Falling in love 3 --- NEW update pg 37!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow that was awsome that was so good and cute 👏 pls pls pls continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sososos sooo cute plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
omg ranbir is a cutie!
luved him!
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
it was VERY good...and interesting...I don't like this Suhanna one bit. 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dat was very nice u should countine it soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow, awesome and cute.

already started fighting, but he still does not know who she is?

i would say he likes her.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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*******To clear out some confusions Ranbir only met Kanya once. And it was 10 years ago when she was a little girl. It's not like the memory is totally wiped out but he really doesn't know that Kanya is the little girl who was crying that day.*******

...:::PART 3:::...

The next day Kanya Is sitting by the pool with her feet in the water. She is on the phone with her mom. Ranbir walks by yelling , he is on the phone too.

R: Kyahhhh????

pause

R: How did this happen?

pause

R: I am going to shoot you Tiwari!!!!

pause

R: Hum woh contract kaise lose kar sakte hai???

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R: Woh contract mujhe chahiye!!!!!!

Kanya is really irritated. She is on the phone and here he comes screaming on top of his lungs.

K: Mom main aapko do minute baad phone karti hoon.

She walks up to Ranbir whose back is turned to her. She pats on his shoulder. He turns and turns back ignoring her. She does it again. He does the same thing again.

R: Tiwari I need that contract. And I will get it. Ranbir Nanda doesn't lose things so easily. You understand that??

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R: ok let me know as soon as it's done. And remember my words.

Now he turns back to Kanya.

R: May I help you?? Tumhe dekhai nahi deta I was on the phone? Itna bhi tameez nahi hai?

K: Excuse me? I was here 1st. Tumhe dekhai nahi deta I was on the phone?? Never mind tumhare to koi tameez hi nahi hai.

R: Tum mujhe insult kar rahi ho? Tumhare itni himmat kaise huyi tum mujhe insult kar rahi ho?

K: look tumhari saath baat karna is a BIG waste of time. Main jaa rahi hoon. [she turns to leave]

R: [he grabs her arm]

K: [pushes him in the water] Tum mein saach much koi tameez nahi hai. Ainda aisa harqat maat karna. Main tumhara Suhana nahi hoon. Jo tumhare choone se khushi ke maare pagal ho jaoongi.

R: [in the water] Main tumhe chodungi nahi. Tumne mujhe meri suit ke saath pani mein push ki. My shoes. I just got them from Italy.

K: tht tht tht. Aisa nahi karna chahiye tha??? Thik hai!! next time kapre utar kar push karoongi. {she starts walking]

R: Oye!! Ruk.

She just keeps walking away without looking back at all.

R: I swear you will pay for this.

Later on : Tennis court

It's Ira and Kanya vs Rema and Suhana

Ranbir comes and sits on the bench. He whistles.

R: [screams] GO SUHANAAA!!!!!!

when Kanya makes a really good serve

R: Booooooo!! (thumbs down)

Kanya shoots him a quick glance.

When Ira, Rema or Suhana serves he claps. But when Kanya serves he goes Booo. It's irritating Kanya. Even though she is winning. She serves again

R: Boooo (thumbs down)

Kanya is really mad at this point. When Rema serves the ball toward her instead of hitting it back she hits it toward Ranbir.

It hits him on the chest. He gets up

R: what the hell was that?

K: [looks innocently] ooops My mistake.

R: Agar khel naa nahi aati hai to khel ti kyon ho.

Ir: Chachu...

K: No Ira. Looks at Ranbir. Mujhe acchi tara se khel naa aati hain. Tumse to accha zaroor khel leti hoon. Lekin aab tum aandhe ho ball aarahi hai dekh nahi sakte, TO MAIN KYA KAROON??

R: Ok..ok. Let's fix this. You and me. Right now right here. Dekh te hain kaun jeet ta hai.

K: Fine by me. Aise bhi main jeet ne wali hoon.

R: yea we will see. But...but If no no WHEN I win you will do whatever I say. Aur agar tum jeet gaye, which by the way will never happen. Tum jo kahogi main karne ke liye taiyaar hoon.

K: deal.

R: Deal [gives her his hand]

K: [she walks away to the court without shaking his hand]

R: Oh!! Can't wait to win this one. [goes to the court]

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

yay me first

i loved the pushing bit... into the water in a suit... hihi... i can't wait for the tennis match... pls pls continue soon...⭐️

Edited by KC294 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
oooo a challenge!!
fab update
update again soon!! lol 😆 😆

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