Falling in love 3 --- NEW update pg 37!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update..plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update 😃
can't wait to read about the deal
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I cant wit 4 the tennis match
I hope Ranbir loses
Plzzzz continue soooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great cont soon i wish ranbir wins n tells kanya to go on a date wit him or sumthin
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was really good! keep posting soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome.. he needs to be mentally prepared to lose..=]
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update. i can not wait for the next update.

tennis match, it will be great.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP

- Kanya pushes Ranbir in the water.

- They challenge each other to a tennis match

::PART 4::

So the game starts Kanya vs Ranbir

R: Tum roge to nahi right? I mean girls usually cry when they lose.

K: Chinta maat karo, I am not losing.

Ranbir serves and Kanya hits it back.

R: stop hitting like a girl.

K: You idiot. Main ladki hoon.

R: oh yea! sorry I forgot.

Suhana and Rema laugh.

K: [wonders: kitna ghatia joke tha]

Suh: Go Ranbir!!!!!!!!

Ira: don't worry Kanya. I know tum chachu ki dhulai kardogi.

The game goes on. They are both equally good.

R: [serves] I must say you are really good with that 2 by 2 body of yours

K: Tum bhi bure nahi ho uss haati jaise baadan ke saath. [makes a nice hit]

R: what?? haathi?? Ek baar haar jao phir dekhati hoon.

Aayan comes and sits with Ira.

Ira and and Aayan both shout: Go Kanya!!

R: what?? Tum mere khoon ho aur uski??

Suh: don't worry babe. We are here for you.

Ranbir looks at them and the ball hits his forehead.

R: Ouch!!!!!!

Kanya starts giggling. Ranbir rubs his forehead and looks at her. She starts laughing even more. Ranbir looks at her amused.

R: [mutters] Iski haasi bohut sunder hai. [but he mimicks her] hehehehehehe

Kanya stops laughing.

K: okay okay. Bohut ho gaya. Now let's play.

They start playing again. But now Ranbir's game is bad. Everytime he misses Kanya laughs. It's like he is mesmerized and he purposly misses again and again without his control. Her laugh makes him want to laugh. It's so naturally cute. he feels like sitting on the floor and just watch her laugh.

K: Tum thik se khel rahe ho ya nahi?

R: thik se hi to khel rahi hoon. [hits the ball]

K: Toh all of a sudden itna bure player kaise ban gaye.

R: Sab tumhare waje se hai.

K: mere waje se??

R: [he can't tell her about the laugh] Itne zor se ball mara...abhi bhi dard ho rahi hai.

K: Galti tumhari thi. A good player never removes his eyes from the prize.

R: haan haan. Abh lecture bandh karo.

The game goes on and Ranbir ends up losing.

Suhana hands Ranbir his water bottle. But she notices Ranbir is watching Kanya who is busy taking out her ponytail and fixing her hair, while talking to Ira. Ira and Kanya come over.

Ira: So Chachu?? Har gaye naa!!

R: [smiles] So what? [he pulls Kanya very close to him] I will win next time.

K: [tries to get out of his arms] Choro mujhe. There won't be a next time.

R: [let's her go] So, what is it?

K: what is what? [putting her hair up again]

R: [a little distracted, he wants to run his fingers through her hair] Mujhe kya karna hoga?

Ira: haan!! Come on Kanya, let's think of something funny. Like shave his head, run around naked, kiss a horse...umm (her list goes on)

K: [looks at him. Their gazes are locked. It's like they are not listening to anything anyone is saying]

Ira: [shakes Kanya] Kanya!!! So what is it?

K: Tumhe kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hain. Aise bhi main aisi childish game to khel ti nahi hoon aur khel ti bhi hoon toh kaha tha naa....? tumhare jaise ladke ke saath haargeez nahi. [she walks off.]

Ira: Bach gaye chachu!! [she follows Kanya]

Suh : aah! how dare she!! Ranbir you have to do something about her.

Ranbir is not paying attention to her at all. he is still watching Kanya walk away.

Suh: Ranbirrr...

R: huh??

Suh: Uss do kauri ki ladki ne tumhe insult ki hai. You are not just going to let her walk away are you?

R: you are right! Itni ahsani se kaise chor doon? [sly smile]

*****Let me know what you thik to find out what is coming up next!! *****

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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww that was so good plz write more soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
that was good... he ended up losing... pls continue sooon..

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