Truly Madly and Deeply p3 pg6 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankyou😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Uudee

👏 arre waah!!! tu to bahut hi romantic banda hai... 😉 keep it up..and pls continue 😃

thankyou, waise i don't think i am that romantic, but other people do, but i think it's because of RN it brings the romantic side out of me😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti.nil

dat is ssssssssssooooooooooooooooo cute kepp up the good work!!! 👏

thank you😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonarajasingh

wow excellent yaar.. do continueeeeee soon

thank you😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetcandle

cool!! yahha pe tho mamla already fix hai!! 😃

thankyou! yeah i thought this time i should have them already loving eachother and about to get married😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

Please continue dear.Its so beautiful 😛 .And I believe that this ff would also rock 😊 😊 like ur other ff. 👏 👏 👏 .Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continue and thanks for this new ff.

thank you soooooooo much😃 thanks for your confidence boost i think i needed that😃 i'll be continueing today it self😊

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here is the second part to truly madly and deeply guys i hope you like it, by the way this is going to be a pretty long update, and if you like it pleaaaaaaaasssse leave your comment and if you don't please tell me what i can do to improve 😊 well here goes the next part

Episode two


''will my beautiful fianc's care to dance with me'' he asked bowing down extending his hand
''of course'' she said smiling giving her hand ''I'll love to''
Pulling her close to him, he placed his hand around her waist and led her to the dance floor

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Raj looked at naina's eyes intensely, while swaying along with her alongside the tune

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai ]2

Aai aise raat hai jo
Bhahut khushnaseeb hai
Chahe jise door se duniya
Woh mere kareeb hai
Kitna kuch kehna hai
Phir bhi hai dil mein
Saawal hai kahin
Sapno mein jo roj kaha hai
Woh phir se kahun ya nahi

He twirled her out of his arm then back in again

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai

Tere saath saath esha
Koi noor aaya hai
Chand teri roshni ka
Halka sa ek saaya hai
Teri nazaron ne dil ka Kiya jo hasar
Asar yeh hua

Abb inmein hi doob ke ho jau paar
Yehi hai Dua

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai

The song ended but our lovely couple were still in each others arms, forgetting about the world that they exist in forgetting that there are people who are looking at them, smiling, the only thing that they remember is how much they love each other

''ahem!'' a cough brought them back from their dream land, they looked around and saw people giggling or chuckling at them, which made them embarrassed again

''looks like we are out to embarrass ourselves'' raj said while naina just giggled

''raj puttar!'' mrs alawaliah called out
''ji ma, kya baat hain'' he asked
''mein soch rahi thi, kyon na, tumhare uncle yaani ki mr. Samar Shikawat ko bulaou, I mean he is the closest you've got after us obviously''
''ma, aap jo thik samje, but I don't know if he'll come after all he is a business man, he always stays busy, mujhe nahin lagta voh mere liya waqt nikal payenge'' he said sadly
''raj he's your uncle, I'm sure he'll come. Don't get so upset, pleaseeeeeeeee'' naina pleaded making a really cute face which melted raj's heart in a instant
''I just hope so'' he said in a low tone
''don't lose your hope''
'' till your with me, I know that I'm never gonna lose my hope'' he said placing his palms on her cheek.
Naina rested her hands on top of his ''you know raj you……… become so senti at times'' she said out the blues
''hell I don't'' he disagreed
''whatever''
''I don't''
''yeah, keep on telling that to your self''
''naina your so………''
''adorable I know''
''you always have to have the last say don't you''
''too right I do….'' she giggled and went from there to meet some guest, while he just stared at her and shook his head

Jab se tere naina mere naino se……… his phone rang
''hello''
''hello, captain rajveer, kaise hain aap''
''brigadier Chandok aap'' he asked surprised
''haan mein…… kya hua shocked''
''yes… I mean…''
''at ease captain I know what you mean, waise I called to say congratulation, for your engagement''
''how did you………… captain naveen told you''
''yes he did, and I'm glad he did, other wise I wouldn't have known, ki aap chori chupe''
''no sir it's nothing like that'' he said quickly
Brigadier Chandok laughed at the other end and said '' relax captain I was just joking, any ways, as well as congratulating you I wanted to inform you that, you have been posted here, so after your long marriage break, you'll be coming straight here, with your wife, if you wish''
''yes sir''
''now, I should let you go back to you fianc''
''em……….''
Chuckling brigadier put the phone down and so did raj

*
''boo!
''aaaaaah!''
''mwahhahahaha''
''naveen tum, that was not funny at all''
''oh c'mon shalu ek army officer hokar how can you get so scared''
''I'm a doctor in the Indian army'' she corrected
''yeah yeah, whatever'' he said putting his hands around her waist from the back and resting his chin on her shoulder
''uff!, naveen, choro mujhe koi dekh lega''
''koi nahin dekhe ga meri jaan''
''waise tum yahan kya kare ho, you should company your sister, after all today is her day'' she said
''yeah I know, but I was missing you and plus I seen you here all by your self so came……''
''so sweet of you, but now you should go or someones going to get suspicious she said pushing him off her
''come with me……''
''kaha……''
'' you haven't met either raj or naina, come I'll introduce you to them''
''em………''
''oh c'mon they don't bite, their very sweet'' he said pulling her towards the couple who were in the bar

''guys!'' naveen called out ''meet my friend, shalini singhal, she's a doctor in Indian army''
''hello!'' naina greeted cheerfully getting of the bar stool to hug her
''hey!'' raj greeted warmly
''hi!'' she replied smiling
''bhai, your girlfriend is really pretty'' naina complemented
And hearing that naveen started to cough while shalini started to look uncomfortable
''em, naina she's not my girlfriend''
''of course she is'' naina said smiling
''I think I should know that''
''bhai, believe me she is……… after all she is a girl and she's your friend so huin na girlfriend''
''oooooh! So that's what you meant and I thought……….''
''and you thought what naveen'' raj asked
''no nothing………''

''shalini, why don't you sit down next to me'' naina suggested
''sure…….''
''actually I've got an better idea'' raj said
''what'' naveen asked
''lets eat, I heard you arranged an excellent cuisine''
''yeah, come to think of it I am really hungry'' naina said and getting of the bar stool went towards the cater where delicious Indian cuisine was arranged and not only Indian but, Mexican, Chinese, Italian, loads of different kinds of food, grabbing a plate each they got their food and went to the poolside away from the crowd
''why have we come here'' shalini asked
''because it's away from the crowd, so it'll be more peaceful'' naina answered and put her food in her mouth

''so how did you meet'' raj asked naveen and shalu
''em, we went to the same college'' naveen answered
''how come I never seen her before today then'' naina asked
''eh because……… I wasn't very outgoing then'' shalu explained
''oh!''

Like that naina and raj bombarded shalu and naveen with questions while naveen and shalu tried to avoid them…… after half an hour of questioning and answering naina decided to quit bugging them and play a game instead
''what kind of game'' raj asked
''how about antakshari'' shalu suggested
''sounds like an great idea'' naveen said smiling at shalu, while shalu blushed under his gaze which was noticed by naina but she discarded the thought
''ok then antakshari it is, we are gonna be in two teams, me and shalu on one while you two on the other'' she said pointing at raj and naveen
''alright, who's gonna start'' raj asked
''obviously us…… after all lady's first'' naina replied
''toh shuru ho jau'' naveen said
''hmm………
Thode badmash ho tum (she sang this looking at raj)
Thode Nadan ho tum

Thode badmash ho tum
Thode Nadan ho tum
Haan magar yeh sach hai
Hamari jaan ho tum x2 (she winked at him which had caught him off guard)

Meri saanson ki jhankar ho tum
Mera solah shringar ho tum
Meri aankhon ka Intezar ho tum
Meri emaan meri shaan mera maan ho tum

Thoda beimaaan ho tum
Thode saitaan ho tum
Thoda beimaaan ho tum
Thode saitaan ho tum…………………… so now you guys sing with an 'm' ''

Raj got up on his feet and taking naina's hand got her up and sang
''Mashaa-allah(3)
Gumsum chandni ho
Nazmee ho ya koi hoor ho
Dil nashi ho dil kashi ho
Ya janat ka noor ho

Mashaa-allah(3)
Allah Allah....

Tum saba ho ya ghata ho
Keh kasha ho sahiba ho
Subah ki pehli kiran ki jaisi
Bebaat alhat pawan ki jaisi
Khushbuyein tum lautaati ho masti mein choor choor

Mashaa-allah(3)'' and the end of the song naina blushed and sat back down quickly while raj grinned at her shyness ''now you guys have to sing with an 'R'' naveen said

''rafta rafta...
(rafta rafta dekho dekho kya hogaya
rafta rafta
rafta rafta dekho dekho kya hogaya
rafta dekho rafta ) - 2

(rafta rafta jo tha begana tera huwa
rafta rafta mera afsaana tera huwa
dil ko naaz tere ishq se aashina) - 2

rafta rafta jo tha begana tera huwa
rafta rafta dekho dekho kya hogaya
rafta rafta
rafta rafta dekho dekho kya hogaya rafta dekho rafta

tu hai meri subahon mein
tu hai meri raaton mein
tujse aur mein kya kahoon
tu agar hai to, mein hoon
tu vhaum hai mera, ya ke tera jaadu hai
lagta hai ki phoolon mein, sirf teri khusboo hai
dil ko naaz tere ishq se aashina
rafta rafta jo tha begana tera huwa
rafta rafta mera afsaana tera huwa'' shalini sang ''ab tum 'A' se gao''

''Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
hoo Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saa se
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai x2

Aai aise raat hai jo
Bhahut khushnaseeb hai
Chahe jise door se duniya
Woh mere kareeb hai
Kitna kuch kehna hai
Phir bhi hai dil mein
Saawal hai kahin
Sapno mein jo roj kaha hai
Woh phir se kahun ya nahi …… ab tum log 'H' se'' naveen said after singing

'' 'H' se, kaunsa gaana shuru hota hain'' shalini asked
''em……………
Hulcul hui zara shor hua Dil chor hua teri aor hua x2 ( she looked up at raj who blew her a kiss)
Esi chale jab hawa Ishq hua hi hua x2
Hulcul hui zara shor hua Dil chor hua teri aor hua x2
Esi chale jab hawa Ishq hua hi hua x2
Ishq Hua haaye Ishq Hua haayaaaeeeein

Palko Se hoton tak jo rah nikalti hai Gujare na wahan se yeh teri galti hai .
Palko Se hoton tak jo rah nikalti hai
hooo Rehte hain abb hum wahan Ishq hua hi hua
hoo
Esi chale jab hawa Ishq hua hi hua
Hulcul hui zara shor hua Dil chor hua teri aor hua
la alal ala a (raj again got naina off her feet while naveen got shalu off hers and danced with them)
Ishq hua
Kadmo ko sambhale Nazaro ka kya karein Nazro ko sambhale to Dil ka kya karein ( naina tripped and fell on raj, she looked up to see raj gazing at her and then looked back down blushing)
Kadmo ko sambhale Nazaro ka kya karein

Dil ko sambhale zubaan Ishq hua hi hua
Esi chale jab hawa Ishq hua hi hua
Hulcul hui zara shor hua Dil chor hua teri aor hua x2
Ishq hua x2'' naina sang and again looked down blushing

'' I think we should go inside now……… mom, dad must be wondering where we are'' she said quietly and raj agreed
''tum log jao, hum dono thori der yaha bet kar baate karte hain'' naveen said indicating to him and shalu
''ok as you wish'' naina said and went back inside with raj

''you know I have known you for ages but I never knew you can sing so well'' raj said
''there's a lot you don't know about me'' she replied
''accha, mysterious women huh'' he chuckled
''haan, you can say that' she said
''well want to know everything, about you''
''well then are you ready to listen to a long story''
''to be with you, I could do any thing'' he said holding her hand
''awwww chooo chweet'' she said pulling his cheek.

so how was it guys i really do hope you liked it, if you did please leave your comment it really will boost my confidence😊


Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome too good do update soon asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i caught wid dis ff.........

dis is amazing n very beautiful.......

rn simply r sooooo cute.....

carry on....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar 2 fics ek saath continuing
just rocking,superb,wonderful........aur yaad nehi aa rahan hai

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