To Err is Human (AK/AR)1 parts 1-17 - Page 118

Congrats on a 150 pages!! Looks like we'll be looking forward to "To Err is Human : 2".. btw loved the part, and can't wait for you to continue.. I'm glad both couples are together, i wonder whats coming at them next..

Di this is defenitely the BEST part i've read!

That last little bit was soooo romantic...I mean it just perfectly showed that you don't need words to express love...and actions can emote beautifully!!!

I absoloutely loved it! And the parts before were soooo emotionalll tooo diii....Kripa giving her blood nd everything and ohhh in this part the AR part was very sizzling loved it!

I haven't been commenting di..but I LOVE the FF and I catch upp with it...it's just I don't wanan say oh Great job di and leave....and then these long comments take tooo long....so i'll comment in installments LOL

But yeahhhh love these bloomg love stories...let's seee what destiny (Bheegi Di) has in store for them 😉 😃 (by the way how does it feel being called destiny...being in control of ppls lives...though it is in a novel....unforunately I am unable to master the english language as you have and hence I lack the capabilities of writing such amazing love stories...soo I love you dearly for providing me/us with such a WONDERFUL read! 😳 )

can't wait till the next part! 😃

PART 16

wow...the part was awsome as always...everything was happening so fast that the way that everyone handled the situation was really comendable....

Especially kripa...she was so frantic about and worried about angad...but regardless of what she was going through...she fulfilled her job as a doctor rightfully....The way she was keep on asking about Angad every second expressed her inner worries and feelings toward Angad..

Omg Angad got injured!!....and even kripa knew in her heart that there was something wrong with Angad....and he was the one who was on the stretcher.....

Being a doctor can really be hard sometimes...especially when someone whom you care for is is crisis....Its hard to distinguish between being doctor and being a normal human being...Kripa wanted to be with Angad at such a crusial time...but she also knew that as a doctor she cant neglect her patients...and they should come first....

Armaan really is a true friend..he has certainly proved his love and emotions toward Angad during the whole time when Angad was being operated...The way he didnt wnat to leave his side for even a moment..was really sweet...and the fact that he didnt even worry about his own wound at that time...was something only a true friend can do....

Arrggg Why does Dr. Shashank always gives armaan a cold shoulder 😡 ...i really think this is injustice.....He is being really unfair to Armaan...he cant always judge Armaan's every action depending on whatever opinion which he had made of Armaan... I mean is there was any other doctor at that point I bet Dr. Shashank might have acknowledged them...Its one thing that he might be to into Angad's case to even compliment Angad...but i doubt that would be the case...it doenst really take long to compliment soemone for their knowledge....

ha...Rahooolll got treateedddd!!! 😆 ...way to go Armaan.he sure showed him....ha...rahul thought that he wassoo smart...but in front of Armaan he's pani kaam chai 😆 ...

awww....poor Angad hurt himself....to save Ishaan....

I like Josh...especilly the way that he treats armaan...and understands his emotions for his dearest friend Angad....It was nice of him to let Armaan stay in the operation theatre to help them out...and the other positive result of Armaan staying was that he knew how and where Angad got hurt....and the doctors were able to not waste time and treat Angad faster...otherwise if Armaan wanst there to give that important information tehre would have been a delay in the treatment....but thankfully things worked out...

i really dont like Dr. Shashank and Rahull....seriously...i mean i understand what problem Rahul has with Armaan...but what's wrong with Dr. Shanshank...he just based his judgment on armaan on one event which took place in front of his eyes.. and is now treating him so unfairely....He teaches his interns what it means to b a doctor and how to be a good doctor...but he himself is making a mistake by letting his personal opinions about armaan come in between his work...and he isnt even giving him a chance to prove himself...which is a bad impression as a senior doctor....

I can belive that Prithvi would stoop so low to even think about Angad's death....his feelings towards kripa is justified but hwo can he be so selfish to even think about getting Angad out of the way...he isnt even sure whether or not kripa likes him...which we all know that she only thinks of him as a friend....and if he feels that kripa has feelings for Angad shouldnt he be happy in kripa's happiness...but love is something which can change one for either good or bad...and in prthvi's case it seems that his love for Kripa might resualt him in chnaging for the bad....but lets see what happenes

Awww....Kripa gave her blood to Angad...how sweett 😳 ....

I loved the line when Kripa was like : Aj pehli baar koi apni hi zindagi bachane keliye apna hi khoon de raha hai....I am sooo glad that atleast Kripa became aware of her love for angad....it is a pitty that she denied her feelings all the time..until now when Angad was in such a horable condition....but better late than never.....atleats now kripa will accpet her feelings toward Angad....

Sweety is indeed a really sweet nurse....as well as really talkative 😆 ...but a really nice lady indeed...

Poor kripa was so anxious and worried baout Angad and here sweety was giving her opinion about what a wonderful human being kripa is and what a noble thing she is doing 😆 ...But sweety did realize that the issue is actually regarding love...and kripa blushing on the comment made by sweety about ishq was soo cute....The way kripa was getting impatient with Sweety's delay in getting her blood protrayed kripa's innder feelings for angad....And it was sweet hwo sweety played with the rules of the hospital regarding Kripa's hemoglobin....she knew that there was nothing more important at this point than saving someone's life...and seeing kripa's love for angad woudlnt allow her to think about the rules when soemone's life was at stake...not everyone does that....it was really sweet and considerate for sweety to do something liek that in order to save Angad....

Kripa was right that if it was Armaan instead of Angad in this state Rhidimaa would have been acting the same way as her...and would do anything to save Armaan's life....But atleast her outburt resulted in admitting her love for angad in front of Rhidimaa....I just hope that she will express her feelings to Angad really soon...

it was really sweet indeed how Rhidimaa, Armaan and Kripa were praying for Angad's well being...and that stupid prithivi ....i really think that he is loosing all his humanity slowly...i mean even at such a crucial point he was thinking about his selfish love for kripa...he couldnt have set aside his feelings just for some moments and as a true human being prayed for angad....the same person who had helped him to gain his confidence...didnt those special moments when angad helped him to be more confident with surgery's as well as himself flash in front of him for a few moements....and just taking under consideration what angad has done for him he couldnt even think about angad's well being...wonder what he will do in the future....this seems to only be the start...

What a relief....thank god that Angad was out of danger....well he had to be there were soo many people who were worried for him....and prayed for his well being with all their heart...especially Armaan and Kripa...that there was no way anything was going to go wrong with him...

I cant belive that even at such a point...all Dr. Shashank could think about was SMI's reputation...It seems that Dr. Shashank belives in the saying that the first impression is the last impression... the incident which took place on the first day at SMI with Armaan and Angad might have stayed in DR. Shashank's mind and even when he saw Angad and krip afighting along with armaan's diverted attention during his work...probably made him think that they are not capable doctors and which might have caused a negative impression for them.....Howevre i think that Dr. Shashank needs to learn alot from these interns as well....

I am glad that Armaan stood up for his friend...and its kinda sad that when Rhidimaa didnt say anything when kripa expected her to stand up for him...but cant really blame Rhidimaa either...She just respects her father alot and doenst have the courage to talk back to him....but respecting soemone is one thing and agreeing to what is wrong is another thing...hopefully with time rhidimaa will learn to stand up against what is wrong...for some reason I think that this action of Rhidimaa will result into something negative between AR...maybe when Dr. Shashank comes aware about AR's relation then rhidimaa will be too scared to take Armaan's side...out of respect towards her dad...but hopefully by then things will change and doctor shashank will realize that his perspective toward armaan isnt right...and will see the positive side of Armaan....

Omg poor kripa...she feels soo guilty about being so harsh towrads angad....well atleast now she knows the meaning behind Angad's worsd about him being used to the barish and storms since he has spent his life under the sky without a roof....

Atleast now she will be more tender and caring towards him....as Angad's life slowly unfolds infornt of her...

That chunk of the KYPH truley fits the scene...and what kripa thoughts about angad.....the lyrics reflect her inner feelings really well..

PART 17

Omg what a relief...thank god Angad was safe....well he had to there were so many people who were praying for his well being...esppecially kripa and Armaan...

Aww...poor kripa was soo embarressed to face angad after all the things she had said to him....but i am glad that Rhidimaa atleast tried to encourage her to meet him...

haha....Armaan got snapped at 😆 ...it was so funny when he was like jaisa baap waisi beti....well he better get used to it...he'll be goung through many mood swings of Rhidimaa in the future...and all of them might not be pleasent 😃 😆 ....

Armaan will certainly be in a pleasent surprise when he will realize that kripa does indeed have feelings for Angad....and i bet Armaan will be the most happiest one at that time 😊 ...

Prithvi really is a two faced 😡 ....at one point he was thinking about Angad's death...and then on the second thing he's acting all considerate in front of Angad....argg i really dont like him at alll....

aww...no way angad thinks that kripa isnt happy that he's alive...I just wished that kripa had let rhidimaa reveal her secret about donating the blood...but Kripa's love is really selfless...and the most important thing is that angad is safe...as she mentioned that she gave her own blood to save her own life....so why would she try to show what a big deed she has done in front of other people...when what she did was for her life her love....

Prithvi can smile and feel happy for rhidimaa not telling kripa anything....because sooner or later angad will come to know about how much kripa loves him...and to what extenet she is willing to go for him....

Good thing that Dr. Josh came and handeled the situation between armaan and rahul...otherwise things might have gone out of hand...Armaan is the one who has the right on anagd and not Rahul...not only because he's angad's dearest friend....but because if it wasnt for armaan then angad's treatment might have gotten delayed with Rahul's wrong asummption about where angad got injured...which might have caused angad's health to get even more serious...so yeah rahul can just back off 😡

I really dont like the way Dr. Shahank always insults armaan....i mean seriously why cant he be nice to him for once...even after seeing that he's injured he cant be considerate even as a human being....

i really wished that rhidimaa had stood up for Armaan at that point like armaan did....Its one thing that she respects her father...but she really needs to learn how to stand up for what is wrong...even if it means standing up sgainst her father.....I mean she didnt even say anything when Dr. Shashank was talking rubbish about Angad..even for the sake of her friendship...but i hope that this act of her doesnt create problems between AR...and that with time she learns to speaks up for her love....Armaan didnt cross his limitaions of being younger than Dr. Shashank....but yet he saved his delf respect....which is osmething Rhidimaa needs to learn to do...

I really like the way Armaan is always ready to stand up for his love....aithout thinking who he is standing against...which is a really daring and courages thing to do....

Armaan really does knwo how to arouse feeling in Rhidimaa....and the way he called her soniye was soo cuteee!!

haha....Rhidimaa got all scared when Armaan was locking teh door and taking his shirt off 😆

Really liked their teasing in the ER room...and Rhidimaa getting spellbounded by seeing Armana's physic..loll.....

wohh....jealous and possessive Rhidimaa really can be dangerous...abhi tho sirf damki mili hai...but Armaan better watch out in the future..and be sure not to get on her bad side 😆

arrggg...that nurse had to kill their moment..loll....well good thing she didnt see AR together otherwise it wouldnt have taken long for the whole SMI to know about AR being together...and omg what if Dr. Shashank came to knoww...thab tho bechara Armaan geya kaam se 😆


aww...kripa wasnt to be with Angad because she knows that he needs soemone to be with him at that moment...and the only person whom he desires now is kripa...

It was sweet how Kripa was thinking about Angad;s words...and yes angad has definatly stole the most important possession of kripa...her heart 😳 ..

omg i really hope that kripa's parents accept Angad....i hope that they see the love between AK and not let Angad's past be an issue between them....As parents oviously they woud think about kripa's welfare...and that who ever she marries will always keep her happy...but some parents get worried when it comes to the guys background...but I really really hope that they understand angad...and will accept him for who he is....

Kripa's right ke angad thorda behkahu hua hai...and that's because there was noone to show him the right path...but its really comendable that even after being all alone he was able to stay away from many of the bad aspects such as drinking, smoking, and hanging out with the wrong people...he is a selfmade man...he has come such a long way naftre enduring so much and struggling with his will power,hard work and facing the harshness of life...which is really commendable 👏 ...but now that he has gotten kripa's love he will get a new perspective towards life...and all his negative thoughts about money making will soon change...and he will understand the true meaning of love and life...

omg even after being in such a state...Angad was able to feel kripa....how sweeet 😳 ....

Angad's words were soo touching....i am glad that kripa heard his inner feelings ...and now is aware of how much angad likes her...and all the confusion about what anga thinks about her have now vanished....and hopefully she will have no trouble expressing her feelings toward angad....

one thing is for sure that even though kripa and Angad were fighting in the begininng...but their quarrel was just another bahana to get close to eachother....their hatred was actaully a mask to cover their true feelings for eachother....but now that mask has been taken off...to reveal the true feelings inside of them....

aww...they held eachother's hand all night how cuteee 😳

haha...i loved it when kripa was like I am not a sister and definalty not ur sister 😆

Aww...loved their teasing about the clip...really cute...and I am soo glad that they are teasing with eachother...and the way kripa is caring for him...

I loved the ending it was beautifully written....AK really dont need words to express their feelings...and unspoken words are way more deep and powerfull then spoken words...it shows the deep bonding between two people...

marvalous parts as always...and i am guessing some romance will be in the air 😃 ...cant wait...and oh congrats on reacing 150 pages...truley deserved it...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏

thanks kimmu, manaa and Mita

loved ur replies. I am sorry i would not be able to respond in detail as this topic needs to be closed.

Manaa- don't underestimate ur self...i think u would do a gr8 job writing love stories to...u just have to give it a shot 😉

Mita- wonderful comments as always. Love the way u summarise and analyse everything...u have made good points regarding Riddhima (her relationship with her dad) and angad (thoda behkaa hua hai)- will armaan and Kripa's love triumph over their partner's weaknesses in the long run?? 😉

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=924693&TPN=1 &#15826886

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