To Err is Human (AK/AR)1 parts 1-17 - Page 43

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Yeah

Finally responding! I've been reading the FF...just everytime I read it...its really late in the night, so I can't find the energy to respond...so today I decided I can't go on like this I have to tell di I'm reading the FF loll...

It's AMAZING! I love it! I love each character....and their fights are sooo hilarious!...

this last part...loved how the older doctor's story relates sooo perfectly with teh new batch...and di where do you get your lines from....the one that har ma ka farz hai par har bache ka naseeb nahin (something like that)...that is soooo beautiful!... are u sure you don't have like secret relations with JAved Akhtar or something...lol...sooo nice...and then the line keerti uses to make a point to Angad AND Shubhankar...that wasssss sooo welll written as well... how do u think of such lines! I showed my sis and she was like...this writer should make soaps...and I was like...tell me something I don't know LOL...

Anyways...loving the FF...love where its headed rite now and this is perfect..AK as doctors that's like a dream come true! Can't wait till the next part! 😃



thanks manaa...tum ne mera dil khush kar diya 😊 Loved ur wonderful comments as usual. I love to maaro dialogues in real life too 😆 😆 😆 I guess now I am using them at the right place 😆 😆 Yes AR as doctors is not new but AK as doctors was def worth a shot 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: humza1

instead of angads jealousy u show the completely different angad painful nd sensitiv 1 😳 its a nice change....keep going his positiv attitude
esp his conversation wid keerti its amazing very matured thinking ........loved it

keerti nd angads bro sis jodi wll b rocking coz pehli hi meeting mein they share a lot bin kahe bohat kuch samajh gaye i like the last dialogue of K somthing lik tht A dekhte hi na rehna kahin bohat der na ho jaaye

AK jodi rox as usual nice part 👏 👏 👏



Thanks Humza...yes Angad and Armaan both actually have a different facet to their personalities. Dheere dheere sab pataa chal jaayega ki wo real mein kya hain 😊 AK rocks...koi shaq? 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome part. loved the small connections. kripa and angad dotn exactly dislike eachother but they dont like each other in a way either. I like angad and keerti's conversation



Thanks Faiza..loved ur siggy of the Family disoreders. I really want to read that ff as the title really intrigues me...one day I will 😊 when I have more time 😕 UR right, it is a love-hate relationship 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Rabiah

wow bheegi ji
this is gr8
i loved it
esp the doc covo wid angad it was short yet sadi many things
it was touching n sweet
aww angad... last comment was a nice one

cant wait to read the next part
ppppppppppllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
update reeallll soon


rabiah 😳



Thanks Rabiah...loved ur sweet comments. I will update as soon as i can 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: MrsRanbirKapoor

aaaaawwww bheeeegiiiii
loved da part!
i never imagined angad cud be so sweeeeeet!
love himmm!
i hope armaan realizes soon too...hehe
cnt wait for romance!!!
luv u xxx



Thanks Hinuuu...hope u had a gr8 b'day 😊 Both AA have a sweet aspect to their personality...will find out later 😳

Romance? Abhi itni jaldi nahin yaar 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bolly_babe


😆😆😆well i dont think i have met hinna yet, but ouma is the motw for RK's fan club, though i dont think i have met her either since she hasnt responded to it yet, lol and yes i am definately an RK fan, that is why i was so happy that ranbir is in this fic, 😃, and i just realized a few days ago that ranbir in des pardes was the same ranbir too, i cant believe i missed that thenlol,


but i feel so bad for angad, it must have really hurt to be called a gunda, i have a feeling that this angad-keerti relationship will be really significant in AK's relationship and the love triangle between keerti, shubhankar, and kartik



Thanks bolly babe...i should def introduce u to Ouma and Hinna then....the three of u can have a blast 'sharing' RK 😉

Thanks 4 ur wonderful comments as always....yes these new relationships will be significant later on 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

hahah...poor Armaan...talk about being Egoistic...Well I think thats parcially the reason....the other reason seems to be jealousy 😉 One thing which I noticed about Angad is that he's really good at reading people's emotions....he was the first one who realized that there was something going on between Dr. Shubankar, Dr. Keerti, and Dr. Karthic...and now he feels that Armaan is falling for Ridhimaa....its wierd how angad can read the emotions of love in other people's eyes...dispite the fact that the love is the only aspect in life which he lacks...and yet the idiot isnt aware of the feelings which are taking place in his heart for kripa In this part in particuallar it seems that Angad does have another phase in his charcter which is the complete opposite of what we have seen so far...From the spoiled, ill manared, casual, undignified, and selfish human....it seems that the real Angad who values relations, is caring, and a really kind hearted human is hidden somewhere deep down...and the Angad the Angad which is being portrayed with the negative charceteristics is what the harsha and cruel words has made him...and the real Angad with the good traits has been buried inside for the sake of being able to live in the harsh society... Awww...poor Angad he's so confused about his feelings towards kripa....the fact that kripa called him gunda had pricked his heart...and he himself is unaware of the reason.😃... It was really sad to know that there were many people in Angad's life who have called hum a gunda mawali...wonder what the reason was for insultng angad in such a way...was it the fact that his father has been involved in illegal activities??....Angad's childhood must have been really hard....if it wasnt for Dr. Agarwal god knows where Angad would have been at this point in life....maybe he would have turned into a criminal himself...but Dr. Aggarwal being the noble and kind hearted person has changed Angad's life and led him to the positive roads in life...however what he wasnt able to do was his thinking...Fate has forced him to belive negative things about certain human's...but hopefully things will chnage to an extent in the future.. Awww...howw cuteee!...Angad dreaming about his dream girl....and now seeing kripa dance brought back his childhood dream...Hopefully he will realize soon that his angelic faced dream girl is none other than kripa... Oh wow...Angad's expression changing from sweet smiled to the angry young man aain when he saw KP dancing.... and kripa's eyes wandering around for Angad...well thats certainly a great start....cant wait till both AK realize their feelings for eachother...but knowing how stubborn AK are i am sure its gonna take a while until they come across their feelings...and maybe even longer for then to confess! Poor Dr. Keerti...I really hope that Dr. Karthic will realize soon enough what a heera he has...Dr. Keerti certainly seems to be a great human being...look like she has sacrificed alot in her life..yet she has no complains against anyone...all she wants in return is someone to appreciate her decisions and sacrife...especially her husband.. I really liked the bind between Dr. Keerti and Angad...Even thoguh they hav just met...it seems that that they understand eachother really well.. Woww...this scene really shows a whole new side of Angad...Really impressive...the sensitive side of Angad was really heartouching...I loved the way that Angad made Dr. keeti feel proud of her decision as a housewife..and a stay home mom...Its true though that being a mother is not an easy task...and Dr. Keerti seems to fulfill her duty towards her being a mother as well as a wife really well...If only Dr.. karthic would realize it... Aww...It was so sad when Angad was like: ….har maa ka farz hota hai…..magar har bachche ka naseeb nahin hota," ....Felt really bad for Angad...I really hope that later on people will get to know the real Angad...especially kripa... Dr. keerti found out about something goung on between AK...mayeb she will be one of teh key elements to make Angad realize his feelings...and help him in the future to get his love..just like the way nagad might end up making Dr. Karthic realize how wrong he is to take advantage of his wife... Angad called Kripa and Prithvi folk dancers 😆 The way Dr. Keerti looked at Dr. Shashank when she sai dthe line about door se dekthe maat rehgana seems to hint out that Dr. Shubankar was unable to confess his feeling towards Dr. Keerti and by the time he decided to confess mayeb it was too late.... Yes I agree on one thing however that prithvi might end up being Kripa's first choice (however I doubt that kripa will look at prithvi in such a way) but will definalty not be the right choice!( Noone can be right for her other than Angad 😉 ) I also hope that eventually Dr. Keerti will take back her words about the first choice not being the right one when Dr. Karthic will realize his mistake and will make things better between him and DR. Keerti...and will give her the love and respect which she deserves! Marvalous part....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏



Thanks Mita...great observation about Angad. Yes, I have purposely shown that aspect of his personality. He is a very perceptive person thanks to his hardships in his life. In fact, this will help him become a good doctor in future as treating a patient is not only treating their illness but also treating the person as a whole😊 😊 of course as usual, he will deny his own feelings for Kripa...lekin kab tak? 😉 Wonderful comments and analysis as always Mita 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chocolate p

bheegi.. i love u loads.... ur an awesome write. i think i said tht way too many time par kya karoon? tum likhhti hi itna accha ho.. im out of words..



aWW...thanks again chocolate P..ur so sweet 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 5: sorry for the short part….but something is better than nothing. My kids are on spring break so this is all I could manage today..



"Armaan…..tune apne chicken ka keema banaa diya hai," Angad stared at the shreds on Armaan's plate. Instead of eating, Armaan's gaze was frozen on Riddhima and Rahul having a great time on a table across from them. With his fork and knife, he had battered the food on his plate into an unrecognizable mish-mash.


"Yeh soch le….main Raoool ke tukde tukde kar raha hoon!" Armaan clenched his jaws angrily.



"Mujhey bhookha rehnaa pasand nahin hai yaar….let's eat man," Angad elbowed Armaan. Unlike Armaan, Angad preferred to keep his gaze away from Kripa and Prithvi at the other table. For some reason, he was not jealous the way Armaan was. After his conversation with Dr Keerti, he felt a strange sense of 'ownership' over Kripa- as if she was destined to be with him rather than Prithvi. Even though, he hated her guts and ideology, he felt she 'belonged' to him, so it did not matter if Prithvi hung around with her 24/7- Prithvi could never become hers- Angad was convinced.



"LADIES AND GENTLEMEN…AND NOW FOR OUR AWARDS FOR THE NIGHT…" Josh came back to the mike and announced.



As was expected, Riddhima-Rahul won the 'best western dance couple' and Kripa-Prithvi won the 'best Indian dance couple'



The whole room, except two men applauded for the wonderful pairs. Armaan had decimated the cake on his desert plate as Rahul and Riddhima were awarded their trophy. Angad just sat with a half-mocking smile staring at the ceiling when Kripa and Prithvi were bestowed with their trophy. Kripa's keen eye caught the expression on Angad's indifferent and smug expression. More than her trophy, her coup over Angad's self-important attitude gave her the satisfaction that evening.


Both Riddhima and Kripa were happy for each other. The pride on her dad's face was enough of a reward for Riddhima. Kripa saw her victory as an auspicious start to her career.



Both Rahul and Prithvi were in seventh heaven. Rahul, because he had achieved recognition at the SMI. That should definitely give him an edge over the other interns. The professors would give him more attention now he thought.




Prithvi was happy to please Kripa and the other interns of his batch. Now everyone would respect him instead of ridiculing him as was usually the case in his school and college days in Calcutta. He had always tried to please everyone in school and Medical College but most people ignored him for his shyness and ultra sensitive behavior. But tonight, as far as he could tell, everyone was clapping for him. His glance paused at Angad- why was he not clapping? Prithvi lowered his head in dejection. Angad was going to be his partner for the remaining year, so why was he not applauding? Was Angad going to be like the other boys in his school-the ones who always mocked at him and made fun of him? It was strange, how one person could take the joy away from Prithvi's glory in a second!




Ranbir Kapoor and the two Hyderabadi girls, Ouma and Hinna were awarded the best dressed interns for the evening.



The interns, doctors and staff finally dispersed for the evening. Everyone was anxious about the early morning start to their new life and hurried back to their hostels.


The hostels were in the same campus as the banquet hall, so most interns decided to walk back. Rahul and Prithvi offered to escort Riddhima and Kripa.



Armaan pulled out is jazzy red sports car from the parking lot as Angad hopped into the passenger seat.



"How can they do that Angad?" Armaan looked furious when he noticed the foursome walking ahead of them.



"Chal unhein lift dete hain…..teri car se impress ho jaayengi," Angad buckled himself and admired the rich interiors of the imported car. The thick fragrance of the new leather gave him a high as he imagined himself driving one of these when he was a rich doctor.



Armaan zoomed off and came to a screeching halt near the four pedestrians.


"Wanna ride?" Armaan flashed his most friendly smile at them, "aakhir aaj shaam ke superstars ko paidal chalte achcha nahin lag raha."



Riddhima glared at his flashy car, "no thanks…..we are fine…..we don't need any special privileges."



"Arre…arre Riddhimajee…..aap baat baat par naaraaz kyun ho jaati hain…..ab tho hum sab ko ek saath kaam karna hain…..so why not end all the bitterness and start out as friends…..it will just make it easy for all of us to work together….kyun Raoool?" Armaan smiled sardonically at his competitor. Kripa and Riddhima looked at each other, wondering what had prompted the overt gesture of friendship from the two obnoxious men?




"Uh…sure….why not?" Rahul liked the idea of getting a ride instead of walking 5 blocks with the women. As it is all the dancing had made him tired, and the women were not the fastest walkers in their high heels. Rahul wanted to go to bed early so he could be fresh the next day. He wanted to wake up early and do some reading before the day so he could impress the senior doctors. Prithvi nodded, "yes…we would love to be your friends." Silently, he was hoping Angad would become friends with him too.



Armaan got off with a friendly smile and opened the door politely, "ladies first."



Riddhima and Kripa were hesitant. They were in no mood to take any obligations from the two men, "NAHIN…HUM WALK KARENGE!" All four men were disappointed for various reasons and had no choice but to obey the women.



"Jaisi aapki marzi," a nonchalant Armaan shut the door and accelerated the car. He revved up the engine loudly and a blast of smoke from the exhaust choked Riddhima and Kripa behind his car.




"IDIOT!" Riddhima yelled. Armaan heard the remark and halted the car at a distance. He turned off the headlights so the car was not visible in the dark and dimly lit street of the SMI campus. He took out a tennis ball from a bag and opened the door. Gently he rolled the tennis ball on the road aiming for Riddhima's foot.


"Kya kar raha hai Armaan?" Angad was baffled.



"I am a bowling champion buddy…..ab dekh……mera nishaana theek jagah jaata hai ya nahin."



The men watched the women in their beautiful outfits getting closer as Rahul and Prithvi chatted with them.



"AHHH!!!!" as per Armaan's plan, Riddhima's foot stepped on the rolling tennis ball and she stumbled badly. If it were not for Kripa's quick reflexes, Riddhima would have landed on the road. Kripa caught hold of her friend but Riddhima had already twisted her foot on the ball.


As Riddhima limped back on the street, the red car appeared from nowhere.



"Kya hua Riddhima jee?" an innocent looking Armaan popped his head out of his car.



"She lost her balance…..someone had left a tennis ball on the street," Kripa replied.



"That is very sad….wo tho achcha hua Angad kuch bhool gaya tha….iss liye humein wapas aana padhaa," Armaan lied through his teeth, "waise….aapke dad ko campus ka dhyaan dena chaahiye….aise kaise tennis balls padhi rehti hain street par?" Armaan got off and tried to give Riddhima a hand.



"This is not my dad's responsibility!" Riddhima snapped, "this is the cleaning crew's job!"



"Par responsibility tho Chief ki hi hoti haina?" Armaan batted his eyelids sympathetically.



"Just keep my dad out of this Armaan!" Riddhima winced in pain and inadvertently placed her hand in Armaan's outstretched palm. The moment their palms touched, a shiver ran down Riddhima's spine. She felt as if a current had surged through her body at that instant. Quickly, she withdrew her hand and placed it on Kripa's shoulder.




Armaan smiled as the flush on Riddhima's face did not escape his gaze. He patted himself on the back for making her react to his touch. He thanked the tennis ball lying on the street curb- a small green ball had given him the happiest moment of the day.



The women had no choice but to take the offer. Angad stepped out and held the car door open for the women. Armaan insisted on helping a reluctant Riddhima settle down in the backseat. As soon as the women got in, Armaan shut the door. A startled Rahul and Prithvi stared at the door.



"Sorry….this car can hold 4 people only…..aap dono ke liye jagah nahin hai!" Armaan smirked and jumped back into the car, leaving a puff of exhaust on Rahul and Prithvi's faces as he zoomed off towards the girl's hostel.




"Rahul? Prithvi?" the girls exclaimed as they tried to hold onto their seats as Armaan drove like a maniac.



"They are adults….they can take care of themselves," Angad looked behind and grinned at the girls.



"Par…par….wo bhi tho aa sakte the hamare saath," Kripa protested and tried to look for Prithvi through the back window.




"We can go back if you want…lekin unhein aap logon ki godh mein baithna padhega," Armaan tried to suppress his laughter.


"NO WAY!" the women replied and looked around at their seat. Armaan was right- this car could not hold so many people.



"Koi baat nahin Kripa…..Rahul and Prithvi are gentlemen…..they will understand," Riddhima gave Armaan a dirty look in his rear view mirror. Armaan rolled his tongue and smiled at her in the rearview mirror, "gentlemen? Or leaches?"



"Mind your language Armaan!" Riddhima shot back, "Rahul and Prithvi are the sweetest men we have met."



Angad turned back at that comment and grinned, "aap log tho doctor hain……jaanti hongi ki zyaada sweetness health ke liye achchi nahin hai…..kadvi dawaa se hi ilaaj hota hai….. meethi cheezien sirf zubaan ko bhaati hain…..zehen ko nahin!"



….to be contd…
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Posted: 17 years ago

RESERVED!!! 😉

I followed the girls😛..I'm slow reader and everyone takes place before me tho I start reading first😆

I'm here with comments😳..

You stopped without showing kripa's reaction😕😆Better start next part with her reaction😳

I loved Angad here .. very balanced... unlike Arman who is arrogant, attitude, hasty, jealous personality..he already convince his heart that kripa belongs to him👏Good positive approach😳...so, he is supporting Dr.Kartik instead of understanding what Keerti was going thru? Did I miss something here? Did "first impression-A"statemetn meant that keerti fell for Kartik first tho Subhankar was in deep love with her and she dint recognise b4??...like kyph-AKP??...then A is right to dream for kripa to come back..hope he won't be like subhankar😆 He better realise it..instead of waiting for kripa to come to him leaving prithvi..he should try to divert her attention towards him.😳

[quote]"how one person could take the joy away from Prithvi's glory in a second! "[/quote]

You better have good answer for this😳

I wonder why prithvi is worried about Angad..hope you don't make him third gender like in some other ff...twinswala😆

Loved Arman's spontaneous mischief👏 he is determined to drive Ridhi's attention...loved it.

Looks like AK will start slow and steady attraction towards each other. Very balancing.👏..hope it won't be late like KKS story.

Ridhi has headstrong along with strong respect on her father..she cannot tolerate one negative comment against her father..she better get used to it ..after all Arman is future sil and all sil's love to comment negative on FILs😆

This ff is different as you are giving detailed description of the story-each scene step by step...unlike other ffs where you used to go straight to the point. Liked it👏

Hope we get updates promptly on your vacation as we always had..



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