Falling in love 3 --- NEW update pg 37!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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uhh I would do so write But I have been out all day in the cold. I am still shivering from it!! Thank you guys!! I will update tomorrow morning.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just read your ff. your falling in love 1, falling in love 2 and now falling in love 3 are faboulous 😃 i really liked the starting and i like the age different of rankan

plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww tht was so sad plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
pls update soon i lreli luved it 😊 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow that was great. Loved it. Please continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok this is a quick update!! (sorry it's not that good..No time!!!studying)

Part 2

Kanya decides to go for a horseride. She reaches the stables and pats the horse/ She hears giggling behind her. Turns around and it's Suhana walking in holding Ranbir's arm.

Suh: What are you doing here? [asking Kanya]

K: Isn't it a little obvious. [without looking at Ranbir at all] Main horseriding ki liye jaa rahi hoon. Please be kind enough to move. [she takes her favorite horse & leaves]

R: [gives a very amused look] kaun hai woh?

Suh: No one important. But hum yaha kyon aaye hai? it's so smelly.

R: I didn't ask you to come. I am going for a horseride.

Suh: Kya? Please Ranbir [wraps her arms around his neck] don't go!!

R: [removes her arms] Sorry babe! [he takes a horse and leaves]

After few minutes he sees the horse Kanya took tied to a tree. he gets curious and gets off his horse. He looks around and finds Kanya leaning over a little bridge. He starts walking over to her. She looks up.

R: Hi.

K: [a bit uneasy ] Hi.

R: Ranbir...? [introducing himself]

Kanya's phone rings. She picks up. It's Ira.

Ira: Kanya kaha ho tum????

K: Kyon?

Ira: Aaj raat mom ne party rakhi hai and I don't know what to wear!!!! kaha ho tum??

K: Ok baba. I am coming.

Ira: right now..please please please.

K: Iraaaa..I am coming. [she starts walking to her horse]

She gets to her horse and wonders if she should say something to Ranbir before leaving. But why would it matter. He gets every girls attention. It won't hurt him if he didn't get hers. So she just leaves.

Ranbir is shocked, maybe a little irritated. She just walked out. Just like that? No bye no nothing.

In the party

Ranbir and Aayan and two of his friends are playing pool.

Suh comes to Ranbir and starts flirting with him. Kanya looks at them . Ranbir looks at her she looks away.

R: [wondering if she was looking at him. He smiles to himself. But goes back to talking to Suhana.]

Suh: [he just smiled at something. But it wasn't for her. She wonders what he smiled at]

Ira stops the music that was playing.

Ir: Ok chachu!! Enough of your games. It's time for us to have fun too.

R: Batao kya karna hai mujhe.

Ir: dance.

R: dance?? Kiske saath

Ir: anyone you pick.

He looks around. Suhana looks really excited (like isn't it obvious he is going to pick Suhana). He gives a sly smile and stand infront of Kanya.

R: Hi.

K: Hi....

Ir: Chachu aap Kanya ke saath dance karenge?

R: kyon? nahi karna chahiye?

Rem: Ranbirr...why do you want to dance with her? [she looks at Suhana who is really mad]

K: mujhe tumhari saath dance nahi karna hain.

R: Kyon?

K: Just nahi karna hain. [she turns to leave and he grabs her hand]

Ir: Oh ho Kanya. Chachu kitne din baad ghar aaye hai. Ek dance hi to maang rahe hai. Thori hi tumhe uthake lejaa rahe hain. [she pulls both of the to the middle and pushes them together]

{{{The song starts playing. Zara sa from jannat. Click on the link to play the song. http://hindisongs.apniisp.com/jannat/jannat01.rm Very important!!Very very very important. Pay attention to the lyrics too.}}}

They start dancing.

~zara si dil mein de jagaah tu…
zara sa apna le banaa…
zara sa khaabon mein sajaa tu…
zara sa yaadon mein basaa…
main chaahun tujhko meri jaan bepanaah
fidaa hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanaah

He pulls her close. She has avoided his gaze throughout the whole dance. She looks up, he is looking at her with amused questioning look. She looks away again. He just can't help but smile.

~kehe bhi de, kehe bhi de
dil mein tere jo hai chhupaa
khwaahish hai jo teri

rakh nahi, rakh nahi
parda koi mujhse eh jaan
karle tu mera yakeen
main chaahun tujhko meri jaan bepanaah
fidaa hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanaah

He spins her around.

R: you don't like me, do you?

K: [surprised by the question] What's there to like?

R: Bohut kuch. Obviously you wouldn't know. [arrogant]

K: Aur janna chahti bhi nahi.

R: yea right!

K: main tum jaise ladko ki taraf munkh pher ke bhi nahi dekhti hoon.

R: Oh...as If we are waiting for you to look at us. Get it right. You mean we don't look at girls like you. [he shouldn't have said that. Maybe that was a bit too mean]

K: [pulls herself out of his arm] I think hamare dance khatam ho chuki hai.[she goes back to Ira]

R: [goes to Suhana]

Suh: kya hua?

R: nothing.

Suh: oh you seemed quite interested in her.

R: main aur woh? yea right!!! Mom sunegi to hamari shaadi karwadegi.

Suh: toh? you will have to marry sometimes.

R: No! Mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai. I am not getting married. Kya hain shaadi mein? Kuch nahi. Just stupid obligations and more problems.

Suh: ok ok. Chalo aab dance kare.[she pulls Ranbir to the dance floor]

They start dancing. Ranbir looks at Kanya. Kanya wants to look away but why should she look away. If he can look at her then she can look at him too. Ranbir gets surprised.

Tell me what you think to find out what happens next!!!

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
very very very cute 😃
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
awwwww tht was cuteeeee 😳 😳 😳
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was soo cute
I love the RanKan moment
Plzzzz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
very cute... i can't beleive he didn't recognise her.... pls continue soon

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