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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

wow the update was awesum.songs were so beautifully expressed by characters 😳 😳 .It seems that it is happening infront of me.Yaar u are a great writer possessing extraordinary talent which appears in both the ffs 👏 👏 .Thank u soooo much for entertaining us by beautiful ffs 😳 😳 .Thank u thank u thank u sooooo much.

awwwwww thankyou sooooooo much i am really glad you liked the update,baar meri itni bhi taarif maat kiya karo ki main urne lagoo, thank you soo much for being such a wonderful reader😃

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Originally posted by: raju73

your two ffs are rocking .please continue.

thankyou😃

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Originally posted by: sanabmw

hi it's me
ur ff was superbbbb 👏
maine ise aaj hai padha hai i know bahot late hoo par todi busy thi warana main usi din padh leti jab tumne pm kiya tha remember nice concept aur naveen aur shalini bahot cute lag rahe hai aur hamare raj naina woh to hamesha se best hai hi. 😳 😳 😳 par yaar ek baat batao tum 2 2 ff ek saath kaise sambhal leti ho main to ek main hi 😆 ok biiiiiii conti soon. 👏 👏 👏

thankyou, shalini and naveen are really cute that's why i made them a couple in both my fics and raj aur naina ka toh kya kehna, aur rahin saawal do ff ki i have no idea😆 any ways thankyou for leaving a comment 😃

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update will be up soon😊

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updaqte will be up soon😊

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Part three

Hand in hand they went in a corner and sat down on the sofa, and looked at everyone enjoying them selves
''veer look'' she said pointing at an old lady dancing with her husband ''so cute na''
''haan, this is gonna be us when we are that age'' he commented and again she blushed
''you know I really love it when you blush it's so adorable''
''is that why you make me blush all the time''
''haan'' she looked at him and rested her head on his shoulders
''veer can you promise me one thing''
''what'' he asked
''don't ever change I love you the way you are''
''I will never change''
They sat like that in silence when all of a sudden another announcement was made
''hey guys listen up………''

''now what is he up to'' raj asked naina while she just shrugged

''me and shalini have thought of a great idea to liven up this party a bit more………''

''kaisi idea saale saab'' raj shouted
''sabar karo jeeja ji'' naveen grinned

''so we have planned that why not, ……………… get rajveer to perform for his beautiful fianc''
''WHAT!'' he screamed
''kya raj is that how much you love your naina, that you can't even perform for her'' naveen said dramatically
''you know naina, mere haat se koon ho jayega''
''kiska'' she asked
''tumhare bhai kaa''
''you dare touch my brother'' she warned
''yeah that's right dono bhai behan milkar mujhe par gang up karo'' he complained

''kya hua jeeja ji…… dar gaye''
''dare tera dushman'' he yelled and got up at the center leaving naina sitting on the sofa surprised
After a minute of silence all of a sudden raj started to sing

rang puredi rang rangili ladaki chhail chabili usade chanchal nain kataar
are chanchal nain kataar de usaka roop bana hatiyaar
usake roop se katal huye toh charcha shuru huva
nagaada nagaada nagaada baja - 2

Naina looked at him in surprise and had her mouth opened wide, while naveen nearly fell i8f shalu didn't grab his shoulder

rang puredi rang rangili chhail chabili naar
chanchal nain kataar de usaka roop tej talwaar
usake roop se katal huye toh charcha shuru huva
nagaada nagaada nagaada baja - 2 ( he started to dance with some people dancing behind him)

jab bhi woh ladaki khidaki pe aaye
koi usako dekh mare, koi dil deke mar jaaye
are gujare gali muhalle se toh mela sa lag jaata tha
har ik aashiq id manaata bhangada paata tha
khatam na hota deewaano ka jabse shuru huva
nagaada nagaada nagaada baja - 2

(meri bhari jawaani mein raanjhana
) - 2
are bachpan se usaka ek deewaana tha
jisaka paanv gali ke aashiq pare hataana tha
dil se jisako maan raha tha apane dil ki raani woh
aur kisipe hi marati thi marjaani woh
ek kahaani khatam toh duja kissa shuru huwa
nagaada nagaada nagaada baja - 2

rang puredi rang rangili chhail chabili naar ( he grabbed naina's hand and brought her on the center and also got naveen and shalini)
chanchal nain kataar de usaka roop tej talwaar
usake roop se katal huye toh charcha shuru huva
nagaada nagaada nagaada baja - 2 ( all started to dance and enjoy themselves)

''kya baat hain raj, tum toh chupa rustam nikle………… itna accha dance…… kaha se sikha'' naveen asked
''kahi se nahin, bas hogaya'' he replied and taking naina's hand took her from their towards the garden

''kaha lekar jaa rahe ho mujhe'' she asked
''just want to stroll in the garden with you'' he said

They both stayed quite enjoying the stroll in the garden with each others company, barely able to hear the music inside
''it's a beautiful night'' naina said looking up at the stars and moon……… raj looked at her and was mesmerised by her beauty
''and your looking even more beautiful'' he murmured which she had heard and looked at him with love in her eyes
''you know veer since I was little I always had a dream…… that one day, my prince charming will come and sweep me off my feet, but I never knew that day is gonna come so soon''
Raj looked at her and pulling her closer to him said ''naina I'm a glad that you think of me as your prince charming and I promise you that I'll always keep you happy and love you till the end, after all love is like war easy to begin and hard to end''
They both looked at each other with love filled eyes and then, raj pulled her closer and closer till there was an inch space left between them, he pulled her even closer so now their noses touched each others, raj bent down to meet her lips then, then in a instant his lips touched hers and kissed her tender lips, first gently and then he increased the intensity of the kiss by playing with her tongue……… after a long hour of kissing they parted breathing heavily
''you're a damn god kisser'' he said breathlessly, leaning his head on hers, and again naina blushed damn how could one bush so much she thought
''kya soch rahi ho jaan''
''kuch nahin, bas yeh how is our life going to be after marriage''
''well I could tell you that now……… after we get married we'll buy a lovely house in ambala and decorate it like our dream home, then in few years time we'll have two three kids running in the house yelling, mom dad''
''voh toh teekh hain, but ambala kyun?'' she asked
''ambala isliye because it's near kma''
''and……….''
''oh I didn't tell you did I''
''tell me what''
''bc ka phone aya tha………aur unhone kaha hain ki I have been posted at kma as a strategy and communication teacher''
''wow, back to kma huh''
''yeah I'm so happy, I am going back to the place where I became what I am, I owe that academy a lot''
''you and bhaiya are both emotionally attached to that place aren't you''
''yes we are, after all, that place gave us a lot, a chance to become a true son of our mother land, friends, and my love……''
''love? Love kaise'' she asked confused
''if I didn't come to kma, I wouldn't meet your brother, if I didn't meet your brother I would not have met you if I didn't meet you I would never had fallen in love with you, so has it not gave me love………''
''hmmm, so true, that means I owe a lot to that academy as well''
They both smiled at each other and continued the stroll in the garden silently in each others company



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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
awesome too good loved it do update soon asap with long part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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my god what a update.i enjoyed lot.that song and especially that kiss hmmm, it was awesum.thank u sooo much for this sweet update.u are damn good not kisser but a ff writer.
Edited by quietrajpri1623 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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my god what a update.i enjoyed lot.that song and especially that kiss hmmm, it was awesum.thank u sooo much for this sweet update.u are damn good not kisser but a ff writer.

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