Kumud & Kshitij: Match Made in Heaven! - Page 6

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 6: (I am not Ekta you guys.. i dont kill babies... and that too like 3-4 times!!!! )

Its night time and Kumud is asleep..

Kshitij comes there and looks at his lovely wife sleeping!!!

He smiles while looking at her.... He kisses her on the forehead...

Next Morning:

Kali is the kitchen!!! and that too Cooking!!!! (WOW!!!!! KALI IN THE KITCHEN... I AM SURPRISED SHE FOUND IT)

Kumud comes there and stands there....

Kali is looking at everything

Kali: How can people cook?? I can barely break an egg

Kumud is watching and is like what is she doing?

Kali: She starts cutting some veggies...

Then she starts adding salt and stuff... and then she puts too much

Kali: Oh no.. what have i done? I better just stay out of the kitchen.. its not my thing

Kumud wants to laugh but doesnt

Kali turns and sees Kumud... and is shocked

Kumud: Wat were you doing?

Kali: Nothing!!

She leaves and Kumud takes over

She tastes it and its aweful.. to much salt...

So she adds some stuff to it and makes it better!!

Everyone begins eating and they love it...

Aryaman: I must say this is the best thing you've ever made...

Kali notices it looks like hers!!

Kumud: I didnt make it...

A: Then who did??

Kumud: Kali!!!!!!

A: WHAt??

Kumud: Well sort of!!!!

Kali is shocked!! And is thinking why she mention my name!!!

Everyone eats!!

Kk is talking to Abhay..... even though Abhay cant respond!!!

Kk: Abhay.. please get better!!!!!! We are all worried for you!!!!

And then she blabbers on and on!!

Abhay is just there blinking!!!

There is only one thing that can cure him!!!! But what?

Kumud goes to the temple...

She is praying for everything... her baby, Abhay, her family everything!!!!

She leaves...

She walks and some guys see her

They realize she is Kkusum's daughter

They hate Kk because Kk has made thier lives a living hell!!!

So they nothing better to do!!

They start following Kumud

Kumud notices people following her

She walks a little faster

Then they all surround her

Kumud is scared to death!

She cant escape..

Kumud: Who are you guys? What do you want?

Guy: Look Kkusum's daughter.....

Kumud is confused...

The guys are circling around her...

Guy: Kk has made our lives a living hell.....

Kumud is now thinking... they want to do something w/ me!!!!

Kumud starts panicing!!

Kumud is holding her stomach

The guy sees her...

Guy: Look she is holding her stomach...... Hey girl... are you pregnant?

Kumud doesnt respond

One guy comes and grabs her hair..

Guy: Answer me!!!! (yells)

Kumud: Yes!! (scared)

Everyone laughs.........

The guys grab her..... and she is up against the car...

The main guy takes out a knife!!

Kumud is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭

The guy is walking up to her

Kumud is screaming no!!!

The guy is about to stab her on the stomach... when someone comes and stops the knife............

And person is none other than Kali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud is shocked!!

Guy: Hey who are you?

Kali: What are you doing w/ her?

Guy: Nothing its between me and her

Kali silently calls the cops...... and the cops overhear and come to the place... cuz Kali gave them clues!!!

Guy: Who is she to you??

Kali: You want to know??

Guy: Yes..

Kali: She is my sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud is sad and shocked that Kali said sister!!

The guy is laughing.....

The guy grabs Kali's hair as well.... but the cops arrive they are shocked!!!!!!!

They try to escape but all of them are caught

Kumud all of a sudden faints and Kali holds her...

She takes her in the car and they go to Kapoor house...

Kali brings her in and everyone is shocked

Kshitij hears the news and comes there in a hurry!!!

Kali tells them what happened.... and they are shocked!!!

Kumud is still unconsicious!!!!

The guys are in jail....

Mahi sees them

Mahi says quietly

Mahi: You couldnt get my job done could you?

Guy: Sorry maam... her sister came....and ruined everything

Mahi: Sister?????

Guy: Yes!!

Mahi is thinking Kali???

Mahi gets mad.... that her planned failed

It was all her idea!!!!!!!

Kapoor house:

Everyone is surrounded by Kumud... she is on the couch....

Abhay is there in his wheelchair...

Kumud opens her eyes and... starts crying

Kshitij is there and she holds his hand

Kali is in the back..... she doesnt want to be part of the crowd...

Kumud sits up...

Kali is looking on...

Kumud hugs Kshitij...

everyone is happy that she is okay!!!!!

Kumud sees Kali and walks up to her

Everyone is watching

Kumud: You saved my life today!!!!!

Kali is listening

Kumud: Watever you said over there was it true??

Kali: Yes!! I meant everyword!!!!

Kumud feels sad!!!!

Kumud: I apologize for being rude to you!!!

Kali: It should be me saying sorry....i owe you a big apology for everything i have done!!!

After they hug each other!!!!!!!!

Kkusum is crying... and everyone is like finally!!!!!

Then all of a sudden Abhay begins to move.................. and everyone sees and they are shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


The End!!! I will cont tomorrow!!!!!!!

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Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#52
awsome fan fic guli!!!
cont. soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
that was simply brilliant guli!!! plz continue whenever you can!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54
wow!! this was kool i loved it. 👏 👏 👏 make abhay better now!!! 😃 😃. U write better stories then ekta kapoor the only thing she can do is make people cry. 😆 im waiting for more upadtes. 😛 😊 I LOVE ALL THOSE EPISODES U UPDATED!! 👏 EKTA SUCKS 🤢 🤢 U ROCK!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
omg omg omg....dats way 2 kewl...u like have 2 continue..ur way 2 gud!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
Part 7:

Abhay is slowly moving..

Everyone is shocked!!!!

Then all of a sudden he closes his eyes!!

Kk: Abhay???? Abhay????

She starts crying

Nitin calls the doctor...

They take him to the room and they make him lay on the bed

The doctor comes and asks everyone to leave

Everyone is worried!!!

Then... Abhay opens his eyes...

Abhay is perfectly fine..

Its only the doc in the room

Abhays knew everything that was going on but just couldnt react (just keep that in mind)

The doctor comes out and opens the door....

Kk: How is Abhay?

Doc: See for yourself!!!

Everyone runs into the room

Abhay is sitting up..

Kk: Abhay??

Sarla: Abhay??

He's not moving!

Kali: Papa!!!???

Kumud: Why arent you talking Papa?? Please say something!!!!!

The doc has already left.... so they cant ask him anything!

Everyone looks down...

Abhay sees everyone looking down...

Abhay: Why is everyone looking down??

Everyone suddenly looks up

Kk: Abhay??

Abhay is smiling!!!!!! 😃

Everyone is thrilled because he's okay!!!!

All the women are crying...

Kali and Kumud hug him..

Abhay is so happy that they arent fighting anymore!!!

Kk and Abhay look at each other....

Abhay: Kk??

Kk looks at him

KK: Abhay??

They both hug!!!

Abhay: I knew you would never do anything like this to me!!!!

Abhay: I found out the day when you left a message and Swati picked it up!!

Kk has a flashback of when she called leaving a message!!!!

Jail:

Mahi: I am not going to give up so easily Kkusum!!! I will ruin the whole Kapoor family!! Dont under estimate me!!!!!!!!!!!!

She has a really angry face!!!

Mahi gets an idea...

Kapoor House:

Kali, Kumud, and Kshitij head home....

Kali and Kumud hug Abhay!!!

They leave

After they leave:

Abhay: The day which i wanted to see has finally come!! My 2 daughters together!!!!

Everyone smiles!!

They all talk!!

Mahi has escaped from jail....

She is on the run w/ a gun in her hand

ACP Saket calls Kapoor house

Kk: Hello?

ACP: Hello KK?? ACP SAket...

Kk: Yes...

ACP: Mahi has escaped from jail!!

KK: WHAT????????????

SHe is shocked!!!!!

She puts the phone down

Abhay: Kk WHat happened?

Kk: Mahi!!!!!

Abhay: Mahi??

Kk: She has escaped from jail.. i have a feeling she may be coming here!!!!

EVeryone is shocked out of thier wits!!!!

The End!!

Preview for 2nite:

Abhay: If she comes today.... just follow my lead....

He tells them a plan!!!!!!!!!

Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57
Wow!!! Awesome continuation Guli!!! I love ur fan-fics yaar!!! Plz continue!!! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#58
excellent work
post next update soon 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
that as graet, plz jaldi se continue karo guli
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
plz cont.


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