Anjana Safar (lkt/dk/db/np)- Ch 19, Pg.56

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123
great can't wait for the next part

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

Thanks so much Riya! :)

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427
wow, zinu, i love u!!! u r so great at writing too....i loved the part...
Kt and laksh are so cute!!!! Please continue sooon!!!! I really loved this part since it was LKT's engagement!!! They are so cute!!!! I miss them so much!!!! anywayz hope to see more updates buddy!! 😳 👏

AWWWW that was so sweeet. thanku shivi. ily! 🤗 :)

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: lilindiangurl13
it was so cute they got engaged im soo happy 👏 👏 👏 .
cont....soon cant wait for the mext part.

thankd dear! :)

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: MrsPulkitSamrat
nice suspence di! 👏 please continue SSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!! 😊

thanks sweetums. :)

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: kt4lakshya
what a fantatic update man you rock too much your getting LKT married sorry cudnt reply before zinu plz forgive me 😭

plzzzzzzz continue with romantic parts 😳 😉 😃

update soon

Tuba

aww thanks bunches for the lovely comment. :)

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#306

"Prachi," Neev says, as he grabs her hand. She turns and says, "Yeah?" sweetly. Neev takes a deep breath. "Okay, I'm gonna come out clean here. I know this isn't the perfect timing, or place, but.. well, you know where i'm going right?" he says confused. "Uh.. not really?" Prachi lies, just for the heck of it. "I love you!" he says, as he bows his head down. Prachi hugs him saying, "Me too." Neev smiles, and hugs her back. They pull out. "Okay, but so, we're boyfriend and girlfriend now or what?" he laughs. "Oh my god!" she hits him. "Okay, but, I'm not planning a wedding until after Lakshya bhaiyaa, and KT bhabhi's wedding is done, nor am I planning an engagement till after, is that fine with you?" he asks. "Of-Course. I always wanted to see my Jeeju blushing in front of di. Your turn will be later, haha." she laughs.
***
"Oh my goodness! Get in the car already." Daksh yells. "Relax Daksh, Geeze." Dev says. The girls soon came, and sat inside the car. "Finally," Daksh teases. "Oh whatever! Have some patience." Bani teases back. Daksh laughs. They go on a long drive, in the evening, with the cool wind blowing in their faces.
***
Api storms inside Lakshya's room, where Lakshya & KT are having a chat. They suddenly look at Api, as KT stands up. "Laksh, I've to talk to you very urgently, please." Api says, out of breath. Lakshya looks away, "I already told you Api, I never want to speak to you, ever again." he says. She walks over, and holds KT's hands. "KT, you please make him understand, it's very urgent!" she pleads. KT looks at Lakshya, and back at Api. "Tell me." she says. They take a seat. "KT! My father, Malhotra, is after Laksh's life, since years." she starts. "Oh stop, Api!" Lakshya yells. "You're the one after me, after being my own left blood." he adds, yelling. "No Laksh, I'm not your sister." she says. "What!" he says, shocked. Api nods and continues, "After my birth, my mother passed away a couple years after. I guess he took advantage of the fact, and started to brainwash me against you. He always had your eye on you, and probably even now. Today I couldn't take it anymore, you got whipped because of me, and he didn't understand one bit. I broke my relationship with him. This was all his plotting, but I'm not a part of this anymore. I'm so sorry for all the trouble, Laksh." she wept. "Then if you're not my sister? Then who is? Where is she?" he said. He held his head, and bowed his head down. KT sat beside Lakshya, and kept her hand on his shoulder. "Relax Laksh, just calm down. You're already not feeling well, don't make it worse. I'm sure she's somewhere, and always remembers you." KT consoled him. "Api, how'd your father know about me and my sister?" he suddenly asked. "As I said, he had his eye on you since the day you poisoned your mother, and ran away. He even knew you came back, and everything until then, till now. We have to stop him urgently Laksh, he'll kill you." she said. "Oh and one more thing, we already have a lawyer, you're familiar with Ravi, right? He's my Fiance, we had gotten engaged couple of months ago, I spoke to him about the truth before coming here. He wouldn't let us down." she adds. "I don't know why that man is doing this to me? What did I ever do to him, when I was a kid? This didn't just start from here. I just.. this is absurd." He left the room. As he was walking, he met up with Ganga. "Laksh, why aren't you lying down, dear?" She sweetly said, touching his cheeks. Lakshya didn't reply, but just looked down. "What's wrong, beta? You look disturbed." she said. Lakshya lowered his eyes, and let without uttering a word. Ganga was now highly frustrated. KT notices their talk, and followed Lakshya out the door. "Laksh!" she stopped him. As if Lakshya's feet were glued to the floor, he didn't move. KT walked towards him and looked at him. "Laksh, this is no way. You can't let all of that anger in your heart since years, still be stuffed in. Let it out! On me, Api, on anyone you want. just let it all out Laksh. You're killing yourself inside. I know how you feel." she consoled him. "How do you know how I feel? My life has become like a game. Either I think my sister is after me, for killing my mother, then it turns out she's not even my sister, and yet her father is after me, whom I don't have a clue who is. Sometimes I just wish, it would all end, and be over with." he replied. KT lifted up his face and nodded a 'no'. Both teared up. "No, Laksh. You have to fight your battles. You have to win. I know you will."
"What if I don't? What if the next thing you see is my dead face, lying in front of you, what if--"
KT covered his face, as tears rolled down her cheeks. "Don't you ever say that Laksh. And if that'll happen, i'll blame you for cursing yourself. For making me an un-married vidow. For going through the things you aren't supposed to. For not letting out your anger since all these years. Everything!" she sobbed as her voice started to break. Lakshya held her arms. KT moved his arms, and ran away to the car. Lakshya followed. KT wiped off her tears, and opened the door of her car. Before she sat inside, Lakshya held her arm, and pulled her towards him. "You think I keep everything inside me, and I'm killing myself from it. YES! You're right, I am killing my self. But I promise you KT, never in your life will you become a vidow. We planned our journey for 7 births' together, and I'm not going to back out on the vow's I made. We live together, die together. We go through our problems together, we resolve them together. And if you're going to think, it's all my fault, then I don't blame you. But, I also don't aproove what life is doing to me. It's making me go insane." he held his head. KT eyes widened. "Relax Laksh, please. I'm sorry." she said, holding his arms. She reached out for his ringing cellphone. She answred it, without uttering a word.
"Bhaiyaa, stop flirting with Bhabhi, and come on in now." Neev laughed.
"Neev," KT replied.
"Bhabhi, You?" He said embarrassed.
"Neev, it's not the right time." she said.
"Alright, inform me if anything." he replied.
"I will." KT said. They both hung up.
KT pulled down Lakshya's arms, from his head. "Just clam down Lakshya. Everythings' gonna be fine. Relax. Just take a deep breath, and let it all go. Think of anything else in the world, BUT this." she calmed him. Lakshya soon calmed down. "Lets get you somewhere, away from this." she said. "I know a place." he slowly said.
***
Soon they reached a garden-like place. KT got out of the car, and looked at the place. "W-Where are we? I've never seen this before." she asked. "It was gifted to me by my Baa. She gave this to me on my 10th birthday, it only belongs to me, my Baa, and soon you'll too." he smiled. "It's simply, it's just so.." she searched for a word. "Blissful.." he added. KT nodded and looked at Lakshya. "Well, lets go inside." he laughed. She joined in. They both walked inside.

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maryam

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Posted: 17 years ago

#307

first comment!!---reserved---

omg!!i just read the last two parts!!dude ur a flippin writing genius!!!im telling u u really no what to write!!!forget what to write,u really no how to rite!!wat ta go idaho!😆

but seriously man,u made me cry in the last update!!!when writer makes somone feel the emotion of the story or update,then that is a true writer!!!u ma jaan are ,been,inshallah always will be an awesoem writer!

zinu ki jai!😆

Edited by aishu_fan - 17 years ago

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mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 17 years ago

#308

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

first i would like to tell maryam....ohhh damn u...u got my spot!!! lolz jk love u babe

Second, i wanna say is that along with Maryam and me Zinu is another great writer....wow....Zinu i loved it!!! it was just so how can i say this sooooo cute!!!!

omg i love it!!!! It was simply outstanding!!!!! Kt and laksh scenes were simply cute and heartbreaking....poor Laksh he's so sad!!!! I hope he finds his sister i really do!!! Kt is so cute...and suporting!!!! I really hope LKT get together in this ff...unlike the damn cursed show 🤢

overall i give ur ff a 100!!! It was just simply great and awesome and all other great things!!!! Please update soon, i really wanna know who Kt's sister is...😊

Laksh and kt r so cute in this ff!!! I love it, the garden scene is so cute!!! Neev and Prachi are actually adorable too....i think they are a cute couple as well. 😳

Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 17 years ago

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maryam

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Posted: 17 years ago

#309

mere update ki baari!!!!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=906200&T PN=24 part 14 my l-kt ff pyaar-kar

Edited by aishu_fan - 17 years ago

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zinny.xo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: aishu_fan

first comment!!---reserved---

omg!!i just read the last two parts!!dude ur a flippin writing genius!!!im telling u u really no what to write!!!forget what to write,u really no how to rite!!wat ta go idaho!😆

but seriously man,u made me cry in the last update!!!when writer makes somone feel the emotion of the story or update,then that is a true writer!!!u ma jaan are ,been,inshallah always will be an awesoem writer!

zinu ki jai!😆

Aww *tear* Don't make me emotional. *sniff*
You have no idea how much that means to me. ily! 🤗 :)