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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 24

While Shashank and Padma attended Jai in Shashank's office, Shubhankar and Keerti put Riddhima on oxygen to help her breathe. Keerti removed the articles of clothing on Riddhima that were smeared with blood. She put clean hospital scrubs on Riddhima while Shubhankar went outside. When Keerti motioned for him to come back, he went inside.

Armaan sat by himself while the ther interns watched him closely. Muskaan of course was eager to know what Armaan was thinking.

M: (hitting Rahul) Aye kaan khajure! hero se puchna ke hua kya hai? Woh kab tak Riddhima se pyaar karta hai?! Puchna!!

R: (angrily) Oye phir se dhakha diya?! Mujhe choone ki galti mat karna! Samjhi?

M: Tujhe choona kaun chahtha hai? Main toh sirf Armaan ke liye pareshan hoon. Tujhme na shakal hai na akal.

R: Agar mujhme naahi shakal hai na akal, toh tu mere aas paas kyun ghoomti rehti hai? Aaj kal mein dekh raha hoon ke jab se Pia yahan ayi hai tabse tu mere aas paas rehti hai!

M: Oye gharib ke Hrithik! Mujhe koi shokh nahi hai tere aas paas rehne ka! Mujhe toh Pia ki niyat mein khot nazaar aati hai. Woh kuch chahti hai.

R: Kuch nahi. Mujhe. Pia mujhe chahti hai.

M: (sarchastically) Tujhe? Ha. Achchi jodi rahegi.

R: Oye rishta toh mera hai. Tujhe kyun itni fikar ho rahi hai? Pia se jalti hai? Jalan ho rahi hai?

M: Jalan? Mujhe? Abbey aisi ghatiya baat kina toh mein Patiala mein jhaake sab ko tere aur Pia ke baare mein bataa dungi! Samjha?!

R: Toh jaana! Abhi ja! Meri maa intezar kar rahi hai ke kab mein uske liye ek achchi si bahu laadoon. Aur Pia mujhe achchi lagti hai.

M: (looking up at him, worried) Lagti hai?

Muskaan got worried. She started feeling something weird inside of her when she thought of Rahul and Pia together.

M: (in her head) Mujhe is Pia ki bachchi ko Rahul se door rakhna padega. Woh Rahul ke aage peeche ghoomti rehti hai. (looking at Rahul) Aur is bewakoof ko itna bhi maloom nahi ke aaj kal ki lardkiyan kaisi hoti hai. Pia is gadhe ko kabhi khush nahi rakh sakti. mujhe kuch karna padega. Soch Muskaan soch! Arre lekin mujhe kya? Mujhe kyun itni fikar ho rahi hai? Oh haan! Mujhe Rahul ki nahi, uske parivaar ki fikar ho rahi hai! Un logon ko is Pia se bachchana chahti hoon. Akhir woh mere kuch toh lagte hai. I mean, padosi! Aur padosi ki madat karna achcha hota hai!

Muskaan continued rationalizing her "good deed." Little did she know that what she had started feeling were pangs of jealousy. Muskaan was oblivious to her feelings. Not knowing that she was jealous, she continued to come up with different ways to tear them apart. Even though Rahul and Pia werent dating or anything, Muskaan made it her mission to tear them apart forever.

Anjali, sseing how visibly disturbed Armaan was, sat next to him.

An: Tum dono ne yeh baat hum sab se kyun chupayi? Hum sab tumhare dushman hai kya? Agar tum mujhe bataate, mein Papa ko jaake tumhare rishte ke baare mein baat karti!

Ar: (looking up at Anjali) Yahi toh Riddhima nahi chahtithi.

An: (confused) Kya?

Ar: (smiling) Its a long story, Angie. Filhaal mein khush isi mein hoon ke Riddhima ne apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya.

Anjali was totally confused. She got up and walked to Atul and Rahul with a questioned face.

An: Armaan aur Riddhima ko exactly hua kya hai?

Atul shook his head no, but Rahul knew better. Ever since he entered Sanjeevani, he knew that something was brewing between them.

R: Mujhe lagtatha ke in dono ke beech mein kuch kichdri pak rahi hai. Lekin sab kuch aise bahar ajayega maine kabhi nahi socha thha.

An: Main soch bhi nahi sakti ke Ridzy aur Armaan ke beech kabhi aisa kuch ho sakta hai! It makes no sense! Armaan aur Ridzy ek dusre se kitni nafrat karthethhe! Yeh pyaar main kaise badal gaya?

Atul was itching to say something. So he did.

At: Anjali, hamara pyaar aisa nahi hoga! Tum apna pyar ka izhaar bahut simple tarike se karna! Aur phir mein tumhare ghar aunga apne family aur in sab paagalon ko leke tumaha haath maangne.

An: (angry) Atul! Kabhi toh serious raha karo!

At: But I am serious!

An: Atul...

At: Nahi Anjali. Tum maeri baat suno! Sanjeevani mein sab ke dil mil rahe hain sivay tumhare aur mere!

M: (interrupting, totally clueless as to how shes actually feeling) Mera bhi dil ab tak kissi se nahi mila!

At: (continuing) Haan. Aur Muskaan ka dil! Phir bhi maine kuch nahi kaha kyunki mujhe laga ke shayad tume kuch waqt ki zarurat hogi! Lekin aaj bahut hogaya! Listen Anjali, shayad mujhe duniya ka best-looking guy ka award nahi mila, ya Hrithik Roshan jaisa nahi dikhta hoon, lekin main ek achcha insan hoon. Aur tumhe mein khush rakhunga!

At this point all of the interns were staring at Atul. Even Armaan, who was lost in Riddhima's thoughts was unable to tear away from this scene. Anjali was totally floored at this new and exciting Atul! He was commanding and dare she think it...sexy?! Was this the same Atul that followed her aeound like a love-sick puppy?

At: Tumne kabhi mere pyaar ko samjha hi nahi. Aggar mein Mount Everest par chard jau na aur chila chila ke bolun ke mein tumse pyaar karta hoon tavhi tumhe koi farak nahi padega. Fine! Aggar tumhe meri zaroorat nahi hai toh main (looking at Muskaan) Muskaan se shaadi karlunga! Waise toh main Gujarati hoon, lekin Punjaban se kaam chalalunga!

An: Atul chill! Tum baat ko batangard kyun bana rahe ho? Im sorry Atul.

Pia almost passed out! Anjal Gupta said "I'm sorry" to someone. Atul was "the chosen one." He was the only person to ever get an "I'm sorry" out of Anjali Gupta!

P: (shocked) Anjie! Tumne I'm sorry kaha?! Bhaiyya aur Ridu ko pata chalega toh behosh ho jayenge! They have to know about this!

An: (irritated with Pia's humor) Shut up yaar Pia. Tum galat qaqt pe sab kuch bak deti ho. Stupid. Look, Atul Im really sorry ok? Mera irada tumhe chot pochaane ka nahi thha.

At: (acting dramatic) Nahi anjali! Ab mujhe aur nahi bardasht hota! I cant take it anymore. Tumne mere pyaar ka mazaak banaa ke rakh diya hai! Mein apne patients ko milne ja raha hoon! Mujhe follow mat karna! Please!

As he turned around and left, he looked at Armaan and stuck out his tounge and winked at him! In turn Armaan smiled because he knew that Atul was just making a fool out of Anjali. Armaan didn't know how or when Atul became smart but he knew that if Atul contiued this way, Anjali would be his forever.

Ok guys, I decided to concentrate on the other love stories today because of the new twist coming up...the other couples play a part in it too and i wanted some interaction between them so that the next few parts make sense! Hope I didnt bore y'all. I mean, they dont show this in the show, so I decided to show it in my story!

Also, im looking at girls to play Jai's love interest in the twist. If y'all have anyone that you would like to see with him, let me know. I'm always up for suggestions.

Edited by brownbutt - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol! i luvd atul being all commanding!! it was an awesome update!!! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww awesome parts hunie 😉 not boring at all... loved the interaction b/w rahul-muskaan and atul-anjali 😛

hmm who would be good for jai?? maybe sapna? it would be easier to visualize her too becuase we havve seen her on screen with the rest of the interns... but thats just my opinion if u find a better option then go for it 😉

cont soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 lovely part....loved the way atul acted haan...kool haan hes got great guts...hehehehehhe n loved the RM part too....great going han...cont soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwww
dat was great really funny
luved da atul scnes
hes a jokr
luvin ur ff its great
updte sooon plzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice update
plzzz continue soon
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Amazing update
Plz cont. soooon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow, amazing update 👏
garibon ka hrithik? 😆
and i can't believe the change in atul,
definitely anjali won't be able to resist him now 😳
do update soon and how bout mouni frm kyunki or dimple frm kuch is tara for jai?
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwww...love the continuation!!!! 👏 👏

Love how you have portaied Atul....so cute!! Way to go Atul!!!!
Please continue!!!! Waiting!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome updates.... 👏 sorry for late comments... 😕 i really liked ridzi's confession....Jai trying to convince shashank n atul was so cute n gud 😳 Muski getting jealous abt Pia n Rahul..sounds really nice 😉 plzz continue soon 😊

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