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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeya123

nice part
i luved it
and angad in a sherwani 😆 😆



Hi.. thank you soo much 😳😳😳...all of you are soo sooo sweet.
Well you know I was thinking of putting a rose in his hand😆😆 but I thought that would make it seriously dramatic lol!😆😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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------------------------------------------------------------ ---------------------Part 4:-

Angad is sulking and keeps giving glares to Josh while Josh just raises his glass and smirks. A girl comes over to Angad and says hi in a husky tone with a flirty smile.
A: Namaste...
The girls eyes widen and she excuses herself.
G: I..umm.. have to go to...um...excuse me!
Angad smiles and shakes his head.
A(thinks): They'll all be fine tomorrow!

While on the other hand Kavya couldnt help staring at Anjali.
K (thinks) : Oh so this wild cat is also here huh? Must say she's looking hot in that dress...I'm suprised she's not grounded..hmmmm... must be really spoiled... no wonder ...but until and unless she doesnt apologize my revenge is still incomplete! No one ever miss behaved with me and she has to apologize and I can go to any limits for that....!!

The party was going well...Laksh was teasing Angad while Josh was talking to Robbie and Kavya was busy on the phone for the past fifteen minutes.
While on the girls side Anjali was glaring at a guy who was staring at her lustily...Kripa was dancing (without partner) and Aaliya didnt want to ruin her dress given to her by her admirer so she was standing in a corner chatting with Kt.
Robbie= R
Kasturi= Ks.

R: Hi girls enjoying the party??
Kt: Yeah we are..great party.
Ks: Of course after all who organized the party?
Aa: Yeah yeah dont you ever get tired of praising yourself.
R: Talk about it yaar.
Ks: God you guys.
Aa: So you guys are going to come for the trip right??
Ks: Nah! We have got like a lot of work to do..I mean 2 months later I m getting married!!! I want to spend time with my family.
Kt: O ok..
R: Come Kasturi let me introduce you to Rahul.
And they walked away.
Aa: They look so cute together.
Kt: Hain na??
Aa: I wish I could have someone who loves me.
Kt nudges her .
Kt : I think you do!
She with her eyes tells Aaliya to look at at Josh.
Josh who couldnt take his eyes off Aaliya is admiring her.
J(thinks) : She looks beautiful.
Kt: I m going to get a drink.
Josh comes to Aaliya.
J: Hi..you look nice.
Aa: Thanks ..you look nice too .
J: So ssup?
Aa: Nothing much just bored.
J: Care to dance ??
Aaliya nods.
Aaliya and Josh are staring into each others eyes as they dance , an the scene shifts to the other side of the party.

Kripa goes to get a drink.
The bar tender: what may I get you??
K: An orange juice and a lemonade.
B.T: Here you go.
She takes it from him and is making her way to Kt when she feels someone staring at her she looks o her left is blown out by the sight of seeing Angad wearing a sherwani she trys to suppress her giggles but Angad already noticed it and turned his face around giving her a glare. As soon as he turns around he smiles thinking he really is looking stupid.

Kripa goes to Kt .
K: Here's your orange juice.
Kt: Thanks KK..
K: No prob.
Then Kt is busy sipping her drink when Kripa catches Laksh giving her signals.
"what???" she says in eye gestures. He tells her to point Laksh out to Kt. Kripa rolls her eyes and gives him an "alright" look!!
K: Say that guy is kinda cute no??
Kt: Who??
K:That one. She points at Laksh.
Kt a little uncomfortably .
Kt: Yeh..listen..I'll be back from the rest room ok??
K: Ok.
As soon as Kt leaves Kripa gives him a mouths yes to him and he smiles broadly.


After staring into his eyes for such a long time Aaliya couldnt take it any longer.She lowers her head. Josh looks at her affectionately and tucks a lose strand of her hair behind her ears. He then goes to the other ear and whispers:"you look beautiful!!" . Aaliya shyly smiles . He keeps looking at her with his piercing gaze and she hides her face in his chest to escape his gaze. He tightly wraps his arms around her and sways to the music.

When suddenly Aaliya remembers something and pulls away.She is about to go when Josh grabs her hand .
J: Where are you going?
Aa: I have to go I just remembered something important ....
J: O ok... He lets go of her hand.
Aaliya leaves the dance floor. Josh watches her walk away but soon gets interrupted by his friends.
A: yaar Josh tell Kavya to stop teasing me man.
K: But why you look so cute meri jaan.
He pinches Angad's cheek and runs away with Angad chasing him.
J: God these guys will never change!!
Josh sees Laksh going to the bar . Josh goes to him.
J: Hey man.
Laksh ignores him.
J: Still mad???
Laksh rolls his eyes.
J: Come on I said sorry. Besides you are talking to Angad .... he was a part of the plan too!!
J: Alright I'll make it up to you! I'll buy you a drink.
L: Ok.. if you insist so much.
J: Hah! I knew you forgot your wallet again.
L: Ok ..fine I'm going.
J: wait , wait , wait..wait I was just joking ok?Come lets go buy a drink.
They order drinks and soon are joined by Angad and Kavya.

They all are chatting when Robbie and Kasturi come on the stage.
Ks:Alright time to cut the cake!
Everyone claps and some hoot as Robbie cuts the cake and feeds it to Kasturi.
Soon after every one got their piece Kasturi and Robbie come on the stage again!!
Ks: Thank you all for coming to this special day and making it more special.
R: And on this special day I would like to introduce you to my 4 fave gals ..after Kasturi that is!! Please Welcome ...the hottest new sensation "The Rythm "!

Laksh: The wha???
Angad: ..The rythm..whats that supposed to mean??
Kavya: Dont know.. why you asking me??
J: Sounds like a band.
.

The girls come out. All the guys are shocked!!!
L(thinks): Wow..she also sings(dreamily)
K(thinks): What the ..... she sings?? I thought she only knows how to scream.
J(thinks): Interesting.
A(thinks):Alright ...lets hear her sing!!

The Rythm.
Aaliya is on the piano.
Kripa is on the guitar
Anjali on the drums
and Kt is going sing first.

The music starts playing.
(note I will give credit to the peros who sang this song but in my FF imagine that it's original!!)
Kt starts singing " Unwritten" by Natasha Bedingfield.
KT:
I am unwritten,
Can't read my mind
I'm undefined
I'm just beginning
The pen's in my hand
Ending unplanned

Staring at the blank page before you
Open up the dirty window
Let the sun illuminate the words
That you could not find
Reaching for something in the distance
So close you can almost taste it
Release your inhibitions

Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins
The rest is still unwritten, yeah

Oh, oh

I break tradition
Sometimes my tries
Are outside the lines, oh yeah yeah
We've been conditioned
To not make mistakes
But I can't live that way oh, oh

Staring at the blank page before you
Open up the dirty window
Let the sun illuminate the words
That you could not find
Reaching for something in the distance
So close you can almost taste it
Release your inhibitions

Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins

(Gospel)
Staring at the blank page before you
Open up the dirty window
Let the sun illuminate the words
That you could not find
Reaching for something in the distance
So close you can almost taste it
Release your inhibitions

Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live you life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins

The rest is still unwritten

The rest is still unwritten


The crowd cheers and Kt smiles.Next Aaliya and Kt exchange places.

Aaliya sings "What hurts the most" by Cascada.
AALIYA:
I can take the rain on the roof of this empty house,
that don't bother me
I can take a few tears now and then and just let them out
I'm not afraid to cry
Every once in a while even though goin on with you gone still upsets me
There are days
Every now and again I pretend i'm okay
but that's not what gets me

What hurts the most, was being so close
And having so much to say
And watchin you walk away
Never knowing, what could have been
And not seein that lovin you
Is what I was tryin to do

It's hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere I go
But i'm doin it
It's hard to force that smile when I see our old friends and i'm alone
Still harder
gettin up, gettin dressed, livin with this regret
But I know if I could do it over
I would trade, give away all the words
that I saved in my heart that I left unspoken

What hurts the most, is being so close
And having so much to say
And watchin you walk away
Never knowing, what could have been
And not seein that lovin you
Is what I was tryin to do

What hurts the most, was being so close
And having so much to say
And watchin you walk away
And never knowing, what could have been
And not seein that lovin you
Is what I was tryin to do


The audience are loving it. Next Aaliya and Kripa exchange places.
Kripa sings "You sang to me" but in a girls voice. It's by Mark Anthony.....a must listen song ..i love it!!
KRIPA:
Oh...
I just wanted you to comfort me
When I called you late last night you see
I was fallin' into love
Yes, I was crashin' into love
Oh of all the words you sang to me
About life, the truth and being free, yeah
You sang to me, oh how you sang to me

I live off how you make me feel
So I question all this being real
'Cause I'm not afraid to love
For the first time I'm not afraid of love

Oh, this day seems made for you and me
And you showed me what life needs to be
Yeah, you sang to me, oh you sang to me

All the while you were in front of me I never realized
I just can't believe I didn't see it in your eyes
I didn't see it, I can't believe it
Oh but I feel it
When you sing to me
How I long to hear you sing beneath the clear blue skies
And I promise you this time I'll see it in your eyes
I didn't see it, I can't believe it
Oh but I feel it
When you sing to me

Just to think you live inside of me
I had no idea how this could be
Now I'm crazy for your love
Can't believe I'm crazy for your love
The words you said you sang to me
And you showed me where I wanna be
you sang to me, oh you sang to me

All the while you were in front of me I never realized
I just can't believe I didn't see it in your eyes
I didn't see it, I can't believe it
Oh but I feel it
When you sing to me
How I long to hear you sing beneath the clear blue skies
And I promise you this time I'll see it in your eyes
I didn't see it, I can't believe it
Oh but I feel it
When you sing to me

All the while you were in front of me I never realized
I just can't believe I didn't see it in your eyes
I didn't see it, I can't believe it
Oh but I feel it
When you sing to me
How I long to hear you sing beneath the clear blue skies
And I promise you this time I'll see it in your eyes
I didn't see it, I can't believe it
Oh but I feel it
When you sing to me

All the while you were in front of me I never realized
I just can't believe I didn't see it in your eyes
I didn't see it, I can't believe it
Oh but I feel it
When you sing to me
How I long to hear you sing beneath the clear blue skies
And I promise you this time I'll see it in your eyes
I didn't see it, I can't believe it
Oh but I feel it

The audience cheer louder and Anjlai and Kripa exchange places.
Anjali sings "Please dont stop the music" by Rihanna.
ANJALI:

Please don't stop the music
Please don't stop the music
Please don't stop the music
Please don't stop the music

It's getting late
I'm making my way all the time
My favourite place
I gotta get my body moving
Shake the stress away
I wasn't looking for nobody when you looked my way
Possible candidate, yeah
Who knew
That you'd be here, be here looking like you do
You make and staying over here, impossible
Baby, Im a say your aura is incredible
If you don't have to go, don't

Do you know what you started?
I just came here to party
But now we're rockin on the dance floor, actin' naughty
Your hands around my waist
Just let the music play
We're hand in hand chest to chest and now we're face to face

[CHORUS]
I wanna take you away
Let's escape into the music, DJ let it play
I just can't refuse it
Like the way you do this
Keep on rockin' to it
Please don't stop the, please don't stop the music
I wanna take you away
Let's escape into the music, DJ let it play
I just can't refuse it
Like the way you do this
Keep on rockin' to it
Please don't stop the, please don't stop the
Please don't stop the music

Baby are you ready cause it's gettin close
Don't you feel the passion ready to explode?
What goes on between us no-one has to know
This is a private show

Do you know what you started?
I just came here to party
But now we're rockin on the dance floor, actin' naughty
Your hands around my waist
Just let the music play
We're hand in hand chest to chest and now we're face to face

[CHORUS]

[x4]
Please don't stop the music

[CHORUS x2]

Please don't stop the music
Please don't stop the music
Please don't stop the music

Every one is going crazy and shouting shouting " Rythm " "Rythm"
Now all the girls have instruments.
Anjali has the drums,
Aaliya the piano ,
Kripa the Guitar
and Kt the Dj device.
And all of the are singing this song at the same time!

Kripa: This is especially for Robbie.And Kasturi this song wasnt meant for you so dont mind all that it says.
Anjali winks at Robbie.
R: Love you girls!
Girls : Love you too Robbie.

All of them sing "Girlfriend" by Avril.
The Girls:

Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don't like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend

Hey! Hey! You! You!
I know that you like me
No way! No way!
You know it's not a secret
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I want to be your girlfriend

Aaliya:
You're so fine
I want you mine
You're so delicious
I think about ya all the time
You're so addictive
Don't you know what I could do to make you feel alright?
Anjali:
Don't pretend I think you know I'm damn precious
And Hell Yeah
I'm the motherf**king princess
I can tell you like me too and you know I'm right

All of them:
She's like so whatever
And you could do so much better
I think we should get together now
And that's what everyone's talking about!

All of them:
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don't like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend

Hey! Hey! You! You!
I know that you like me
No way! No way!
You know it's not a secret
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I want to be your girlfriend

Kripa:
I can see the way, I see the way you look at me
And even when you look away I know you think of me
I know you talk about me all the time again and again
Kt:
So come over here, tell me what I want to hear
Better yet make your girlfriend disappear
I don't want to hear you say her name ever again
(And again and again and again!)

All of them:
She's like so whatever
And you could do so much better
I think we should get together now
And that's what everyone's talking about!

All of them:
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don't like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend


All of them:
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I know that you like me
No way! No way!
You know it's not a secret
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I want to be your girlfriend

Anjali:
In a second you'll be wrapped around my finger
Cause I can, cause I can do it better
Kt:
There's no other
So when's it gonna sink in?
She's so stupid
What the hell were you thinking?!

Kripa:
In a second you'll be wrapped around my finger
Cause I can, cause I can do it better
Aaliya:
There's no other
So when's it gonna sink in?
She's so stupid
What the hell were you thinking?!


Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don't like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend...............

The crowd starts screaming once more....

So Anjali decides to sing again first:
She sings "Shut up and drive" by Rihanna.
ANJALI:
I'm lookin for a driver who is qualified
so if u think that you're that one step
into my ride
I'm a fine tuned super-sonic speed machine
with the sun on top
and a gangsta lean

so if you feel it let me know (know , know)
come now what you waiting for (for , for)
my engine's ready to explode (explode ,explode)
so start me up and watch me go ( go , go )
get you where you wanna go
if you know what i mean
got a ride that is smoother than a limousine
can you handle the curves
can you run all the lights
if you can baby boy
then we can go all night
goes from zero to 60 in 3.5
baby you got the keys
now shut up and drive drive drive (drive,drive,drive)
shut up and drive drive drive (drive,drive,drive)

i've got pass like a 57 cadalic
got all the drive with a whole lot
of boom in the back
if you look like you can
handle what's under my hood
you keep saying that i will
boy i wish you would

so if you feel it let me know (know, know)
come now what you waiting for (for ,for)
my engine's ready to explode (explode , explode)
so start me up and watch me go (go , go)
get you where you wanna go
if you know what i mean
got a ride that is smoother than a limousine
can you handle the curves
can you run all the lights
if you can baby boy
then we can go all night
goes from zero to 60 in 3.5
baby you got the keys
now shut up and drive drive drive (drive,drive,drive)
shut up and drive drive drive (drive,drive,drive)

cause you play the game got what i got
get it get it don't stop
it's a sure shot
ain't no ferrari, huh,
boy,i'm sorry i ain't even worried
so step inside and.......ride (x23)

so if you feel it let me know (know , know)
come now what you waiting for (for , for)
my engine's ready to explode (explode , explode)
so start me up and watch me go (go , go)
get you where you wanna go
if you know what i mean
got a ride that is smoother than a limousine
can you handle the curves
can you run all the lights
if you can baby boy
then we can go all night
goes from zero to 60 in 3.5
baby you got the keys
now shut up and drive drive drive (drive,drive,drive)
shut up and drive drive drive (drive,drive,drive)


The crowd cheers. Anjali and Kt exchange places.
Kt sings "Welcome to my life" by Simple plan.
KT:
Do you ever feel like breaking down?
Do you ever feel out of place?
Like somehow you just don't belong
And no one understands you

Do you ever want to run away?
Do you lock yourself in your room?
With the radio on turned up so loud
That no one hears you screaming

No you don't know what it's like
When nothing feels alright
You don't know what it's like
To be like me

To be hurt, to feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life

Do you wanna be somebody else?
Are you sick of feeling so left out?
Are you desperate to find something more
Before your life is over?

Are you stuck inside a world you hate?
Are you sick of everyone around?
With their big fake smiles and stupid lies
While deep inside you're bleeding

No you don't know what it's like
When nothing feels alright
You don't know what it's like
To be like me

To be hurt, to feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life

No one ever lied straight to your face
And no one ever stabbed you in the back
You might think I'm happy
But I'm not gonna be ok
Everybody always gave you what you wanted
You never had to work
It was always there
You don't know what it's like
What it's like

To be hurt, to feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like (what it's like)

To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked
When you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life

Welcome to my life
Welcome to my life

The audience scream louder when Kripa and Kt exchange places.
KRIPA:
Every time they turn the lights down
Just want to go that extra mile for you
You public display of affection
Feels like no one else in the room (but you)

We can get down like there's no one around
We'll keep on rockin' (We'll keep on rockin')
We'll keep on rockin' (Keep on rockin')
Cameras are flashin' while we're dirty dancin'
They keep watching (They keep watching)
Keep watching

Feels like the crowd is saying

Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More

A center of attention (Can you feel them?)
Even when we're up against the wall
You've got me in a crazy position (yeah)
If you're on a mission (uh-uh)
You got my permission (oh)

We can get down like there's no one around
We'll keep on rockin' (Keep on rockin')
We'll keep on rockin', rockin' (Oh ah ha)
Cameras are flashin' while we're dirty dancin'
They keep watching (They keep watching)
Keep watching

Feel's like the crowd is saying:

Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More

(I just can't control myself)
(Woah!)
(Do you want more?)
(Well I'm good for more)

(Ow)

Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More (Gimme more)
Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More (Oh woah oh!)
Gimme, Gimme more
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme more (Gimme more, yeah)
Gimme, More
Gimme, Gimme, More

Give me more, give me more
Give me more, give me more babe (Danja Danja, Danj)
I just want more!

Gimme, Gimme
Gimme
Gimme, Gimme
Gimme, Gimme
Gimme
Gimme, Gimme
Gimme, Gimme
Gimme
Gimme, Gimme
Gimme, Gimme
Gimme,
Gimme, Gimme
Gimme Gimme..more!

The crowd goes loud again!!Aaliya comes in Kripa's place.
Aaliya sings " My heart will go on". Aaliya sings with her eyes lowered.
AALIYA:
Every night in my dreams
I see you, I feel you,
That is how I know you go on

Far across the distance
And spaces between us
You have come to show you go on

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

Love can touch us one time
And last for a lifetime
And never let go till we're one

Love was when I loved you
One true time I hold to
In my life we'll always go on

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

There is some love that will not go away

You're here, there's nothing I fear,
And I know that my heart will go on
We'll stay forever this way
You are safe in my heart
And my heart will go on and on..

The crowd cheers.And the girls disperse.

As soon as Aaliya comes off the stage , Josh grabs her hand and runs out with her.....he runs and runs with her until they are two blocks away from where the party was held. He without any warnings stopped near a tree , grabbed her by the waist and captured her lips with his. Aaliya replied making both of them forget the world. Aaliya circled his neck and dug her hands into his hair as Josh pulled her closer and rubbed her back and her bare neck with his hands.The kiss was very passionate yet tender and both of them knew this was more than just a crush or attraction........ it was something unknown to them but still very familiar! Both of them unkowning made promises to each other that would survive till the day they die.
Both of them were so lost into each other that they were astonished when Aaliya's cell rang. Aaliya quickly broke away and Josh turned around blushing. As soon as Aaliya ended the call she with her back towards Josh told him that the girls were calling her and walked away.Josh quickly caught up with her and walked with her , his head lowered and his hands in his pocket.Both of them were red.
As they were outside the party Aaliya grabbed Josh's arm . Josh was shocked. Aaliya took out a tissue , wiped his lips and said "lip gloss" and walked away!
Josh folded the tissue and kept it in his pocket.

We see Kavya thinking about something .
K(thinks) : Was Anjlai the same girl whose voice I heard in the temple the other day?? No ..she cant be the girl with whom I fell in love! Even if she is I cant just love someone because her voice. She is the girl I hate and nothing could change that.

Aaliya goes in and sees Kt waiting anxiously for her .
Aa: Hi!
Kt: OMG! Where were you??? We were so worried....do you know what happened here while you were gone??
Aa: No ..is everything ok?
Kt: No nothing is ok!
Aa: What happened?
Kt: ---------------------------------Flasback------------------- ---------------:-

As soon as the performance is over you see Kripa walking of the stage. Then you see a guy behind Kripa ...
G: Great performance.
K: Thank so mu---
She stops when she sees his face.
K: Tum??
G: Intni jaldi bhool gayi??
K: What do you want??
G (smirks) (acting concerned but both him and Kripa know there is no such thing) : Why do you always think I want something when I talk to you.
K: Shut up! Get out of here!
G: This party isnt yours sweet heart . He careses her face .Kripa moves back.
K (gritting her teeths) : Dont you dare touch me and she runs to the washroom.
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Kt: And then me and Anjali were consoling Kripa in washroom. Thank fully no one noticed their conversation. But five minutes later "HE" was found badly beaten up .
Aa: Omg! "HE" came?? Where is Kripa. She and Anjali went to the dorm.
They go to the dorm. As they enter there room they see Kripa in her Pj's sleeping in Anjali's lap.
Kt: Is she alright??
An: Yeah..just a little scared . I m glad someone beat "HIM" up if that someone wouldnt have I would've!
Aa: Alright ... lets just not talk about it at all.
Kt: Yeah we should just try to relax her a little bit!!
An: Alright .
Anjali carefully keeps Kripa's head on the pillow and goes to change. All of them shower and then go to sleep.


The next day :
It is 4 in the morning and everyone is sleeping but Kripa is strolling in the school ground when she feels a hand around her. She looks shocked and scared but is relaxed when she sees Laksh.He smiles at her.
K: You scared me..dumbo!
She lightly taps him on the head.
L: Great to have you back !
K: Why ? Where was I ?
L: I know Kripa what happened yesterday forget it!
K: What? How do you know.
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Laksh sees "HIM" walking to Kripa. He goes to stop "HIM" but then its too late "HIM" and Kripa are already talking. Laksh hears their conversation and sees Kripa going to the washroom.He sees "HIM" walking out of the party. Laksh follows "HIM". The guy turns around and sees Laksh.
G: Oh ..even you are here?
Laksh just punches him.
L: Last time you escaped not this time!!
Laksh kicks him and punches him again.
G: (smirks) : These bruises are nothing compared to what I will give to Kripa's heart. Beat me all you want.
Laksh gets angrier and grabs his hair and hits his knee to his stomach. He then throw him on the ground and punches his nose . But then he hears some people coming so he just lets the guy who is unconscious on the floor and goes back the dorm.
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K: That was you??
L: Yes it was me.
Kripa has tears in her eyes.
K: Laksh you shouldnt have.
L: You wouldnt say that to Josh if he did that...now will you??
Wrinkles his nose.
K: God! You ..emotional blackmailer..you.
L: Yup..and I'm proud of it.
K: Hah!! Ok come one lets go to our rooms and get ready besides today you have a tuition class.
L: How can I forget? K bye C'ya!
K: Ya . Later.
L: Alligator.
K: Omg! You did not say that.! That is so childish.
L: I know it is that's why I said it to a child!!
K: Arghhhhhhhh..you!!
Laksh runs away!

Kripa goes to the room. The girls are still sleeping. She takes her clothes and goes to the washroom.
When she comes out she sees Anjali coping notes , Aaliya choosing what to wear and Kt doing the aarti.
K: Good morning girls!
Kt+An+Aa: Good morning.
They all are glad to see her smiling and decide not to bring it up!!
An: Today all of us are going shopping. So tomorrow can pack our new clothes and then the day after that we go to Hawaii!!!
Aa: Oh god.. you just had to say it before classes ..now the day will seem longer !
Kt: God Aaliya!
They all freshen up and go for the breakfast.
Both the guys and girls are sitting on the table next to each other.
J: Crab..forgot to tell my sis something.
Josh goes to Kripa and tells her that today their elder sister ,Damini, is coming to see them and giving a quick glance to Aaliya goes back to his table .

The classes goe well. It's their last class , English Literature.
(All the guys and girls are in the same class).
Mrs.Flinch , the teacher comes in.
M.F: Good morning class(smiles). Hows everybody doing??
Class: 'Morning . Good miss!
M.F: Happy to hear that. Now I m sure every one hear knows the all time famous "Romeo and Juliet".
Jason: Is that like a new restaurant or something.
Sneha: No you idiot that's a love story.
Jason: Ooo.. but are you sure ..sounds like a-
Sneha interrupts him: Yes I'm sure.
M.F: Thanks both of you.
Jason : Anytime.
Mrs. Flinch then sees Anjali stretching a gum with her fingers while half of the gum is in her mouth.
M.F: I'm sure Ms.Anjali would love to give us her opinion of love.
An: Love ...love is when you look at someone's heart before their external beauty.
M.F: (smiles) Very well Miss. Anjali . Now we will discuss everyone's opinion about love.Lets start.
Sneha: Love is the bestest feeling.
Ashley: Love is unexplainable attraction to some one.
Laksh: Love is beautiful!
Chelsay: Love is deep.
Kt: Love is being passionate about someone.
Rohan: Love is lust...!!
Jason: umm... pass!
Aaliya: Love is the desire to spend the rest of your life with someone you treasure!!
Kavya: Love is hard to find but love is true!!
Josh: Love is everywhere.
Kayla: There is no such thing as love.
Ajay: Love is showing very deep affection to someone or something.
Angad : Love is...?? I dont know? (smiles cheekily).
Shawn: Love is in the air I breathe
love is in the things I see.
Tina: Love is my life.
Eddie: Love like...like ..the coolest thing that makes you sweat! ..Oh yeah ..!
David: Totally...it's like the "in" thing these days.
Louis: Love... is more precious than any wealth in the world!
Micky: Love is unexpected.
Mary: Love takes place in the heart not in the head!
Flourince: Love is adorable.
Kripa: Love is ...love!!
Holly: Love does not exists.
Sam: Love is extinct.
Tom: Love is only in fairy tales.
John: or only in books.
And the rest of the class continues .The bell rings and everyone rushes out.

The girls rehearse while Kt goes to the library.
Laksh sees Kt and waves to her.Kt smiles and goes to him.
L: Hi.
Kt: Hi.
L: Alright ..shall we?
Kt: Yeah... which question.
L: This one.
Kt starts teaching him and Laksh is just enjoying her sweet smell and her beautiful voice. She would chew her lips when she would come across something difficult. Laksh would smile . Laksh wasnt bad in studies but pretended to be.
L: And what about this one?
Kt: O..this is easy..you see. And she explains it to him.
Kt: Well ..OK bye. Got to go.
L: Bye..see you tomorrow?
Kt: yeah tomorrow?

Kripa goes to the guest room and Kripa runs to Damini.
K: Didi....!
D: Kripa..how are you..?? Are you enjoying it here?
K: I'm loving it here!
She talks to her for 15 minutes and then Kripa leaves.
Then Josh enters.
Josh hugs her.
J: Didi! Kaise ho app?
D: MAin theek hoon aur tum?
J: Main bhi.
Damini and Josh talk.
D: Ok bye abb mujhe chalna chahiye.
J: Bye didi.
He hugs her which is seen by Aaliya who was passing by. She gets tears in her eyes and runs as she doenst know it's her sister.She runs to the washroom.

All the girls , afterwards go shopping. Aaliya pretends to be really happy. They shop , eat , and watch movies.Then the girls go back. Anjali goes to take a shower ,while Aaliya and Kt rest.

Kripa is has gone to the cafeteria. There is hardly any table free . She finally spots one and goes to sit.
Just then Josh and Angad come in.
A: Yarr bohat bhok lag rahi hai!
J; Chal phir.
They buy their lunch.
A: Arre yaar abh bhetein kahan?
J: Woh dekh meri behen bhethi hai.
Before Angad could protest Josh drags him and sits beside Kripa.
J: Ssup KK?
K: Oh ..hi nm n u?
J: Same.
Josh stares at his food and starts eating. Angad and Kripa look at each other for a brief second and then look down to their food.
Soon Kripa leave from the cafeteria but forgets her bag there.
J: Abhe yaar ..aree Angad tu usko uska bag wapas kar ke aa ... main zar washrooom se atta hoon.
Angad is again left with no choice.
A(thinks): Ye Josh bhi na kabhi sunta hi nahi hai.
Then he spots Kripa.
A: Hey you.
Kripa turns around and glares at him.
K: I have a name.
A: which I dont happen to like.
K: Nobody asked for your comments.
A: I know.
K: What ever.
A: Exactly my point .
He gives her the bag and goes away.
K: Jerk!
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Ok...here is the next part.....hope all of you like it!
DO COMMENT!!
Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg this is awesome and the longest!! its really great and sweet loved the part where they express what they think about luv!! im first to comment yea!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: freaky_angel

omg this is awesome and the longest!! its really great and sweet loved the part where they express what they think about luv!! im first to comment yea!



thank u so much! Haan sab se pehli tou tum hi hogi ..saara din computer pe behti rahti ho na. Jab dekho online :p! 😛
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Originally posted by: lalala10



thank u so much! Haan sab se pehli tou tum hi hogi ..saara din computer pe behti rahti ho na. Jab dekho online :p! 😛

lolz....hey...not the whole day!! u wan me to stay offline then?😉😆

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Originally posted by: freaky_angel

lolz....hey...not the whole day!! u wan me to stay offline then?😉😆


well..almost the whole day!
Noooooooooooo.......... who will continue ur FF then 😉??

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Originally posted by: lalala10


well..almost the whole day!
Noooooooooooo.......... who will continue ur FF then 😉??

lolz u cheeky gal!!

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I m everything but girl I aint cheeky..!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just read your fanfic its awesome plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: bradford3

i just read your fanfic its awesome plz continue soon



Awwww..thanks for reading my FF and the lovely compliment😊😊😊!! I will now that I got a new reader😉😉😉!

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