Ek Mein Aur Ek Tu: CH-8pg11-New 7/3/08!

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SugaNain

@suganain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

wonderful, i love it!! and continue soon and please read!
Timeless Passion it is wonderful!
and my new fan-fiction Dr. Kanya aur Humara Pyar

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salma

@Sallu-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

dat wa s excellent been waiting ages...!!
loved it
plz continue soon!

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

that was brill pls continue soon

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ixray

@ixray

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

beautiful pliz continue. hope your final papers were ok.

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Arziya

@Arziya

Moderator

+ 11

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Thankyou eveyone for your comments and thankyou for reading my ff...i'll b updating today or sometime this week..sorry for the delay

Edited by emerald_jule - 17 years ago

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sonia

@miss.sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

are yaar update soon plz plz plz
kitna time leti ho

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Arziya

@Arziya

Moderator

+ 11

Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Sorry guys ...not a very gud update

CH-8

Ranbir makes the deal final and takes over the hotel...he is introduced to the staff by the previous owner...

Kanya (in her office)is real mad she cant believe the last person she would want to work together is her boss now...she makes a fuss over everything....

kanya: Is Saandh ko yahi hotel mila tha...O god..plz help me tolerate tht idiot!....

Ranbir:Mind blowing now i have to face tht chipkali everyday but theres something abt her...never mind why am i thinking abt her..i have lots of work to do which i must take care of first...he calls up mallika

mallika: yes beta...

ranbir: mom the meeting went really well and met the staff as well

mallika : thts gud beta...i will meet them tomorrow..

ranbir: as u wish mama

kanya is going home thinking abt ranbir .....wondering if she didnt need tht job so much..she would have quit at the moment itself.... she calls up sid

Sid is wid his girl frnd on a date

Sid: u know ur eyes remind me of someone

Girl frnd: O Really who?

Sid: my grandma's

Girl frnd: what!..ur grandma's

Sid: Yes why...she also had the same beautiful eyes

Girl frnd: thanx but grandma is a bit ..well i wasnt expecting i guess

Sid's phone rings..looks at the phone and frowns..he does pick up the phone ..xcuses himself

Sid: wht is it! i am into something very important right now!

Kanya: Something important! u wont believe what happened at work today...and i know u would b with ur one of ur timepass girls...

Sid: Listen..i dont care wht u call them but to me its very important come on yaar m on a date...an actual date CAN U BELIEVE THT now!

Kanya: Sid u r not serious are you? who is the girl...

Sid : wht if I am..now i gotto go ..she is waiting...bye..

Kanya: Sid u cant ..listen...hmph..these boys!..o god i think i will have to prepare myself to deal with tht Saandh if he is fine and professional thn there shouldnt b a problem but if he crosses his limit then i will have to do something...

at home she shares the news with her mom and granny .....

kanya: dadi...my new boss is the same guy i fought wid at the time of my interview...he is the last person i would want to work together..u understand right...

dadi: oye puttar u dont know how life takes turns...and u never know the person u r hating now u might start liking tht person and who knows fall in love too...

kanya: dadi i am not saying i dont agree wid you such things are true and can b true but with a person like Ra..Ra.. ahha..RANBIR NANDA!(Kanya's mom hears the name and is shocked)...this is impossible!..u dont know him dadi..

dadi: whtever puttar...but do remember my words...

kanya's mom: Ranbir Nanda..is he the same ranbir nanda with whom kanya's marriage is fixed...i will have to find out....kanya wht is your boss's mother's name...

Kanya: mom how do i know wht is his mom's name and it hasnt been even a day and m not interested either...

Next day at the hotel:

Ranbir(in the lobby): Manager...Manager..where is the manager?

Kanya: Sorry Sir i was..

Ranbir: Sorry...here m shouting and u r saying sorry...Ms Kanya...haan..for a second i forgot..but since i am new here let me make one thing very clear to you...i want everything perfect..from napkins to the room everything should be perfectly done...i mean organized and clean....i wont take ne complaints from ne customers...ne complaints and the employee will b fired right away...Ms Kanya i m telling you eveything u have to let each staff member know abt my likes and dislikes...

Kanya: Right Sir..

Ranbir: u may go now...

kanya starts to leave

Ranbir: Listen...

kanya turns: U called Sir

Ranbir: Nothing...

kanya leaves...

Ranbir: Smiles...Ms. Chipkali...interesting....

Kanya in her cabin: Mujhe nahin paata tha yeh saandh itna strict bhi hain...saandh hone ke saath khadus bhi hain...dekhte hain aage kya kya jhelna padega...

Mallika comes to the hotel...Ranbir calls the staff and introduces everyone to mallika....kanya's turn comes

Ranbir: Mom yeh hain Ms. Chip..i mean Kanya

Mallika: Kanya...nice to meet you beta

Mallika: (thinks to herself) So this is Kanya...looks gud and m sure she is a fine person as well...i would give both of them a month to know each other and then i will talk abt marriage to her parents

Kanya: Nice to meet you too maam..

Mallika, Kanya and Ranbir...are walking in the lobby suddenly they hear a customer shouting at the receptionist...they go there.....

Edited by emerald_jule - 17 years ago

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Nisha

@desaigirl101

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

Excellent & Awesome Update!!! 😃
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

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Gayathri

@GGG3

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Erum!Why do you say it's not a very gud update?!!! I really loved it.It's a very good update.Loved RanKan encounter in the office.Ayan part was hillarious.But one complaint.You have to continue soon.You take tooooooooooo long to update that it feels like years.