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Posted: 17 years ago
to jaldi do na di, aaj denge ya kal?
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow luvly yaar to jaldi cont karna
we all r waitng fr ur nxt super duper
prt.........luv uuuuuuuuuuuu
tccccccccccc cyaaaaaaa tom.......
gudnght nd swtdrmz............
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: neha28

hey hina..

awesome update...kassh u get hired as a DMG creative..
dukh ke din to aaye ge hi nahi..

as for suggestions...id luv to see atul interrogating ridz...tht wud b hilarious..

and plzzz continue yaar..
waise i kno how mcuh comments mean n after every readin i drop a comment for u..becuz i jus luv ur FF sooo much..
now i dun go anywher in the forum n jus come straight here..

itz seeriously been sooo addictive
👏

kaash standing ovation ka emoticons hota to woh bhi deyti 😆

but i abousltely luv ur FF n no doubt we all want u to continue sooooo plz do yaar..

i luv the hug in end..tht was very sweet... 😳 😳
luv ya n ur FF tonzzzz

neha 😃

Hey Neha,

Thanks so much sweety,that was really sweet of u

Mujhe standing ovation nahi chahiye yaar,bas tum sab ke pyaar bhare comments hi chahiye

I wish Creatives hum se kuch ideas le aur AR to kabhi juda na kare

Thanks for your comments

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome Update!! 👏 As usual!.. It just keeps getting better and better.. sooo cute!.. Looking forward to the next part and what they plan to do. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok guys abhi mai adhe ghante me update doongi,I 'll try and make it really long isliye 1/2ghanta keh rahi hoo,kisi ko agar jaldi hai to sorry
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Posted: 17 years ago
Kal padh lena,
So ab lo update
I hope I live upto all your expectations!
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Posted: 17 years ago
nahi koi jaldi nahi hai, intezaar kar lenge
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thinking..............


Armaan says Riddhima!

She is now lost in Armaan's arms and doesn't want to be disturbed,even by Armaan

and says Hmmmm?

He thinks may be Riddhima didn't like being disturbed
and says kuch nahi!and smiles because he knows Riddhima is so loving this closeness

They go quiet and stay like that for a little while to enjoy that moment thoroughly ,then

Riddhima says after a while
Armaan tum mujhse itna pyar karte ho!
Ki apni galtiya bhi maan gaye
aur un par tum pachta bhi rahe ho

Armaan tumne mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya ki tum
itna hurt hue meri baaton se
aur ek dam se Sanjeevani chod ke chale gaye

Tumhe pata hai jab tum gaye,tab
poori Sanjeevani jaise bejaan ho gayi thi
Kisi ka bhi mann nahi lag raha tha apne kaam me
Anjali di, Atul, Rahul aur Muskaan and she stops

and goes Armaan ek baat poochoo?

He goes unwantedly hmmm?

Poocho!

Tum jab Muskaan ke ghar gaye they uske boyfriend banke
to

He goes ha !to?

To jab tumhe dar nahi laga !,
waha agar wo tumhari sagai ya may be shadi karwa dete to?

He goes aisa kabhi nahi hota!
Agar wo sab aisa chahte bhi to mai kuch aisa hone hi nahi deta
Mai to waha jaana hi nahi chahta tha

Jab maine Muskaan ki halat dekhi,
Aur agar wo uske boyfriend ko uski marti hui dadi se nahi milati to ......
He goes mai nahi chahta tha ki Muskaan apna career ek choti si baat ke liye barbaad kare
Isliye na chahte hue maine uski madad karne ka decide kiya

Aur kyuki wo nahi chahti thi ke Sanjeevani me kisi ko bhi pata chale ke mai uske sath jaa raha hoo
Maine tumse ye baat chupayi
aur apne aap ko itni badi mushkil me daal diya

She gets off his chest
Looks into his eyes and says
Armaan mai tumpe shak nahi kar rahi lekin
Jab maine tumhe Muskaan ke sath us raat club me dekha to mai bardaasht nahi kar payi Armaan
Mai bohot toot gayi thi
Mujhe laga ki tum bhi.........

He goes shhhhhhhhhhhh!
Riddhima ,mai tumhare ilawa kabhi kisi ke baare me soch bhi nahi sakta
Aur Muskaan,wo to meri friend hai
maine usko hamesha dost maana hai

Lekin tum jab aisa mujhe par doubt karti ho na
to mai samajh nahi pata kuch bhi
aur mai apna gussa control nahi kar paata
Jab tumne mujhse kaha ki mujhe sahi aur galat ka fark nahi pata,jab mujhe apni duniya bikharti nazar ayi

Kehte hai ki

Pyaar ki fitrat hoti hai

waqt ke sath aur mazbooth honey ki

Magar hamara rishta har guzarte pal ke sath bikharta nazar aa raha tha

Aur mujhme himmat nahi thi ki mai usey aur samet sakoo!


aur isliye maine tumse door hone ka faisla kiya ....

A long silence to overcome that bad phase of their love



Now to lighten the mood and ease the pressure of the conversation he says

Lekin tumne mujhe wapis bula hi liya and he smiles to thank her
Tum jab Kasauli ayi,tab mujhe ek hope nazar ayi is relationship me

She goes Armaan ,maine Kasauli aney ke liye pata hai sabse cheating ki
He goes what?
then she explains the whole chits story in a very exciting way!

He goes waah ,waah basket
Tum mujhse bohot kuch seekh rahi ho

and they both laugh

He says basket tum bhi kya purani baatein leke baith gayi,
Hum yaha kuch aur sochne wale they na?

Chalo ek tarah se acha hua ke humne apni bachi kuchi misunderstandings bhi clear kar dali

ab koi problem nahi hogi,I hope
and touches her forehead with his
and closes his eyes

He goes Riddhima ,ab hamare beech koi tension nahi hogi
Hum ache dost aur ache wo banengey ,she goes kya and smiles with her eyes closed 'coz she knows what he means


aur hamesha aise hi rahengey! and they hug

She agrees and starts rubbing her head against his in a loving way

Aur ha basket,tumhe jab acha lagey
mera matlab hai jab bhi tumhara mann ho to
Tum mujhe....

Kya Armaan?

Tum mujhe..
Mujhe kiss kar lena..............
and he kisses her cheek and gets up to play some more basketball

She blushes and gets up to join him

They love playing basketball!

And we love them to stay in love always
nai?
I hope u all liked this part
I know I'm stretching the plan bit,lekin since u all like AR scenes,I give more and more to u
May be next will be the planning part
depends on the comments
so keep commenting,a line or two wud be great


Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
cho chweet pt di...i loved their face 2 face clear talk...n yea their closeness too...lovly cutie part like always
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing prt hina di grt prt

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