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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Neha and Mona and All who have replied
I was just gonna logout,but when I saw your comments and request to continue I thot I don't wanna disappoint u
Thanks for giving me such beautiful comments
I will give u an update now
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
I think everyone else is so drugged up with my previous updates that they forgot their night dose 😆
Ok lemme give u the last update for today,it will be there in some time
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww...
u make me sooooo happy..
🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago

Basket ball scene contdd.............

Both are enjoying scoring and
keep teasing each other
and try their best to beat the latest basket

Then Riddhima gives a tired look and asks for time out
She still feels weak from the fever she had the night before
Armaan sees this and quickly grabs her,thinking she might fall

He goes Riddhima tum thik ho?

She goes ha Armaan,mai bilkul thik hoo,bas lagta hai wo kal temperature tha na ,to weakness abhi thodi baki hai

He gets all worried and says

Acha chalo baith jao
Tumhe yaha ana hi nahi chahiye tha
Thoda aur araam kar leti to acha hota
Tumko apna nahi to mera to khayal hona chahiye
Tumhe halka sa bhi kuch hota hai na to meri to jaan hi nikal jati hai
He is now holding Riddhima sideways
with her arm round his waist and his arm round hers

He has a worried and anxious look
Riddhima notices Armaan's worry and says
Armaan!
Itna pyar karte ho mujhse?
He now stands opposite her and holds her face with his hands and says
Tum soch bhi nahi sakti utna pyar karta hoo!Riddhima!

She goes mai bhi Armaan!

They hug each other tightly,as to prove how much they love each other
and then,she loosens her grip on him and

She goes mai thik hoo ab Armaan,bas thoda sa thak gayi thi
I am ok now

He sighs
and says U sure?
acha ,mai tumko ghar chod deta hoo

She goes thanks !

He takes her to the car and opens the back door for her and asks her to lie down

She says nahi Armaan meri tabiyet bilkul thik hai,
mujhe kuch nahi hua hai
I feel fine

She then opens the front passenger door and sits in the car

He likes the idea of her sitting in the front with him and smiles to himself and sits in the car

and drives off

While driving he says
Are u sure u are feeling better?
She goes ha Armaan!don't worry!

He goes fine
Then he puts some music on

It plays

Hamein tumse pyar kitna,
ye hum nahi jaante ,
magar jee nahi sakte ...
tumhare bina!

They both feel the depth of the song and Riddhima touches and holds Armaan's hand on the gearstick

He gives one of those -Is this for real? looks
They both hold hands and listen to the beautiful song
and Armaan lipsyncs the lyrics of the song
as if he is singing it to Riddhima
She smiles lovingly with a thank u face!

They reach the house in a short while

He parks up and says lo tumhara ghar agaya

Mai andar tak tumhe chodne chaloo?he asks

She goes nahi Armaan ,mai chali jaoongi!

He asks
Kya hua Riddhima ?tum dar to nahi gayi ke shayad nani ya tumhare dad pooche ke tum mere sath kya kar rahi thi?

She goes nahi Armaan aisi baat nahi hai

Mujhe unko ab batana hi hai humare rishtey ke bare me
she says silently

He says kya kaha?

She says nahi kuch nahi
He had heard her and says
Wow basket,tum ek din me kitni baatein seekh gayi meri!
and laughs jokingly

She goes ha ab tumhe takkar deni hai to tumhi se sekhoongi na tumhe harane ke tactics

He goes ha zaroor seekho,lekin mujhe harana itna asaan nahi hai Miss basket ji

She says dekh lengey

He goes I wud love to see

He says ab ghar me jaane ka irada hai ya nahi?

She says ha jana to hai ,lekin darti hoo ke Anjali di ghar me ghuste hi kitne sawaal karengi

Nani aur papa ne to mujhe zyada kuch nahi poocha
aur holi thi isliye mind nahi kiya mera bhang peena

Lekin di to mujhe apne sawalo se paagal kar degi
Mai kya karoo Armaan?

He goes hmm kya kar sakti ho tum?

Then he says bas tum ghar me jane ke fauran baad so jana
phir Anjali tum se kuch nahi pooch payegi,good idea na?

She goes No bad idea!

Aaj raat bach gayi to kya
Kal poori Sanjeevani me meri bevakoofi ke charchey hongey
Aur mai waha sabko kaise face karoongi?

He goes tum zyada tension mat lo,
abhi abhi tum thik hui ho
Kal ki kal dekhenge
Tum ab jao aur araam karo

Mai bhi kuch sochta hoo
Aur hum kal subah jaldi milengey
to discuss our plan of action to deal with everyone at Sanjeevani


He goes
Mujhe to abhi se Dr keerti ,the hitler ,Shubhankar sir,Atul and Angie aur Rahul and Muskaan and lovelyji ki khatarnaak sawal bhari nazre mujhe aur tumhe ghoorti hui nazar aa rahi hai!

Mai so bhi nahi paoonga!
Kya kahoonga mai sab ko ke Riddhima mujhse pyar karti hai aur mai usse !
Aur usne kal apne pyar ka iqraar kiya tha aap sabke saamne?

She nahi Armaan mujhe to abhi apne pyar to sabit karna hai
Jab hum dono is rishtey me comfortable honge ,tab hi hum sabko batayengey
Abhi ke liye hame koi na koi bahana banana hi hoga

Tum mere sath ho na?

He goes hamesha Riddhima and kisses her forehead

She goes thanks again Armaan

When he was just gonna say,don't thank me

She goes ghar tak lift ke liye!

and opens the door to go out

and walk towards the house backwards while looking at him and

She gives him a flying kiss

and he pretends to catch the kiss and kisses his hand with the kiss

and says


I love u Riddhima
I love u!...........


Now they'll have to face everyone at Sanjeevani without a plan,or may be he might come up with something
after all he's gonna be thinking all night
I hope he's not late for his work!

I think this is my longest update,tum log na mujhe itna appreciate karogey,to mujhe tum sab ko long update dene hi padengey na?
Guys plz reply
with all your lovely comments
I am waiting ..............
Good night!


Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Amazing update!!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!!! 👏 Soooo cute!
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Posted: 17 years ago
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!
Sab reply karna ok?
AMi jab subah aoo online to
mujhe tum san ki achi achi comments miley to kya baat ho!
I hope aisa ho
I betta go now,its too late
Take care all
and sweet dreams!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hinaa............

i sooooo luv u yaar..
i cant tell u nuff how happy u make me feel rite now..

*huggies*
🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
HINA YAAR KYA KAR DITTA mere jaane ke baad 2 updats
yaar vryy guuuuuud yaar awesom again wonderful prt yaar lvd it their bb nd thnk thy cleard all d misunderstndngs yaar now thy wll gv excuses wht ridz did maza ayega thy all wll bombarded ques on thm baht maza ayega nd now wht wll thy do it ws soooo fnny.............amazng..................................... ..........superb...............
cont soooooooooooooon
luv yachna 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
heena di wonderful
now i am eager to knw thier plan of action
di, ur updates really makes me fell better specailly due to the current track
love u for this
🤗
plzzzzz continue
love
sayli
Edited by saylithegreat - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks
Neha ,Yachna and Sayli

I luv u all too
Ab mai update aur bohot sare replies ke baat hi doongi
so better get replying guys
Don't u want more of this?

I wud love to give u more,lekin plz reply karo to

Sorry for being so demanding!

Lekin kya kare bidoo apun aaj kal demand me hai!LOLOLOL!

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago

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