Only My Beloved.. By Ranbir written by me

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Only My Beloved.. is a poem by me Naina a.k.a SugaNain.. Inspired by Sara and other ppl here who are soo talented in their Fan-Fiction writing.. and poetry.. So here is ...

Only My Beloved!

Her skin feels light like lavender lillies,

She had bathed below a baby's basonet,

Youthful face fastens in her fur,

Releasing ever-flowing radiant rays,

Glimmering in the eyes of the many gorgeous,

Many males must have been magnified.

She may be a goddess, perhaps even a Devi,

Awed by the embodiment, no replica could be found,

She is immensely laudable for her layers,

Who is this grand, gorgeous grace?

Soulfully, shimmering swiftly,

Depth of Bounty full of thy Beauty,

She gazes over the ocean front….

Yes.. It is her.. my beauteous wife

She blends in the earth,

She may be the daughter…

Natural in her defining aura.

Men can stand and look at her for days,

Yet, my maiden knows she's for my "eyes" only…

She turns and smiles at him… they are sitting on the warm sand…

He Puts his hand on her tummy.. Gives a kiss.

"Thank You for giving me the world's special gift…. Mrs. Kanya Nanda!…"

Ranbir looks deeply in her eyes and they passionately kiss

While the sun rises.. and the beginning of their wonderful family life… Begins!



If you Leave Comments! I will post Kanya's Point of View!





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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow 😭 😭 😭 <-- tears of happiness

I am speechless naina.. thats how good it was.. i could actually feel what he was feeling.. and for someone to see someone that way is a big feat for their love and i am glad you have given that achievement to our favorite couple 👏

p.s i don't know how i inspire you but if that means more work like this i can't wait

this is for u and ur poem dear

eik bar bhi na hum ankhen band karsake
eik pal mein hi hum apne sansen kho bhetein
eik second bhi na laga ke hum is chote
se pal main shamil ho sake
jis pai hum mar mit bhete
~sara
Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww sucha a sweet poem. ur a really good writer
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank You!!😊😊 soo much everyone.. My grandfather also inspired me to write this.. He wrote great poems in English.. When I was sitting down.. With a terrible cough.. I decided to get into my intimate self.. Hope you all enjoyed it! And will try to write more... Gracias!😃 I cried writing this poem.. Sara's poetry also inspired me..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please Leave Comments: And what you want to see in the next poem!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was amazingly awsome... i truely loved it... good job... ur a great writer.. keep it up...

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