FF - Dil se ..Part 18 Pg 32 - 28/6 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG komal: loved your comments sweety.... thanks... hmm n abt ur suggestions ... will try n include them pakka 😉 n i'll also try to update my ff soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow what an update
bechara armaan
plzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi continue karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@pari....soon nahi...aaj aaj plz plz plzzz...cont today na
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow fantastic
bechara armaan 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pariii yaaaaaaaar the suspense is killin me....plz contttttttttttt 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 9

Armi stands there shocked and then sees ridz with her back to him laughing like hell…

He goes there silently and holds ridz from her waist and gives her a kiss on cheeks before she realises what happened. Ridz gets shocked and stops laughing immediately and releases her self from armi's arms looks around the room to find herself alone in room with armi. She asks armi abt anji but he says woh to gayi…. And gives a naughty smile to ridz….n gets up from bed… n starts walking towards ridz…

Armi: tumhe bahaut hasi aa rahi thi na…. hmmm??? Muje cheedha kar?

Ridz is moving back: umm wooh din e mujse help mangi aur..

Armi: aur tumne kar di right?

Ridz in naughty mood: haan… kyun galat kiya?

Armi: smiles sarcastically: nahi bilkul nahi…. . Pata hai, mein kitna daar gaya tha? … aur waise anji tumhe aise kyun le gayi thi upar?

Ridz has now stopped walking backwards and both are just standing n armi is playing with ridz's hands like he always does.

Ridz: wooh? Are di bas yeh janna chahti thi ki kya uss shart ke baad bhi mein tum par bharosa karti hu?

Armi gets sad and say: tumne kya kaha?

Ridz: meine unhe bataya ki uss shart ke baad bhi tumne mera saath diya mom ke waqt aur suspension ke waqt bhi, aur muje yeh ehsaas hua ki mein shart ke baad bhi tumse pyaar karti hu…. And that ki I trust u…

Armi smiled and kissed her hand…

Just then nani called ..
Armaan ridheema chalo neeche khana lag gaya hai.. aa ke khana kha lo…

Ridz: haan nani …

Armi was just looking at her lovingly and smiling…which made her blush

Ridz: chale Armaan?

Armi: hmm… chalo

They went down stairs and sat to eat….

Shash: Armaan

Armi: jee sir?

Shash: pehli baat toh yeh ki yeh ghar hai sanjeevani nahi aur tum yahan muje … papa bula sakte ho… I mean sir kehne ki koi zarurat nahi yahan tumhe …
Ridz, anji and armi got shocked..

Armi: jee sir…. Umm I mean pa.. umm …. Papa

Shash: smiled : aur mein yeh keh raha tha ki tumhare parents lekin aur koi to hoga .. I mean engagement ki liye tumhari taraf se toh koi….

Just then door bell rings … its padma, shashank and nani had called her but she had said that she'll come but they can start the dinner without her as she has ate her dinner. Nani goes to open the door and all are happy to see her…

Padma catches armi's ears and says hmm toh yeh saab chal raha tha aur tumne mujse yeh baat choopayi hmm??

Armi: aaaaahhh woohh ….. mein aaah….

Everyone else is laughing at this..

Padma leaves n smiles at ridz saying…. Muje tumhari choice pasand hai ridhima..

Ridz blushes at this n look down. And everyone smiles at this. Then padma sits on table n nani gives her some juice….

Shash: haan toh Armaan beta mein jo mein keh raha tha… wooh I mean koi toh hona chahiye na tumhari taraf se bhi koi bhi bada?

Armi: mere grand parents ko meine kabhi nahi dekha, aur mere parents apne parents k eek hi bache the toh mere koi uncle ya aunty bhi nahi hai, mere parents hi the lekin mere internship shuru hone ke ek saal pehle wooh bhi.. n is very sad.

Ridz puts her hand on his hand. He was sitting with left hand on his lap, armi looks at her n she squeezes his hand so he gives a smile.

Shash: hmm.. tab toh….

Padma: mere paas ek sujav hai agar tum saab ko koi aitraaz na ho to?

Nani: woh kya hai padma beta?

Padma:Armaan ki taraf se koi nahi hai rasaame karne ke liye right?

Shash and armi: haan.

Padma: toh Armaan agar tumhe koi aitraaz nahi hai to … mein tumhari mom ban ke tumhari taraf se sari rasme ada karungi, isi tarah mein apni beti ki khushiyon mein aur uski engagement mein aram se hissa le paungi aur kisi ko shak bhi nahi hoga….

Armi gets up and goes to padma ( who was sitting on other side of ridz) and hugs her from behind…

Armi: yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai? Mein apke bete jaisa hi to hu….

Padma: toh iska matlab tumhe koi aitraaz nahi.

Armi: nahi muje kyun aitraaz hoga? Iss mein to mera double faida hai

Padma: wooh kaise?

Armi: dekhiye, Isi wajah se mein aapko yani ki ridz ki mom ko mom keh kar bul sakunga aur muje phir se maa mil jayegi… n hugs her back

N everyone smiles.

Shash: theek hai toh phir done, padma hume iin dono ki engagement jald se karni hogi..

Padma: hmm… mein kal hi pundit jee se bat karti hu aur jald se jald ek date nikalne ko kehti hu

Shash: hmm.. gr8…. Aur ek baat, hume dr. muskaan ko yeh nahi dikhana hai ki hum jan gaye hai ko wooh kya sooch rahi hai aur unhe iss engagement par bhi ana hai right.

Armi: jee papa.

Shash: aur enagement ki baat hum date fix hone par hi saab ko batayenge right?

Armi: jaisa aap kahe

Shash: gud

Now all have finished dinner

Armi: papa aab muje chalna chahiye ghar pe ramukaka intazaar kar rahe honge

Shash: wooh kaun

Armi: aree wooh mere ghar pe kaam karte hai mom aur dad ne unhe rakha tha…

Shash: ooh ok

Padma: muje bhi chalna chahiye… Armaan tum muje drop kar sakte ho kya?

Armi: ofcourse mom yeh puchne ki baat hai? Aapko sirf hukum karna hai.. ki Armaan muje ghar drop kar do chalo…

Padma and shashank laughs while armi gives a flying kiss to ridz while no one is looking, she gives him flying kiss as well and smiles and armi and padma leaves saying bye to everyone …

Hope you all liked it plz comment n i hope i haven't disappointed you all....i tried to make armi more homely n please i would love to have suggestions and will try to implement them as well.... you comments both positive and negative are welcome

Edited by pari0706 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
very very nice pari ji
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
heyy pari di,
i read da whole update and itz amazing......yay dere getting engaged...plzzz continu soon...
can u plz pm me wen u update....thnx...
luv ridz, 😳
.x.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
hey
dat was such a sweeeeettttttt n cuteeeeee prt yaar
cho cho nice jus luved armi n padma ji 😃
cont super sooooooonnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey pari it ws sooooooooooo good
tht padma now being his mothr nd armaan so happy
ki use ab mom mil gayi it ws grt prt yaar awesom
to good now thy r gettng engangd wow luvly........
cont soon
luv yachna

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