love again part 1 pg 2 comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
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~Promo~

A guy and a girl are shown in a cafe. They look younger than 20. The guy has black spiked hair and brown eyes. The girl has brown shoulder-length hair and brown eyes. They are holding hands and gazing into each others eyes. Everyone surrounding could feel the love between them. Suddenly the sould of a bell ringing is heard as the door opens. A girl younger than 20 enters. She has past-waist length black hair and light grey/dark silver eyes. She goes to the counter and orderes a coffee. After getting her coffee, she turns and starts walking towards the door when suddenly she stops at hearing the guys voice.

Guy- Oh Latisha, I love you so much.

Girl- I love you too, Vivek.

The black haired girl turns around and sees the couple. Her eyes go wide and she gasps in shock. She drops her drink. The couple turn toward her and look really shocked and embarrased.

Both the guy and the girl start walking towards the girl when she run out. The couple utter only one word, "Tanisha" as they follow her. Vivek grabs Tanisha's arm and turns her around facing him. She takes one look at him, raises her hand and slaps him hard across his face. He lets go of her out of shock. She turns, runs to her car and leaves. The couple left staring after her with their eyes fill with guilt, regret, and shame.

i HOPE ALL OF YOU LIKED THIS LITTLE PROMO. What do you think the relstionship between these three people was? Please comment and let me know what you think. Did you like it and want me to continue? or Did you hate it and want me to not continue?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds very intersting!! 👏 please contiue soon!! 😳

❤️ Sanyaa
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg, how dramatic! Sounds great. Can't wait to find out about their past. Please continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4

Thank you for ur comments

ok this is the introduction of the characters

Intro

Tanisha- also known as Tannu....has past waist dark black hair and light grey/dark silver eyes....21 yrs. old....born on october the 25th....studies in Destiny Collage or otherwise known as DC....she is really popular at her college for her kind and angry nature....she is the best singer in the college and also the best painter....is on the soccer team for her college....everyone that goes to that college, whether the teachers or the students, know that she absolutly loathes her sisters, cousin, and parents....the reason remains unknown....{{Read the story to find out the reason}}

Kavya- has spiky black hair....grey eyes....22 yrs. old....born on june the 13th....studies in DC....is tannu's cousin....is popular in college for his flirty nature....plays basketball with his friends after school sometimes....is always bothering tannu about the way she acts in school or something else....has been dating anjali for the past 2 years

Gauri- mid-back black hair....black eyes....22 yrs. old....born on august the 5th....studies in DC....tannu's older sister....popular for her sweet and talkative nature....is always bothering tannau about her rude nature to the family....twins with kripa....is dating shiv

Kripa- shoulder-length brown/black hair....black eyes....22 yrs. old....born on august the 5th....twin of gauri....studies in DC....tannu's sister....is always fighting with tannu about one thing or another....popular for her fashion sense and cute smile....is crazy about modeling....is dating angad

Shiv- Brown/black hair.....brown eyes....22 yrs. old....born on may 15th....goes to DC....popular for his sweet/kind and flirty nature....is dating gauri....is a singer but doesn't sing much

Angad- black/brown hair....blue eyes....22 yrs. old....born on may 15th....goes to DC....popular for his sexy nature....is more into music than shiv....is usually tannu's partner in singing at school plays and concerts

Zaib- light brown hair....grey eyes....22 yrs. old....born on may 15th....goes to a college in Americs but will go to DC this year....is crazy about music and painting....mostly quiet natured....usually dates but not much....can be flirty when in the mood....is the best singer in his family

Anjali- black hair....brown eyes....21 yrs. old....born on january 31....goes to DC....is crazy about fashion desigining....dating kavya....tries to be tannu's friend but tannu ignores her....is popular for her sweet and lovely nature

Vivek and Latisha play a big role in tannu's behavior and will help zaib find the reason for her attitude and behavior

that was all the important characters that we need to know

did you guys like the intro?

plz comment ppl

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww wow lovely intro and part do continue soon,....can totally see that zaib is the new love in tannu's life 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
hey guys thnx for the comments im going to write the next part soon i did write a long long one but my computer froze and i lost it all so im taking a break from this story for a couple of days not long so just look out for the updated part k?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow nice character intro luv them all great part wonder who really the couple was???continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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** Sorry, Double Post **

Edited by rima791 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9
hey guys i'll update soon promise just look out for it!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Love again

part1

ok guys heres the 1st part hope u like plz comment

A girl is shown getting out of the car…we see only her back. She is wearing a silver churidar with silver high heels. She is wearing silver payals that make a sweet melody as she walks. Her past waist black hair is being played with by the playful wind. Her hands are shown by her side…with silver bangles that participated in the melody with her payals. The people standing around the college are shocked to see her dressed like this. They start whispering to each other while pointing to her. She walks to the canteen and goes to a table filled with two boys. They both had black messy hair and brown eyes…but only one of them had his right ear pierced. They look up at her and burst out laughing. She sits down angrily and her grey/silver eyes are shown…pissed off.

Girl- ha ha very funny you guys…I swear I'll get revenge on you two for this Prem, Adi

P- Come on Tannu its funny…for once to see you dressed like this and that to in college

T- Whatever…just you two wait I'll get my vengeance look out for it

The sound of the bell is heard and they get up and start leaving…Tannu bumps into someone while walking. She looks up and sees a girl with shoulder length brown hair and light brown eyes wearing a blue skirt and a white tank top. She was with three guys and two girls. Two of the guys were twins. The girl she bumped into was glaring at her and she glared back. The other people in the group were looking her up and down shocked.

G- Watch where you're going Tannu

T- Why don't you kripa?

Kripa was about to reply but is interrupted by one of the twins.

G- Tannu why are you dressed like this?

T- Ugghh these two losers dared me Shiv otherwise never and that to in this college hell no

She walks away with the two guys. They enter a room full of students and the teacher absent. The screen fades away and reappears with Tannu in her car listening to music. She stops the car and gets out in front of a big bungalow. She walks to the door and opens the door and sees a big crowd in the living room talking. The gang she had bumped into was there…her parents…another couple…and a guy with his back to her. Her mom looks at her and motions her to come sit with them. She goes and greets them…still wondering what the hell was going on. Then her mom breaks the news to her…shocking her to the core.

Mom- Tannu meet your fiance Zaib…remember you got engaged when you were young and were promised that you would get married the minute you turned 21 but due to some reasons that didn't happen but now you'll get married after your graduation which is only 2 months away…they'll pass by in a breeze right Naina?

Naina- of course and then Tannu will become my bahu along with her sisters.

She had yet to look at Zaib…and now didn't want to at all. She sat next to him in shock as everyone else talked to each other excitedly. Her brows were scrunched together thinking about what she was going to do…she couldn't marry him besides he would probably refuse himself when he finds out her truth…her reason to live…her everything…her world. He would turn tail and go back to America and then she would be free from this marriage…yes that's what she'll do…tell him about Kris. Just then her phone rang making her jump…she got up and excused herself. Unaware of the grey eyes watching her smile talk and twirl her hair as she spoke on her phone. She comes back to find the parents gone and was about to leave herself when Shiv pulled her down next to Zaib. She bumped into him and felt something happen to her…keeping her gaze down she apologizes. His deep husky voice gives her goose bumps as he tells her it's ok.

Shiv- so Tannu ready for the big marriage…I still remember how you used to mess around with Zaib all the time when we were little…promising each other you would only marry the other or stay unmarried for life.

Everyone laughs and starts talking about their days as little kids…memories come to the surface. Seeing everyone busy she gets up and goes to the garden…unknown that a certain someone was following her. She sat on swing next to the big tree that had ZluvsT carved on it. She gets up and traces the writing smiling softly…another hand comes and traces it along with hers. She gasps and turns around meeting grey eyes.

hope you all liked it so srry for the long wait but been busy so yea anyways from now on rinki will be using mi account to update the parts for my stories so thanks a lot to her luv ya babe and anywayz plz comment and tell me what you think

khushi

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