'Hamare beech ke fasley'PartV last part - Page 6

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Monika.. awww I felt so much touched by the applause and felt that this littel effort has been appreciated so much... thanks dear for encouraging me through out....😃.....

I usualy write my stories with poetic lines in btw.. few stories I have tried not to add them just to see if the interst stays on or not...

Will probably post one of my first story i had posted for my friends .... its not posted her in IF... hope u enjoy reading the first ever short story written by me..😃

I Am waiting to read dear,👏

wow a lovely part and lovely way to end ur ff

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow a lovely part and lovely way to end ur ff

Hi Jyothi dear... Am glad u like the way the story ended..... tc luv u..

Sorry Bhoomi me again lae in commenting. But a very emotional story.

First how can people abort a kid. It is similar to murder. It really sad that it even happens today. Why are people so desperate to have a boy in todays world boy n girl are the same.

Loved the way Nivas handled Ruhi and good to see that they came close to each other.

Loved the fic .

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Sorry Bhoomi me again lae in commenting. But a very emotional story.

First how can people abort a kid. It is similar to murder. It really sad that it even happens today. Why are people so desperate to have a boy in todays world boy n girl are the same.

Loved the way Nivas handled Ruhi and good to see that they came close to each other.

Loved the fic .

Hi Golu.... U r never late to comment.. on time yaar..... Golu u dont have to say sorry ... I do wait to get ur comment.. but even if its late i know u must be busy... am glad u read this one.. and liked the thoughts i tried to put in..

This is a very common situation these days.... as a woman even i find it hard when i come across educated girls.. saying .. Ladka ho...Its really sad....

U liked Nivas... hmm... Will post the stories u have read already .... later will post my brand new story soon as i get some good time and good mood as well...😃

u tc....keep smiling...😃

Originally posted by: ssh57

Very realistic and practical story and very very true. After a few years of marriage it is very common to move into your own world and ignore your spouse. But thanks to the unending problems one faces in life, it forces them to get together to resolve it and thereby strengthens their bond. U have handled the story very maturedly too.

Hi, yes this story had the thought process that its not only love which is needed ofr a relationship to sustain.. In marraige its very common that initially attraction , love all is there, the hwole felings of filmy love romance is there but after a certain time its more need to give space but u need to also be close friends and somewhere in the daily grind we tend to neglect that aspect and we tend to feel others outside family are more giving n caring which starts destroygin the relationship...

bhoomi.. i am a fan now please PM whenever u write ur stories again..

and also i would suggest u to publish ur compilation.. it is owrth recognition... loved this one as well

Originally posted by: aati1429

bhoomi.. i am a fan now please PM whenever u write ur stories again..

and also i would suggest u to publish ur compilation.. it is owrth recognition... loved this one as well

Hi ,

I am very happy to know u liked my work and enjoyed reading it.. come on..I dont want fan around but friends .. so be a friend a reader 😊 I will surely try and PM when i post my next.. Publishing my work??? hehahah u think its that good.. na.. I dont think .. I think in fun its all nice.. professionally i am still immature at it.. U liked reading this.. thats what I want 😃

hey bhoomi