Hum Tum,part 4!pls pls read - Page 2

Originally posted by: minz~12

wowo!!..hilarious scene.... 😆

Agni as sevak!!..oohooo lolzz..Rashi's role too is hilarious!!... 😛 😛

Thxx for makin me tooo a part.... 😆

Keep up dear..u are doin good!... 😳

thank u very much😛

😆 😆 😆 i love part 4 the best... its funny

I have not read any of your parts.. I shall read them up tomorrow n tell u how I liked it 😛

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

I have not read any of your parts.. I shall read them up tomorrow n tell u how I liked it 😛

awaiting ur reply

Originally posted by: Ron16

😆 😆 😆 i love part 4 the best... its funny

thanks😛

good update pragy but u wanted my real insight right, its not anyway a complain, ur ff is great, but if u cld describe the scenes in more details it will help us imagine better, like the competition u cld hv explained in detail, abt the competition as well as the surrounding, what they were wearing who were the spectators and the judges, u know small small things but it will helps us to visualise the scene taking place

but I love the agni part the best, u cld have really made dv make him do funny things as punsihment, like dance for them while they ate there meal or something u know

but it was lovely 😊

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

good update pragy but u wanted my real insight right, its not anyway a complain, ur ff is great, but if u cld describe the scenes in more details it will help us imagine better, like the competition u cld hv explained in detail, abt the competition as well as the surrounding, what they were wearing who were the spectators and the judges, u know small small things but it will helps us to visualise the scene taking place

but I love the agni part the best, u cld have really made dv make him do funny things as punsihment, like dance for them while they ate there meal or something u know

but it was lovely 😊

thank u very much for suggestion,will improve

wooow...good stuff Pragy...i cnt wait for the nxt part! cheers x

Originally posted by: sonur15

pragoooo good work but...but i dont kow why these name sounds so funny 😆& sweet to me 😳

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haila pragy u used my name..
so sweetttt of u
well how come i missed this ff 🤔

oops pragy dear plz send me link when u update 😳
me will read n surely comment 🤗
muahhhhhh for using this name 😆

me sis of veer..my veer my chutku

waise maine mooh band kar liya 🤣


well i'll read comment soon..
on this sunday......i m sure it must b rocking 👏