Hum Tum,part 4!pls pls read

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let me take u all to a place called aryanagar,where my story starts .this is a fine morning,sun is about to rise birds & breeze r playing a wonderfull morning song.

a cold breeze reaches through the window to a charming rajkumar fast asleep.his eyes open to the melodius morning songs,he reaches the window & feels the fresh morning.

suddenly he hears "veer.......veer still not ready,come on hurry up" he is rajkumar dhram. veer replies "yes dharam,just be ready in a sec".

these are rajkumar dhram & veer.

intelligent,smart,charming but only one problem as people of aryanagar say "pata nahi ye dharam veer kab sudhrenge,aryanagar ka bhavishya inke hato me hai,bhagwan aryanagar ko bacha lena.

chapter 2

the arya family consist of the maharaj aryavardhan,wife chandramukhi &thier sons dharam & veer.also aryavardhans younger bro jayavardhan,wife anugamini & daughter rashmi(nickname -rashi,on rashi di's request).

everyone was on dinning table waiting for dv.they were running as fast as they could,suddenly calmed,tried to control breath near to dinning hall.

" come come sit,we hv been waiting for u'll,where were u;ll?" questioned maharaj."sorry pitaji had some important work" said dharam. "ok,lets start" said jayavardhan."pitaji,why did u called us early today?" questioned veer. "the thing is beta,we hv to go to kalanagar tommorrow for wedding of daughter of maharaj kishan" said chandramukhi.

after the lunch,dharam,veer & rashmi were sitting in common hall & talking with each other.rashi said "u know i bought a new dress for the wedding" "ya...ya,toh nacho?" said dharam.what dv "i dont get why u dont like weddings,we'll meet friends,relatives &......" "& on &on,pls stop the story now"interrupted veer.

"u do whatever u wanna do ,i'm gonna njoy & u know there's gonna b a rajvidya competition there"said rashi."rajvidya competition!" xclaimed dharam & veer.

"yep"said rashi"rajvidya competiton where all the rajkumars will participate to prove thier wit,intelligence & power to b best from the rest.pata nahi tum dono ka kya hoga,tum log to waha jakar wahi karoge jo tum bahut acche se karte ho"."woh kya?" asked dhram & veer."kuch bhi nahi!"said rashi.

chapter 3

The conversation further continues rashi cant control her laughter😆,seing this veer says "laugh hann laugh,very good!"she still couldn't stop.

early morning they head for kalanagar and reached by afternoon.a beautiful palace,decorated with fresh colourfull flowers.there were many royal families in the palace who came to attend the wedding which was after three days.

after supper ,the awaited rajvidya competition,the contestents for rajkumars were,rajkumar agnii(dv's cousin),dharam,veer,karan,krishna and harshal.for rajkumaries were rashmi,aishwarya,sarawati(sarah😆)priti,menakshi(minzy😆) & kiran.

the competiton started next morning,it was in three stages.the first one was solving a riddle,with five clues,one clue lead to other & traps in the way.dharam & veer were as always first of all late & not interested.

the competiton started every rajkumar tried to prove their best to come first.agnii won the competiton & dv could not even complete the task & got caught in a trap.maharaj was very dissappointed & ashamed of them.

rashi didnt not even come to see them after it.after lunch when they head off to their rooms,in pathway they heard some voices,they saw maharaj aryavardhan & maharani talking to each other:

maharaj:I am so ashamed of myself i could not even belive dv could do this or say do nothing!"

rani:dont worry,the'll do better tommorrow

maharaj:what next day maharani?they r not kids anymore,i could not bear the the words of other maharaj,they said"so they r future of aryanagar?god knows what wil happen of aryanagr,see the maharaj & see their kids"

dv could not listen anymore,each word pricked as a needle.

chapter 4

they went to their rooms,still could hear the words.suddenly agnii came there & started clapping.

A-wow! this was for ur splendid performance! u fools make my work so easy

V-shut up!

A- oh no no,very bad,so anger,get used to it baby

D- agnii( shouting) stop ok,so pride hann,u think we r useless hann,lets hv a bet,in 2morrow's challenge whoever loses will behave like sevak of the winner till the wedding,ok?

A-ya fine,wanna challenge me,ok,lets see 2morrow

agnii leaves.

V-what is this dharam?sevak?

D-u dont worry veer we will now prove what we r & what we can do,sath rahenge?

V-hum tum

D-hamesha!😊

both smile & head off to sleep.next morning they first went to their father.

DV-father u dont worry this time we will show what an aryawrth blood can do

maharaj-go beta,win the world!

the competition started,it was in three stages,finding a golden ball,in which dv came third;the next clue golden flock,in which they stood fourth; & finally letting it to its destination i jungle escaping traps.

the final task was on,maharaj was very dissappointed & lost hope.everbody was impatitiently awaiting the winners.

they saw black shadows running towards the finish from far cutting the setting suns light.everybody rised up to see the winners.maharaj to rised,the figures approached near the finished,he looked up & when saw the seen rised in joy! they were dv,reached finishing line first.arya families joy could not fit on their faces.

DV were of the competition! they were very happy & proud too.they could not move their eyes off maharaj aryavardhans face,he was so filled with joy.the family congragulated them & were very proud.

the rajvidya competition for rajkumaries was held on basis of their excellence in singing,dancing & royal manners.rashmi won the contest too.

the three met each other after dinner

R-i'm sooooooo happy & proud of my bros,thank u so much!

V- congrats to u too sis

R-how come suddenly u reached the top?

D- thats all bcoz of our sevak

veer saw agnii passing by

V-are sevak,come here,come come bow this is our sis

rashi could not understand anything

agnii was full drowned of shame & embarresment

D-see sis this is the result of taking panga with DV

rashi could not stop her laughter seeing that😆

A-anything for u m...maha.........maharaj

V-u go know,come 2morrow hann,u hv lots of work😆

they all had a good laugh.

the wedding was fabulous & all went well,till the wedding DV had embarresd agnii till the depth of sea.

they reached aryanagar after the wedding,a urgent meeting was called by rajyasabha for maharaj.

for what?????????

u will get to know next week.

pls pls do reply😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 good job
rashmi , i wonder if somethings gonna be cooking up with Rashmi n the boys 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great job 👏 👏
nice story and names thanks for also including my name.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ron16

👏 good job
rashmi , i wonder if somethings gonna be cooking up with Rashmi n the boys 😆

i'm sorry i didnt get u

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pragy

i'm sorry i didnt get u

NVM

i'll wait n find out

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow coool partttttt do continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pragoooo good work but...but i dont kow why these name sounds so funny 😆& sweet to me 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwo good update pragy and thanks a lot for sending rajkumari kiran to watch rajkumar veer in the competition 😆 😆
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Originally posted by: sonur15

pragoooo good work but...but i dont kow why these name sounds so funny 😆& sweet to me 😳

thanks which names?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowo!!..hilarious scene.... 😆

Agni as sevak!!..oohooo lolzz..Rashi's role too is hilarious!!... 😛 😛

Thxx for makin me tooo a part.... 😆

Keep up dear..u are doin good!... 😳

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