FF: Unexpected: P6: Pg 10: Promo: Pg 11

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I am starting a FF, Its on Ranbir, Kanya & Ayaan.

Ranbir Nanda :

A 22 year old, big flirt. He doesn't believe in god and thinks of life as a place to enjoy. He and Kanya dont get along really well and they both love to bug each other....meaning..embarss each other.

Kanya Godbole:

A 21 year old girl, who is modern and indian at the same time. She a fond believer in god and loves to bug Ranbir but hates him. Why? because, he is a big flirt and doesn't know how to respect girls. Even though, their parents are best friends, she and Ranbir hate each other to the core and don't leave one single time, not to embarss each other.

Bani Godbole(Prachi Desai):

22 year old sister of Kanya who has a massive crush on Ranbir's younger brother Nakul but doesn't show it.

Nakul Nanda(Naman Shaw):

24 year old. He is also a big flirt but knows how to respect people unlike Ranbir.

Ayaan Kapoor: 21 Years of age. He is Kanya's Old friend and still loves her and can do anything to get her back and Kanya loves her too.

Storyline: Ranbir & Kanya both hate each other in collage, but the problem arrives when they both are paired up together for a Collage Dance competion. And than Kanya uses Ranbir to get back Ayaan which makes Ranbir hate Kanya more.

So will these 2 EVER gell? Will these 2 fall in love? If yes, than how?

Please do read my FF, "Hate To Love" Should I continue?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Updates/ Parts

Intro: Main Characters: Pg 1
Part 1: Kanya: Pg 2
Part 2: Ranbir: Pg 2
Part 3: RaKa Food Fight: Pg 4
Part4: Punishment: Pg 6
Part 5: Did We Kiss?: Pg 7
Part 6: Ra Protects Ka: Pg 10

Promos/ Previews

Promo: Who is cleaning the caferteria?: Pg 11

Notes

Edited by *Shifali* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz continue it seems really intersting 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: eklavya/kt4ever

awwwwww yes yes yes continue continue plzzz continue i love it!!! 😳 😳

wahida

Hehe..will continue.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: 26javey26

plz continue it seems really intersting 😳 😳

Will continue

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaan*luv*ridz

sooooo chweeeet....continue dear

Aw...thank You...will continue

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Part 1 - Meet Kanya

It was a bright sunny morning and a girl was shown getting up from her bed. She quietly tip -toed over to her window and opened it far wide and let the cool breeze touch her soft cheeks which were, from the regular colour turning bright pink due to the cold.

Girl: Its a wonderful day!

Then the girl turned around and head right towards her bathroom and started to take a shower. She comes out of the shower, goes to her cupboard and takes out a pair of jeans and a tank -top. And while, putting her clothes on, the girl, starts to hum the tune, Nikamna Kiya Is Dil ne, Is Dil Ne Kiya Hai Nikama. She girl gets ready, puts on light make -up, combs her hair and leaves.

Downstairs, her younger sister, Bani sits there eating breakfast.

Bani: Hi di!
Girl: Hi! What are u doing?
B: Nothing...
G: Thinking about Hritik Roshan again??

Bani gives her an embarssing smile.

B: No di! Hritik is old! I am thinking about Ranbir Kapoor now!
G: Whatever!!
B: Di, u know what day is it today?
Girl: Yes, today the mid -term results of collage and the results are comming out...and...

The girl, who had just started to apply butter on her toast, gave a shocked look to Bani!

Girl: I am LATE!!!

Bani doesn't say anything and just gives her an embarssed nod while trying to smile.

The girl gets up as soon as possible and leaves. While sounds of her mom are heard from behind!

Mom: Kanya!!!

Kanya, who was trying to hurry up and not be as late as she already was, didnt' give a reply to her mom and just went.

Mom: Atleast eat ur breakfast!!
K: Later!!

And Kanya runs, gets in her car and leaves for collage.

Promo: What happens in collage??
Edited by *Shifali* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i don't know how u manage everything shifu di......u r everywhere and g8 ff plzzzzzzzzzz continue...
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Originally posted by: armaan*luv*ridz

i don't know how u manage everything shifu di......u r everywhere and g8 ff plzzzzzzzzzz continue...

Hehe...no probs...and yes...me everywhere...u see me in DMG too? and will continue

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Part 2 - Ranbir and the results.

Kanya, hurriedy got into her car and left. At collage, Kanya got off from her car and went straight away to the notice board, but to her bad luck, she found it crowded with people trying to know if they passed or not. Even though Kanya was sure, she had passed, she still wanted to see. As Kanya made her way into the crowd, squshing throw, she finally made it. Kanya, moved her fingers up and down the passed lists, and found her name in 3 place. She was shocked...not because she had come 3rd but because, her so called neighbour was just one name down hers. On the board under Kanya Godbole, was written Ranbir...Ranbir Nanda. Kanya moved out of the crowd and moved towards her friends, Ishika and Ria.

Ish: What happened?
K: Ranbir...
Ria: Yes...
K: He came in 4th!
Ish -Ria: WHAT???

Kanya just shook her head in a yes manner and avoided saying anything.

Ish: But how?
K: That is what I have to find out!

Kanya now was determinded to find out how a guy like Ranbir, getting the lowest marks and passing with great difficulty, had managed to come from the last of pasts to number 4!

Kan: Where is he??

And just than, Kanya saw a bike, a blue Hero Honda bike ride past her. The bike stopped in the parking lot and a guy got off. He took his helmet off and shook his head...

The girls who were watching him, including Kanyas friends, started admiring the guy.

Ish: Oh!! He is hot!
K: Hot? He is as cold as ice!
Ria: He is cute!!
K: Cute? He looks like a chimpanzee! Cute u say!!
Ish -Ria: Just shut up Kanya!

Ishika and Ria left to go near Ranbir while Kanya stayed behind, looking disgusted.

Girls had surronded the guy and Kanya watched as more girls surrounded him, now..she was jealous. Even though, she hated guys like these, this guy was special...and he was the 1st guy that she felt jealous when girls came near him.

What am I thinking! He is a duffer! Stop being jealous Kanya! Pretend u don't know him.

Kanya walks over to the guy and taps his shoulder and sarcastically starts talking to him.

K: Oh Ranbir!

Ranbir turns around and looks Kanya into the eyes.

R: Yes?
K: Can I talk to you?
R: Go ahead!

Now that Ranbir had said yes to talk to her, Kanya changes her talking tune, from sarcastic to her voice filled with anger.

K; OK, can u tell me, did u go to a temple to pray or something?
R: No...
K: I thought so. Did you bribe the principal?
R: I wish I could but no!
K; Did u get a fairy god father or something?
R: Ok, the the heck are u talking about? And no! No fairy godfather!
K: THEN HOW CAN U BE IN 4TH PlACE ON THE RESULTS BOARD??

Ranbir, gives a small laugh.

R: Oh that? Well, come over to your house window today and I will tell u.
K: What?? I would never!
R: Oh! Yes u would!
K: No! U wish!
R: Yes
K; No
R: Yes
K: No
R: Yes
K: No!
R: Yes
K: No
R: Yes
K: No
R: No
K: Yes

Kanya was dumbfounded as to how Ranbir had made her say yes.

R: Very good!

And Ranbir leaves, leaving Kanya behind, looking stunned.
Edited by *Shifali* - 18 years ago

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