FF about RN- In a diff. style (ud P35) - Page 5

[Quote=Sonarajasingh]that was mindblowing yaar.. abb jaldi continue karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


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[Quote=friend forever]amazing update yaar.....tum sach bol rehi ho???r u writing 1st time????then it's rocking

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[Quote=VEETI]you are too good a writer
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Originally posted by: rogerfan

[Quote=VEETI]nice update..... really liked it continue soon

well finally i have deciced to start reading these FFs coz i was really missing out sumthing by not doing so

your's is the first that i have ever read

my father would be happy that i finallly developed some reading habit

thanks dear... i will continue soon... second part has been updated on page3

ya writers on this forum are doing a gr888 job... i myself have read some very gud fic last week... and actually they inspired me a lot to write one of my own...

😆 😆 and my dad is happy that i finally developed some habbit of writing... 😆

thanks once again...

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seems like this forum makes our parents happy too😆😆

maybe i'll start writing soon😆🤣

Originally posted by: smart sam

too good ud soon 😛

thanks dear...... i m updating right now.... i got time so i wrote a medium sized update.......

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Hi guys actually I got time so I thought I should update today itself…..
Enjoy the update….. actually not much present time in the update…. Update is mostly full of flash backs…. Sorry if u don't like them….

PART 3

13 YEARS AGO:

Lady: Naina kya kar rahi hai? Idhar aa cake kaat…
Naina: Maa…… Abhi ruko abhi Veer nahi aaya…..

Mrs. Ah: Naina beta guests ko aise wait nahi karate…… Tu jab tak cake nahi kaaategi tab tak khana bhi shuru nahi hoga…..

Naina: Nahi maa…. Mai Veer ke bina cake nahi katungi….. Vo aata hi hoga..
Mrs. Ah: Beta meri abhi unse baat Hui hai, unhe kuch jaruri kaam aa gaya hai… Vo late ho jayenge… ho sakta hai aaye hi nahi… dekh Navin to hai nay aha…. Chal aa ja…
Naina: Nahi maa…. Veer jarur aayega… mujhe pata hai… use pata hai mai uske bina cake nahin kaatungi….. Navin maa jab tak Veer nahi aayega mai cake nahi kaatungi…. Aap guests ko bolo ki vo log khana kha le mai baad mai cake kaatungi….
Mrs. Ah: Beta meri baat to sun
Navin interrupts his mom: Maa… rehno do… vo nahi maanegi mai jaanta hun vo veer ke bina kabhi cake nahi kaategi..

Meanwhile we see a little boy of age 13 pleading his mom and dad…
Boy: Mom plzzzz….. Mujhe wahan jaana hai…..
Lady: Nahi Raj…. Tumhari bua Ko beti Hui hai…. hame unke paas jaana hai……
Raj: Mom…. Agar mai nahi gaya to Mann cake nahi kaategi…. Plzzzz mom mujhe wahan le chaliye….
Mrs. Sh: Beta Raj lekin….
Mr. Shekhawat interrupts her and says: Veena… Raj ki baat maan lete hai…
Raj: yeeeeeeeeee………. Thanks dad….
Mr. Sh: Jaao jaane ke liye ready ho jao…
Raj goes to his room jumping and yelling….
Mrs. Sh: Ye aapne kya kiya…. Hame to aapki behen ke ghar jaana hai….
Mrs. Sh: Veena Maine bilkul thik kiya….. Dekho yahan Raj ki kya haalat thi…... Itna udaas Maine use kabhi nahi dekha…. Aur mujhe pata hai Naina ki bhi yahi haalat hai…..
Mrs. Sh: Aapko kaise pata?
Mr. Sh: Abhi Mr. Ah ka phone aaya tha… keh rahe the Naina cake nahi kaat rahi hai…. jid kar rahi hai ki Veer ke bina cake nahi kaategi….
Mrs. Sh: Lekin….
Mr. Sh: Hum aisa karte hai….. Raj ko unke ghar chodkar hospital chalet hai… waapas aate hue pick kar lenge… Dono bacche khush ho jayenge..

Mrs. Sh: Thik hai….

At Naina's home, we see Naina is still waiting at the gate
Mrs. Ah: Beta vo abhi tak nahi aaye… chal na…
Naina: Maa…. Nahi mujhe(just then she hears a very familiar voice singing)
Raj: Happy Birthday to you…..
Happy Birthday to you…..
Happy Birthday to dear duffer stupid chuhiya Mann…
Happy Birthday to you…..
Naina: VEEEEEEERRRRRRRRR…… she goes and hugs him very tight…

At this moment A tear drops down from Raj's eyes as he was remembering those sweet moments of his life and then he says Naina tum to kabhi mere bina cake bhi nahi kaata karti thi…. Aur aaj itni dur chali gayi ho…..

Naina: Itni der kyu lagayi… chalo chalke cake kaat the hai… sab guests wait kar rahe hai…..
Navin interrupts: Isse pehle to nahin aa rahe tha unka dhyan ab badi daya aa rahi hai Naina devi ko…. Sorry Naina chuhiya ko…..
Naina: BHAIIIIII………….
Raj: Mann….. tum cake kaat leti na….. Chalo ab paagal, chuhiya sab wait kar rahe hai…..
Naina: Tum paagal Veer….. Maine na to aaj tak tumhare bina cake na hi kaatungi…..

And at this moment a tear drops again but this time from Naina's eyes as she was also lost in those sweet memories and then she stands up and says: Sahi kaha tha maine captain shekhwat….. Mann tumhare bina kabhi cake nahi kaatati thi aur ab na hi kaategi kyuki Mann ab mar chuki hai….. ab bache hai to sirf tum aur mai Naina Singh Shekhawat…….
And In Raj's room…. He was ……….well…. Again lost somewhere….

11 years ago:

Mrs. Sh: Naina ka kya socha hai aapne bhaisaab……. Navin to yahin hamare saath rahega, Use army Mei Jo jaana hai……….

Mrs. Ah: Naina ko to hamne apne saath le jaane ka socha hai…. Vo doctor banna chahti hai….. Australia mei usko acchi facilities mil jaayengi…. Par Naina jaane ke liye tayyar nahi ho rahi hai…

Mrs. Sh: Aisa kyun??
Mrs. Ah: Tum to jaanti ho Veena ye teeno bacche bachpan se sath rahe hai… Naina ab apne Veer aur Bhai ko chodke nahi jaana chahti….

Mrs. Sh: Jaanti hun Sandhya…. Lekin mujhe lagta hai agar use koi samjha sakta hai to wo hai Raj…. Abhi vo bahar gaya hai aata hi hoga, tab mai usse baat karungi…. Lo aa gaya Raj… RAJJJ

We see a 15 yr. old boy entering the house
Raj: mom….. Mann aayi hai kya????? Maine unki car bahar khadi dekhi….

Mrs. Sh: Haan beta, lekin pehle meri baat suno……
Raj: Jaldi kahiye mom….
Mrs. Sh: Beta tum to jaante ho Mr. Ah Australia shift ho rahe hai….
Raj: Mom lekin Navin aur Mann to yahi rahenge Na……. (Hoping for positinve response)
Mrs. Sh: Nahi beta Navin to yahin rahegakyuki use bhi tumhari tarah army mei jaana hai… lekin Naina ko to Dr. Banna hai aur iske liye use Australia jaana hoga….
Raj(in shaking voice): Mom lekin Mann yahan rehkar bhi to Dr. ban sakti hai..

Mrs. Sh: Nahin beta.. Australia mei use kahin behter facilities milengi……
Raj (Holding his tears): To kya Mann yahan se chali jaayegi????

Mrs. Sh: Beta mai jaanti hun vo tumhari bahut acchi friend hai… lekin ye uske hi bhale ki baat hai… beta lekin hame tumhari madad chahiye…..
Raj (not able to say anything else): kya??

Mrs. Sh: Naina ko yahan se jaane ke liye manana hoga Raj….Vo maan nahi rahi hai…… Bol karega ye kaam apni dost ki bhalayi ke liye……
Raj (Mai Mann ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun chahe usse dur hi kyu na rehna pade)…..: Mann kahan hai????
Mrs. Sh: Tumhare room mei….

Raj goes there and as everyone expected he makes Naina ready……….

On the airport Mr. and Mrs. Ah were hugging their son Navin but our poor hero Raj was sitting all alone and not talking with anyone….. Naina sees this and goes towards him…..
Naina: Veer tum itne udaas kyu ho??? Tumne hi to mujhe jaane ke liye kaha tha…..
Raj: Mannnnn…… (in shaking voice) mai kaise reh paaunga tumhare bina and then he hugs her very tightly…..
And this was the first moment when their hearts were beating very fast for the first time but they don't have time to realize this or to even think about this… not now because Naina was going……

Naina: V… Veerrrr (crying)…… I don't want to go….. plzzzzzz…. Mujhe yahi rehna hai tumhare paas…………………..
Veer (holding tears): Nahi Mann tumhe jaana hoga….. apne liye na sahi to mere liye….. tumhe ek accha Dr. banna hoga….Karogi na mere liye itna Mann…….
Naina: Mai jaungi Veer……… Tumhare liye kuch bhi karungi………

Raj again hugs her and says: tumhe ek aur vaada karma hoga Mann…
Naina: Kya Veer?? (still hugging him)…..

Raj: Jab tak tum waapas apni padayi puri karke nahi aaogi hum na milenge, na phone pe baat karenge, na mail karenge aur na hi ek dusre ko dekhenge………..

Naina (parts from him in shock): WHATTTTT???? Lekin kyu Veer?????
Raj: Kyuki mai nahi chahta ki hum apni padayi se distract ho… hame apni puri concentration se padayi karni hogi…. Aur mujhe pata hai ki jab tak hum baat karte rahenge kabhi dhyan nahi de paayenge… bas kuch saal Mann fir ham hamesha ek dusre se milenge…. Par abhi hamari padayi important hai……Bas itna karlo Mann….. ….

Mann: I will do that Veer… But promise me ki meri padayi ke baad tum mujhse dur nahi jaaoge aur na hi mujhe jaane ke liye kahoga…….

Raj: Promise……. Promise Mann….. Bas ab sirf tumhare aane ka intezaar rahega……… take care Mann……. See you again…….. ab jao tumhare plain ki announcement ho gayi hai……..

Mann: you also take good care of yourself Raj…. And I will be back soon…. See you………….

And then she goes…………….. but not forever………………But with a hope that they will meet again………….

At this moment Raj opens his eyes and says Mann tum jab pehle gayi thi tumne waapas aane ka waada kiya tha… par jab dubara gayi tab………………………………………………………. And again lost….

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In Naina's room she also was remembering her old days and says Kash Raj mai kabhi tumse nahi milti dubara and then picks up her phone and dials a number……

Person on phone: Hallo……….
Naina: Uncle (in shaking voice)
BC: NAINNAAAAAAAAA……………..

BC: Meri bacchi kaisi hai tu??? Kahan pe hai ab….. kya kar rahi hai….. milne kab aayegi…. Tujhse mile kayi din ho gaye……..

Naina smiles a little at his reaction and says
Uncle aap ho aur bilkul baccho ki tarah behave kar rahe ho….. mai thik hun…. Aur abhi yahi goa military hospital mai hun……

BC: Beta teri bahut yaad aati hai aur milne ka mann kar raha hai…..

Naina: Uncle mai jaldi hi wahan aa jaungi… Bas aapse kuch puchna tha….

BC: KYAAAAAAAAA????? Tum aane waali ho kab? Kahan? Kaise? Aur kya puchna hai????
Naina: Uncle kya mujhe aapki academy mei koi job mil sakta hai???

BC: KYA??? Tum KMA aana chahti ho… lekin kyu….. Ek mamuli job kyu karma chahti ho apna hospital chodke????

Naina: Kuch jaruri kaam hai….

BC (in stern voice): kahin ye kaam Navin se related to nahin???? Dekho Naina aisa hai agar to mai tumhe samjhana chahta hun ki Navin ke case ki aur chaanbeen mat karo…. Vo 1 saal mere sath hi is academy mei tha aur mujhe yakin hai ki uska triggers churaane mei koi haath tha….

Naina (shouting): UNCLEEE…… Bhayia gaddar nahi the…….. mujhe pata hai…. mujhe sirf ye janna hai kya aap meri kuch madad kar sakte hai wahan aane mei…. Mujhe pata hai Captain Shekhawat bhi wahan pe hai…….

BC: Beta…. Kyu apni jaan khatre Mei daalna chahti ho…. Thik hai mai koshish karunga…. Yahan academy Mei kuch dino se ek pshyc. Bhejne ki baat chal rahi hai… mai tumhe recommend karne ki koshish karunga…. Lekin mujhe lagta hai iske liye ek Dr. ko chun kiya gaya hai… koi Dr. Mishra hai… to mai kuch waada nahi kar sakta……

Naina: Accha aap Kanchanjunga Military Hospital mai baat kijiye…. Wahan jarur kuch mil jaayega…. Mai bhi koshish karungi…….

BC: Thik hai beta….. kam se kam tum yahan to aaogi…… par beta mei tumhe Navin ke case se dur rehne ko hi kahunga… aur mujhe lagta hai ki tumhare dimag mei kuch chal raha hai…. warna tum yahan kabhi nahi aati vo bhi tab jab rajveer bhi yahan hai…….

Naina: Uncle mai aapse baad mei baat karungi……. Aap KMH (Kanchanjunga Military Hospital) mei baat karke rakhiyega……….

BC: Thik hai beta……….. mai tumhe 1 hafte mei phone karke bataunga kuch ho sakta ho to…… but I think chances for KMH are more likely than KMA. But you can stay in KMA as you are relative of the principal and wife of one of the faculty member…….. thik hai beta????

Naina: Bilkul thik hai… (mujhe bas KMA mei rehna hai kisi tarah)…… Bye uncle and thanks………
BC: anytime beta……. Take care…. Bye………and hungs the phone…….

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Naina: KMA mai aa rahi hun apni Bhai ko begunaah sabit karne aur us insaan se badla lene jisne bhai aur mera sabse accha dost hote hue bhi mere hi bhai ko jaan se maar daala………………………………..Captain Shekhawat (mind it no Veer) mai tumse apne bhai ki maut ka badla jarur lungi par apne bhai ko begunaah sabit karne ke baad……….

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Raj: Badla to tum mujhse le rahi ho Mann mujhse dur jaakar…….. vo din jab tum yahan aayi thi 1 mahine ke liye mere sabse behtareen din the… uske baad jab tum apni padayi puri karke aayi tab se kuch accha nahi hua hai mere sath kuch bhi nahi………… he then again lost….. but this time in the memories of that 1 month………….

4 years ago:
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End of part 3
Uff……….. Again very long part……….. part was mostly flashback I know…. But don't worry ye flashback bas ab ek aur update mei hi hoga…. Then we will continue with the main story with Naina in KMA ofcourse… but till then keep guessing whether she will work in KMA or KMH???

B bye……
Take care…..
Luv ya…..
Sheenu….. 😊 😊

awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.

kool.. when is the next update?

dat was awesome part.............

updt soon

nice part 👏 .cont soon.........