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Posted: 19 years ago
hey fanx everyone for liking my story 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Farah & Sawera nice parts....... 👏 👏 👏

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farah grt part.......... 😊 👏 👏
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aray koi toh continue karoooooooooooo
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farah welcome back good work
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oh sorry 4 again late comments............
Sawera very nice part......after a long time u continue............ 👏
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Surbhi u r just rocking..................... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Surbhi .... A love story was mindblowing ...
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Surbhi this part, It's just superb, Wonderful.... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

ACTION ATTRACTION!!!

(You guys still haven't thought of a name, I think I'll go for Harpy's- Love under Pressure Cooker)

PART-2

Thanks for the appreciation, it was my adrenaline… and see, here's the second part already… BTW… this story will take some time to set in, coz I haven't decided a lot of things as yet, dedicated to Harpy and her 'PRESSURE COOKER' suggestion J

Link to part 1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=88752&PN =1&TPN=938

Inside ACP Kashish's cabin:

K: there were scores of media men outside the community centre when the oath taking ceremony was taking place, as the bombs exploded, some of them were quick enough to record everything in their cameras, sabhi private TV channels ye broadcast kar chuke hain which makes the issue all the more serious… but I have an exclusive 3 hour security recording jo hamare department main Sergeant Angad ne kii hai… he's…

S: the camera expert, forgery ho, koi false photos, videos… he's your expert… the best in India… please proceed…

K: right… (says Kashish, impressed yet annoyed… thinking: 'kitna sadoo hai') so as I was saying… this video is very helpful… at least that's what I think… tou, I would suggest kii aap…

S: tum…

K: jii?

S: mujhe aap nai pasand… please call me tum… no formalities when I'm around…

K: jii… mera matlab hai haan, tou tum dekh lo… they'll be helpful…

S: right… so what are we waiting for? Those terrorists to get out of India???

K: NO… it's right on…

They watch the video, in the meanwhile…

Tushaar to Kamal (the security personnel, he's in charge of who comes and leaves, everyone INCLUDING Kashish has to report to him- it's a rule, and he's NOT a customary 'chokiidaar')

T: main zara base par ja raha hoon…

K: kyu?

T: matlab kya kyu? DIG aaya hai… Kashish ne kaha thaa kii helicopter ready rakhoon… usko air view karana hai naa bombing site kaa… I'll get it ready…

K: please sign here…

After the video has ended…

K: tou kuch help milli…

S: (lights a cigarette, it's Dunhill Hard- dunno about India but it's a cool brand here, please put up with me) background pata chala… kii blast key pehle kya circumstances thay… kahan hain ye Mr. Angad Kapoor? I want to talk to him…

K: just a second

K: (on the intercom) Angad… meray cabin main aao… pronto…

After 30 seconds… KNOCK, KNOCK…

K: come in…

Enters another dashing guy… Angad- (Iqbal Khan yaar!)

K: please sit… Angad, Sujal tumse kuch baat karna chahta hai… Sujal…

S: Angad ye video tou kamal ka hai… do me a favor now, iis video main jiis jiis kii shakal nazar aati hai… usko still karo, and give those images to Arjun, I want each and everyone's bio- data, sab kuch… get me?

A: roger that!

S: good… ab bina time limit tou kaam ka maza nai aaey ga naa… you have 1 hour, then give Arjun 3… that makes 4 hours… I want the data in this cabin after 4 hours… any questions?

A: no…

S: good get to work…

Angad leaves…

S: ab main voh site dekhna chahta hoon…

K: Tushaar is ready with the chopper… follow me please…

IN THE HELICOPTER…

There are three people… Tushaar- the pilot and Sujal & Kashish are seated behind…

S: driver… plane uraao…

T: WHAT??? (he's shocked… even Kash is looking at Sujal)

S: (laughs) just kidding guys… I meant… Tushaar, chopper urao… get me now?

K to S: we're doing some serious work here… I would sincerely appreciate if you cut the crap… NO JOKES… okay?

Sujal just laughs in reply…

They fly over the site for half an hour… finally Sujal says on the microphone

S: Tushaar, is there a helipad for you to land on nearby?

T: I need 10 minutes to do that, but if you want to go to the site, you'll need transport, do you want me to call the HQ?

S: do that…

After they've landed…

Kashish and Sujal take the land cruiser to go to the cordoned off community centre ruins

There is police everywhere… but everyone reckons Kashish so they're let in instantly… they're wearing masks and gloves once they've entered the NO-GO zone…

They look around then leave for their office…

In the meanwhile Sujal interrogates a few who're concerned and also jokes around standing on what was left of the ruined podium:

S: main iis desh ka aik aur sevak neta, ye vada karta hoon kii, Shimla valon ko meri taraf se koi takleef nai hogi… jaante ho kyu?

The cops standing around shout out: KYU?

S: kyunki main takleef dainey key liay bachoon ga hii nahii!

All the cops laugh, while Kashish says: nonsense!!!

And leaves…

Sujal looks at her and says: bilkul sadoo hai!

Back in the office, they're alone in Kashish's cabin having coffee when he gives her a tin of cookies, as she opens it, a doll comes out of it, it was a trick box… she's surprised and scared, Sujal laughs, she grits her teeth:

K: mazaak!... tumhaare liye tou har baat mazaak hai… I can't work with you…

And leaves, when Sujal holds her hand from behind, pulls her close to him, they're very close, and she can feel his breath on her face, and he can feel her on his… then Sujal removes the idle strands of hair from her face and says…

S: tumhara problem kya hai?... kyu tumhain khushi se darr lagta hai?... zindagii se… hasne se darr lagta hai?... manaa kii ham bohot serious mission par hain… par kya thora hasne hasaane se mera professionalism kam hua???… tou tumhara kyu hoga?... get a life…

Kashish gets free from his hold and says: mujhe kissi cheez se darr nai lagta… aur tum meri zindagii ke baare main jaante hii kya ho?... badey aaey hasne hasaane valey…

And she leaves

Sujal: (to himself) jaanta tou nai hoon, par ab lagta hai kii jaan na padey ga… (caresses a few flowers in a vase) in phoolon sii komal ho tum… Kashish… attraction… khichaav… anti- crime branch main???... amazing!!! (then after a moment of thought) Sujal Garewal… mission main ladki kay peechay???... disgusting!!!... (but then) agar voh Tushaar kii nai meri hotii tou???... (then again) hoti kyaa???... meri hai… she's mine… ALL mine!!!... sorry Mr. Pundit… tum koi pundit kii beti dhoodh lo!!! (laughs)

TO BE CONTINUED…

Please comment…

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Posted: 19 years ago
just mindblowing....part..natz it was 2 gud... 👏

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