TeriUmeedTeraIntezar: Part22 Page80 8/18 NEW!! - Page 56

Originally posted by: AsianPranksta

MAZINGGGGG i totally luvv part 15
(nd btw is tht red dress for ridz from newport?)
okay except u hav like atiny prob here.. 😕 😕 😕
umm...ridz went camping... in a dress??? and high heels?? 😕 😕 .. ❓ ❓
nd malaika nd safwan.. loool 😆 😆, clean romance 😛 😛 luv it ❤️

Part 15:
Kameanie 😡, U USE MY SET ND DONT EVN GIMME CREDIT 😡 😡!!! hmph..
luv ridzy's top.. ⭐️
nd i bet armaan loooks super hot in polo'z.. cuz his arms are so hot.. 😍
nd Natasha 😲.. ooooooooooh, bad gall 😛 😛

LOVEEEEEEEEE SAFWANS COMDEY😆!!! HAHAHAHA 🤣

part 16:
okay i have no idea what this khamand dhokla is, but "yellow sponge" .. haha, i am so amazing😛.. that u use my nicknames in yur ff 😆 🤗
no offense, but ridz and natasha argument is.. teeny bit .. weird 😕. AND SAFWAN!!!!! OMG I LUV HIMM ❤️ ❤️ 😆!!!! "That's why men use our fist!!!" 🤣

part 17:
armaanz cabin.. MAH GAWDD!! SO CUTEE!!!!! 😍
armaan, salaa 😡.. pulling covers off bechara atul. 😔 jus lyk u do to me 😡 😡 hmph
buncha hawt outfits and sucha short part. stupid.

buh yeh.. luvv yur ff 👍🏼

btw, donchu think ridzy is kinda too childish?? i mean.. cuhmon.. 😛

😆😆😆 I love the comment 😳 keep reading my FF, or else I'll pull your bed off from under you 😈 and never let you sleep in peace!!

Originally posted by: Natalienaz

laji bum no pm 😆 😆 😆
chal koi baat nahi
but accha part tha
but itna chota
so sweet Aseem is back and Atul is so cute 😆 😆
ek dum uth gaya Sapna ka naam sunke
chalo next update should be long ok

Love u loadzz
natty mommy 😆 😆 😆

So sorry Mummi ji, maine kisi ko bhi PM nahi kiya... besides that bakri ji, Naina, jo muhje kha jaati if I don't PM her 😆😆 Sorryy mummi jii, I love youu 🤗🤗Thanks for reading, though 😳

Originally posted by: *Armaan*

Short comment for short part..

and im supposed to be asleep right now..mummy nagging..soo

great part continue soon loved the dresses..and aww aseem waiting for minnie!

tc

Kajal 😳

Badmash bachii!! 😆😆😆 Thankss, sweety... you must be sleeping now 😉

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

hey it toooooooo gud 👏
but vey small

Thanks Yogitha 😳, Yes... short part 😆😆 I couldn't wait to post it.

Originally posted by: lil_isha15

hey i jus read a lil bit of ur fanfic n gettin to finishin but its awesome up till where i have read it first of all love ur title it reminds me of song but ya all ur characters r amazin i loved ur armaan differ but gud n ridz is cute too but ya totally lookin forward to ur fanfic so update soon:D n this part was really gud too

cheers
isha

Another reader!! I'm glad you like it 😃

Originally posted by: d3si

i loveeeedd the update..waiting for what hppns next..n yo i loved the clothes selection u have..u make the guys loook so damn kool..i'm gonna link those pics to my bf n ask him to dress up like dat..hehe..n i love riddhima's selection of clothes..i wanna raid her wardrobe 😉

looool, thanxx 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: spln

i lov the way u show all the costumes and all...n they are alwaz wondeful!!!

awsom update...n no it aint boring at all...but a twist...hmmm dsnt sound lik a bad idea !!!! 😉

Thanksss 😳 Ima make a biiiig twist and scare you guysss 😆😆

that was great plez do continue soon

awww really nce updte
really cute
bt short
nt course its nt gtin borin
no nd 2 scare us wiv the new twist lol
plzzzzzz updte soon 👏

great part. please continue soon