(L+KT)I Hate That I Love You/note pg 24 - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

awwwwwwwwwwwwww kt!!!hope she is f9!! 😳 😳 😳 HOWEVER UR LAKSHU IS THERE IT SAVE HER!! 😆 continue soon

-abhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar

aww..lovely part...continue soon.. 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Esha_94

plz continue i cnt wait to see wat happenz 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu_fan

o wowowowow!!!!yayayayayayay!!!!!!!!finally the next part!!! it was awesome!!man i cant wait ill wat ahppens next.....!this FF is so far awesome and so R all ur other ones!! 😃 i❤️ how ur such a creative writer
great job!cant wait till next time 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: saira_1

gr8 par nikky 👏
wonder what this lucky guy will do?but like abhi sed-laksh is there 😆
update soon 😳 !

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kt4lakshya

so sorry nikky im replying after a looong time but now I am sooo great job!!! with the FF nice one!
cant wait for the next part oh and when they admit that they love each other
update soon

-tuba

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu_fan

I CANT WAIT ITLL U UPDATE AGAIN

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 7


Kt was standing infront of the colledge building.It was cold out.Kt was wearing a dress.It was the spring dance!Kt had been waiting for Lucky for about 45 minutes now, he hadn't showed up.Everyone else was inside the gym enjoying the time with their dates, Laksh was with his date Nitu.

Kt hugged her self trying to warm her self up.5 more mintues she told herself.The wind blew hard, making the sound of a wistle.Kt was shivering now in her black dress with pink lacesaround the wasit and neck, it was a strappless dress, wich made it that much more colder.Kt sat down on the cold cement ground,she hugged her knees against her chest.Kt closed her eye's, that's when it hit her!Lucky had this planned all along.She was heart broken.

Kt didn't move from that spot, a hour passed, 2 hours passed.People started to leave now, Kt was still sitting on the ground her face covered with her hands.She heard people laugh go by, not at her but Kt felt as if they were.Kt looked up at the people coming otu of the gym, soemthign cought her eye.It was Lucky!It was Lucky with another girl!A girl with barley anything covering her body.This was way worse then Lucky not showing up at all.Lucky and the girl passed Kt without even saying anything but then he looked bck and gave Kt a smirk, a evil disgusting look.Kt eye's started to water up.

Kt looked at the time on her cellphone, 11:35.She should be getting home now.Just when Kt thought everyoen was gone she heard a voice from behind her.Laksh.

Laksh:He didn't show up.........you lost the bet and I won!

Kt didn't bother looking at him, she was trying to ignore him, couldn't he see she was UPSET, HEART BROKEN!He felt his heart crunch when Kt didn't awnser back.He knew somthing was wrong, Kt would defnetly defend her self if he made a comment liek that but this time she didn't!

Laksh came closer to Kt, he sat down next to her and held her hand.Kt looked the oppisite direction of Laksh.(By the way Laksh was wearing a black pinstripe pant with a red shirt with blue white and black lines going down it, He looked Hot, anyways getting back to the story...)

L:What wrong?I am sorry for what I said.

Kt still didn't awnser.Laksh came closer to her and put his handson her cheek's and rotated her face so she was looking at him.Kt starred into his honey eye's, she noticed he was seriouse.

L:Are you allright?

Kt:yes.......It came out in a small sqeek and then se collapsed into his arm's and started to cry her heart out.Laksh knew she was hurt, he held her and let her cry into his chest.

It broke his heart to see her so miserable and heartbroken.He ran his fingers threw her hair and rubbe dher back, trying to make her feel better.

Kt:It's not you'r fault!(She mumbled while she cried)It's all my stupid fault..............Sniff...ah................I don't know what I was thinking when I sad yes to that Freak when he asked me to go with him!I shoudl just ............I should just leave for ever.Go back to Goa where people actually care and love me.😭

L:No Kt.

Kt:Like it would make a diffrence if i left, no one loves me here!They all hate me.No one cares.😭

L:I care Kt.

Kt:Yea rite Laksh.😭

L:It would make a diffrence to me!

Kt and Laksh both stood up.

L:Kt I....

Kt:You don't care, I know it!We always fight and I know you find me super annoying!

L:No Kt i don't!I really do care.

Kt:Why😭

Laksh got seriouse now, he held on to her arm's hard and pulled her close.The moon lit up the dark night, they could see eachother's faces clearly.

L:Shut up and Listne to me!I care for you!It would make a diffrence to me if you left.You ask me why I care!You ask me Why it would make a diffrence!WHY!Why, because I love you!I love you form the bottom of my heart, I have always loved you, I think you'r the most beutifull person in the world.I care for you alot.We fight because we're in love!I love you.I LOVE YOU KRISHNA TULSI(he yelled to the world)

Those 3 words echoed in Kt's head for a mintue, she felt he rheart punding hard against her chest, she felt her cheek's turninf red she fel ther eye's watering up.Kt felt water drop on her nose, it was starting to rain.

Laksh looked at her and moved his hand to her waist an dpulle dher towards him.

L:Kt I love you, and I can't see you like this at all, please stop crying.

Laksh kissed the tip of her nose making her smile.He then kissed her head, cheak and then went in for the lips, but he stopped and smiled before he kissed her.He examine dher beutifull face, he eye's were shut and her cheaks were wet form tears, her lips were pink and her hair was becoming wet.He saw her shake.She was cold.Laksh quickly kissed her cnih and held on to her tightly, as if he was protecting her from the world.

L:I don't want you to catch a cold.I'll take you back home.

Kt shook a bit, she could barley stand her leg's, her whoel body was freazing!She was week and tierd as well as cold.Laksh noticed thta and scoppe dhe rup in his arm's.He smiled at her, she closed her eye's and rested in his arm's as he took her to his car.

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Finanly i wrote it out!I hope you guys liekd it!Please comment😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
*sigh*
*to self* time to back to earth .
Oh Nikky, Nikky, Nikky .
What can i say, you got me fully addicted to all of yur ffs .. & this one, the MOST .
i cant tell yuu how much i like yur sense of storywriting.
like the ideas yuu come up with, i ADORE THEM .
the bet thing, a classic . LOVED IT !
& the way Lakshyboo held KT close and told her he loved her, melted my heart .
absoluetly AMAZING!
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^i agree!! 😳 😳 Loved it!!cho cute lakshu is!!hopefully Kt is fine!! 😳

-abhi

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