DES PARDES 2(kyph) EPILOGUEpg 153 - Page 126

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Posted: 15 years ago
Your ffs are a treat to read. written with so much passion!

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P.S. I got impatient with Ehsaas and ended up digging old ones out.. ;)



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: olive_green

Your ffs are a treat to read. written with so much passion!

👏

P.S. I got impatient with Ehsaas and ended up digging old ones out.. ;)





hey Aria! Good to see u here on my old AK ff. yes, I was very passionate about AK once upon a time and put all my heart into their ffs. Now that both AK and AR are gone, i need to find another couple to inspire me again....lately I feel i am losing that inspiration😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Bheegi, I thought u wrote romantic ffs. What's this????😕 Terrorism,crime,evidences,court???????? You have outdone yourself this time Bheegi.👍🏼 I can only say "this seems like the work of a professional writer" . So 2 professions besides being a wife, mother and homemaker???? Too good yaar.👏 In this ff I loved Zaib and Kripa's exchange of notes in part 33. Something very cute n refreshing. The plot around Zaib was very realistic. Goes on to show proofs could be wrong too. We read about so many cases where the accused is innocent of the things he's charged against but accuser has evidence. It could be a trusted person who has back stabbed as teddy did to Zaib.Your explanations about the whole issue is soooooooooo realistic, no unnecessary drama, Excellent. but the best part was - Zaib the everloving house-husband and Kripa the busy lawyer but doting wife. the verses and songs were as usual fabulous. The songs Salame ishq and soni de nakre brought sweet memories of my favourite KaSh pair. I may re-read certain parts of this ff and shall comment further. In the mean time please keep up this good job which brings joy to so may people. God bless u.Love ssh57
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ssh57

Hi Bheegi, I thought u wrote romantic ffs. What's this????😕 Terrorism,crime,evidences,court???????? You have outdone yourself this time Bheegi.👍🏼 I can only say "this seems like the work of a professional writer" . So 2 professions besides being a wife, mother and homemaker???? Too good yaar.👏 In this ff I loved Zaib and Kripa's exchange of notes in part 33. Something very cute n refreshing. The plot around Zaib was very realistic. Goes on to show proofs could be wrong too. We read about so many cases where the accused is innocent of the things he's charged against but accuser has evidence. It could be a trusted person who has back stabbed as teddy did to Zaib.Your explanations about the whole issue is soooooooooo realistic, no unnecessary drama, Excellent. but the best part was - Zaib the everloving house-husband and Kripa the busy lawyer but doting wife. the verses and songs were as usual fabulous. The songs Salame ishq and soni de nakre brought sweet memories of my favourite KaSh pair. I may re-read certain parts of this ff and shall comment further. In the mean time please keep up this good job which brings joy to so may people. God bless u.Love ssh57



thanks ssh....ur wonderful comments def made my day esp after all the discussions on the Pehchan post😆 This story was def inspired by all the mistaken identity cases that happened in the US after 9/11. I am sure i had some dramatic and fictional parts in this ff but nevertheless i appreciate u liking this ff....Zaib was def quite a poet in this ff and an ideal hubby (every woman's dream man😆)

TC and it's always a pleasure redaing ur comments

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