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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part V (last part)
Early morning Ruhi and Nivas were standing in the balcony looking at the dew drops on the leaves and taking a sip of coffee. Nivas asked Ruhi how was she feeling? Ruhi smiled and said much better. Ruhi the whole night had slept in Nivas's lap and cried while Nivas every time had wiped her tears and lovingly took her close. They after long had felt this beautiful intimacy of bringing oneself more closer, feeling each others breathe and had felt the magic of love. After long they had not slept the whole night. They just wondered how lucky r they to have each other as life partners. They smiled knowing what the other felt and kissed as saying they agree their relationship has got back its strength.
Ruhi had decided not to go to office while Nivas had already taken holiday as his mother was leaving for her native.
Nivas: Ruhi what happen in these few days which brought us back together. For long time I felt we were not sharing anything, our friendship was lost and that affected everything, made us lonelier.
Ruhi: Don't know may be the presence of another person, ur mom, or may be the fact that there were no ups and downs which we had to face together as a couple in these long years. Mostly problems came up which were individual and we sorted with our friends, colleagues.
Nivas: I don't think that was right, may be that was the problem, thought we r individual, gave so much space to each other that suddenly we felt we should not offend the other and disturb his/her space.
Ruhi: I feel we lost our friendship which is the root of our feel lonely.
Nivas: Ya, it feels so nice to come home share with u all my problem or happiness, u r the best friend whom I can trust completely. I thought abt not bothering u with them before..
Ruhi: It would have never bothered me but brought me close to ur life outside the house as well. I as well felt u may be tired with ur office work n I discussing may just irritate u.
Nivas: I love to listen to u, I think the first thing I liked when we met at my place was how sweetly u talk and I just felt u were right for me.
Ruhi: Ya the first thing which I liked in u was the respect u gave me and the patience u had, u r were calm composed.
Nivas smiled and said , "I had? I have!" Ruhi smiled back and Maa came in asked if Ruhi is coming for shopping. Ruhi smiled back and said yes, and went kissed Maa and than realized Maa will get angry and touched her feet. Maa was just surprised, she asked Nivas what's the matter any good news? Nivas said NO! and replied her that she found her lost friend. Nivas mother felt weird why to be happy if u got back ur friend what difference it can make to one's life. Nivas and Ruhi changed and went together for shopping with Maa and later gave her send off while she left for her home.
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Nivas and Ruhi after a gap of Six months adopted a 2yr old girl child and Nivas with the diamond studded pen wrote her name on the adoption papers. They named her 'Vega –meaning falling brightest star'
After a year Nivas and Ruhi in the evening with their bundle of joy in their arms looked at these years which changed their life. Nivas told Ruhi that they came close due to his mother so he should tell her to stay here for a month or so & may be this time they may just come more closer and came to hug her, Ruhi panicked hearing that and while pushing him said, "If we come more closer with ur mom staying for a month am sure with my forgetfulness and Maa's sharp mind I will be at receiving end always. U better be prepared than taking some blows standing btw both of us. Nivas laughed and said, "I was just kidding"and hugged her again. Ruhi blushed thinking how much scared she was.
Nivas: Ruhi remember on that day when I thanked u for bringing that smile on my face after Sagar played his dirty games. U said u need a gift. See I brought the gift which I am sure u will like.
He gave a new Salwar kameez dress with the same kind of Zari work.
Nivas: This time it is ur size, I took one of ur dress and manage to even do the alterations.
Ruhi smiled and was so happy. She now hugged him and looked at their daughter and said, "Nivas, that's so touching u remembered and ya, this dress is just so beautiful." She had tears in her eyes. Nivas looked at her and knew these were tears of happiness. He took her close while their daughter was sleeping in his arms. He said, "My family is complete, hamre beech ke sarey fasley ab miit gaye" Ruhi wiped her tears and said, "U always do this and I don't know what to say Nivas, Nivas I hope this dress fits me I should wear it now." She changed her dress while Nivas looked at the innocent face of his daughter. Ruhi looked beautiful and when she came she brought a small gift along with her, Nivas was surprised but he knew this may surely be a pen and opened with confidence and there was just a note written, "Daddy am coming, wait for me as well." Nivas looked at Ruhi with amusment and Ruhi said, "I guess I will soon have to wear that dress which u presented on our first night." Nivas was so shocked that he just kept wondering what all this meant. Ruhi came and sat next to him took Vega in her arms and said, ' Hamarey beech ke fasley miit hee gaye ,Hamarey dil ke raste khul hee gaye,'Vega'aaj hamare zindagi bangayi hai ,
Shayad Ishwar se hamey ek aur duaa bhi milgayi hai.' She smiled and both cuddled up and both kissed 'Vega'.
*It is not a lack of love, but a lack of friendship that makes unhappy marriages.*
*The goal in marriage is not to think alike, but to think together.*
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
👏 Just read last 2 parts amazing dear , mindblowing . sooo sweet and nice.

I Like this like .....,'Vega'aaj hamare zindagi bangayi hai ,
Shayad Ishwar se hamey ek aur duaa bhi milgayi hai.' She smiled and both cuddled up and both kissed 'Vega'.


please i want to read more .



Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Bhoomika it was fantabulous... 👏 👏 👏

I never wanted it to end...pls do write an epilogue or a part following this..

When are u going to start a new story?.. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey that was just perfect ! Luvd the story !! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey bhoomi the ending was awwwwsome the story was actually very good 😃 😃 😃
whn r u gonna str88 a new story??? 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 Just read last 2 parts amazing dear , mindblowing . sooo sweet and nice.

I Like this like .....,'Vega'aaj hamare zindagi bangayi hai ,
Shayad Ishwar se hamey ek aur duaa bhi milgayi hai.' She smiled and both cuddled up and both kissed 'Vega'.


please i want to read more .



Hi Monika.. awww I felt so much touched by the applause and felt that this littel effort has been appreciated so much... thanks dear for encouraging me through out....😃.....

I usualy write my stories with poetic lines in btw.. few stories I have tried not to add them just to see if the interst stays on or not...

Will probably post one of my first story i had posted for my friends .... its not posted her in IF... hope u enjoy reading the first ever short story written by me..😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

Bhoomika it was fantabulous... 👏 👏 👏

I never wanted it to end...pls do write an epilogue or a part following this..

When are u going to start a new story?.. 😳

Hi .... thanks for appreciating my effort and likign my story..u never wanted it to end.. ohhh.. i felt u all will fall asleep if it goes on n on... hehehe.....

about a new story.. I have my first short stories which have posted here.. will try n post them.. a bit busy with few things.. later will start a long one for sure...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: seasplash

hey bhoomi the ending was awwwwsome the story was actually very good 😃 😃 😃
whn r u gonna str88 a new story??? 😊 😊 😊

Hi dear.... u loved the ending... U liked the story ... ab endign has to give that final touch feeling... so tried my best... I will surely post my one more old short story.... my very fisrt one.. hope u like it...as well..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Hey that was just perfect ! Luvd the story !! 😳

Hi My dear Vandu.... chalo tumhe pasand ayii ... issbahane I was gettign my coffe from u....😉😆... ur comments n encouragment makes me write more.. thanks dear..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Juvz... am glad u enjoyed reading it....😃

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