Ek Mein Aur Ek Tu: CH-8pg11-New 7/3/08!

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Fatemah

@KC294

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

that was awsome.... pls continue sooon

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Arziya

@Arziya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Thankyou everyone for your comments!rele rele appreciate it!..and i'll try my best to make the update longer..love you all 😳

Edited by emerald_jule - 17 years ago

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jennie

@*rankan*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

just read 5 udpates and i love them 😃
plz continue soon
and plzz make them bigger because the update was small

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Arziya

@Arziya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

CH-6

In Ranbir's room

Ranbir lies on the bed and thinks about all those things kanya said to him somewhere he realized tht his meeting with kanya was different from all those girls he met before..but he was far away to admit tht..he recollects wht all he said to him and says to himself...

Ranbir: Girls! God why did u create them! Baat karne ki tak tameez nahi hain us 2 by 2 mein...and all other girls..un ke bare mein main kya bolu..boldy chipos evrybody..jahan chance mila nahi ki dance karne lag jate hain...newayz why m i spoiling my mood thinking about those chipaklis..yes! every girl is a chipkali!...Ranbir Nanda u better b careful of them or else u'll also b finished!..

he changes and goes to sleep...but he dreams about kanya tht she comes and slaps him and he wakes up and says...WHOA!..tht was something..Omg Omg...weird dreams about tht weirdo..I swear to God! Chodunga nahi usko..usne meri neend kharab ki hain..use to mein dekh loonga....

At Kanya's place..

Dadi: Puttar aaj tu jaldi so ja tujhe kal job par bhi to jaana hain..

Kanya: Ji Dadi waise bhi aaj bahut thak gayi hoon..

In Kanya's Room...

Kanya is very tired but she opens up her diary to read about her dreamboy tht she wrote about...she is reading the last two lines...

uski baatein resham jaise..
useke saanso ki khusboo abtak mere baloon mein hain
haan aisa phele baar hua hain satra athra saloon mein
Andekha anjana koi aane laga khayalon mein...

Kanya: Oh God! woh maza hi nahi raha kab se woh ehsaas lane ki koshish kar rahi hoon magar woh saandh hain ki mere dimaag se jaata nahi...O god plz mujhe usse dobara nahin milana..plz..!

she takes a pen and starts writing whatever she felt about him..she didnt know why she was doing tht but she went ahead with writing..

saandh jaisa shareer
samje khud ko badshah
baatein hain gendhe jaisi
to soch hain bacho jaisi
kehta hain mujhe 2 by 2..

Just then kanya's mom called her..she quickly shut her diary and turned to see her mom behind her..

Mom:Kanya beta wht were u doing...

Kanya: Nothing mom was just going to sleep

Mom:Beta i wanted to say tht m proud of you..whtever u have achieved today...

Kanya: thanx mom..love you..howz the business going

Mom: Its going on as usual..not very well but m sure everything will b fine..now u go to sleep as it is its quiet late..

Kanya hugged her mom: Yes mom everything will b fine..good night!

In the morning, at the Nanda's...

Mallika: Gud morning son

Ranbir: gud morning mom

Mallika: Beta i wanted to ask you something..whether u will come with me to the mall for shopping

Ranbir: mmmm..Mom i would have come but..i got a very important business meeting today at noon..

Mallika: We'llb back by noon..comeon son..i really wish u come with me..just for today..

Ranbir: okie mom if u insist..

At Kanya's place...

Dadi: Gud morning kanya puttar..tujhe job kitne baje jaana hain..

Kanya: Dadi aaj mera 1:00 pm ka shift hain...

Dadi: mein isliya poonch rahi thi..kyon ki sid ka phone aaya tha..

Kanya: wht!..sid ka phone itni subah subah..thik hain mein use phone kar leti hoon

Kanya calls up sid..

Sid: Hey Kanya kya kar rahi ho..aur tumhara job kitne baje ka hain..

Kanya: Mera job 1:00pm ka hain

Sid : thts gr8t ..kyon ki mujhe mall jaana tha

Kanya: kya?abhi

Sid : haa..woh actually mom dad ki wedding aniversary hain..aur mujhe un ke liye gift kharihna hain..and u m very bad at all these things..plz come wid me..it wont take long and i'll drop you at your job too..plz kanya

Kanya: okie sounds fine..i'll get ready..u pick me up in 15 mins ok..

Sid: ok..thanx a ton

Edited by emerald_jule - 17 years ago

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Kiran

@Kiran_1

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#45

Nice
Whats gonna happen at the mall?
Plz continue soooooooon

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Zaara

@ZaraCZaara

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

👏 👏 👏 that was gr8 yaar continue soon!

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Sej

@SejN

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#47

can't wait for the next update plz write more soon =)

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Tanya

@tanyadas13

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

Read frm page 1...
UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
😛
but isnt tht poem aisa pheli baar... a song from Har Dil Jo Pyaar Karega...or maybe they copied it from DDLG.
well great ff, update soon!

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Arziya

@Arziya

Moderator

+ 11

Posted: 17 years ago

#49

Ch-7
At the mall

Mallika: Beta look at your face, at least smile and going shopping wid ur mom is not tht odd...u r here to help me

Ranbir:Mom...m praying no one sees me over here..imagine Ranbir Nanda shopping wid his mom doesnt sound cool right

Mallika; Whatever...i know u wont come inside a jewllery shop..so i'll go you wait here for me

Ranbir: ok..but make it quick i dont have to miss this meeting

Mallika: ok i will son...

Kanya and sid too r in the jewllery shop shopping for sid's parent's aniversarry

Kanya: this one looks gud sid m sure aunty will love it

Sid: if you r so confident abt it then we'll take it for sure..

Sid tells the lady to pack wht kanya had selected..

Mallika was listening to them and thinks why cant her son too b like sid...she then starts looking wht she wants..

kanya and sid are walking outside the store...ranbir looks at her(thinks she looks beautiful) and turns around...kanya not looking at him..

sid: thanx kanya so much..if you werent there god knows wht would i have done...

kanya: cummon sid wht r frnds here for

Ranbir raises his eyebrows and thinks to himself: this chipkali has a frnd too..hmmm...why do i care..i cant stand her for one minute...god knows how he does..but i thght she looks beautiful did she,...who cares forget it!

mallika comes and pats him..ranbir comes back to senses..meanwhile kanaya and sid are on the escalator..down their way to go out..

mallika: wht r u thinking beta..

Ranbir: nothing mom...

they too head their way to the way out..Ranbir is still thinking about kanya...

Sid drops kanya off and ranbir and mallika go to office

at office mallika is very happy wid the secretary tht she found all the details abt kanya and decides to buy tht hotel in which kanya is working so tht she can know her better and thn ranbir can also stay in touch wid kanya...she calls up the owner of the hotel and they make a deal of partnership as mallika offers good amount of money...mallika calls ranbir in the office and asks him to make the deal final

Ranbir: wht is this mom...buying a hotel i mean all of a sudden

Mallika beta this was not all of a sudden i had planned ages ago tht i wanted a hotel and i liked this one so i decided..

Ranbir: No mom let me tell you tht first i will see the hotel thn only i will fix this deal...

Mallika: Beta i know you wont say no to me and i want this hotel at any cost.

Ranbir cant believe he thinks whts wrong wid mom all of a sudden..but he agrees to do the deal for her..

At the hotel

Ranbir goes to get the deal final..and he says to the receptionist tht he is here to meet the owner of the company..the receptionist tells him tht the owner of the company is busy in the meeting so he'll have to wait for him for a few minutes..meanwhile kanya comes out her office...she is abt to ask the receptionist whn ranbir turms and they both look at each other..

kanya: you..wht r u doing here

Ranbir sees her tag and smiles: So u r the manager here and you dont even know how to talk to your....

Owner Comes: Miss Kanya...he is my guest if you would please..

Kanya; Ofsourse sir..nice to meet you Mr.....

Ranbir: Mr. Nanda...Ranbir Nanda...he lowers his face to kanya and says mein tumhe baad mein dekh lunga...miss chipkali..smiles and leaves.

Edited by emerald_jule - 17 years ago