FF: Unexpected: P6: Pg 10: Promo: Pg 11 - Page 6

Originally posted by: piguu

once again done it!!! GREAT JOB...and as usually funny..especially last part "did we kiss" hehehe 😆 😆 😆 ...luvly...keep on writing will be waiting for it anxously

Hehe..I know...that was like a shocking cliff hanger!😆

Originally posted by: lankan

that was great 👏 Make this into a book and you should recieve as much respect as J.K Rowling 😆 😆
plx cont. 😃

Actually...I should turn it into a book...but who would publish it?😆

Thanks

Part 6 comming up in a short while

Part 6 -RaKa Hug.

RaKa keep on staring at each other unable to make out what had just happened. Suddenly, Tanya, one of Ranbirs girlfriends...well say ex girlfriend snaps RaKa out of their dream. RaKa were shocked at to what had just happened and look around to find, evry single person in that class, staring at each RaKa. RaKa felt embarssed and instead of the word 'Sorry' comming out of their mouth...

RaKa: Did we kiss?

And looked at each other disgustingly.

Tanya shook her head. RaKa had a sigh of relief but not for long as K and R started to fight again.

K: Bandar, what the heck did u think that u were doing??
R: Chipkali, I was doing nothing!
K: Why the heck did u call me chipkali??
R: Because...You are one!
K: Find than, than u are no less than a clown in a circus either!
R: U called me a clown so than...u are a beegi billi!
K: Monkey!
R: Witch!!
K: Chipkalay!
R: Bandri!
K: What? Bandri??
R: Oh..well...that is a female monkey!
K: What??? Fine...Chimpanzee
R: Bili!
K: Billey!

Tanya who was getting rather annoyed at the convo, was turning bright red seeing Ranbir paying more attention to Kanya and not even noticing her.

Tanya: STOP IT!!

RaKa stop and stare at Tanya.

Tanya gets angry and goes near Kanya and starts saying things to her.

T: What do u think of yourself??
K: Why? What happened?
T: What do you have that I dont? Why does Ranbir pay more attention to you and not me??
K: Look...there is nothing like that between me and Ranbir.
T: Oh yes! That is what u always say b***h! You look like something from the outside but from the inside...u are a big w***e! U pretend like you don't care about Ranbir but from the inside I know what u want! U want Ranbir to notice you! You stupid simple type girl!

And by this time, Kanya had tears trickling down her eyes, and Ranbir could no more bear Kanya being this insulted and tears rolling down her eyes and he gets angry. Ra gets angry and gets up. Ranbir than stands up to face Tanya and gives her a tight slap!

*SLAP*

R: Stop it! Kanya had no fault in this! And its not her who is the b***h but you! Yes Tanya! U are the real b***h! And you know what...you what I like about Kanya that u don't have...I like Kanya bcz she is different from u all...u all and especially you Tanya who can do anything to get my attention! Kanya has a simplicity..that attracts me towards her..that u...will...or never have! Get it?? Now GET OUT!

Tanya runs out of the classroom and Ranbir walks over to Kanya. Kanya by this time had tears running down her eyes. Ranbir touches Kanyas hand and feels bad for her. Kanya than gets up from her chair and gives Ranbir a tight hug. Ranbir hugs K back. And after that, Kanya runs away crying.

awwwwwwwwww luvly once again keep it up!!! Can't wait to read what happens next.... 😳 😳

Originally posted by: armaan*luv*ridz

ohhhhhhhh cutiepie.....

Hehe I know RANYA made for each other...

Originally posted by: eklavya/kt4ever

awwwwww that was the best 😳 stupid tanya 😆 awwwww raka huged 😳 so cute 😳 😳 keep it up and dont make me wait like 2 days ok for one part 😆 😳

I know...stupid Tanya, nice RaKa....and kk...no...u will have to wait a month!

Originally posted by: wida

cant wait for the next part 😃

Will contine

Originally posted by: piguu

awwwwwwwwww luvly once again keep it up!!! Can't wait to read what happens next.... 😳 😳

Aw...thanks and will continnue

when you wrote she give him a tight ... i tough for 2 second that you would say slap lol
cute part
awww ranbir confessed(in one term yes) great cont soon