!! On her way back to the classroom, she comes across the bike that she saw Rahul driving. She goes near the bike saying loudly "tussi great ho wahe guru" and takes the air off the tires glancing here and there just to make sure nobody is watching her. She then happily heads towards her class singing "panga na le mere yaar"

The lecture starts and Muskaan patiently waits for the class to be over. As soon as the professor leaves, she looks at Rahul who hurriedly walks to the parking lot. Muskaan follows him and gets the biggest shock of her life when she sees Rahul starting other bike and thinks in her mind, phir yeh bike kiski hai".

Ajay comes there running and says Muskaan lets go while Muskaan is still in the shock; she shook her head and follows in the direction where Ajay is heading.

Ajay looks at his bike and shouts loudly "oh no!!" Muskaan raises her eyes to see and gets the second shock and mutters saying "yeh maine kya kiya". Ajay calls out for Rahul who puts the gear on and speeds up to leave the place with an evil smile.

Ajay apologizes to Muskaan saying she has to catch a taxi now and the taxi station is a mile away. She sulks and leaves the place thinking "jaisi karni, waisi bharni".

Muskaan starts walking towards the taxi station all alone when she hears someone calling out her name. She turns around to see and gets the third shock of her life to see Rahul there. He comes close to her and asks her if everything is alright and why is she walking alone. She replies saying nothing and thinks that it would be wonderful if Rahul offers her a lift. She then says acha Rahul, when he cuts her off saying, oh I totally forgot, I need to hurry up and leaves the place saying bye to her.

Muskaan gets frustrated and continues to walk when she sees Rahul coming back. He turns back to ask if she needs to be dropped somewhere, Yes, saying this she sits on the bike and starts giving directions. Rahul smiles looking at Muskaan in the rear mirror.

On the way back home, Muskaan starts her life history while Rahul quietly listens to her and keeps adding hmm to assure that he is listening.

Finally the destination has arrived; Muskaan gets off the bike and goes to the front. He then thinks that maybe she will apologize for her mistake but to his shock she smiles and walks off without even thanking him once. He then reverses his bike and turns around to see Muskaan who also turns and waves her hand saying bye. Rahul waves his hand and goes off saying paagal!!

Muskaan walks into the house and calls out for her mom, but then she looks at the clock and thinks maybe everyone left for the party. She then goes to her room saying "accha hai, waise bhi main yeh bhudhon ki party main bore ho jaati". She then plays some music and starts dancing to the tune!!!

To be Continued


Edited by *Sunita* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yehhhaa.. I'm here first 😆 😆 ! Spot reserved.. I'll update tomorrow 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

I m so sorry Komzie, my topic was lost, so couldn't see ur reply..

Thank u so much, I have updated the next part.. so u can tell me what he is thinking...😆

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

I love you Sweety Di!!!! Mwah mwah mwah mwah mwah mwah!!!!!! Toooo good!

Aap toh mere, I mean Muskaan ke dimaag mein hi ghus gayeen!!! Hey bhaggu!!!! That was amazing di!!! So Rahul was thinking about her???? Negative ho yaan positive, at least he was thinking about her. 😉

Sweety Di continue soon please!!! I can't wait any longer!!!! I have to have to have to know what she's going to do to him!!!! 😆

komz

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Urmi, I have finally updated my next part.. though its a small one, but on ur request I thought of posting...😳

I will surely think of a big one over the weekend and will try to update...

Originally posted by: urmila_17

wow sunita di first of all hats off to u for thinking to write about rahul and muskaan thats great thought
comming to ur ff omg its awesome,excellent 👏 👏
di u r really awesome and finally rahul started to feel towards muskaan thats great and ajay started feeling towards sunaina thats amazing
i really cant wait to see what muskaan will do
di small request if u dont mine can u pls try to pm me after ur next part
plss continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Hey Nimrah, sure u can call me whatever u r comfortable with..

Thank u so much for the wonderful comments..

this is my first time I m writing something and I know there are many professional writters in this section.. I m sure u are better than me, u just need a start...

Originally posted by: nimrah

Oooh Sunita Di! (Can I call u that?) Love ur new fan-fic..I adore RM pair..and I'm glad sumone started a fan-fic on them.. I dnt have much skills in writing but I enjoy reading other people work. 😆 So far, the story is going quite interesting! Sunaina and Ajay..oooh! Loving it! Good job! 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#89

Hey Mishu,the next part is up.. so u can see what Muskaan did to Rahul..😆

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

sunita di!!!!! i just reread the 1st prt and i rilli want 2 knw wat muskaan is gonna do plz plz updt soon!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww Zainab, will wait for ur comments..

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

Yehhhaa.. I'm here first 😆 😆 ! Spot reserved.. I'll update tomorrow 😃

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