Brownbutts First FF! Part 29 Page 61 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved it!!!

please do continue 👏
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PART 2

Riddhima, Angie, Jai and Pia all go to Shashank's office to meet Shubhankar and Keerti. Meanwhile in the locker room, Armaan is still infuriated with Jay.

A: (to himself) Who the hell is that fool to call her "meri?" Woh jaanta nahi ke Riddhima ka dil mera hai, Riddhima ki atma meri hai, aur Riddhima ka tan jo woh choo raha tha, woh bhi mera hi hai. Hum sirf misunderstandings ki wajay se ek dusre se naraaz hai. Aur agar ise lagta hai ke woh yahan aakar Riddhima ko mujhse cheen lega, toh woh jaanta nahi ke Armaan kis bala ka naam hai. Main use chodunga nahi.

Rahul comes into the locker room and sees Armaan tensed. He asks Armaan if everything is ok.

R: Oye tu itna serious kyun hai? Kisi ne kuch kaha kya?
A: Rahoooool, kyun tu mere mooh lagta hai? Maine tujhse kuch kaha kya? Nahi na? Waise bhi mein itna pareshan hoon.
R: Toh bataa na ke problem kya hai.
A: Woh naya item, kya naam hai uska? Jai. Apne aap ko samajta kya hai? Tune dekha kaise chipka tha Riddhima ke saath?
R: Lekin tujhe kabse Riddhima ki itni fikar honelagi? Apne kaam pe dhyaan de aur ye sab faltu baatein chod. Woh bachpan ke dost hain aur shayad unke beech mein kuch chal raha hoga. (Rahul enjoys putting salt on the wound)
A: Kya? Pagal hogaya tu? Unke beech mein kya?

Armaan suddenly realized that he had said too much. It was not good to overreact. Instead he told Rahul to "forget it" and went about his day.

Meanwhile in Shashank's office, Shubhankar and Keerti were giving Jai and Pia their duties.

K: Dr. Jai aur Dr. Pia, aap naye hai isi liye mein aapko aapki duties Dr. Riddhima aur Dr. Anjali ke saath doongi. Tode din ke lie aap inke saath waqt guzariye, hospital ke staff se woh aapko milvadengi aur agar aapko kisi cheez ki zarurat ho, toh aap inhe batadijiye ga.
J & P: Thank you Dr. Keerti.
Shubhankar: Aur haan! Kal hospital mein hum saab saath milke Holi khelenge! Maine aur Armaan ne saara intezaam kar liya hai. So please, kal white pehen ke ayegaa.
J: Thank you Sir, hum zaroor ayenge. Waise bhi yeh hospital Dr. Shashank chalate hain aur woh mujhe apna beta mante hain.
S: Oh thats very good! Kal kafi mazze ka din hoga! Nahi Keerti?

Keerti blushed because she knew that this was her last Holi as an unmarried woman. She was certain that Shubhankar would ask her to be his bride soon.

Atul, Armaan, Anjali and Riddhima were all in the cafe drinking coffee. Armaan and Riddhima were seated across from each other. Riddhima could not look into Armaan's eyes for she knew that if she did, she would melt. She wanted time to figure things out and Armaan was too much for her to deal with. But she was confused because how was she expected to forget those sweet moments they had? The staircase? The rooftop? The kada? The paayal? The first time she said "I love you." She knew she loved him but all she needed was time. To avoid any sort of eye contact, she looked down.

Ar: (to himself) Please Riddhima, mujhe kal ke liye maaf kardo. Mujhe kud pata nahi tha ke main kya kar raha tha. Mein tumhare pyaar main such much paagal hogaya hoon. Aur tum ho ke mujhse nazre churarahi ho?

Their thoughts were interupted.

Anjie: Kal Holi mein bahut mazaa ayega! Armaan, saari tayari hogayi na?
Ar: Yeah hogayi. Im sure that you will have fun.
An: Tum nahi ah rahe ho kya? Kyun?
Ar: (looking at Riddhima) Pata nahi Anjie, mera mood nahi hain. Meri zindagi bilkul kali ho chuki hai. Agar rang dalne jaounga to rang bhi kale hojayenge.
At: Kya anaab shanaab bak raha hai tu? Tujhe pata hai ke tu kya kehraha hai? Aur teri bhabhi bol rahi hai! Seeda jawab nahi desakta kya?

Muskaan and Rahul joined them.

M: Mujhe na Holi bahut pasand hai. Main sabko rang lagaungi. Armaan, tumhe bahut rang lagaungi!
An: Forget Muskaan. Armaan nahi ah raha. Aur beheki beheki baatein kar raha hai.
M: Kyun Armaan? Saara hospital ja raha hai! Patients bhi! Tum akele kya karoge? Yaar Holi hai, maaza sab ko karna chahiye!
Ar: (looking at Riddhima, thinking in his head) Apni kismat pe rounga, aur kya?
M: Riddhima, hum bahut masti karenge hai na?!
R: Nahi Muskaan, main ana nahi chaati. Mujhe Holi pasand nahi hai.
At: Ridz, yeh tum kya ke rahi ho?! Meri saali Holi khelne nahi ayegi?! (smiling at Angie)
An: Shut up Atul! (giggles) Ridzy pehle Armaan phir tum, yeh kya ho raha hai?
R: Tum log bhi na, saara plan chopat kar diya. Hum sab bahut masti karne wale thhe.

Just then Jai and Pia came into the cafe and joined the other interns.

J: Hey guys, hey Ridu! Pata hai? Dr. Shubhankar ne mujhe aur Pia ko Holi ke liye invite kiya. Yaar bada mazaa ayega! Itne saal baad Holi khelenge.
An: Oh God Jai! Of course tumhe ana hai! Tum gar ke ho! But sorry to say that Ridzy ana nahi chahti.

Armaan couldnt help but smile sarchastically, which didnt go unnoticed by Jai.

J: Ridu, tum kyun nahi ah rahi ho? Kya, baat kya hai yaar? Main jabse aya hoon, tum udaas si ho.
R: Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Main sirf Holi pasand nahi karti.
P & J: (together) Kyaa?!?!
P: Tum Holi pasand nahi karti? What rubbish! Yaad hai jab hum chote thhe, har saal hum Holi khelte thhe!
J: Yeah even before we left for South Africa, we played Holi! Yaar that was the best one, nahi Angie?!
An: Of course! Those were the best days! Dekh Ridzy, ab zyaada bhaav mat khaa. Jai ne keh diya hai. Thats it. Ab to tumhe ana hi hai.

Riddhima was stuck in a awkward position. If she said no, Jai would want to know the reason why and if she said yes, Armaan would think that she was saying yes to Jai. She closed her eyes and made a decision.


Read to see what happens next...I'll update soon!

Edited by brownbutt - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow! mind blowin! cnt w8 2 read d nxt prt! update sn!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome writings brownbutt.. 😊 continue plz...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey wow yaar it ws awesom yaar tht wrds armaan said wow it sees tht how madly he lv wth her yaar kitna maza ayega poor armaan jai se kitna irritate ho raha hai nd ridz fas gayi kya kahegi ys/no god hlp her it ws awesom superb yaar
cont soooooooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice ff....plus u added new caracter...gr8 going...i really enjoyed reading it
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Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

nice ff....plus u added new caracter...gr8 going...i really enjoyed reading it

lol actually two new characters! Pia is going to give someone some competition!!!!! But its gonna be really funny!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ridhima's decision! Continue soon, I want to know what she says.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey!!
Awesum part!!
deadly cliffhanger too!!

do continue soon!! n plz pm if u can!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice @brownbutt...really like the continuation!! Please keep updating... I really like the chara of Jai...Nice...
Love Armaans reaction....Hope this really was DMG!!! 😉

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