MILKE BHI HUM MILTE NAHI-sk [updated]

hey guys me strtin a new fic,i hope iss fic ka haal meri baaki fan fic jaisa nahi hoga,i mean low comments ki wajah se bewaqr band naa ho jae,i appeal plz comment,aur naa pasand ae too sidha bole ki band karo,jisse mujhse bhi mehnat naa karwao yara faltu ki

haan to let me give the character sketches

first of all kashsih-

kashish is small town,sweet gal livin in shimla. she is an orphan,uske mom dad ki death car accident mein ho gai thi.she is livin frm then with her mama mami,mama to is nice 2 her,but her mami is real rude 2 her,ghar ka saara kaam usse karwati hai,aur har second taane.aur haan,k ki cousin aur mama maami ki beti hai mehek,k & m love each other lik real sis,& mehek k se chotti hai.

k is doin graduation in col,col se aake mama ki ek chotti si book shop hai kuch der wahan baithti hai,jisse mama ghar jaake rest le sake.& lik this her life goes on. kashsih does not retaliate 2 any of mami's rudeness or anythin,coz she has a very soft nature,rebel to usne kabhi kia hi nahi,bachpann se sehti aa rahi hai,chehre pe pyaari si muskaan lekar.

paar k itni helpless nahi,shimla ki sabsa zyada aur expensive property usi ke naam hai,paar usse wo uski shaadi ke baad hi mil sakti hai

nice intro nona plz update soon 😳

hey a lovely concept what abt sujal uska role kya hai cont soon

subah hoti hai-

ghar mein sabhi so rahe hain

paar hamari kashsih,subah 5 baje uthkaar sabke lie breakfast banati hai,lunch ka intezaam karti hai,ghar ka jhaadu ponchaa karti hai,yaane saara kaam karti hai

phi chai banake mama maami ke room mein le jaati hai

k-good mornin,mama,mami! ye rahi aapki mornin tea 😊

mama-gud mornin beta!

maami-aye jaa jaake mehek ko uthade!jaldi kar!

k-jii maami! [k ka face thoda utaarta hai mami ki rudeness paar she doesnt mind as she is very used 2 it]

k goes 2 mehek room

k-mehek chal uth school ka time ho gaya

mehek ko utha deti hai

then saabke ke lie naashta banati hai
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k-bye main college jaa rahi hun!

mami-tu college nahi jaegi! ghar ka kaam kaun karega!

k-uff ho! sab kaam karke jaa rahi hun!

mami-kya uff ho! zaban sambhalke baat kar! humne tujpe rehem karke rakha hai kya ye badi baat nahi! aur batein suno maharani ke! rotiyan kaun banaega! mujhse thandi rotiyan nahi khai jaati!

k-sorry mami! main aake bana dungi! plzzzzz abb man jaun?

mama-haan haan jao beta!

k goes

maami-uff apne naa iss ladki ko sar pe utha rakha hai!

mama-chodo naa wo bhi to bachchi hai!

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abb ghar se bahar nikalke,meets her frnds 4 goin college

ria-arre kashsih ye kya huliya bana rakha hai,wohi roz ki tarah simble sa salwar uar chudidaar aur ek ponytail,naa koi make up naa kajal,naa kangan naa jhumka!

k-maine jo huliya bana rakha hai ,so bana rakha hai tumne kya huliya bana rakha hai,circus mein part time job mila hai kya!..itna makeup haat lagao to haath ka colur change ho jae!

[her frnds are actually lookin lik clowns with jazzy dresses,ajeeb sa hair style aur sau saau kilo makeup,jaise face pe paint kia ho,ankhein kajal mein dubai ho,lipstick chabai ho!]

priya-arre bevkoof tuje itna bhi nahi pata! kahan rehti hai tu!

k-kya nahi pata!

sheena-u don knwwwwwww..kaun ane wala hai!

k-kaun aane wala hai? kahan ane wala hai!

ria-arre the handsome hunk,the most eligible bachelor,the business tycoon,dashin,charmin,mr good lookin,garewal industries ka maalik sujal garewallllllllllll shimla aa raha hai!

k-shimla? abb usse shimla aane ki kyun sujhi!

priya-kashsih yaar plz dont look so disintrested! ye to hamari khushkismati hai jo wo yahan shimla aa raha hai,hum usse dekh paenge!

k-haan hum usse dekh paenge,wo nahi dekhega naa to humein aise sajne dhajne ki koi zarurat nahi!

sheena-arre kyun nahi,arre he is still a bachelor,remember! kya pata hum mein se koi usse psand aa jae!

k-ah wah! kya baat hai! puri duniya chodkaar usse yahan shimla mein ladki pasand aegi! arre hazaroo galfrnd hogi uski to!

ria-haan ho sakta hai,aur nahi bhi ho sakta hai! lts hope 4 the best!

k-haan haan,abb college chale,i guess humein late ho raha hai!

abb k completes her col

aur shaam ko comes 2 mamaji ka bookstore

k-mamaji!

mama-oh aa gai beta!

k-haan aa gai! abb aap jaiye lunch kar lijie ghar jake uar thoda aaraam bhi tab tak main dukaan mein baithti hun!

k ke mamaji goes

k sits in the shop

dheere dheere mausam toofani hone lagta hai

strng winds strt 2 flow

aur baarish shuru ho jaati hai zor daar

k-oh no! aisi baarishaur toofan mein naa main ghar jaa sakti hun,naa mamaji yahan aa sakte hai,oh no jab tak toofan naa ruke mujhe yahin wait karna hoga! i hope jaldi ye tufaan ruk jae

k wahan counter par akleli chup chap baithi hai

tabhi she hears the bell of the door ring

she looks up

a dashin ,young,handsome guy enters,wearin a red pullover & a jeans

[yes! its sujal garewal]

actually the business tycoon decided 2 discover shimla on foot,paar uski kismat to dekho ussi time aisa toofan aa gaya,saamne he saw this bookshop so he entered

he walks 2 the books shelf & is jst lookin arnd

k gets up seein a customer

she goes 2 him

k-u need some help?

he turns twrds the voice

encounterin the most beutiful & charmin,divine young lady standin in frnt of him

s-emm..err...no..no..err..i..i..was jst lookin arnd!

k-hmm

k mudke goes back 2 her seat

tabhi-

the lights go off!

& everythin is drownin in complete darkness

k-oh! oh no!

s-s lights his lighter

k looks at tht direction

in tht dim light she can jst c his intense eyes,& he her beutiful face

s-candle hai?

k-haan,iss taraf!

s follows her with the lighter

she searches 4 candle

& he is behind her all the while she is searchin the candle

she finds a candle

he lights the candle

she keeps it in a centre table

jiske aamne saamne do chairs hain

both sit on these chairs

Gr8 yaar par tht mami na huhh n btw w8in 2 read their talk n nice fic plzz conti.Asap

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tc..nida