Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 673

atlast u rite the next part of KTH dutiii........tht'z gr8 but kashish nai sujal ko aisa kyun kaha 😭 😭 😭

HAPY EID MUBARAK TO ALL OF U IN ADVANCE...........

hey nice story 'Action Attraction' maza aaya...
& KTH..2 good going except Kashish duffer...
Yaar kya bolti hai...Mere Piyush...wat yaar she is out her mind... 😡
She Doesn't deserve Sujal....

nats ..... loved ur new concept ..... 😆 only ONE slap for tushar per episode ..... increase the amount 😆 ... title is very catchy ... hats of to harpy .... 👏 ..... please continue the marvelous work 😳

Farah ... WELCOME BACK 😳

missed you loads ....
KTH duitti was mindblowing .....
except why does Piyush have to bring his manhoos saaya back after so so many years 🤢 mujhe laga after his death he was buried so deep beanth the ground that wapas aane ka to sawal he nahi utha ...... 😆
other than that keep up the great work 👏

kaisay kahoon was brilliant 👏 ..
keep up the fantastic work .....

SUN .... what happened to ur story ....... 😃

WELL GUYS CONTINUING 'A LOVE STORY'
RECAP: sujal gets to know abt the truth and kashish is alive
S-dr woh theek toh hojayegi naa
DR-well pata nahin we cant say anything u have to have faith in god.....her skull is badly damaged and operation ke baad hi kuch pata chalega and waise bhi i think u shud be thankful to god as till now she is also alive otherwise unhone toh pure full proof plan banaye the upar jaane ke it was such a terrible accident and it is just a miracle of god that she is now in a hospital
AK-dr who brought her here
DR-actually one of our ambulance was witnessing a problem in its engine and soo to check that out its driver went to shimla........coming back he used the downward road of the rig valley which was then blocked after the landslide....and there along the roadside he saw kashish's body and thats how she came here
N-dr the operation table is ready plz come fast
DR-ok lets go.............. and goes inside the room
sujal is in distresss he sits down when his phone rings
SW-hello sujal this is swayam well wat the hell they r talking abt is kashish alrite or .....
S-no no swayam she is in a hospital well dharma hospital ok soo if u can come here
SW-i am coming in a second as i am on the same road along which it is situated i am coming
sujal cuts the phone
AK-sujal who was that
S-well it was swayam
AK-wat why the hell he
S-akshat he was asking abt kashish....
AK-ohh soo the trouble maker asks abt the condition of the person who is suffering bullshit
S-(gets up)- why u 3 were very very good friendz then.......
AK-sujal woh..............but swayam comes and
SW-sujal kahan hai woh and operation......
S-relax she is being operated.........and then a nurse comes out
S-nurse woh kaisi hai is everything alrite plz tell us
N-well we cant say anything khoon zyada beh gaya tha isliye
S-isiliye wat??????\
but another nurse comes and says that the dr was calling her and soo that nurse rushes inside without completing the sentence
sujal sits like a wreched house and swayam in tendom bangs his fist on the wall
SW-yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai..........i am the sole responsible for everything..sujal aksaht aur kashish ki koi galati nahin hai woh dono sirf best friendz the
S-i didnt understand
SW-sujal...........................explains him and his family everything
charu comes forth him and gives him a slap and holds his collar
CH-you.........after killing yes literally killing 4-4 ppl u want forgiveness shit......i know dii toh will forgive u but i wont do that in any case no wayz
akshat holds her and says
AK- charu plz calm down this is a hospital and sujal u also plz i know this is unbearable but u have to control yourself and swayam just get the hell out of here plz
swayam leaves and dr comes out
VEE-dr ab woh kaisi hai
DR-well operation toh hogaya hai and now just wait and watch and tries to go but sujal stops him
S-dr plz tell us the truth
DR-it cud be anything
S-matalb
DR-she cud go in koma or eventually she can die also or she cud be just fine after gaining concsiousness or it cud be nething more drastic or terrible
sujal moves back
S-no no it cant be woh mujhe phir se mili hai main use jaane nahin doonga
DR-well young man u have to wait and watch and now plz xcuse me
sujal is completely dejected......he was with his whole family but was alone......ppl were passing by but for him it seemed as if he was alone on the earth....he is thrown from the heaven's above and is strandled........he then closes his eyes and remebers something
K-sorry sorry sorry sujal late ho gayi
S-as if i dont know
S-ab kahan mar gayi thi
K-ahh!!!!!! marne maarne ki hi baatien karoge
S-acha theek hai pehle idhar aao (pulls her...hugs her and now she is sitting on his lap and he in a park)
K-yaar ek imp meeting beech mein aagayi
S-alas!!!!!!!!!! kashish can u tell me wat r the 5 priorities in your life
K- well 1st is my business 2nd my sisters 3rd is my friendz 4th is me myself and 5th is well i think its uuuuuu
S- ohh thats good acha tell me suppose i leave u and start dating some other gal then wat will u doo
K- if u get some other i wud pray to god that i get some other
sujal gets up and kashish falls
S-wattttttt u mean some other guy
K-haan acha bacha u will enjoy your life with some other and i will give my life ha
S-no but thats wat i will do
kashish burst out in a laughter
K-sujal it means that if i will ditch u......u wud commit suicide ha ha wat a joke
S-ha ha ha confused soul.......i have never imagined my life without u........i dont know wat i will do but jaan i will die if u will leave
kashish becomes serious
K-chalo thats good u will never die as i will never ditch u
sujal smiles
S-acha chalo now tell me wat will u doo
kashish was abt to say something but kashish's cell rings and she says
K-sujal i gotta go as there is an imp meeting lined up ok bye and rushes
S-arre wait question ka answer toh de jao dodo
flashback ends and sujal opens his eyes and seeing the hospital he comes back to his senses and there was a sudden outburst of the feelings and he starts crying like a havoc
veena comes and sits near him
VEE-sujal beta apne aap ko sambhalo
S-mama main.............nurse interupts
N-patient ko hosh aagaya hai...........lekin ek ek karke hi unse mile and goes
sujal without looking left or right goes straight in the room
and akshat and charu looks inside from the glass pane
sujal after coming inside realizes that wat the hell he wud say to her.......kashish's eyes were closed...........sujal moves closer to her and quitely sits near her
kashish was lying down and her eyes were closed
sujal holds her hand in b/w his hands and starts crying like a new born baby
kashish opens her eyes with a jerk and and sees sujal there and gets up and sits down with a little pain........sujal raises his head
sujal leaves her hand.......kashish is having water in her eyes which sometimes is called tears which come out when heart has a victory over the mind.........which come out
when a person is said to be happy or sad....which come out when eyes cudnt confine them within themselves...
sujal looks at her with anger
S-tum bahut buri hoo........kashish was feeling soo terrible that she wasnt able to speak anything on the other hand there was a big lump in her throat which prevented her from speaking
S-bas tum bahut buri hoo tumne mujhe akela chod hi diya tha naa lekin ek baat bhool gayi ki bhagwan ne tumare palle mujhe hi bandha hai......yaad hai naa ki shaadi ki kasmon ke alava humne ek aur kasam lii thi ki hum ek saath jiyenge aur ek hi saath mareinge toh phir kyon itna drastic step (shouts)kyon!!!!!!!!
kashish finally speaks
K-ky....kyonn tum..tumne bhi toh..
S-main pagal ho gaya tha na jaane mera dimaag mujhe tumare aur akshat ke baare mein kya-kya sochne par majboor kar raha tha and main use bardaasht naa kar saka isliye maine woh sab kiya
K-(smiles)chalo tumara dimaag us waqt kuch soch raha tha lekin mere dimaag me toh sochna hi band kar diya tha(pauses)waise main yahan kaise aur tum yahan kya kar rahe ho tum....tumari toh engagement hai naa!!!!go and start the preparations.....why wasting the time here
sujal pauses for 5 secs and then in order to cheer up the atmosphere and to hide the tears in his eyes he said
S-hmm.....kashish log shaadi se pehle sagai karte hain....lekin mujhe nahin pata tha ki tumein rings pehne ne ka itna shoak hai...chalo if u insist i will do the preparations (and pretends as if hi is going)
kashish is confused and speaks out
K-ek min meri sagai matlab arre i am talking abt your and ar..archie's engagement
sujal turns 2wards her
S-kashish mana ki shaadi se pehle characterless tha par shaadi ke baa dtoh i have become responsible and waise bhi ladki toh theek tarah se sambhali nahin do-do kaise sambhaloonga.....no wayz mere liye tumhe kafi ho
K-i didnt understand
sujal comes near her and she with a lot of pain gets up
S-murse ne toh kaha tha ki kamzoori hai kahan hai u r looking quite hail and hearty
K-sujal plz i am serious
sujal suddenly breaks down and tears which he was trying to hide in the smoke of humour came to the surface and starts sobbing like a baby
S-kashish trust me i never intended to marry archie she was just a very very good friend...this was just circumstancial
kashish turns away from him and asks
K-but sujal i can forget everything but why didnt u trust me why??????????????????
S-kashish plz plz forgive me........ woh ek aisa daur tha jise hume jeena tha bas mar-mar ke bhi hum dono ji gaye.......rehne doo pyaar toh hai hi imtehaan kashish mujhe sab sach pata chal gaya hai woh sab swayam ne kiya tha mujhe pata chal gaya hai......kashish mera yakeen karo us daur mein jitne aansoon tumne bhaaye hain usse kai zyada aansoon maine piiye hain.........kashish tum toh apne sujal ko jaanti hoo naa........woh kisi ke saamne toota nahin hai chaye andar woh hazaron baari mar chuka hai par zahir nahin hone deta.......kashish hume use ek bura waqt samajh kar bhula dena chahiye aur ek nai zindagi shuru karni chahiye kya tum mera saath dogi............kashish mujh se itni bari galati hui hai jise shayad hi main apni puri zindagi kabhi bhi bhula paon lekin kashish tumhe bhi toh pata hai naa....... ki main tumhare bina adhura.......kashish u r my love....my whole way of looking at things have changed......u have transformed my life for the better.......kashish u have stepped into my worthless life to make it worthful.....initially my life was a trampled rose lying on the road... whose life is finished........he is now not the rose who can bloom in lovers' hands but after u have come into my life i am a rose which is still blooming and growing in the lap of its plant...bacha i love u and u r the better half of me......for me u r shining star in the galaxy of love just keep shining on me plz.......... plz forgive me
kashish is standing still and this all is being seen by akshat and charu with a lot of anxiousness and excitement
AK-(whishpers)andar sujal ne itni der mein kya bola hoga
CH-soccer ka game kaise khelte hain yeh bata rahein honge dumbo maafi maang rahe honge aur kya
AK-yaar itna toh pata hai ki kashish mein convincing power thi par yeh nahin pata ki sujal mein kitni hai
Veena who was sitting on the seats provided outside along with the whole family comes over to the duo and asks
VEE-arre beta akshat...charu kya dekh rahe hoo
AK-arre aunty kuch nahin bas yehi dakh rahe hain ki kashish kya karegi?????and fikar karne ki koi baat nahin hai kyonki main use achi tarah se jaanta hoon woh maaf zaroor kar degi
VE-toh yahan se kyon andar chale jao
CH-nahin nahin.........yahin theek hai aap aaraam se beethiye we r enjoying ourselves here
VEE(smiles)-theek hai..........and goes
meanwhile inside kashish isnt able to nething she is just standing there and wondering the guy standing in front of her is sujal or someone else........her eyes is full of love and tears
she finally goes to sujal and says
K-sujal............ab main....ky....kya kahoon well ek baat toh hai tum naa is...is tarah se maafi mangte hue ache nahin lagte tum......naa mujhe daant te hue hi ache lagte hoo (pauses) sujal shayad tumne aaj ek-ek baat theek kahi hai.........aur waise bhi pyaar zindagi ki tarah hota there are many ups and downs........but when we hold on to our lives why we can not hold our love.........and waise bhi pyaar mein takraar aane se pyaar aur bhi gehra ho jaata hai.......kamzor nahin..... u have to be optimistic in life everything happens..........happens for the best..........and jaan aankhien toh upar karo.................sujal raises his head and sees kashish smiling and holding on to the tears which were brimming from her eyes........
S-kashish iska matlab tumne mujhe maaf............kashish puts her hand on his mouth and then says
K-yes!!!!!!!!!! but plz dont recall it and dont ever...(pauses)......just forget it like u forget a nightmare plz and tumne theek kaha hume ab ek saath apne khuabon ka ghar basa naa chahiye
sujal hesitatingly smiles and kashish also and then both see each other's eyes which overflowing with love and passion and then they come a little close and then........then they hug each other and then they both release......and sujal's kiss on the forehead followed.............
outside akshat and charu are brimming with joy
AK-yes..........see i told u naa kashish will forgive sujal in a second and see she did
veena....mehak and all the members of the family listen it
VEE-hey bhagwan tera shukkar hai........sab ab theek ho gaya
M-mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha ki kashish sujal ko dukhi dekh hi nahin sakti.......maaf toh karna hi tha &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp;
VAR-chalo i think now we shud go inside now and waise bhi ab toh saari kamzoori theek hi ho gayi hogi akhir sujal se joh mil li chalo lets go inside
kashish was sitting on the bed with sujal sitting besides her when the whole lot entered   ;
sujal and kashish didnt realize that as they were lost in each other's eyes
AK-hun hmmmmm kashish dr ne tumhe aaraam karne ko kaha tha kisi aire gaire ki aankhon mein dekhne ko nahin....

WELL I THINK THIS IS THE LONGEST PART I HAVE EVER WRITTEN PLZZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT PLZZZZZZZZZ COMMEN

well guys soo here are my comments........
NATZZZZ yaar kya kahoon 😆 😆 😆 tushar pandit......slapping.......kashish acp..... 👏 fantastic a break from the usual and it simply rocks 👏
KOMALLL yaar ab main kya kahoon brilliant.....excellent.........tooo goooooood 👏
FARAH yaar atleast likha toh waise kya superub likha mindblowing...........bahut hiiiiiiii acha 👏
ANA dii kya baat hai very very very very very very very goooooooooooooood 👏 purely enjoyment 👏
MARIUM i just loved it very very goooooood fantastic 👏--surbhi

Surbhi gr8 & awesume part u hav written.........atlast Sk ka patchup ho gaya.........