Pyar Ishq Aur Mohabbat! NOTE PG33(27/7/08) - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Asian_dudette

Hey Nainu,

This was a wikid part!!!Thanks
Too good... I loved the canteen scene... the filmy part was soo hilarios... 🤣 🤣 🤣 chalau atleast someone doesnt think my humour is cheap and vulgar

I love SholayWho doesnt love sholay 😉 .. so it was really good to read.. and Shubu's line: "Kirti Gabbar hi hai, yaha pe bhi aur ghar pe bhi..." that was too funny!!! Bechara Shubu... no chootkara!! 😆 😆 Yep that Kirti never leaves him alone...bechara, he does all the cooking at home aswell

That Ray and Ali scene...was toooo good... Ray is just toooooooo damn funny and mischevious and oh yea and NOSY!!! 😆 😆 😆Yep...hes kind of like me...im nosy too 😆

'Bandarya', now cant wait for her entry... hopefully she will teach this RAY a lesson...or shall i call him BAKRA!! 😆 😉 call him bakra!! 😆 lets annoy him!! yes this bandarya will teach him a lesson of a lifetime...becahara Ray

Armaan and Ridz scene was just tooooo cute and romantic... 😳 😳. I love the way u decribed his thoughts!! 😳 thanks for thinking its romantic...im not very good with romance 😳

And lastly my favourite part of this chapter: Atul and Armaan's chemistry!! That was soooo damn sweet!! 😃 😳 😳 Aww thanks 😳 I loved all those sweet gifts that he got Atul... too cute!! Just a good idea!!! May be i should do the same for my sis!!! 😃 😆 😆 lol i do that to my sis! well not the whole present thingy...but i jump on her bed 😆 😉

Thanks for the PMNo problem and a brill update!!! 😊 Tnx..once again

Tc
Dudette Is that your real name? 😆

Ps: Love the philosophical lines as usualYep i love philosophy so its a must!! for me atleast 😳 and the name of the chapter!!hehe..cheers and cant wait for the next part!! 😃



Thanks!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *Kanu*

hi Nainu !!
sorry dear for coming here so late
i hope you forgive ur kanu di
😃 .

will comment on all the parts in a bit, just goin to start reading the parts



Hey Kanu di!!

what sorry? elder sister dnt apologise...they boss us younger brainless ones around 😆 😆 You can boss me around 😃 ..aap ka hukum sarankhon pe 😉 Lol....have a good time reading the parts...
btw.. they are realllyyy long 😆 i hope u dnt fall asleep reading!
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Posted: 17 years ago

CHAPTER 9A: BIRTHDAY SURPRISES

SANJEEVANI

RECEPTION DESK

After being squeezed by a series of hugs and birthday wishes from his fellow interns, including Anjali to Atul's shock. They all assembled themselves in front of the reception desk; Dr Kirti assigned them their duties, when she gave Atul his duty she added

"Happy birthday Dr Joshi, but that does not mean that you will be excused or will be given any special treatment by any staff members" she said looking at all of the interns and finally laying her gaze at Atul.

"Arrey Atul! Happy birthday!" Shubankhar said walking towards the interns oblivious to the fact that Kirti was standing just there. All the interns were signalling to him that Kirti was standing behind him. But silly Shubankhar didn't understand them.

"Kuch plan hain kya tumhaare birthday ki? Koi birthday party?" Shubs asked Atul nudging him slightly. Dr Kirti coughed. Dr Shubankhar realised who it was, and he turned around in slow motion. Immediatley he started to sweat

"Woh…er Kirti woh main Atul say keh raha tha…ke er, no parties and erm…duties comes first" Shubs said stuttering and looking down at the floor.

Ray was looking at his favourite doctor and thinking Shubankhar sir ki tau waat lag gayee, bechaare shubs sir…har rauz uss Hitler kau sehna padta hai…

Keerti gave a piercing gaze to Shubhankar and then the interns and said in her Hitler voice "What are you all still doing here? Don't you have your duties to attend to?" Although she only meant that for the interns, even Shubhankar got scared and scattered from here to there and ran away with them.

Kirti was standing there fuming and said "Just watch what I do to you at home, aaj tau tumhari khair nahin"

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CORRIDOOR (walking towards Burns unit)

Ray and Aaliyah were on their way to their duty, as usual Aaliyah was in a foul mood due to none other than Ray. He had been annoying her since yesterday, calling her Bakri, making weird faces or asking her to do 'Meh meh meh'. Aaliyah was going to kill that Bandar of hers when she came down, but before that she had a bigger problem in her hand. Today Ray had gone a step too far and had been consistently chanting a nursery rhyme changing a few words here and there.

(Recite in 'Baba black sheep' tune)

Baba Bakri have u any brain,

No sir, No sir coz she is insane,

One, she's pagal

Two, she's lame

Three, she's a bakri who doesn't have a name

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PAEDIATRIC WARD

Armaan was assisting Dr Padma today with Minnie's case for the morning session, whereas Ridz was assisting Dr Shweta with a surgery.

Armaan was told by Dr Padma to get all the tests done, so they could make a report to decide what further steps they would be taking. Ever since Armaan has started handling her case, Minnie and him had become cartoon buddies. Always discussing and watching cartoons, when he was meant to be on duty. Armaan had become Minnie's favourite doctor, and vice versa.

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CANTEEN (Break time)

"Come on Atul all you have to do is look sober" Anjie said looking at a paper, which looked like a script.

"Anjali" Atul moaned "I can't do sober" he frowned looking at the script.

They were both talking to each other calmly and patiently, which surprised the canteen walle bhaiya, he was usually used to hearing them argue and quarrel. For the first time in history, there was a calm silence in the canteen whilst Atul and Anjali were both present. They were discussing profusely when Dr Kirti approached them.

"I'm not on break for long, but how are the rehearsals going? How are they getting along?" she asked taking a seat.

"Well, I think the rehearsals are going well, we're not getting any complaints from Armaan and Riddhima or Sapna and Sameer" Atul said taking a sip from his coffee "Aaliyah and Ray on the other hand are a different story"

Dr Kirti on the other hand looked thoroughly annoyed.

"But they're getting along fine" Anjali said quickly before Kirti would go into Hitler mode.

"They better be working well, because the event is next week. I don't want any mistakes" She said getting up from her chair to leave

"Sorry ma'am I just wanted to ask how your rehearsals are going." Atul asked as she got up. Kirti turned around she was a bit reluctant to say anything because Shubhankar was really annoying her.

"Dr Atul you take care of your own self, and ill take care of my business" saying that she left a scared Atul behind.

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SIERRA TOWERS

ATUL'S B-DAY GET TOGETHER

"Wow! Your flats so clean! I thought it would be like a pigsty" Ray said looking around the lounge.

"Yeah Bhaiyu keeps it clean. Otherwise it would have been a pit" Armaan said jumping on a bean bag seat. Ray sat down next to Atul on the sofa. Aaliyah sat next to Anjali on the other sofa, they both made sure it was as far away as possible from Ray and Atul. Riddhima sat on the bean bag next to Armaan, which he had pulled out for her.

"Yeh Sapna di kaha reh gayee?" Ray asked looking at his watch.

"Sapna Sameer ke saath ane wali thi" Anjali said looking up from a magazine she was looking at.

"Ohhhh, no wonder she's late!" Aaliyah said cheekily

"Eh!! Meri behen ke baare mein airee gairee baate mat kar!" Ray said giving her evil looks.

"Oh guys please don't start here" Atul said whilst Armaan went to put a CD into the music player.

"Hey isn't that Atif's new album?" Aaliyah asked as the song started playing.

Atif Aslam: Meri Kahani

You tube link;

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wh-AgS7PKdM&feature=relat ed

Aao le ke chaloon tumko,

Bachpan ki un galiyon mein…

Jaha rang hai,

Yaar hai,

Fursat hai,

Shayad kahi isme…

Tumko tum milo.

Chalo kahoon tumse mein…

Meri kahani!!!

Jhola Jhulaye Yeh Panghat

Nadiya Kinare Yeh Aangan

Neendiya To Aana Hawa Ke Sang

Mujhko Bhi Tu Dikhana Apne Rang

Suno Mere Dil Jani Yeh Kahani Mani

Ek Din Mere Sang Yeh Jahan Tha

Mera Kuch Or Tera Hi Arman

Jane Dil Main Kya Kuch Yeh Basa Tha

Yeh Meri Hai Kahani

Yeh Meri Kahani

Armaan and Atul reminisced the times when their dad used to push them on the swings and how their mum used to shower them with love when they were kids.

Jhola Jhulaye Yeh Panghat

Nadiya Kinare Yeh Aangan

Neendiya To Aana Hawa Ke Sang

Mujhko Bhi Tu Dikhana Apne Rang

Tera Mera Galiyoon Main Yun Phirna

Phirte Phirte Raat Ko Yun Thakna

Thak Ke Nani Ki Godi Main Sona

Pariyoon Ke Desh Ja Ke Nahaana

Yeh Meri Hai Kahani

Yeh Meri Kahani

Ray remembered the childhood times when his Nani used to put him to sleep in her lap and Ali remembered the times when her dad used to read her fairy stories.

Koi Fikar Thi Na Koi Bahana

Muthi Main Tha Jaise Yeh Zamana

Kacchi Zuban Main Wo Geet Gana

Naye Khilone Sab Ko Dikhana

Man Liya Zindagi Se Zyda

Chin Gaya Woh Jisne Kya Wada

Kaun Laye Woh Pal Jo Suhane

Beete The Jo Woh Guzre Zamane

Yeh Meri Hai Kahani

Yeh Meri Kahaniiiiiiiiiii

Anjali and Ridz recalled their times, when they played with their toys, their college memories, those carefree times in Delhi.

As the song embraced the room, and reached their ears…they all remembered their past, their childhood which has been lost somewhere in their animated world of adulthood. Each of them reflected upon their memories. All the good times in their past, brightening their present.

As the song played its last verse, Ray as usual, decided to break the ice

"Arrey yaar, kitna senti song lagaya, mujhe mere bachpan ki yaad aagayi, not that I am old… Main salaun baras ki…" He said singing the last part. "Tu satra baras ka" He sang looking at Aaliyah.

"Do I look like a guy?" Aaliyah said throwing a pillow at him which missed, and hit Atul instead. Just then the door bell rang; Atul got up to get the door, as Ray started chanting the nursery rhyme again. Whilst Armaan decided to go to the kitchen to get the snacks, Riddhima joined him.

Atul opened the door to be greeted by Sapna and Sameer.

"Hey guys"

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KITCHEN

"Yo basket! Can you pass me the glasses from that cupboard there" Armaan asked Ridz pointing to a high cabinet. She opened the cabinet whilst Armaan was opening up the cake box. Riddhima was trying to reach the glasses but her hands fell short. She tried to tiptoe, to no avail. Armaan was about to ask her what was taking so long with the glasses, when he saw her tiptoeing. He smiled and looked at her carefully for the first time today. She was wearing a knee length black skirt with a sleeveless grey top.

She looks so cute and innocent, her soft facial features, so delicate. Her eyes say nothing, yet speak so much.

Armaan went up behind her really close and reached up to the cupboard. Riddhima froze the moment Armaan's hand brushed hers, whilst subconsciously his other hand held Ridz's waist. She shuddered at his touch, and stood there not knowing what to do or say as he took out all the glasses.

Armaan's hand was still on her waist, as soon as he had gotten all of the glasses down. He pulled her closer to him, she whispered "Armaan"

"Sssshhhhh" He said placing a finger on her lips, he slowly moved her hair back and whispered in her ear

"Aaj tum bohut khoobsurat lag rahee hau"

She felt his leg brush against hers, as he was just millimetres behind her. Then all of a sudden he let go, embarrassed with what he had done. He took a step back and looked down out of shame

"Er…I'm sorry"

Riddhima also looked down due to the awkwardness and said softly

"Buddhu kitni baar baulu…dosti mein no sorry, no thank you"

Armaan laughed slightly and walked back to the counter.

"You get the plates" Armaan said "and I'll get the cake"

"Okay" Riddhima said grabbing the plates and walking out the kitchen first.

"What was I thinking?" Armaan muttered to himself as he picked up the cake "She only thinks of you as a friend!"

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"Happy birthday to you,

Happy birthday to you,

Happy birthday Dear Atul

Happy birthday to you!"

They all sang as Atul blew the candles off his chocolate cake. He cut his cake and fed the first slice to Armaan, who stuffed a slice of cake in Atul's mouth.

Atul then grabbed another piece of cake, and fed the person on his left, without realising that it was Anjali. She took a bite of that piece and fed the rest of it to him. For the first time, a new emotion aroused within both of them, something that neither had the ability to recognise… yet.

Atul fed them all pieces of cake, after which Anjie handed him a big card from them all, he opened it immediately, the card was filled with writing all over.

He laughed as he read all the comments; Ray as usual had written his faltu jokes and bakwas, Aaliyah being herself had written a very motherly note, which had been indecently made fun of by Ray. Sapna had written her message in Gujju, with a translation so that Atul could understand Gujarati. Sameer on the other hand had written a sweet yet simple message. Anjali being her practical self had written a straight forward message with a threat in it. Ridz had written a soppy sweet note with a little poem in it, and Armaan being his naughty self had written a very childlike note.

After he finished reading, Anjie handed him the gift bag on behalf of all of them, which had a Swiss watch, he took it out and wore it and thanked everyone by giving them all a hug.

As they all sat watching TV, consuming some light snacks, Sapna looked thoroughly bored and said

"Guys this is so boring… lets do something fun"

Ray like usual sucked up and agreed with his Di.

"Why don't we all play 21 dares?" Aaliyah said looking away from the TV.

Sameer who had been unusually quiet spoke up "What is that?"

Aaliyah explained the game as they all made themselves comfortable on the floor, in which they all had to recite numbers, and the maximum numbers they were allowed to say at once were four, after which it was the turn of the next person. Whoever said no 21 had to do a dare. She gave an example to make it clear, she said 1,2,3,4 after which Atul said 5, 6 then Sameer said 7, etc etc until it reached 21, and the person who said 21, had to do the dare. Unluckily for Sameer, number 21 landed on him first.

Hey Guys,

Sorry, this is another chapter that has been split into two parts...lol i got carried away. The other half of this chapter is more fun...i promise😃 Please do leave a comment... bad or good!!!

Thanks

Luv

Nainu

xxx

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Posted: 17 years ago
reserved... to acknowledge my presence cause im never coming back to comment 😉



JKS! I might come back after i read it 😆 😆

*EDIT*

"We're just friends." You're so annoying Bakri 😡

But omg... The baba bakri nursery rhyme is HILARIOUS 🤣 I was in splits and Sofa's like SHUT UP!! Watch me get her back when she reads this part 😛

Now.. where did you end at? You suck at sloppy stuff 😆 Joking!! Don't kill me!!! The near to last scene was awesome 😳...

Now who's going to dare Sameer... isn't that why you were asking for a romantic dare? 😆😆 I wonder wat AR and RA are gonna do 😉

And whats with the play?? Some event hai kya?? 😆😆😆

HAHA!! I can't wait till I get in the FF, it's gonna be dm funny 😆😆😆

JALDI CONTINUE KARNA!!!! 😆😆😆

~Bandarya
Edited by Veiledbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
naina the poem was so hillarious..lol..aise ideas aate kahaan se hain haan?? 😉 ....lzz post the next part soon....i wanna read it bad!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey meri bakri 😉 😉

how r u? 😃
wowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!
😆

bada mast prt tha yaar 👏

atul-i cant be sober omg 🤣 dat was damm funny 😆 😆

grt prt 👏 jus luved it 👏
cont super sooooooooooooonnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey
awsome part
loved it
and this one was soooo funny too good

Baba Bakri have u any brain,

No sir, No sir coz she is insane,

One, she's pagal

Two, she's lame

Three, she's a bakri who doesn't have a name

i loved it
do update soon
i will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey wot cn i say...
luvin it as usual
it was really gd
I LUVED da nursey ryhme
reminded me of one of me m8s lol
seriously it was really gd
ar scnee very cute
cnt wiat 2 c wot happens wiv da 21 dares...
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
reallllllllly nice part.good going.
continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
I have updated my comment on page 22 . . .

😆 😆 😆 Felt like being weird 😃
Edited by Veiledbeauty - 17 years ago

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