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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

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Posted: 17 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: sarazahid
that was great plez do continue soon

Thanks sweety, will continue soon 😊

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: sweet-niz
awww really nce updte
really cute
bt short
nt course its nt gtin borin
no nd 2 scare us wiv the new twist lol
plzzzzzz updte soon 👏

😆😆 I already have an evil plan cooking in my head to scare you guys 😆😆😆 bewaaaareeee

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hira

@hira_786

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Posted: 17 years ago

#563

hey zuzu!!
since i alreadii said Sry.. m nah guna say again n again..
m sure tumnay mujhe maaf kerdiya hoga ab tak foe replyin late😆😆..
neways first of all i luvvvvv da outfits foe every1..
buh i luv Safwan's outfit betta den Armaan..
By da way how does Safwan looks😉😆😆..
Dis part was juss too guud..
dorroon ki tarah m nah guna say it was short.. even though it was😆😆..
chalo plzz cont soon..
i realli wana read moe😳

Lotsssssa Luv:Hira😛

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aspatel2

@aspatel2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#564

great part 👏 haaha Swafan is so funny pls cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😊
i love the outfits that you choosed for all of them and Arman singing song in the moring was so halrious i was cracking up 😆 😆 😆

-Axita 😊

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sausan

@sausan

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#565

continue soon... i m dieing to know who walked in on them... n looking forward to you twist... but dont make it last too long... as it is the show is already kept them apart... this is the only place we see them together.... i have been reading ur fanfic for a while.. i just never comment.. its really nice

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mina

@mimmsjaan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#566

aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesome part
plzzzzzzzzz continue it soon

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Radhika

@star+

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Posted: 17 years ago

#567

lovedddd it!
ahh the AR scene at the end was super cute!

teehee, ur version of armaan epitomizes what an armaan should be like!

cant wait till the next part...waiting =]

Edited by star+ - 17 years ago

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 17 years ago

#568

OHHHHHMIIIGODDDD!!!!
I HV BEEN READING UR FF BUT RECENTLY JOINED IF SO WANTED TO COMMENT...
ITS LIKE SUPERRRBBBBB!!!!!
ITS LIKE AWSUM!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON !!!!

TC
TAJJU 😳

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#569

Part 18A: April Fool's!

Precap: Aseem's B-day. Someone opens the door on AR.

"Ohh, Maa!!" Armaan said, moving as far away as possible from Riddhima.

"Kya hora tha yaha pe?" His mother asked.

"Kuch nahi... mein Riddhima ko apna kamra bata raha tha.."

"Sab samahj ti hoon mein... Darwaza band karke karma bata rahe the?? Darwaza band karne ki kya zaroorat thi? Huh? Boloo.." she laughed, looking at Armaan's panicing face. "Aseem tuhje bula raha hai, jau... warna bohot maar paregi..."

Armaan left the room, refusing to meet his mother's eyes.

"Riddhima, beta," Aarzoo said... "Tuhmare aur Armaan ke beech mein kuch hai, muhje saach saach bata do..."

"Aunty... woh... uhh..." Riddhima didn't know what to say.

"Pata hai, beta... Jab se Abhimaanu ne khudkhusi ki thi, tab se yeh dono paarivar bihchard gaye... muhje laga ke tuhmare papa ki waaja se Abhimaanu ne aapni jaan dedi... Likin muhje nahi pata ke saach kya hai, shayad meri waaja se unhone aisa kiya hoga... mein nahi chahti ke hameri waaja se do zindagia barbad ho jaye, is liye mein tuhmare aur Armaan ke rishte mein rukawat nahi banna chahti, likin ek waada karo, ke tum Armaan ko hamesha khush rakhogi... usse kabhi shikayat karne ka mauka nahi dogi.." His mother started crying. Riddhima hugged her...

"Mein waada karti hoon.. usse hamesha khush rakhoongi."

Aarzoo wiped away her tears and took Riddhima's face in her hands. "Woh bhi tumme khush rakhega.."

"Pata hai..." They laughed.

"Ohh, aur woh, mere doosre nalayak bete ke liye bhi ek biwi dhoond do!"

"Usse apne sapnon ki rani mil chuki!"

"Acha?? Kaun? Aaj kaal ke baacheee, kya kehna unka, aapna maa baap ko kuch nahi baata te."

"Woh Dr. Sapna hain, na..."

Atul and Sapna:

He pulled her behind the heavy curtains.

"Atullll!!!!" She shout-whispered.

"Shhh..." He placed his finger on her lips. Sapna closed her eyes.

"Ufff yaar, muhje bohot bechaini horai hai!! Kuch karooooo."

"Kya? Tu baahu vichitra che..." Sapna said, slapping her forhead, wondering kis ulle ke patte se palla par gaya mera..

"Kya? Yeh Vichitra kaun hai?"

"Woh... Vichitra, woh.. meri beti. Mera ek boyfriend tha.. Likin tum chinta mat karna Mein usse nipat loongi.."

"KYA??? Tumari BETI bi hai??" He shouted, not whispering anymore.

All the activity in the room suddenly stopped. Everyone's eyes were fixed on the curtain.

"Uh-oh..." Atul muttered and cursed himself under his breath.

Alveera walked to the curtain and opened it, to see Atul and Sapna standing there, with Atul's hand pinning Sapna to the window. She gasped. All the little kids were giggling. "Yeh kya hora hai... "

Aseem came running holding a remote control firetruck. "Yayyy, thank you Mamiii!! I love your gifttt." "Ab tumhari beti kahan hai? pehle kyun nai milaya?? Kitni saal ki hai? How come you didnt bring her to my Birthday party????"

Atul got worried. How was he supposed to explain all this to his family... and Alveera looked stunned, as if Harry Potter had hit her with the Stunning Spell.

Next Day:

"Hutt, two, three! Hut, two, three!! MOVEE!!!!" Sister Pillow screeched as she carried the stretcher to the emergency room. "Dr. Armaan ko page karo!!"
Dr. Riddhima quickly ran to Dr.Armaan's office and dragged him to the ER.
"Riddhimaa! Yeh kya kar rai ho tum? Hum log hospital mein hai, yeh koi romance karne ka time nahi hai," Armaan said, blushing. Riddhima pointed to the stretcher. "Oh," he said, embarrassed...

The patient was unconscious, and his mother was shaking him, trying to make him gain consciousness.

"Isse kya hua?"

"Doctor saheb, kuch karye na!! Mere bete ko kya hua?? Kuch karo!!" She said, taking hold of Armaan's hand.

"Dekhye, aap ke bete ko kuch nai hoga, pehle aap bataye ke isse kya hua?"
"Pata nahi, bas achanak behosh hogaya... kaafi dino se chakkar arae the isse... aur bukhar bhi." His mother wiped her tears.

"Dr. Riddhima, x-ray tayar ki jiye."

"Yes, sir." Armaan grunted, hearing her calling him sir. "Kya hua?"

"Kuch nai, jau x-ray tayyar karo, phir mere cabin mein case discuss karne ke liye aana."

Locker Room:

Malaika's Outfit:

Malaika was alone in the locker room, reading a book.

"BOO!!" Safwan yelled, entering the locker room.

"AAA!" Malaika jumped.

"Hahahaa!! Dari na?" He said, in hysterics. Malaika ignored him, and continued to read her book, unaware of the evil plans boiling inside naughty Safwan's head.

"Aaaachhhooo!" Safwan sneezed, followed by many coughs. He reached for the tissues, which were near Malaika. Before he could grab a tissue, another cough made it's way. Blood came spurting out of his mouth, landing right on Malaika's skirt. Not paying any attention to the spot on her clothes, Malaika looked at Safwan.

"Omg, Safwan!! Yeh kya hua tume?? Are you okay? Safwan??" He started passing out and fell to the ground.

"Sister!! Sister! Dekho, he's vomitting blood!!"

Sister Pillow came barging in, shocked at the sight of blood all over his face, and the puddle of blood on the ground.

"Tum dono dishum dishum to nahi khel re the?" Sister Pillow asked. "Outrageous!"

"Nahii!! Bus achanak se... pata nahi kya hua. Ward boy!!" The ward boy came with a stretcher and lifted Safwan onto it.

"Tum chinta maat karo beta, waise hi, yeh tera dushman, hai, dushmaann." Sister Pillow patted Malaika's shoulder.

Sister Pillows reassurance wasn't enough for her. She quickly made dua'a to Allah, asking Him to make him feel better, hoping it wasn't some deadly disease, even though, being a doctor, Malaika knew they were symptoms of TB.

Private Ward:

"Dr. Safwan? Yeh kaisa mazaak hai?" Dr. Armaan asked him, after doing a complete check up.

"Shh, sir, aaj April Fool hai!"

"HAAN!! JO BHI HAI! YEH HOSPITAL HAI, KOI MAZAK KHANA NAHI!"

"Sir, please, sir, muhje night duty dedi jiye, likin please, sir, please, muhje uss Malaika ko bakri banana hai... please, sir!"

"Hmph! Fine, likin tume meri madat karni paregi, Riddhima ko ullu banane mein."

"Deal, sir." They shook hands.

"Sochna shuru kardo," Armaan said, as he inserted the syringe into Safwan's arm.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!" Safwan yelled. "SAMBHAL KE!! Warna mein tuhje help nahi karoonga!"

"Oya, chachundar! Help to mein kara hoon, tuhmari. Meri madat nahi karoge, toh teri Malaika ko boldunga main, ke yeh saab natak hai. Bechari waha bet kar ro rai hai, teri waja se..."

"Ro rai hai? Kyun bhe? Woh kyun ro gi mere liye?"

"Muhje kya pata tum dono ka chakkar kya hai..." Armaan said. "Chalo, is bahane se tuhmara blood test ho jaye ga..."

Armaan walked out of the room, with Safwan's blood sample.

"Sir, Safwan ko kya hua??"

Armaan lowered his eyes.

"Woh tumse baat karna chahta hai," he said, and left.

Malaika entered the room, wiping her tears.

He felt sorry for making her cry. Those large tears were dripping out of her large gray eyes... She walked towards him, looking at him in the eye. The clock stopped. Time stopped. Everything froze. He felt nothing, but love. She was the one. He knew it...

"Safwan?" Malaika snapped her fingers in front of his face.

"I love you..." he blurted.

Guys, PLEASE comment!! I'll have Part 18B up tomorrow, hopefully.

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Mariam

@Naina123

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#570

*reserved*

*edited*

OMG OMG OMG!!!

That part was AWESOME!!! I LOVE YOU BANDARYA!!😳😳😳

kitna acha update tha kafee lambaa tha!! Thank you!!👏 Safwan was just sooo funny!!!! april fools!!🤣 🤣🤣🤣 but how cute he finally told her he loves her.....sooo sweet

Humuss is also very happy...and Atul and the whole vichitra thingy...but the fuuniest part was nurse pillow "Dishum dishum!"🤣

Armaan and Safwu make a good pair...not in the romantic way, in the dosti way😆sooo cute....i wonder what they are planning to do with poor ridzy...i cant wait!!!

LUV

Bakri

XXX

PS....Harry Potter stunning spell😆🤣 that was soooo funny

Edited by Naina123 - 17 years ago