FF - Dil se ..Part 18 Pg 32 - 28/6 - Page 9

very cute and nice update
please continue soon

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....choo choooo choooooooo cuteeee .........loved it trulyyyy 👏 plz plz plz abh aur intezaar mat karwana....cont sooooooooon 😆

wow pari excellent ff and soooooo imaginagible with out thinking it is fake its really awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsome 👏 👏
👏 and iam very happy that ridz parents accepted arman and description from padma's side is excellent and aim very eager to know how will muskaan react after knowing about arman and ridz engagement ofcourse she cant do any thing
cant able to control to say
👏 pari the great 👏
👏 pari the great 👏
👏 pari the great 👏
please do continue soon and plsssssssssssssssssssss pm me when u have done it

Pari 👏 👏 👏

I like the fan fiction on DMG. 👏 👏I have read part 7 and 8 and what i loved :

1) Arman being brave and asking shashank for advice and stuttering at the same time 😆 😆

2) I like the way shashank is trying to help armi 👏

3) Love nani's idea about getting arman engaged to someone else 😳

4) Shash asking arman if he loves someone and he says ridz and everyone is shocked 👏👏

5) Shash smiling saying that he has no problem with their relationship and gets their blessings 😊

6) The way you described how anji comes and turns the whole happy environment around asks ridz if she loves that arman. I like the way anji is being protective of ridz and making sure that arman really does love her 👏👏

7) Anji wants to tease arman . bechara arman kaisi saali mile hai usse. 😆😆😆

8) The way they tease him is so sweet. 😆

aww i love all you comments a big HUG 🤗 and reenie kya baat hai pura ka pura analysis huh 😛 luved it yaar, n now go n read part 9 as well 😉

i m really sorry ki main individual replies nahi kar rahi hu but each and every comment is very imp to me and i do read them... but due to lack of time i m unable to reply individually, i will update the ff as soon as possible

@ridz and urmila: i will pm u two when i update pakka 😳

Lovely Pari 😳 Armaan...new form of his...I have never imagined him as a homely boy,but ur story unravels that side of Armaan.Thanks 😳

Superb part Pari!!..Continue soon.. 😉

hey 9th part was too gud
plz continue soon

hey pari this is not fair it has been really very long time iam not able to wait please do continue soon please 😭 and thanks a lot as u indicated that u will pm me after completing ur next part.i will be waiting for ur pm
ur loving urmila

firstly i m very very very soor for this long delay, but hope that this part will compensate for it 😳

i have also added a little preview at the end so do tell me if u like it.... and also add if u want me to add any thing like comedy or and thing ... n i want all ur feedback both positive and negative... but honest ones 😳 ok?

Part 10

After an hour or so

At gupta residence all gone to sleep, but ridz is restless.she keeps tossing around, just then a text arrives.
Muje miss kar rahi ho na? soch rahi ho ki mein ghar pohncha ki nahi? Mein ghar aa gaya hu aur tumhe bahaut miss kar raha hu. Aaj mein bahut bahut bahut khush hu… luv u Armaan.

Ridz smiles and replies

Tumhe kaise pata ki mein abhi tak jag rahi hu? Aur tumhe miss kar rahi hu?.... aur mein bhi aaj bahut khush hu…. Lekin aab tum so jao, hum kal sanjeevani mein milte hai… ridhima

Armi's reply came as follows

Muje kaise pata? Kyunki mere dil ne mujse kaha ki tum mere ghar pohunchne ke msg ka wait kar rahi ho. Aur haan kal milte hai, luv u gud night and my dreams.

Ridz smiled and blushed reading "my dreams"

N replied saying same to u. n went to sleep..



Next morning (I know this day was very very very long in my ff na hehe but atleast its new day now 😉😆)

At SANJEEVANI in locker room

armi is there remembering last night events and smiling to himself and blushing, just then atul comes

Atul: hey Armaan… kya baat hai, bahaut sharma raha hai… huh?

Armi: are nahi yaar kuch nahi…

Just then muskaan comes

Muski: hey atul, n goes near armi and says hi Armaan

Armi gives a forced smile and says hi n turns to his locker and starts wearing his coat when anji and ridz enters, armi sees ridz and couldn't stop looking at her as she was wearing a new salwaar kameez and was looking really beautiful…anji notices armi staring at ridz and goes near him while ridz looks down blushing and goes to her locker.

Anji: Armaan… and touches his shoulder…

Armi wakes up and : aa…. Haaan anji tu .. tu ..tum kuch keh rahi thi

Anji smiles: haan mein gud morning keh rahi thi

Armi: haan gud morning … kitni achi morning hai na… (n puts his hands around her shoulder.) nice… aur aaj bilkul badal nahi thee asmaan mein clear tha bilkul aasmaan hai na?

Muski: haan… (speaking like she is mesmerised)

Armi, ridz and anji notices this but before they can say anything rahul enters…

Ra: hey anji, hey atul, hi Armaan, hello ridhima.

All says hi to rahul but muski is back to normal and gets irritated and opens her locker and gets her coat out and starts wearing it and then goes from there.

ANNOUNCEMENT: ALL INTERNS TO NURSE STATION

All go except armi and ridz who are last ones…. And walk a bit behind everyone…

Armi holds ridz's finger and says

Armi: kal raat theek se neend ayi

Ridz: haan... aur tumhe?

Armi: haan… lekin..

Ridz: lekin?

Armi: lekin sapno mein bhi tum ayi aur …

Ridz blushing: aur?

Armi: aur muje cheedha rahi thi anji aur atul ke saath mil kar aur tum teeno haas rahe the… n makes a puppy face

Ridz laughs silently….

Armi: aur tumhare sapne mein kya ho raha tha?

But they have reached the nurse station and dr. keerti is coming so ridz silently tells armi abt dr. keerti and armi slowly leaves ridz's hand….

Dr. keerti: dr. rahul aaj aap ICU mein rahenge dr. atul ke saath,

Atul and rahul: jee mam

Dr. keerti: dr, muskaan aur dr. anjali aap dono OPD mein aur dr. Armaan aap dr. ridhima ke saath general ward mein rahenge.

Ridz: jee dr. keerti.

All go while armi pulls ridz to fire escape area n pushes her to the wall n comes closer to her and holds her hands

Arm: aaj tum bahut khoobsoorat lag rahi ho.

Ridz blushes and looks down.

Armi smiles: waise tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya…

Ridz looks confusingly at him: jawab?

Armi: haan! Ki tumhare sapne mein kya ho raha tha?

(he is still playing with her fingers)

Ridz naughtily: sapne mein? Muje toh koi sapna nahi aya

Armi: acha? N looks sad.

Ridz: hmm.. bas muje kuch bite lamhe dekhai diye

Armi looks up: bite lamhe?

Ridz: haan hamari saari yaadein. N smiles

Armi sighs sweetly: oye hoye n kisses her forehead and hands

Ridz blushes n smiles: aab chale? Duty pe jana hai.

Armi sighs : hmm chalooo warna wooh gabar hame nahi chodegi.

And they both laugh n goes to general ward.

IN GENERAL WARD.

There is a new patient here called Kria she is an astrologer and had a small accident. Ridz and armi went to see her.

Ridz: hello mein dr. ridhima hu aur aapka kya naam hai?

Kria: log muje kria sharma ke naam se jante hai, aur hum logon ka bhavishya batate hai

Armi: ohhh ok mera naam dr. Armaan hai, kya hua aap ko. Yeh chot kaise lagi?

Kria explains how she met with accident and ridz and armi puts bandages n does some tests

They are then busy with their duties the whole day.

IN EVENING. All are in locker room as their duties are over, atul and rahul are gone

Anji: Armaan, ridz muje tum logo se kuch baat karni hai, par akele mein (looking at muski) tum dono jaldi se bahar aa jao

PRECAP: Armi: suno, aaj shaam tum mere saath bahar chalogi?

Ridz: aaj? Par?

Armi: please (makes a cute face)