THE GODFATHER- Part2...Index/ pg1 - Page 21

Originally posted by: pallavi25

How do GF and Zaib know abt Josh? Hint: The Hotel where all that happened was owned by GF...😉

Sorry, Hun! I cant post tonite....was out all day. I will continue tom afternoon EST, US time...😃

pallavi

no prob......cont. when u can😃

WHATTT? Where did that come from? 😆 oh man i love the suspense... and i dont think i can say that enough! (i practically say it everytime.... 😆 but i can never guess what will happen in your next part) Up till now we were suspecting Nishant to be a grey character but this guy is good and it's zaib who kidnapped Prateek? huh? how? and did he kill Josh? Awesome Awesome part hun! and i think you should listen to your husband and start something...Even like an hour each day and you will be on your way to somewhere 😳 Your an amazing writer..please dont let your talent go to waste!

- Square1

oh and if you DO publish something let us know...im pretty sure all of us would love to read it! 😆 😆

I really loved the beginning discription you gave about Kripa's state where u see her calling out Josh, Angad, and prateek.....you have written it really beautifully...the discription was so intense 😭 and marvolously discribed...I really love the way you wrote it 👏 ..

It really descibed kripa's condition....her life at this point is filled with, misery, lonliness,criminals, death,......noone whom she considers her own is with her at this point....and she is lost in a whirlpool filled with blood ...where she has lost someone really close to her (Josh)....and now with no support and prateek being kidnapped...

She is going through a maze...her target being prateek and Angad...but what she doesnt know at this point is where to start from...and what path to follow...so that she can reach her destination (angad, and prateek)....she might face a few dead ends...or make wrong turns...but eventually her heart and fate will lead her to where she belongs...with the ones she loves and adores 😊 ....

However after Josh's death the wall which held her strong all this time has come tumbling down....Josh's death was the has exceeded her limit to keep strong and bear any tortures....fate has given to her....

Lets see how she will be able to get through this phase of life...and who will help her get back the happiness that she has been in search for/longing for all this time

Ok so atleast Nishant is out of the question of being Josh's killer...because this part has definatlly proved him innocent...his friendship with Josh was really strong and now after loosing his closest friend and colleague he is under going alot of depression and his actions of when he was trying to get the orders to search GF's yacht and the way he was questioning Kanan..all proved how eager he himself was to find out who was the real criminal....and hoe much Josh really meant to him..

It is really amazing to see how some way or the other all these characters in the story and their lives are some how related/linked to eachother from the start...

.Angad kripa meeting, getting ,married, the blast, GF being a goof friend og Angad's dad, him daving Angad, turning him to Zaib, then Kripa being pregant, Josh getting her case, Josh and kripa getting married, coming to honkong and Josh getting Zaib's case, Kripa meeting Zaib again, then the whole drama between Zaib, Josh and Kripa over Zaib/Angad's identity, then Zaib falling for kripa all over again, then Josh forcing himself on kripa, and Zaib finding out, And right when Josh was repenting and wa soging to get AK together, the D gang find sout about Zaib, and he has to escape, and then Josh is killed in Zaib's room...

wowww....this is certainly a game which fate has planned...and now lets see what the outcomes....results will be at the end....will Kripa Angad be able to achieve the life they have always dreamed of....or does fate have other plans for them??...Hope for the best

Kanan really is one smart cookie...she has a way of playing with words...and is really well trained at how to make peoeple belive her....her CBI training certainly has helped her alot during her interigation...however since she is somehow involved in prateek's kidnapping her expressions gave away the fact that she was lying...which Nishant caught..

However she will still able to make Nishant belive that Zaib was the one who was behind all this...and maybe even Josh's murder....But I doubt Zaib can kill Josh....but then who is the real culrit 😕..

This one is a toughy 😆 ....things are really unpredictable at this point....and anyone can be under suspision....cant wait till the rest of the secrets is revealed...

I really liked the scene between GF and Nishant at the yatch.....the way they were challenging eachother indirectly was really interesting to read.... and the CBI found no trace of ZAib what so ever....and to make things even more worse and confusing Shabbir was also present there and didnt even give any sign of recognition to Nishant..

hmmm....wasnt Shabbir going to take revenge from GF and Kartic...I wonder if he had anything to do with Josh's case 😕

I am glad that prateek is safe and sound....and I guess that GF found out about Josh's death from one of his informers who run the hotel...since he owns the place

Omg Omg Omg....so they found a recording of the conversation that was held between Josh and the killer...woww...So now the mystey will be solved and the real culprit will be identyfied...cant wait to see who it is...

I really loveee reading this ff...and this suspense, mystery, action, and romance all in one certainly keeps one grabbing on to their seats...must say you are doing a marvalous job...

Fantabolous part as always...cant wait for the next one...continue soon.....and keep up the great work 👏

Prateek is safe.That is really a wonderful news. 😃 But where is he?Kripa is terrible state. Nobody is there to console her. 😭 Kannan is definetly lying.Can't Nishant do something about this?Happy to know that Nishant is not involved in the dead of Josh.So they have found a recording of the conversation that Josh had with the killers.Now they will find real culprit.Can't wait.Continue soon...

Originally posted by: square1

WHATTT? Where did that come from? 😆 oh man i love the suspense... and i dont think i can say that enough! (i practically say it everytime.... 😆 but i can never guess what will happen in your next part) Up till now we were suspecting Nishant to be a grey character but this guy is good and it's zaib who kidnapped Prateek? huh? how? and did he kill Josh? Awesome Awesome part hun! and i think you should listen to your husband and start something...Even like an hour each day and you will be on your way to somewhere 😳 Your an amazing writer..please dont let your talent go to waste!

- Square1

Awww Thanks for your encouraging words, square 1! 😳 I really appreciate them! 😳😃

I wish I had the time to write a full-fledged novel or something....maybe one day I will! 😃

I couldnt make the whole CBI a bunch of crooks and buffoons, so I had to make Nishant a genuine agent! 😆

pallavi

Originally posted by: square1

oh and if you DO publish something let us know...im pretty sure all of us would love to read it! 😆 😆

Thanks a bunch! 😃 Sure thing, if I do publish, I will let everyone know! 😳

pallavi

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Thanks a bunch! 😃 Sure thing, if I do publish, I will let everyone know! 😳

pallavi

u really should publish something...u have a really extraordinary talent of writing....cont. soon...waiting 4 it...😳

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

I really loved the beginning discription you gave about Kripa's state where u see her calling out Josh, Angad, and prateek.....you have written it really beautifully...the discription was so intense 😭 and marvolously discribed...I really love the way you wrote it 👏 ..

It really descibed kripa's condition....her life at this point is filled with, misery, lonliness,criminals, death,......noone whom she considers her own is with her at this point....and she is lost in a whirlpool filled with blood ...where she has lost someone really close to her (Josh)....and now with no support and prateek being kidnapped...

She is going through a maze...her target being prateek and Angad...but what she doesnt know at this point is where to start from...and what path to follow...so that she can reach her destination (angad, and prateek)....she might face a few dead ends...or make wrong turns...but eventually her heart and fate will lead her to where she belongs...with the ones she loves and adores 😊 ....

However after Josh's death the wall which held her strong all this time has come tumbling down....Josh's death was the has exceeded her limit to keep strong and bear any tortures....fate has given to her....

Lets see how she will be able to get through this phase of life...and who will help her get back the happiness that she has been in search for/longing for all this time

Ok so atleast Nishant is out of the question of being Josh's killer...because this part has definatlly proved him innocent...his friendship with Josh was really strong and now after loosing his closest friend and colleague he is under going alot of depression and his actions of when he was trying to get the orders to search GF's yacht and the way he was questioning Kanan..all proved how eager he himself was to find out who was the real criminal....and hoe much Josh really meant to him..

It is really amazing to see how some way or the other all these characters in the story and their lives are some how related/linked to eachother from the start...

.Angad kripa meeting, getting ,married, the blast, GF being a goof friend og Angad's dad, him daving Angad, turning him to Zaib, then Kripa being pregant, Josh getting her case, Josh and kripa getting married, coming to honkong and Josh getting Zaib's case, Kripa meeting Zaib again, then the whole drama between Zaib, Josh and Kripa over Zaib/Angad's identity, then Zaib falling for kripa all over again, then Josh forcing himself on kripa, and Zaib finding out, And right when Josh was repenting and wa soging to get AK together, the D gang find sout about Zaib, and he has to escape, and then Josh is killed in Zaib's room...

wowww....this is certainly a game which fate has planned...and now lets see what the outcomes....results will be at the end....will Kripa Angad be able to achieve the life they have always dreamed of....or does fate have other plans for them??...Hope for the best

Kanan really is one smart cookie...she has a way of playing with words...and is really well trained at how to make peoeple belive her....her CBI training certainly has helped her alot during her interigation...however since she is somehow involved in prateek's kidnapping her expressions gave away the fact that she was lying...which Nishant caught..

However she will still able to make Nishant belive that Zaib was the one who was behind all this...and maybe even Josh's murder....But I doubt Zaib can kill Josh....but then who is the real culrit 😕..

This one is a toughy 😆 ....things are really unpredictable at this point....and anyone can be under suspision....cant wait till the rest of the secrets is revealed...

I really liked the scene between GF and Nishant at the yatch.....the way they were challenging eachother indirectly was really interesting to read.... and the CBI found no trace of ZAib what so ever....and to make things even more worse and confusing Shabbir was also present there and didnt even give any sign of recognition to Nishant..

hmmm....wasnt Shabbir going to take revenge from GF and Kartic...I wonder if he had anything to do with Josh's case 😕

I am glad that prateek is safe and sound....and I guess that GF found out about Josh's death from one of his informers who run the hotel...since he owns the place

Omg Omg Omg....so they found a recording of the conversation that was held between Josh and the killer...woww...So now the mystey will be solved and the real culprit will be identyfied...cant wait to see who it is...

I really loveee reading this ff...and this suspense, mystery, action, and romance all in one certainly keeps one grabbing on to their seats...must say you are doing a marvalous job...

Fantabolous part as always...cant wait for the next one...continue soon.....and keep up the great work 👏

Thanks mita....for ur fabulous analysis! 👏

You have perfectly summed up Kripa's situation! Josh's death, her discovering his body....has really driven her over the edge! 😭 Prateek's kidnapping, Zaib's disappearance had already devastated her....and now this shocking death!

She is going through a maze...her target being prateek and Angad...but what she doesnt know at this point is where to start from...and what path to follow...so that she can reach her destination (angad, and prateek)....she might face a few dead ends...or make wrong turns...but eventually her heart and fate will lead her to where she belongs...with the ones she loves and adores....

You got that perfectly right! Her subconscious is searching for Angad and Prateek desperately, until she finds them she cant recover from her trauma!

Angad kripa meeting, getting ,married, the blast, GF being a goof friend og Angad's dad, him daving Angad, turning him to Zaib, then Kripa being pregant, Josh getting her case, Josh and kripa getting married, coming to honkong and Josh getting Zaib's case, Kripa meeting Zaib again, then the whole drama between Zaib, Josh and Kripa over Zaib/Angad's identity, then Zaib falling for kripa all over again, then Josh forcing himself on kripa, and Zaib finding out, And right when Josh was repenting and wa soging to get AK together, the D gang find sout about Zaib, and he has to escape, and then Josh is killed in Zaib's room...

You got all that correct too....😃 Everybody in this story is linked....in some way or the other.....all their lives are threaded together....by Fate! .

I guess that GF found out about Josh's death from one of his informers who run the hotel...since he owns the place ......You got that right too! 😃👏

Why did Shabbir pretend not to know Nishant? First of all, hes on GF's yacht, under his watch, secondly, GF and Kartik have trapped him with the shooting vdo.....besides Shabbir is waiting for his chance to strike again....but GF knows him too well....GF has some plans for him! 😉

Thanks for all you encouragement and appreciation! 😃

pallavi

Originally posted by: teri_susan

Prateek is safe.That is really a wonderful news. 😃 But where is he?Kripa is terrible state. Nobody is there to console her. 😭 Kannan is definetly lying.Can't Nishant do something about this?Happy to know that Nishant is not involved in the dead of Josh.So they have found a recording of the conversation that Josh had with the killers.Now they will find real culprit.Can't wait.Continue soon...

Thanks terisusan! 😃

Most questions will be answered in next 2 parts!

Kripa's mental state is precarious.....shes on the verge of a major breakdown!

Prateek's kidnapping, then Josh's murder has really traumatized her.......now only love can cure her....😳

Nishant will find out the truth soon....😃

pallavi