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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 21:

After dinner was over and the table was cleared, Armaan receded back to his room, wondering how his mother had found out about him and Riddhima... It had to be Atul, who else would tell his mother. That little brat of a brother! Slow torture would fix him up and teach him how to keep his big trap shut. Maybe he should wring his brother's neck? No, that was quick torture... Aha! An evil master plan developed in his brain. His brother would never open his mouth after this! Armaan grinned evilly.

At Safwan's house:

As soon as he stepped out of the shower, his mother seemed to materialize out of no where in front of him, holding ten sherwanis. "Acha, bolo... kaunsa pehenna hai? Yeh blue wala.. ya lal wala, ya peela wala, ya harya wala, ya..." she breathed deeply. "Jaldi bolo! Time nahi hai, shaadi ek haafte mein hai!"

"Ughh... jo bhi, shaadi ki theme kya hai?" He asked lazily.

"Shaadi ki theme... blue hai, mere khayal se..."

"Okay, phir blue, ok Ammi jaaaaaaan? Ab aap muhje jaane degi?"

His mother gave him a Did-I-Do-Something-Wrong? look. He brushed passed her into his room do get an ounce peace from the hyper environment in his home. But as soon as he entered his room, he found his neice in there, of course, to tease him, like everyone else... It seemed as though everyone's motive was to annoy the hell out of him. Before she spotted him, he ran away to the balcony. He wasn't in the mood to be around anyone.

At Riddhima's house:

Padma was extremely eager for her daughter to express her love for Armaan to her, but it seemed as though she was too shy, maybe? She had told Aarzoo, why not her own mother? She paced left and right in the hallway trying to come up with a conclusion.

"Padma?" Shashank had just entered the hallway, in order to get to his room, only to find his wife pacing here and there like pagal. "Kya hua?"

"Huhh? Uh, kuch nahi? Bas aise hi bechaini horai thi.. toh.. uhh, tum yaha... sone ja rai ho? Acha, good night," she resumed pacing.

"Padma, problem kya hai? Main tuhme achi tara se jaanta hoon! Jabhi bhi pareshan hoti ho, toh idhar udhar phirti rehti ho..." Shashank said, getting impatient.

"Wohh... Aarzoo ne muhje bataya.. ke Armaan aur Riddhima ek doosre se pyaar karte, likin Riddhima muhje bata hi nahi rai hai!" She whined like a child.

"Padma, relax! Give her time, maybe she doesn't feel... secure to tell you? Let her tell you, usse compel maat karna, chalo ab sone chale, muhje bohot neend arai hai!" He yawned widely.

"Haan... chalo," she said, walking with her husband towards their room. "Likin main uski Maa hoon!!!"

"Relax, honey!"

Malaika's house:

She lay on her bed, admiring her navy blue sari which she was to wear at Huma's, or as they all called her: Hummus di, wedding. The golden beads shimmered slightly. The soft material rubbed against her cheeks. She thought about what Safwan said... that Ifru jiju was his COUSIN! Meaning he would be related to her. How awkward would that feel? For a moment, she stared at the wall, in a dreamy state. Her mind seemed to be out of the world.

"Malaika?" Huma entered her cousins room to find her smiling absent mindedly and staring at the blank white wall. "MALAIKA?" She picked up a pillow from the bed and chucked it at Malaika.

"HUMMUS! You messed up my hair!" Malaika yelled, patting her golden brown hair down. "Itni mehnat se banaya tha maine, aur..."

"Whatever, it was already messed up. Waise kya soch rahi thi tu?"

Malaika blushed. "Kuch nahi... bas aise hi..." She smiled.

"Bolo bolooo.... kuch to tha," said Hummus, shaking her brows.

"Kuchh nahii!!" She blushed harder and giggled.

"Bolooo, batau! Kamini! Meri shaadi horai hai.. chalo batao muhje, chalo!" Hummus started tickling Malaika till she had tears in her eyes from over laughing.


The soft humming of Riddhima's cell distrupted her tender sleep, but as soon as she saw Armaan's number on it, her sleep vanished.

"Bolo Armaan," she said, in a flat tone, but laughing on the insides.

"Suno Riddhima, aaj main tuhme pick up karne au?" He said, all excited.

"Kya? Ok sure!" she said, but then all of a sudden,"Nahi!" She said, exasperated. She heard someone outside her door and was sure it was her mother, who was eager to know about her and Armaan.

"Nahi?" Armaan asked, dazzled.

"Nahi... baad mein, bye," she said and hung up, feeling bad.

"Yeh Riddhima ko kya hogaya?" Armaan said angrily.

At the Hospital:

They all gathered around Armaan who was looking really angry. Riddhima felt sorry for having done what she had done.

"Dr. Malaika and Dr. Riddhima, duty in the Trauma Center, Dr. Sapna with Dr. Safwan, pathology Lab, and Dr. ATUL, rectal examinations, we have about five patients for that job!" Armaan said.

Atul was shocked at his brother. No him and Sapna? What in the heavens name was wrong with him? He was behaving like a sour tart from yesterday night ever since their mother had found out about his chakkar with Riddhima. He grunted silently. Everyone reported to their duties except Riddhima.

"Sholly..." said Riddhima, looking into his eyes, which were full of rage. As soon as he set eyes on her innocent face, all the anger flushed away.

"It's okay, sweetheart," he said, walking towards her. He leaned forward and gave her a kiss on the cheek, not caring who was watching. His mother knew now, what did he have to worry about? Leaving Riddhima wondering about what had just happened, she smiled and looked back at him.
...

"Dr. Malaika and Dr. Riddhima, report to Trauma Bay 5! Dr. Malaika and Dr. Riddhima, report to Trauma Bay 5!" screeched the nurse's voice.

"Ufff... bulawa agayaa..." Malaika and Riddhima left the commotion in the locker room and rushed to the ED.

"Hurry guyss!!" Dr. Shashank ordered. Him and Armaan were wearing their scrubs and ordering the nurses about. Armaan tossed two scrub coats at Riddhima. Both the girls quickly put them on.

"Accident case hai, X-ray, MRI, aur CT scans karna parega, Dr. Riddhima, get the machines ready!" Armaan told Riddhima. "Dr. Malaika, prepare the files!"

The doors of the ED opened up and five EMTs came in carrying a bloody mess. The bundle was followed by an old lady screaming hysterically.

"Maa ji, aap please, bahar wait karye," said Malaika softly.

"Nahii!! Mere bete..." she started crying. Malaika sighed.

"Maa ji, aap yahi behtye, hume problem find out karna hoga, phir uske mutabik surgery karni paregi..."

Meanwhile, Riddhima had prepared the CT scan. They wheeled the young man into the machine. Pressing buttons here and there, images appeared on the computer screen (a guess, I have no clue how this stuff works :P).

"A kidney is severely damaged, Dr. Armaan.. I think we'll have to remove it," said Shashank.

"Hmmm..." Armaan agreed as he studied the damaged beyond repair kidney.

The young man's mother, who had heard the doctor's conversation, rushed over to them. "KYA? Koi aur tareeka nahi hai aap log ke paas?! Mera beta ek kidney ke saath... Ya Allah! Yeh kaisi sazaa de rai ho tum? Kya guna kiya humne?!?!" She raised her hands up, crying.

"Malaika, please call Dr. Safwan here for the surgery, you take care of his mother, she looks like she might pass out any moment," Armaan ordered.

Malaika took his mother out while paging Safwan. She set the lady on the two seater outside the OT.

"Everything alright, Malaika?" Safwan said, catching his breath.

"Dr. Armaan called you for the surgery..."

"Oh okay," he said, and quickly walked into the OT.

An inconsolable mother was weeping on Malaika's shoulder. Malaika patted her back and soothed her.

"Beti, yeh kaisi saaza mill rai hai hume? Allah humse itni nafrat karte hain..." she said.

"Maa, Allah doesn't hate anyone... It's all a test. All the hardships, all the suffering... See, when we go through hard times, it's not because Allah hates us or is punishing us! It's either a wake up call from Him, to make us realize that he is here for us, to turn to him. We tend to turn to him only during times of difficulies, or when we have no other solution, in fact, it should be the other way around. First Allah, then others. Or perhaps He wants to forgive your sins, because everytime we go through pain, may it be the prick of a pin or a slight headache, our sins are forgiven... Be patient... ????????&#16 15; ??????? ????????&#16 16;???? ... Allah loves the patient. Turn to him at this time. He's always listening to you, and always remember that he loves you seventy times more than a mother. Aur aap bhi ek Maa hai, you'd understand.." she patted her shoulders and left, hoping her words had an affect on the old lady.

Guys, I am sooooooooooooo sorry for the delay!! But I hope you like this part even though its awfully written 😕... Keep bugging me to write the next part.. okay? 😆😆 It's an order!

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Posted: 17 years ago
[YOUTUBE]http://youtube.com/watch?v=noyl1PKkBdE[/YOUTUBE]

This is just a little something to go with the last part of the last part...

TRANSLATION:
Oh Allah, have mercy on me in the name of the great Quraan,
make it for me a guide and light,
And guidance and mercy,
Oh Allah, make me remember that of it which I have forgotten,
Make me know of it, that which I have become ignorant of,
And make me recite it in the hours of the night and day,
And make it an argument for me, O sustainer of all the worlds,
Oh Allah, set right my faith which is the safeguard of all my affairs,
And set right for me my world affairs wherein is my living,
An set right for me my hereafter on which depends my after life,
And make my life a source of abundance of every good,
And make my death a source of protection for me, protecting me from every evil,
Oh Allah! Make the best part of my life the end of it,
And the last of my deeds the best one,
And the best of my days, the day I meet you,
Oh Allah! I ask of you the best whilst living,
And ask for a good death,
And not a shameful or embarassing return,
Oh Allah! I ask you for the best affair,
The best suplication,
The best success,
The best knowledge,
The best deed,
The best reward,
The best life,
And The best death.
Keep me upright,
Make my scale heavy,
confirm my faith,
raise high my status(in the hereafter),
Accept my Salah,
And forgive my sins,
I ask you for high positions in Paradise,
Oh Allah! I ask you obligation of your mercy,
And determination of your forgiveness,
And the peace of every sin,
And the booty of every reward,
And Winning Paradise,
And surviving from Hell,
Oh Allah! make the result of all our affairs good,
And deliver us from the disgrace of this world and the torment of the hereafter,
Oh Allah! Distribute between us the heedfullness necessary to come between us and the commision of wrong against you,
The obedience necessary for us to gain admission into paradise,
And the unswerving faith necessary to minimise for us the tribulations in this world,
Oh Allah! Allow us to enjoy our hearing, our sight, and our strength for as long as we live,
And make that enjoyment our heir(so that the people that we have befitted could pray for us), and place our vengeance on those that have wronged us,
And give us victory over our enemies,
And try us not in our faith,
Neeither make this world our greates concern,
or the extent of our knowledge,
Nor give power over us to those who would oppress us,
Oh Allah! Leave no sins of ours in this assembley unforgiven,
Nor any grief without being relieved,
Nor any debt without being paid,
Nor any difficulty in this life or the hereafter without being facilitated,
Oh the most merciful of all that is Merciful,
Our Lord! Give us the good of this world and the hereafter,
And save us from the torment of the fire,
Oh Allah! send peace and salutation upon Muhammed (PBUH) and his family, his companions and those that follow him,
AMEEN!

Edited by Veiledbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I liked the part...how on earth was it awfully written...Your Hubby is mad at you😡 Okies...that sounds funny!!😆😆😆

I loved the fact that her (Riddhima's) mommy and daddy are so chilled out...Bechara Armaan is grounded because of that Atul; silly boy...Safwan didnt have any screen time <-that is according to Humuss....😆
she sed "He better have in my wedding" 😆
I loved Malaika-Humuss interaction...it just sounds damn funny...Humuss is like that in real life too...except she's nicer in ur FF😆😆 (shhh...dnt tell her, warna she'll kill me)

Humuss's wedding sounds funny...all Blue...i look moti in blue, oh wait im not invited...good! Wait that isn't good...i dont get to eat the food...ah man! 😔 As long as my wifey sneeks me some food...😃

mmhh....What else?? Ah Yes the Malaika and the Mother scene...what can i say...you wrote that part so beautifully...I'm left speechless, I thought it was written so simply... but it still had a certain charm to it...just brilliant...The Video was just as Lovely and the translations were beautiful... I don't know how you manage to do that most of the time...when u write serious parts....

Ahhh zude this part was short...but awesome...and now run AGAIN...beacuse Humuss wants to write...

*Humuss edit*
hmmm... ok ditto everything Guddi said... Now im gona comment on my wedding....😆😳
Uff.. that Malaika wouldn't tell me about Safwu.. but wait im gonna tickle it out of her though...Woh mujhse bach ke kaha jayengi..😆 oooo blue theme for my wedding.. Did u just watch Saawariya ..😆(Bad joke i know..) I better get to meet my JIJU Safwu.. and y was his scene soooo short!!😡 Jus kidding.. loved the last scene b/w Malaika and maaji.. nicely written. Loved it..
Luv
Humuss and Bakri!!!
xXx
Edited by Naina123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
GREAT update Zainab! 👏 I think it was a bit short? 🤔

Please please please please continue soon! 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

GREAT update Zainab! 👏 I think it was a bit short? 🤔

Please please please please continue soon! 😆 😆



I thought so too.. 😆😆 but I was getting impatient and posted it 😃 couldn't wait any longer.. Anyways, thanks 😳 Toyota Sanyo 😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
its very interesting..... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
This was a vey cute && funny part!!!
Love the speech in the end!!!
It was very insprational...
&& by the way my name is HUMA...
So I guess Im in ur FF!!!
LOL...Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: heyy_babyy

This was a vey cute && funny part!!!
Love the speech in the end!!!
It was very insprational...
&& by the way my name is HUMA...
So I guess Im in ur FF!!!
LOL...Plz continue soon!!!



Thanks Huma 😳 hehe loool.. I never knew your name was huma! Huma is actually Naina's sister 😆😆😆 But oh welllzzzz.... naam mein kya hai?
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Posted: 17 years ago
yayyyy zuzu...delayed though it was...wonderful update....loved it soooo much....safwan is my fav in ur ff.....armaan is nic too...but i lov the way u framed safwans char....and ,alaika is a great match....plzzzz update sooooonnn(see i already started pesztering u!!!)))
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Posted: 17 years ago
you took ur time woman...
lol...just joking...
ok..
u must be having fun washing the dishes while i type this 😆
here goes for the part
it was like everytime worth the wait... and i don't c how it was written awfully??
if this is bad i wonder wat is gr8?? hehe
i sound mean sorry... 😳
poor armaan he got grounded at this age?? atul he has something coming his way.. poor baby... having to do rectal examinations....
lol....
Ridzi and Armaan scene was veryy veryy cute....
sholly.... awww....
safwan?? gets annoyed very easily... he kinda reminds me of angad from KYPH... lol.. even though i never watched the show...
malaika's scene bit thingy was good... cute and funny hehe....
ok... i dunno wat else to say... it was a awesome part...
plz cont sooooooonn

love Sonii

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