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nilanjana

@NilzStorywriter

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#31

abb k ke ghar pe sab log naashta kar rahe hain dinin hall mein & k is servin them

tabhi,door bell rings

mami-[2 k] jaa darwaza khol! naajaane kaun hai itni subah!

mama-aarre bechari kitna kaam karegi,mian kholta hun!

her mama opens the door

2 men r standin,1 man's face twrds him & the other's back twrds mama

mama-jii kahie?

tabhi,the man wgo was facin back,turns

& yes.........its our sujal

s-jii namaste! main sujal garewal hun! garewal industries..

mama-..ke maalik! aapko kaun nahi jaanta! aaie naa andaar aaie!

s & his manager come in, & sit

mama-aap kuch lenge?

s-jii nahi bass!

mama-arre sunti ho,ghar mein mehmaan aae hain!

mami comes

mama-arre ye sujal garewal hain,garewal industries ke malik

s-does a namaste

maami to bilkul pighal gai,kaikayi se kaushalya bann gai

s-jii wo,kyun naa kaam ki baat karein!

mama-ji kahie!

s-jii aapko jo yahan shimla mein plot hai,wo uske baare mein mere manager ne aapse baat...

tabhi mehek comes

mehek-bye mumma bye dad,main school ja arahi hun

mama-ye hai meri beti mehek

s-hi! [formal]

m-aap sujal garewal to..wohi didi..

tabhi uski school bus ke horn ki awaaz aati hai

mami-jaldi jaa bus chut jaegi,she goes runnin

m-byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mami-aap chai lenge naa!

mami shouts

mami-arre kahan marr gai,chai leke aa!

mama-haan to main keh raha tha ki,wo plot main nahi bech sakta kyunki wo meri bhanji ke naam hai!

tabhi k enters with tea

s ke eyes pop & jaw drops aft seein her

shock hogaya bechara itna zyada pleasantly

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Ruhee

@Ruhee_95

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

lovely part
Pls don't make mami to make Mahek go with Sujal 🤢
I really want to see Kashish's reaction after she sees Sujal 😳
continue soon

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#33

wow very nice part................ 👏 bt kashish mami is really very rude 😡 can't she speak properly to her .........i can imagine sujals xpression wen he saw kashish in front of him and then wat will happen wen he comes to know tht land belongs kashish, i m getting really impatient ..plz continue soon

Edited by angel 16 - 17 years ago

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aarti

@-Aarti-

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#34

womderful part 👏

continue soon

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nilanjana

@NilzStorywriter

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#35

tabhi k enters with tea

s ke eyes pop & jaw drops aft seein her

shock hogaya bechara itna zyada pleasantly

pura stunnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeedddddddddd!!!!!!!! hai

s-tum![stands up]

k looks up,aur s ko dekhke wo bhi surprised hai ki wo yahan kaise,aur yahan kya kar raha hai

k-aap? yahan?

s blushes a bit & laughs a bit in a silly manner lik a confused love lorn teenager, aur confusion mein apne baalon pe hatah ferta hai,

pura mood hi change,struct & khadus business man se yahan abhi bilkul alag hi insaan khada hai

s-emm..haan..main..wo..yahan wo..main..kya! haan ..wo business..ke silsile mein aaya tha..tum?

mama interrupts

mama-lagta hai aap dono ek dusre ko pehle se hi jaante hain!

mami jal rahi hai s & k ki frndliness pe

k-haan wo mama ji kal toofan mein mr garewal..[s cuts]

s-emm..sujal..sujal kaho

k-emm..haan wo sujal dukaan pe aae the to issi wajah se!

s ki nazre k ki taraf hi tikki hui hain

mami-jaa college ke lie ready nahi hona

k-ji mami.excuse me [she goes]

manager-to sir zameen ke bare mein baat karlein

s ussi taraf hi dekh raha hai jahan k gai

manager-sir!..eemmm..sir!..[clicks his fingers]..sir!

s gets back 2 this world

s-emm..wo..han..wo kahan the hum...

mama-ji wo actually ye jo zameen aap chahte hain,wo meri bhanji ,jo abhi gai,kashish sinha,uske naam hai,chotti umar mein hi bechari ke ma baap guzar gae. ye sab kuch ussi ke ma baap ka hai,tab se wo yahan rehne lagi,wo tab chotti thi to will ke mutabik ye zameen uske naam tabb hi ho sakti hai jab uski shaadi ho jae! to islie naa hi ye zameen main aapko de sakta hun,naa khud kashsih!kuch baat age bass uski shaadi ke baad hi badh sakti hai.

s-ji main samaj gaya,thanku for makin the things clear. [2 manager] manager,gaadi leke hotel jao

manager-par aap sir?

s-main baad mein aunga!

manager-par sir bina gaadi ke

s-haan bina gadai ke,per hain mere chal sakta hun main!

manager -ji sir [he goes,while murmerin in breath,sir aur bina gadi ke paidal,suraj aaj kidhar se nikla hai!]

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#36

wow yaar mindblowing part, 👏 a busines like sujal garewal forgot abt d topic for which he came there after seeing kashish, 😉 very cute and mr garewal nahi sujal kya baat hai 😳 😆 😉

and now wat sujal is gonna marry kashish coz just for a piece of land no dear 😭 😭

plz continue soon

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Lailoma

@barbiekhalil

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#37

oh no...i think this sujal really IS gonna marry kashish for a piece of land...oh no...my sujal cant be tht pathar dil ....lols

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green_eyes88

@green_eyes88

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#38

hi just found ur fanfic.....great start so far...cant wait for u to increase there friendship and them to fall in love....however i hope sujal doesnt act all sly and try get the property of kashish

Continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

neelu yaar i'am here with my comments on your fanfic.. hope you like it..sorry i'am commenting late par tum jaanthi ho na kii i was caught up in work...ab coming to the comments on your story...😊 well yeh story ka start bada hii interesting tha..mujhe achcha laga jaise tumne har character ko shape kiya hai...chahe woh kashish ka character ho , ya mama ka, ya phir mami ka , ya mehek ka , ya last but not the least sujal ka.. kashish kii haalat padkar i was feeling very sad for her..bechari kii life itni mushkhil kyun hai..why can't her life be like any other girl who is her age.. lekin yahaan tho kashish kii woh kadus mami , usne kashish ka jeena mushkhil kar diya hai.. woh kashish se aise bartaav karthi hai , jaise kii kashish us ghar ki bati nahi lekin us ghar kii naukar ho.. us mami pe tho mujhko bada ghussa aa raha hai.. i wish to see kii ek din mami baitkar yeh saare kaam kare aur kashish aaram.. it would be so good to watch this scene... jab i'am visualizing it bohat mazaa aa raha hai.. i liked the way sujal , kashish kii pehli mulaqat hui... bahar toofan , andar do dil jawaan.. hahaha... waise i liked this sujal.. he was so sweett... he feels a odd attraction towards kashish.. are waah kya baat hai... woh bohat hii cute hai.. aur jis tarah usne kashish ko uske ghar chodne ki zidd kii.. aur phir kashish ka maan jaana.. sujal is seriously a true gentleman... he is completely a sweetheart.... sujal pe main vari-jawaan.. mehek aur kashish ka scene bada achcha tha.. where mehek is in her dream world kii kashish sujal se mili aur mehek ka andaza bhi sahi hai sujal ko kashish pasand aagayi..haha.......aur phir sujal the business man ka role bhi mujhko bada achcha laga.. he is sure of what he wants and what he is doing.. he comes to kashish home to tal about a property dealing.. he comes there as a business man lekin kashish kashish ko dekh kar sara business man ka roop hawa hogayi.. haha.. the way he tells kashish kii usse sujal bulaye... all this were just too perfect... very damn well written... hmm.. tho ab kashish ke mama explained his situation to sujal , saying kii the land that sujal wants belongs to kashish aur yeh zameen kashish ko tabhi milegi jab kashish shaddi karegi.. tab thak na kashish aur na hii unka mama kuch kar sakthe hai... and i'am glad kii sujal yeh baat samaj gaya hai..he understands the situation well.. ab sujal ka uske manager se kehna kii woh ghadi leke chale jaye woh aajaye.. sujal ka brushing away all his managers doubts....waise i think i know what sujal is upto..hehehe.. he wants to take a walk with kashish.. hahaha... very good going yaar..it is very interesting.. cooll.. superb.. great..rocking...excellent...👏 ab coming to the next coming up parts mera guess yeh hoga kii sujal and kashish will walk all the way till kashish college.. aur this walk will change sujal and kashish life's forever.. sujal being the business man will offer kashish kii kashish usse shaddi karle.. kashish pehle bohat confuse hogi kii sujal aise kyun keh raha hai.. lekin phir sujal usko samjhayega kii he wants the land property joh usse milegi after marriage and issi tarah kashish kii chutkara paa sakthi hai apne mami se and from that life.. tho sujal will say kashish ko kii woh dono contract marriage karthe hai isse dono kii pareshaani durr ho jayegi.. ab nahii tho agge chalkar sujal kahega aisa kashish se.. so neelu yaar kya mera guess sahii hai... mujhko batana i really want to know..😉 dear please next part jaldi se post karna.. me waiting for the next parts eagerly..😊

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago