dill chura liya AR PART 15[pg81 ]28/05 - Page 45

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rani1224patel

hey continue soon na.... 😕

hey rani thanks for ur comment and iam very sorry for keeping u wait i will definetely continue today

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey you are continuing today...yyeeeaahhh....i wud die only if i had to wait a lil more...i reali luv this ff of yours...it is too guuudd!!!!!!!do pm me wen the next part is updated!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

hey you are continuing today...yyeeeaahhh....i wud die only if i had to wait a lil more...i reali luv this ff of yours...it is too guuudd!!!!!!!do pm me wen the next part is updated!!!

ya pragati iam doing it now thanks a lot for ur lovely comments and waiting for my ff i would love to pm u

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Posted: 17 years ago

FRIENDS FIRST OF ALL MANY THANKS FOR UR LOVELY AND BEAUTIFUL COMPLIMENTS THEY MADE MY DAY

precap: that man who is acting as ridz father is arman and arman says her all the flash backs and how he came to know about it and ridz is asking to tell the cnersation between arman and nisha in her late dads house

PART 13

ar: ok

ri: continue soon i cant wait

ar[seeing her anxiety naughtily]: hey jaan me bohut thak gaya hoon mujhe kuch chaahiye continue karne se pehle😉

ri: ok tum yaha ruko me jaake kuch laata hoon😛

ar: kya ??? iam not talking about food .

ri: phir😕

ar: wo mujhe wo chahiye and points towards his lips🤪

ri[understood but she is teasing} : ye wo kya hai mujhe samajh me nahi aayi and gives an innocent look

ar: hey bhagwan ye meri g.f ko ye bhi samajh me nahi aayi itni budhu ko meri g.f omg how to bear her 😉😆

ri[gets angry ]: kya kaha tum me budhu hoon abhi bathata hoon kaun budhu he 😡

saying this she wents closer to him while arman is smiling at his victory she really goes closer to him and she is also showing her anger😡 and she will pull him towards her and gives him a quick kiss on his lips and arman though in shock 😲kisses her back he kisses her for 2 min while ridz is melting then she will get back to his senses and moves back and blushes down☺️ and feels shame of what she is done her face shows mixed reactions

ar[understood what she is feeling]: oye hoye mujhe maalum nahi he ki tum mujhse itne pyaar karthe ho😃

ri: tho tum mujhse nahi karthe😕

ar: kya

ri: pyaar😳

ar: pyaar???? ye kya hota he 😕

ri: 😡

ar: laughs me tho tumse ishq,mohabut aur mujhse zyaada pyaar kartha hoon aur sach me tummare bina nahi jee saktha hoon i love u😊

ri: runs and hugs him🤗 and says i love u ❤️she really feels like to cry😭

ar[understoods she is getting emotional]: chi chi dad se romance koi dheklega aur mera izzat omg 😆 log mujhe kya kahenga ki me apne beti se romance kar rahi hoon

ri: arman tum kabhi nahi sudhar sakthe😛

ar: tho tum mere jaise sudhar jao😉

ri: arman ab ye sab chodo aur story continue karo

ar: any thing for u princess but first leave me [she is still hugging him 😆]

ri: leaves him and they will sit on the bed

ar : starts telling

do u remember the confession day that only yesterday i went out in the morning and i met our gang along with padma aunty and i said them iam going to meet nisha as ridz dad and they all wished me and i went to ur dads house and took chabi from neighbours house as padma aunty already informed them they gave me chabi and i went in and changed my self wearing mask and ur dads clothes

u know u will wonder what happened i went to his room and i found many photos of urs and padma auntys photos and there was a will saying that his whole property belongs to u and there was a letter for padma aunty saying

got in accident and i was in coma for many years after gaining cncious i came to know that i wont be living fr many days so i thought not to talk to u if i get close to u th

dear padma,

i know u will be very angry on me but i dont know whether i will be alive when u r reading this letter i didnot want to leave u and my child like that but when i realised my mistake it was too late i came to know that ridz is adopted i thought to come and apologise u but when i was coming there i felt dizzy and fell unconcious and my car en u will feel sorrow for my death as my child is safe and is getting educated well in shashanks hand iam leaving this world happily but i missed u and my child badly

PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR ALL MY MISTAKES

rajeev

ri[ crying very badly]: i missed u dady i love u i love u dad

ar consoles her and she calms down after some time and he continues his story

i felt bad when i read that letter and i heard a dorr knock so i changed my expressions and opened the door it was nisha

ni: namesthe uncle

ar: nameshe beta kya baath he

ni: wo aap se kuch baath karni he

ar: andhar aao beti and she comes in and they will sit on sofa

ar: bolo kya baath he

ni: uncle wo ridz bahut dhuk me he shashank uncle is not treating her like a daughter and i came to know frm him that she is ur daughter and shashank uncle is treating her like a servent even in the hospital and says some wicked words

ar[ acting angry]: meri ridhima ko aise dhek raha he me usk nahi chodunga aur me meri beti ko lekar jaonga

ni[smiles at her victory]: ha uncle jaldi kariye ab shashank uncle bhi nahi he ghar me ye aap ko asli mauka he can u come now to anjies house we will disscuss there

ar:ok

they will leave to anjies house

ni: hey anji this is ridz father

anj: hi uncle

ar[smiles]: hi meri beta kaha he

anj[feels bad that ridz is not there na dshe gets confused what to say]: wo uncle mere papa ne usko bahut wrk dhiya he bechara wahi hospital me he

ar: oh aise baath he wo kab thak aayenge

anj: u come in evening uncle she will be there

ar: theek he

anj: uncle small request u should not say to ridz that we did it

ni: we will act as if we dont know pls u also do the same

ar: dont worry i will take care

anj and ni: thanks

and i left from there

ri[laughs]: tho papa jhi aap anjie ko kaha ki mujhe nahi bataonge aur mujhe sab batadhiya

ar: arey beti me kya karu jab mujhe itni kubsoorath beti itni achi gift[he will touch his lips] dhekar poochi tho???

ri: blushes down

when arman was about to say something alarm rings

ri: omg arman we didnot sleep and we should go to sanjeevani

ar[sees worry in her eyes]: dont worry sweet heart iam there with u hum keerthi mam se permission lekar late jaayenge and he phones to keerthi and says her that ridz is not feeling well keerthi understood their situation and said them to come at 1:30 arman happily agreed and said that to ridz

ri: chalo acha hua ab we will go to sleep

ar[didnot like t say no} ok

they will go to sleep ofcourse on same bed but they dont touch each other

precap:

entry of new inturns and shock of anand

nisha has to go lonavali

anand,atul[new intern], rajan in same house

anjali in depression

THANKS FOR READING

silent readers pls d comment ur only comment makes my day

sorry for short update i will continue it tommorow night

Edited by urmila_17 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏
wah wah klyaaaaaa story thi
wow atul as new intern n one girl for anand i know who
very very nice part
n AR lip kiss wah wah 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow yaar
AR kissing nd tht too started by ridz
it ws awesome, nd also sleepin on same bed without touchin each other,
it ws so lovely tht arman acting as a father nd tellin baap beti se romance nahi karte
i jst luved dis prt
pls continue soon
eagerly waiting for yur sweet prt
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ash_rajat00

👏
wah wah klyaaaaaa story thi
wow atul as new intern n one girl for anand i know who
very very nice part
n AR lip kiss wah wah 👏

thanks a lot ash ur cmments really give me a lot of encouragement and ya me too waiting for atuls entry and yaar i know that u know who is that girl

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Posted: 17 years ago
awww
dat was sooooo nce
luved it
gd job
updte soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: patem031

wow yaar
AR kissing nd tht too started by ridz
it ws awesome, nd also sleepin on same bed without touchin each other,
it ws so lovely tht arman acting as a father nd tellin baap beti se romance nahi karte
i jst luved dis prt
pls continue soon
eagerly waiting for yur sweet prt
👏

thanks a lot dear i really appreciate ur comments thanks a lot for ur encouragement i will cntinue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

thanks a lot swansea 😳

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