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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
grt part....loved it....esp. the last parahgraph...cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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the last paragraph was intresting and emotional...the part was gr8 as usual....loved it...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
awsum part 😃 😃 😃
thnku 4 cont.
hope KRipa realizes Angad is her headless groom soon 😆
cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: superstar15

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what a part........ridz is blushing because of armaan........the headless groom thing wont stop will it😆...........i noticed ak r kind of attracted to each other but they ignore it.........adi and angad r always fighting..............sanya nos angad doesnt like her hope she gets better soon.......now cuz of kripa adi is going to realise its his fault angad is like that.........grt part cont soon

Love Ya Lots

Rhea😛


Thanks😊 lol; yeah armaan has his own magic over ridz. the headless groom joke wont finish , its a life long joke for them now.😉 yep they are; its more of a silent love after all in a relationship its understanding which is the most important thing. yep but its there fights that will bring them together soon. she does and it affects her ; the dislike towards such patients hurt them emotionally. well yeah its time to bring broken hearts together . love ya too😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

angad and kripa are cute
lol kripa is still getting teased about her headless groom...well the teasing won't stop until she admits or realizes who her headless groom is!
angad has feelings for her...but juss doesn't realize it i think...or doesn't acknowledge...but for now i love the relationship between kripa and angad.

armaan and riddhima went to their honeymoon and came back already? lol greaat to see the couple in happiness and bliss

ayush and abhi's relationship with angad has progressed greatly and i am happy!!
and poor ayush...he cried...all this fighting and tension is bad for little kids hopefully everything gets solved soon

aditya and angad...can't take their fighting anymore...angad refuses to tell whats wrong and aditya doesn't listen to angad...well thank god at the end we got somewhere! lets see how aditya tries to make things better and even angad tooo...he has to control his anger

wonderful part!!


Thanks, lol; its not goign to stop anytime soon. yep; there both attracted but they deny it as friendship; there friendship is very good and a support system for them; they dont want to lose it.yep; I didnt really want to strech the one day too long so I decided on showing a few day gaps; they are on romance right now but I like to keep on the story line more. yep it has; abhi is carefree; he's too small to understand the complicated things, ayush understands so theres still a barrier. well until anger doesnt take over , things wont be revealed; there wont be a breakdown, there wont be another bond. Thank you so much😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

Heyyy !!! OMG OMG OMG -- u updated !!-- and i tink it was a fabulous part-- progress on the whole 'brothers at war' part as well as the 'love story' -wat with armaan's comment at the airport--
newez-- cant wait to read the nxt part !! :D


Thanks😊 glad you liked it; yep brother war is getting progress. yep and the love story is as well; the process may be a little long for them to realize but the longer the friendship the stronger the bond. well which one; there was two; one he was teasing kripa and angad being a couple and the other was that he sauid not to disturb him on his honeymoon. I'll try to update soon but it depends. I knw I'll update more faster after june 2nd but for now I've got examinations

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you😃

Faiza
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
fab part
just loved it...
now finally Aditaya will do something abt the problem he himself created...
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*


Thanks😊 glad you liked it; yep brother war is getting progress. yep and the love story is as well; the process may be a little long for them to realize but the longer the friendship the stronger the bond. well which one; there was two; one he was teasing kripa and angad being a couple and the other was that he sauid not to disturb him on his honeymoon. I'll try to update soon but it depends. I knw I'll update more faster after june 2nd but for now I've got examinations

Faiza



oh i meant the teasing kripa one--
oh ok-- good luck on ur exams !!-- cant wait for june 2nd (ie for u to update :P
~Sweetoo =)


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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏

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