DES PARDES 2(kyph) EPILOGUEpg 153 - Page 122

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Omg Bheegi! I never read your fan fic but I just happened to come and read the final chapter and the epilogue, and I must say, you are a brilliant writer! I was absolutely amazed by how you structured the dialogue and effectively presented each character's personality. And on top of all that, you made sure not to present any community, place or religion in a bad light. Congratulations on finishing the story. I will try to go back and read the whole thing one of these days if I have the time. Great job once again! Looking forward to your next fan fic...

thanks suhanasafar...I am honored that u read part of the ff...would love to hear more from u if u get a chance...thanks again 😊

Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Ranbir~

This is the final then di I had to read it in small little parts, my Dad kept calling me and my stupid brother was just being an idiot😡~ Loved te way your wrote it, the description and dialogue's were perfect, hehe the one the made me laugh the most was Kripa talking about not be able to concentrate on 2 men at once! ~ hehe Kripa and Zaibs three children are just too cute, luved the names. hehe There was no Prateek, but arwell. Prateek will always be the symbol of Angad and Kripa.~ Nishant and Harshini's story was really cute as well, even though I never liked Harshani's character, I actullly felt sorry her in this story.~ hehe Nishant ended up being happy, which made happy, it killed me to see him die in KYPH, I never liked Josh as much as Nishant.~ I read the prelude, about the two souls, I have to say, I like the way you sort of somehow continued this story from TA, I haven't read it.~ What else can i say apart from, this story was a treat to read, and I'm glad Ive read one of your ff's fully, and hope I read all the others soon. Starting with Turtle Neck, the title really intrigues me😆 Can\t wait for the next ff di. Enjoy your break and Thanks for giving your time writing something that I really enjoyed! Luv Ya!xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

thanks ouma...i am glad an ardent AK fan finally read one of my ffs and commented regularly...let me know how u like the Turtleneck girl...it is one of my favorites

Originally posted by: deeya123

luved it di,fantastic ff.
hope to see u soon.
all the best for ur new one whenever u start

thanks deeya...i will keep u guys posted 😊

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome job magnificent fic just loved it with each fic ur getting so much better that am running out of words to praise it exquistelt perfect

thanks sidra...awww...that is one of the sweetest compliment one can get...i really appreciate it 😊

Originally posted by: iamsmart

readers get a lot to learn from ur ff. after reading the whole ff one could learn wht true love is. u've shown each & every character very differently. specially zaib's character, men like him do no exist. awesome epilogue.


~Sana~

thanks Sana..thanks 4 ur wonderful compliment....well there are men like Zaib in this world....just hard to find them 😉

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great ending.

Can't wait to read ur next one.

Take care. 😃

thanks JD 😊

Originally posted by: sweetmagic4u

Everybody else pretty much said what I wanted to say, so I will say this,

kya kahen, kya na kahen
apne jo yeh jadoo sa phela diya hei
jo labzoon mei hum kabee bayan na kehsake,
woh apne karke dika diya hei,👏

what can I say, Zaib has rubbed off on me 😆

will miss you di but you deserve the break🤗

wah wah...aap bhi shayara ban gayi...Zaib has really rubbed off on u....I can take that as a compliment

thanks again for all ur support 😊

hey di sorry for the short comment the final part was wonderful and romantic ending the kids are awesome
the lord vishnu part was simply awesome lol i wish i could talk to god like that and get to know about
future isn't the life become more easy and beautiful and we have no wiorries aobut it and loved ur life

ummmmmmmm di is ur daughter ok is she having a surgery i hope she is ok its ok di take ur time to write the
next ff we are not in hurry to read it because we know that it is important to take care of the family first
until u start the new ff i will read the old one so that i will think about it and not to forget u

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee take care of ur daughter first and then think about the next ff

love ya di

mittal

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks abhi...i try variations of characters in every ff. BTW, Peter was Prithvi in this ff, Deb was Mishti and Lisa was Aaliyah 😆 type of character. Sorry...ur right, i forgot to present her portrait. The last i alluded to the portrait was when he hung it in the outhouse before she came to India...oops sorry about the omission

so UR tired of Vishnu and Yamraj 😆 😆

me cho tired of yamraj and vishnu... *sulking* 😃

wow, they were all the original characters in disguise 😲 Hmm... this is definitely a news for me 😆