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nice update....
i really like your flashbacks they are awesome

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.

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Originally posted by: koolarch2001

kool.. when is the next update?

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Originally posted by: fanatic 21

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Originally posted by: vaana05

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Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

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Originally posted by: friend forever

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Originally posted by: VEETI

nice update....
i really like your flashbacks they are awesome

thankuuuu sooo much........

i m really nervous about the whole flashback part......

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I am sorry for being late but i got busy with my coaching classes last two days...... but here goes the update......

PART-4

4 years ago:


KMA
We see 3 guys of around 22-23 years and 1 girl of aroung 20-21 was sitting in a room.
Guy1: Naveen dost… lagta nahi Na pur 2 saal ho Gaye is academy Mei… ab bas do din baad hum sab log leuitenants honge…

Naveen: 2 saa!!!!!!!!lAbhi mujhe to lagta pure janam se MC hamare upar apna hokum chala raha hai……

Abhi: nahi dost…. Chahe MC ne hame kitna bhi sataya ho…. Par phir bhi hum is academy ko miss karenge….. hum chahte hai ye do din kabhi na bite…

Guy3: KYu chauhan saab!!! Ye kahiye na ki is academy ko miss nahi… raja saab ko apne aur nandini ke bare mei batane se darr rahe hai……

Abhi: Raj!!!!!! Dost hum sach mei is academy ko chodne ka mann nahi hai…. par haan hame graduation day ka darr jarur hai… kyuki baba sa us din pehli baar nandini se milenge…………….

Nandini: Raj is baat ka darr to hame bhi lag raha hai… pata nahi kya hoga…
Raj: tum kyu darti ho nandini hum dono(pointing towards himself and Naveen) tumhari itni tariff karenge raja saab se ki vo tumhe pehli nazar mei hi pasand kar lenge….. kyu Naveen?????

Abhi: RAJJJJJJJJJJJ….. mazak mat kariye dost….
Raj: to mazak kar kaun raha hai chauhan…. Dekhna tum ab bas graduation day ka wait karo….
Abhi: tumse to baat karma bekar hai… accha aapke ghar se kaun kaun aa raha hai?????
Raj: mere mom aur dad……… vo dono apne bete ko uniform mei dekhne k liye betaab hai…. par usse bhi jyada vo is naveen ko uniform mei dekhna chahte hai………..
Abhi: haha… aur naveen aapke ghar se???
Naveen: koi nahi(little sad)………. (every one shocked)
Raj: par kyu naveen????
Naveen: raj kal hi meri mom se baat hui thi…. Dad is not well and doctor has not given him permission to travel in the plane…..
Raj: arre yaar…. Koi beet nahi waise bhi bachpan se meri mom tujhse jyada pyar karti hai…. to vo toh aa hi rahi hai na….
Abhi: haan dost… raj ke parents bhi to tumhare parents ki tarah hi hai….
Raj: aur phir BC tumhare uncle to yahi honge na…(winking)

Naveen: RAJJJJJJJJ…… tum nahi bachoge…….and starts running after him…
Abhi: hahaha.. ye to hum bhool hi gaye the… accha naveen tumhari behen(both naveen and raj stops hearing this) … vo nahi aayengi…..????

Naveen: nahi yaar… (looking towards raj) kehti hai padayi puri hone se pehle India nahi aayegi…. Aur abhi uski padayi mei pura 1 saal bacha hai……
Nandini: aisa kyu????

Naveen: kehti hai Veer se waada kiya hai…
Nandini: kyaaa???? Veer……matlab…..

Naveen: darasal meri behen aur ye mera ghatiya dost Raj bahut acche dost hai… aur is duffer dost ne usse waada liya hai ki jab tak uski padayi puri nahi hoti ye dono nahi milenge…. Aur is liye meri behen India nahi aana chahti…

Nadini and Abhi together(shouted): RAJJJJJJJJ aur ek ladki ka best friend…….. how is it possible…………. Ye to sari ladkiyon se dur bhagta hai…….. nandini se hi dosti karne mei isne pura 1 saal lagaya tha………..

Naveen: hahaha……. Manta hun yakeen karma mushkil hai par yahi sach hai….. is pagal ko sirf ek hi ladki handle kar sakti hai naina……..hahaha

Raj: kyat um logo ko aur koi kaam nahi hai mera mazak bana rahe ho……
Abhi: isse badiya kaam kabhi milega…. Hamesha tum dusro ka mazak banate ho…. Ab jab unth pahad ke niche aaya hai to hum use kaise jaane de….

Nandini: haan abhi……. To raj aapko naina se sharam nahi aati jaise baki sab se aati hai……….. boliye……..
Raj: chup raho tum dono…….. and he starts going out…. When Navin's cell phone on the table near the door starts ringing…….
And raj without noticing who is on the line picks up the phone……..and before he could say something…. Someone from the other line shouts…….
Voice: BHAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII……………………
Raj realizies who is on the line and gets shocked and mutters Mannnnnn…………… but this sound was enuf to make the other person realize to whom she is speaking…….. And also the other persons in the room realize it was Naina's call….

Naina (mutters): Veerrrr………… kaise ho????
Raj: thik hun…. Ye lo navin se baat karo………
He gives the phone to navin and move towars the door……
Navin: hi chuhiya kaisi hai???
Naina: hi….. bhai plzzz phone loud speaker pe karo and plz veer ko bahar jaane se rook…….. mujhe pata hai… vo bahar jar aha hoga… plz bhai mujhe aap dono se baat karni hai……

Navin puts the phone on loud speaker and calls Raj who was at that time on the door…
Navin: Raj ruko…. Naina hum dono se baat karma chahti hai……….
Naina from the phone: Veer plzzz….. ruk jao ye baat mujhe tum dono se karni hai…..
Raj stops realizing that Naina is talking with him and turns back…….
Raj: bolo………

Naveen: bolo naina…. Kya hua…. Aisi kya baat hai jo tumhe hum dono se karni hai…………
Naina: bhai…. Kaise ho aap???
Naveen: thik hun……tu baat toh bata……..
Naina: ek khabar hai…. acchi ya buri aap decide karo…..
Naveen: bol bhi ab…
Naina: bhai…. Meri university mei last year mei ssb ko ek project karma hota hai…. jiske under us student ko kisi particular country mei jaakar us country ki medical conditions ka pata karma hota hai…iske liye har student ek team ke sath ek country mei jaata hai……. aur har team mei 5 members hote hai…. fir vo members apne aap decide karte hai ki kaun us country ke particular area mei jaayega…………

Naveen: tu ye sab baate hame kyu bata rahi hai……..
Naina: bhaiiii mei India aane waali team ki member hun……….

Naveen and Raj gets shocked hearing this and raj speaks for the first time…….
Raj: iska matlab tum India aa rahi ho…………..
Naina: haan veer…….. mai India aa rahi hun pure 1 month ke liye……..
Naveen: naina tum India aaogi……. Wowwwwwww…. Kitne din mei aa rahi ho…. Graduation day se pehle aa paaogi………

Naina: bhai.. meri tickets do din baad ki hai… mai shayad aapke graduation day pe hi India pahunch pauu…… bhai mujhe veer se kuch puchna hai…….. kya maim era matlab hai… bina apni studies puri kiye usse mil sakti hun is baar……….????????

Everyone remains silent…. And waits for raj to speak…….
Raj: Kya tum India jaldi nahi aa sakti…… Mannnnn……..
Naina gets happy hearing this…… and says…… Veer mai jaldi India aane ki koshish karti hun…….bye….oops C ya…. Bye bhaiiii….
Naveen: bye chuhiya…….
And she hungs up……….
Naveen: yepieeeeeeeeee naina India aa rahi hai…. mai usse pure 2 saal baad milunga…… last time usse tab mila tha jab is academy mei admission lene aa raha tha……. Everyone is happy and our hero raj…… well he was lost in his old days (lost hone ki bimari hai isse He he he) and do not listens to anything……

Next day when everyone was relaxing on the KMA grounds as this was their last day on the grounds tomorrow being the graduation day….. they were talking about their last yr… when suddenly we see a car is entering from the KMA gates and a girl is stepping down from it……

Naveen: yaar sach mei is academy mei last yr kaise kaata pata hi nahi chala… mujhe sab bahut yaad aayega….
Abhi: haan vo to hai… ye raj ko kya hua… aise akele akele kyu ghoom rahe hai……..
Naveen: naina ke khyalo mei gum hoga……
Abhi: kya keh rahe hai tum…. tumharii behen hai vo……
Naveen: pata hai… par mai ye bhi jaanta hun ki ye mera duffer dost raj usse pyar bahut karta hai… par na to isse khud is baat ka pata hai… aur na hi ye realize karma chahta hai… kal naina ki call ke baad se iska yahi haal hai…. abhi bhi dekho kitni dur akele nikal gaya hai…. arre ye to gates ki taraf jar aha hai………..

Abhi: haan isko itna lost maine in 2 saalo mei pehle kabhi nahi dekha….. chaliye inhe rokte hai.. kahin KMA ke bahar hi na nikal jaye…… aur ye ladki ye kaun hai jo dusri side se aa rahi hai????????

Naveen: NAINAAAAAAAA…….. ise to kal aana tha…… ye aaj kaise??? Aur ye yahan wahan dekh ke kyu chal rahi hai…. aur ye to … arre raj ka bhi dhyan nahi hai….. arre RAJJJJJJJJJJJ…………..

And raj turns his back towards the voice and in this process he is not able to see the person who was coming from the other direction and collides with the girl and both falls on the ground with raj on top of the girl…. And Naveen after seeing this stops and smirks towards abhi and says to him… :
Jara dhire dhire chalte hai…….
……………….
Well our poor raj after seeing Naina thinks: who is this beautiful girl???
Naina: get up…………
Raj:…………..
Naina: hello mr. I m talking to you… getoff from me……
Raj:……………………
Naina (shouts): don't you have the word get off in ur dictionary????
Raj startles: You said something……
Naina: dekhiye kya tumhe itna bhi nahi pata ke gir jaane ke baad uthna bhi hota hai……………..
Raj: ohhhhhh mmmmmmmmm sorry……..
Naina: GETTT UPPPPPPPPP……
Raj finaaly gets up says: I am sorry….
Naina: you should bhi….. don't you 9 who I m ….. just wait and watch mr.
Raj: I don't care who you are miss…
At that moment Navin comes there and shouts: Chuhiyaaaaaaaa……..
Naina and raj both turn towards him and then naina shouts: BHAIIIIIIIIIIII
And goes and hugs navin tightly…. And says: bhaiiii aap kaise ho… aur ye(eyeing towards abhi) Veer to nahi ho sakta…

Navin: u r right sis…… he is abhi my best friend from academy……
Naina: hi…. bhai veer kahan pe hai??? kya vo mujhse abhi bhi nahi milega (in sad tone)……
Raj who was very shocked after all this was not even able to say a single word………….
Naveen smirks and says: Veer is in our room…… room no. 202….
Naina: okkkk I will meet him there…. And then turns towards raj… and u mr. just wait when Veer comes to know about all this you will be no more……bye Bhaiii…

Then naveen move towards him and says: she is gone mr. … naina apne Veer se milne gayi chal tub hi tayyar ho ja … apni Mann se milne ke liye…..

Raj: v………vo…… Mann hai……
Naveen: abhi tak to yahi hai,….. chal vo tujhe room mei dhundne gayi hai,…. Chaliye majnu apki Laila aakhir aapse milne aa hi gayi…….
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Inside the room……
Naina: VEERRRRRRRR………… where r you?? Bhai ne to kaha tha room mei hai… par yahan to koi bhi nahi hai…….. veerrrrrrrr…….. arre vo table pe kiski photo hai…….
And then she picks up the photograph (vo naveen , abhi aur raj waali cup ko pakde hue…)and gets shocked…..
Ye to bhai, aur unke dost abhi hai… aur ye to vo hi cadet hai jisse mai bahar……. To kya ye hi veer hai!!!!!!!!!!!!

Naveen: u bet sis….. (from the door)….. mujhe laga tum veer ko pehchaan jaogi… par tum to use uske hi naam pe dhamki deke chali aayi……..

Naina: Bhai………. V…Veer kahan hai…….
Voice from the door: yahin pe hai… bas dekho to sahi……
Naina: veerrrrrrrr…….. and goes and huge him very tight…… I missed you.. I missed you so much and starts sobbing in this chest…..

Next day they were all graduated from the academy and became leuitenants and got holidays for next month before joining the duty….
They spent the whole month together… with abhi and nandini the addition to the group…. Raja saab approved nandini…… and abhi and nandini got engaged in that month… and after that month Naina went back to aus with the promise that she will be back after 1 year…

At this moments both raj and naina wakes up from their memories… and raj says: Mann vo 1 mahina jab tum India mei thi mera sabse accha time tha…aur vo intezaar sabse lamba intezaar…
Naina: Captain shekhawat… vo meri mere dost se akhri mulaqat thi…. Uske baad na to mann rahi aur na hi veer……..

3 years ago:

Captain Naveen was declared a traitor after it was found out that he was helping terrorists to steal trigger from the KMA…. At that time Raj was on a mission in Rajasthan……and as soon as he got the news he returns to KMA…. And also this was the time for Naina to return from Aus…..
When Naina came to KMA… she was informed about all the alliance… and she decided to talk with RAJ............. She sees him standind inone of the corner of the court and goes towards him…..
Naina: VEERRRRRRRR…. And goes and hugs him tightly……… veer bhai traitor nahi hai……. bhai kabhi aisa nahi kar sakte… mai jaanti hun…….. veer plzzz tum to bharosa karo mera……… uncle bhi bhai ko traitor maan rahe hai…….. veer mai ye baat maa ko kaise bataun…. Baba ki tabiyat abhi bhi kharab hai…… plz veer kuch karo… bhai ko begunaah saaabit karo… plzzzzzz……….

Raj (hugs her back): mai jaanta hun… navin ne kuch nahi kiya… use fasaya jar aha hai…. mai tumse waada karta hun mann… navin ko kuch nahi hoga… mai naivin ko begunaah saabit karunga………plzzz bas tum hausla rakho……..

Naina (sobbing): hausla kaise rakhun veer… do din baad bhai ko faasi chada denge ye log….. aur bhai ke bachne ke koi chances nahi hai…… mujhe bhai se milne bhi nahi de rahe……

Raj: Mann plzzz…….. maine kaha na navin ko kuch nahi hoga… mai navin ko kuch hone nahi dunga….. chalo naveen se milne chalte hai…
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Inside the cell…….

Naina: bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiii………………..(and goes and holds his hand tightly as she was outside the cell)…
Naveen: Chuhiya tu yahan kya kar rahi hai..??? tujhe andar kisne aane diya..
Naina: bhaii…. Aap in logo ko bata do aapne kuch nahi kiya….. bhai mujhe pata hai aapne kuch nahi kiya….
Naveen: rajj isse yaha kyu laya??? Leke ja ise…. Plzzzz….
Raj: nahi naveen… and shouts… open the door…..
Guard : sir we can't…..
Raj: here take my ID… I m going inside… open the door and this lady is with me….
Guard: ok sir but if anything happens then that all will be your responsibility…
Raj: Ok now open the door……..

Naina after going inside hugs him tightly… and says… bhaii chalo mere saath… mujhe pata hai…aapne kuch nahi kiya…

Navven: paagal mat ban naina… saare sabut mere khilaaf hai….. tumhe chahe jo bhi lage lekin sabki nazro mei mai ek traitor hun ek desh drohi……

Naina: nahi bhai… aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta…….. chahe log kuch bhi kahe…. Mai is baat ko nahi maanti… chahe kuch bhi sabut kyu na ho……..
Veer bhi is baat ko nahi manta………

Raj: Naveen plzzzzzzzz bata kaun hai iske piche………. Plzzz tu kuch batayega to hi mai kuch kar paaunga…….. plzz bata……

Naveen: nahi yaar koi kuch nahi kar sakta.. mai tujhe bata kar tujhe bhi musibat mei nahi daal sakta……….

Raj: Dam* it naveen………. Plzzzz say something……….. mujhe kuch nahi hoga………. Par mai tujhe aise dekh nahi sakta……. Kaash mai tere liye kuch kar paaun………..

Naveen: Mere liye kuch karna chahta hai??????ek kaam hai karega…
Raj:kuch bhi…… tere liye to jaan bhi de sakta hun…

Naveen: to fir tum aur Naina shadi kar lo….

RAJ and Naina shouts: WHATTTT????

Naveen: plzz…. Mai nahi chahta jo mere sath hua tumhare sath bhi ho… tum dono ko bhi pyar mei dhoka mile…. Plzz…. Mai tum dono ko khush dekhna chahta hun…. Plzzz abhi aur nandini to sath hai to koi unhe pyar ke naam pe dhoka nahi de sakta par tum dono ka darr hai mujhe…. Mujhe marne se pehle is darr se aazaad kar do…. Plzzz naina apne bhai ki itni baat maan le…………. Ek akhri khwaish samajh ke hi sahi…..

Raj: naveen mai … kaise… tum aur mann….. kaise… tumhare parents.. aur mere parents…….tum itni badi mushkil mei ho…..

Naveen: plz raj… hamare parents ka jahan tak sawal hai vo bahut khush honge…….. plz sirf mere liye itna nahi karoge….waise bhi vo log mere jaane ke baad bahut upset honge.. to unhe thodi khushi de do…..
And they got married the next day……. And naveen was happy for the first time in the whole month when he got the news in his cell…….

Next day was the day when naveen was getting transferred to delhi for further interrogation… when he escaped from the van…. Army including raj,naina and abhi started looking for him……when suddenly they saw him in a jeep and then the jeep went out of control and a bomb blast takes place in the jeep.. and the jeep falls down……

Naina shouts: Bhaiiiiiii………….
And starts moving downwards when raj says to abhi: plz take care of her… I m going downwards……..

Naina after a while freed herself and runs in the direction of raj….

And what she saw was…….

Naveen: plzzz Raj….. You have to do this…. Kill me raj…….. Tumhe hamari dosti ki kasam……. Plzzz raj…….
And raj fires a bullet at almost died Naveen……….. Another soldier along with Naina sees this…and Naina shouts: Bhaiiiiiiii…………. No, this is not true……. Then she turns her back and runs…….

Raj: Mannnn…………. Plz listen to me……… then mutters I hope u will wait for me until I return……. I have to do this……

And Naveen Body was never found coz when raj came upwards he told everyone that he killed Naveen and the soldier who saw raj killing Naveen confirmed this……. Abhi was very angry with Raj…… Everyone went there but couldn't find the body coz raj told everyone that Naveen didn't want his body to be touched by anyone else and being his friend he fulfilled his last wish……….. His seniors got angry but then decides that its better that Naveen is no more and they wouldn't be able to do anything useful with his body and forgave raj……..

But one person never forgave him…… and she was Naina…………

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I thought of writing some present time also… but the past was very long…….. So not able to…… ok next part will be on Tuesday…….
Till then take care………

B bye…
Luv ya….
Sheenu…….
😊 😊